Yang Zhenyu (Grade Three) wrote "East Bridge", which also used the total score relationship to write scenery.
Entering the East New District, the first thing you see is the novel and magnificent East Bridge. The bridge deck is R wide, like a giant with a broad mind, lying on his back on the road crossing the river. The railing of the bridge undulates like waves, and there is a spherical chandelier every 5 meters in the middle, just like a fairy invited by a celestial official sitting on an iron column and asking for help. There are several big placards standing beside the bridge, which guard the bridge like a white city wall.
This passage first points out the "novel and majestic" characteristics of Dongzhen Bridge, and then describes it from the deck, railings, chandeliers, signs and other aspects, which is concrete and clear.
How to write paragraphs with causal relationship When we do the exercise of "writing paragraphs", some paragraphs mainly state the causes and consequences of things, so that the connections of sentences in paragraphs are arranged according to causal relationship. That is to say, in a paragraph, one part describes the reason and the other part describes the result. Related words such as "because", "because", "reason" and "its result" can often be used between these two parts. For example, there is a passage in the article that China is poor and backward, and has no place in the world. International students look down on China. Tong Dizhou secretly made up his mind to do something for the people of China.
2. How to write a causal composition I am a girl who loves to laugh. Whenever I laugh, I always laugh. What a hearty smile, happy smile, inexplicable smile ... I followed closely.
I will laugh at all ridiculous things, and this kind of laughter will often drag my classmates into the water, attract teachers' criticism, and then attract everyone to blame me for seducing them.
Once in an English class, the teacher taught two words: bus and must, and then let everyone read them. My deskmate couldn't pronounce correctly, so I couldn't help laughing because my tone was blunt and I heard "Dad is dead" and "Mom is dead". The whole class also burst into laughter under my "leadership". The teacher repeatedly banned it, but he couldn't control it, so that he couldn't lecture. Finally, the whole class was scolded and punished. The teacher took special care of me when I entered the office, but I was still immersed in what happened just now, and my thoughts suddenly fell to the ground. The teacher kept saying there, I was still thinking "Mom and Dad are dead". As a result, I snorted and laughed, and the English teacher almost didn't go crazy.
Back in class, everyone came to blame me for this culprit. Naturally, I did my duty and retorted confidently, "I love to laugh, and my mouth is on me. I laugh happily." . Besides, did I make you laugh? You can't control yourself. Why can't you blame me? "Now, the students are speechless, and I smiled again. Let's celebrate what I just said.
Come to think of it carefully, I like to laugh like death for two reasons: one is the inheritance of my parents. Mom and dad are both people who love to laugh. As long as I can remember, I haven't seen them frown and unhappy. Their faces are always sunny, as if all the good things in the world happened to them, so I was born an authentic descendant. The second is the warmth and harmony of the family. My parents never quarrel. They care about me. The smiles of three people build a happy and warm home, surrounded by laughter. I have no reason to be unhappy!
Wherever I go, laughter follows me. I often don't see anyone. Smell me laugh first. Does everyone like to laugh, too? Then let's laugh until the end, because: smile, ten years old; In a good mood, troubles run.
I love to laugh because I have been laughing for less than ten years.
What do you mean by causality? Answer causal narrative (level 4-5)
Say the reason (or process) first, then the result.
The advantage of this narrative is that it is written according to the natural process of the event, so that the ins and outs of the event are clear and the level of the article is clear.
for instance
With a computer, I can't wait to use it. Type tomorrow's composition first, because it's the first time for me to use the software "word". I don't know how many times I tried, but I still can't find the format I want. I think hard. I'm like an ant on hot bricks-I'm in a rash. Just when I was depressed, suddenly, a dolphin appeared, which read "Computer Butler". It told me that if you want to arrange various tables, please double-click the custom table button. It dawned on me that the original answer was right in front of me. It's really "I can't find a place to get it, I can get it without effort." According to the "computer housekeeper", I quickly sorted out the form I wanted. The next day, the teacher spoke highly of my homework. I can't help but feel an indescribable gratitude for the computer.
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"I can't help but feel an indescribable gratitude for computers" is "fruit"; Others talked about how "I" was formatted and how to get praise from teachers.
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He first tore off a piece of dough the size of a thumb with a rough big hand, held it in his hand a few times and kneaded it into a piece. Pinch one end of the noodles with your fingers again, and the Monkey King's face will come out. Then, he took the black and white flour paste the size of a grain of rice and pointed to a pair of small eyes. Hey, this is black and white. "It really looks like it!" "What a coincidence!" There was a groan in the crowd. Then, the old man picked up the needle, gently picked it on the Monkey King's face, pinched it, and a small nose appeared. Finally, he had a needle in his hand. Soon, he made a small mouth, a yellow hat, a pompon, a gold hoop, a green ribbon and a pair of red trousers. At this time, a swaggering the Monkey King appeared in front of people.
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The last sentence is the result, and the first few sentences are the writing process. According to the order of making periocular membrane, the process is clear and distinct.
practise
Complete the following passage with the narrative method of "the reason (or process) first, then the result".
I'm not afraid of injections anymore.
Second, explain the result first, and then describe the reason (or process).
The advantage of this narrative is that people can see the results first and are interested in understanding the reasons.
for instance
In the Xisha Islands area, the seawater presents various colors such as dark blue, light blue, green, light green and apricot yellow, which are patchy, colorful and extremely beautiful. Why is this? It turns out that there are towering cliffs and low-lying trenches on the seabed here, so the sea is deep and shallow, and the color is different from the sea surface.
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Write the results first, "the sea water presents various colors" to attract readers' attention and arouse readers' interest in exploring the reasons together; Then, analyze the reasons.
practise
Complete the following paragraph with the narrative method of "explain the result first, then describe the reason (or process)".
The first injection, I was scared.
4. Write a composition on the topic of cause and effect, and the sunset will return to the stars and start again and again; Xia, Shang, Qin and Han dynasties, historical cycle; It has a long history and looks forward to the hegemony of the three countries. The long river is surging, watching a hundred schools of thought contend and writing well; How do you lack courage?
After reading the Three Kingdoms, I can't find a person who is "the general trend of the world, and it will come to an end after a long time", that is, the Duke of Zhou, who is "laughing and laughing, and dying in smoke", is Wen Tao and Wu Lue, who are the generals under Sun Quan. Finally, he swallowed his last breath and vomited blood. "Since he was born in, why was he born in Liang?" How tragic it is, and how much jealousy and hatred it contains. Unfortunately, Zhou Yu died. He is a talented man, but he can't stand Zhuge Liang's words. Later generations used "petty" to evaluate him, but how do you know that a narrow-minded person can have such a general demeanor? Zhou Yu does not lack a broad mind, but a firm psychological endurance. Everyone said that he was "courageous and resourceful". However, even a small verbal attack can not bear, how can we talk about courage?
In today's society, there is naturally no war and no bloodshed. I think maybe no one will die in Zhou Lang. But the competition is still fierce. Not to mention the fierce competition between state-owned enterprises and private enterprises in the market, even we are facing "wars" again and again at school. When he failed, he shouted, "Only talented people come out from the Jiangshan generation, and the waves behind the Yangtze River push the waves before." The old man is depressed and willing to admit defeat. I want to ask: how to bear many setbacks when entering the society in the future?
Everyone envies Bill Gates's great achievements and wealth. However, whose life is smooth sailing? Bill Gates experienced many unimaginable failures and hardships at the beginning of his business, but he survived. Every failure is regarded as a new beginning, and he eventually becomes the richest man in the world. I think he is one of the few brave men in the world. The world often only sees the glory of the winners, but forgets the acid of creating success.
Throughout history and now, which successful person has not survived from suffering? Just like Li Houzhu, if the country collapses, people will die with it. Can you do that?
Suffering hardships is a kind of courage and a valuable spirit.
bear one's cross
It is often said that there are unexpected events in the sky, and people are doomed. The road of life cannot always be smooth sailing, and the sky of life cannot always be sunny. Life is bumpy and tortuous. Rough and tortuous, like the sword of Damocles. No one knows when it will come to us, but we can't stop because of worry and fear. We must smile at everything and walk with our heads held high.
In this world, if you are cautious and timid, you will retreat. "When a leaf falls, everyone is afraid of breaking their heads." People laugh at those timid people and Xin Wei Nuo Nuo. In the face of ups and downs and setbacks, we should hold our heads high, hold our heads high and face all the hardships of life with a smile.
Laughing at suffering does not mean that you can take it lightly and be willful. In the course of life, we must lift the weight as easily as possible. In other words, we should attach importance to the enemy strategically and despise the enemy tactically, which is what Master Mao taught us long ago.
Facing life and the future, we must be cautious, take it seriously, fully consider all problems, do every link of our work well, make our plans carefully and carefully, and carefully determine all our countermeasures to prevent any bumps and setbacks. In this way, when things come to a head, we won't be in a hurry and be at a loss.
Once the real bumps and setbacks come, we don't have to think that the sky is falling and the world is coming to an end. No matter how stormy it is, sit firmly on the fishing boat. Smile to face all challenges, face all setbacks, leave storms and setbacks behind, rush past, walk past, the front must be sunny and open.
If you can't face ups and downs and setbacks calmly, handle things calmly; We can't get rid of things like failing in exams, losing in competition, failing in love, disharmony between relatives and friends, losing face, and accidentally breaking an egg, all of which will cause the pain of losing a chicken farm. In this case, we will stumble over a little bump and be crushed by a slight setback.
We once learned the story of Ji Chang learning to shoot. Ji Chang stared at a flea from morning till night to learn archery and improve archery. As a result, fleas grew to the size of fists, washbasins and wheels, and finally to the size of mountains.
In the same way, if we keep staring at ups and downs and setbacks, we can't see the light, the future and the psychological shadow, then the ups and downs will be magnified and will overwhelm us like a mountain.
Relax, we are very careful with everything.
We face the world calmly.
A person, always with footprints on his body, will be crushed and fall; Leave your footprints and walk with your head held high. This is a normal life!
5. Write a composition on the topic of cause and effect, and the sunset will return to the stars and start again and again; Xia, Shang, Qin and Han dynasties, historical cycle; It has a long history and looks forward to the hegemony of the three countries. The long river is surging, watching a hundred schools of thought contend and writing well; How do you lack courage? After reading the Three Kingdoms, I can't find a person who is "the general trend of the world, and it will break up after a long time", that is, Zhou Gongjin, who is "laughing and laughing, and vanishing"
This man is Wen Tao and Wu Lue, and he is a general under Sun Quan. Finally, he swallowed his last breath and vomited blood. "Since he was born in, why was he born in Liang?" How tragic it is, and how much jealousy and hatred it contains.
Unfortunately, Zhou Yu died. He is a talented man, but he can't stand Zhuge Liang's words. Later generations used "petty" to evaluate him, but how do you know that a narrow-minded person can have such a general demeanor? Zhou Yu does not lack a broad mind, but a firm psychological endurance. Everyone said that he was "courageous and resourceful".
However, even a small verbal attack can not bear, how can we talk about courage? In today's society, there is naturally no war and no bloodshed. I think maybe no one will die in Zhou Lang. But the competition is still fierce.
Not to mention the fierce competition between state-owned enterprises and private enterprises in the market, even we are facing "wars" again and again at school. When he failed, he shouted, "Only talented people come out from the Jiangshan generation, and the waves behind the Yangtze River push the waves before." The old man is depressed and willing to admit defeat.
I want to ask: how to bear many setbacks when entering the society in the future? Everyone envies Bill Gates's great achievements and wealth. However, whose life is smooth sailing? Bill Gates experienced many unimaginable failures and hardships at the beginning of his business, but he survived. Every failure is regarded as a new beginning, and he eventually becomes the richest man in the world. I think he is one of the few brave men in the world.
The world often only sees the glory of the winners, but forgets the acid of creating success. Throughout history and now, which successful person has not survived from suffering? Just like Li Houzhu, if the country collapses, people will die with it. Can you do that? Suffering hardships is a kind of courage and a valuable spirit.
People who suffer often say that there are unexpected events in the sky, and people are doomed to misfortune. The road of life cannot always be smooth sailing, and the sky of life cannot always be sunny.
Life is bumpy and tortuous. Rough and tortuous, like the sword of Damocles. No one knows when it will come to us, but we can't stop because of worry and fear. We must smile at everything and walk with our heads held high. In this world, if you are cautious and timid, you will retreat.
"When a leaf falls, everyone is afraid of breaking their heads." People laugh at those timid people and Xin Wei Nuo Nuo. In the face of ups and downs and setbacks, we should hold our heads high, hold our heads high and face all the hardships of life with a smile.
Laughing at suffering does not mean that you can take it lightly and be willful. In the course of life, we must lift the weight as easily as possible.
In other words, we should attach importance to the enemy strategically and despise the enemy tactically, which is what Master Mao taught us long ago. Facing life and the future, we must be cautious, take it seriously, fully consider all problems, do every link of our work well, make our plans carefully and carefully, and carefully determine all our countermeasures to prevent any bumps and setbacks. In this way, when things come to a head, we won't be in a hurry and be at a loss.
Once the real bumps and setbacks come, we don't have to think that the sky is falling and the world is coming to an end. No matter how stormy it is, sit firmly on the fishing boat.
Smile to face all challenges, face all setbacks, leave storms and setbacks behind, rush past, walk past, the front must be sunny and open. If you can't face ups and downs and setbacks calmly, handle things calmly; We can't get rid of things like failing in exams, losing in competition, failing in love, disharmony between relatives and friends, losing face, and accidentally breaking an egg, all of which will cause the pain of losing a chicken farm. In this case, we will stumble over a little bump and be crushed by a slight setback.
We once learned the story of Ji Chang learning to shoot. Ji Chang stared at a flea from morning till night to learn archery and improve archery.
As a result, fleas grew to the size of fists, washbasins and wheels, and finally to the size of mountains. In the same way, if we keep staring at ups and downs and setbacks, we can't see the light, the future and the psychological shadow, then the ups and downs will be magnified and will overwhelm us like a mountain.
Relax, we are very careful with everything. We face the world calmly.
A person, always with footprints on his body, will be crushed and fall; Leave your footprints and walk with your head held high. This is a normal life.
6. Write a composition with three causal relationships. The boy who built the bridge went to the real estate developer to buy a house. Hu Lai said: "My house is first-class, the environment is the most beautiful, and the price is the lowest ... If I lie to you, I will become a donkey in my next life."
A Tong took out his life savings and bought a house.
One day after half a year, Hu Lai happened to pass under A Tong's balcony. "Wow!" Suddenly, the balcony collapsed. A Tong standing on the balcony was killed, and Hu Lai under the balcony was also killed. Two ghosts go to court and lose face.
Yan asked A Tong, "What exactly do you do?"
A Tong said, "I specialize in repairing bridges and paving roads."
"He did a good job," echoed the magic mirror hanging on the wall.
The prince asked Hu Lai again, "What on earth do you do?"
Hu said, "I build houses for people to benefit mankind!" I have built many houses and done countless good deeds ... "
"Deception!" The mirror on the wall interrupted him, "You built many houses, but you cut corners in every house! But they tried their best to cheat money! You are a vampire! "
When Yan asked, he stood up and said loudly, "Now sentence:
Go to heaven, boy! Hulai, stay in hell! "
Yan paused for a moment, then said, "Listen, nonsense, you really hurt a lot of brains to cheat money. We can't lose you and give you a big head-donkey head. Besides, you have another specialty on earth: you can turn around. In order to cheat money, you searched all kinds of organs. We will give full play to your specialty, send you to the mill for grinding and surround you. "
7. How to write a causal composition I am a girl who loves to laugh. Whenever I laugh, I always laugh. What a hearty smile, happy smile, inexplicable smile ... I followed closely.
I will laugh at all ridiculous things, and this kind of laughter will often drag my classmates into the water, attract teachers' criticism, and then attract everyone to blame me for seducing them. Once in an English class, the teacher taught two words: bus and must, and then let everyone read them.
My deskmate couldn't pronounce correctly, so I couldn't help laughing because my tone was blunt and I heard "Dad is dead" and "Mom is dead". The whole class also burst into laughter under my "leadership"
The teacher repeatedly forbade, but he couldn't control it, so that he couldn't teach. Finally, the whole class was scolded and punished. The teacher took special care of me when I entered the office, but I was still immersed in what happened just now, and my thoughts suddenly fell to the ground.
The teacher kept saying there, I was still thinking "Mom and Dad are dead". As a result, I snorted and laughed, and the English teacher almost didn't go crazy. Back in class, everyone came to blame me for this culprit.
Naturally, I did my duty and retorted confidently, "I love to laugh, and my mouth is on me. I laugh happily." . Besides, did I make you laugh? You can't control yourself. Why can't you blame me? "Now, the students are speechless, and I smiled again. Let's celebrate what I just said.
Come to think of it carefully, I like to laugh like death for two reasons: one is the inheritance of my parents. Mom and dad are both people who love to laugh. As long as I can remember, I haven't seen them frown and unhappy. Their faces are always sunny, as if all the good things in the world happened to them, so I was born an authentic descendant.
The second is the warmth and harmony of the family. My parents never quarrel. They care about me. The smiles of three people build a happy and warm home, surrounded by laughter. I have no reason to be unhappy! Wherever I go, laughter follows me. I often don't see anyone. Smell me laugh first.
Does everyone like to laugh, too? Then let's laugh until the end, because: smile, ten years old; In a good mood, troubles run. I love to laugh because I have been laughing for less than ten years.
8. Writing argumentative essays is a causal relationship between Sima Qian. Is it because of you?
That humiliating castration took away your manly dignity, but it couldn't take away your iron bones. You hold back bitter tears, swallow them in your stomach and turn them into ink on your pen. After decades of grinding a sword, you have finally been cast into the historical records by historians. You said in "Bao Ren An Shu" that what you want most is that "Historical Records" can be circulated by future generations and shine its light. And you, my hero Sima Qian, your dream has come true. What a mood it is for future generations to read historical records full of blood and tears!
You planted a strong career and finally gained a successful result.
Eating and drinking king yue! What did Fu Tea give you? However, you quietly gathered the anger in your heart and turned it into a powerful spiritual force. Bitterness is bitter, but your heart is bitter. Firewood is hard, but your ambition is even harder. You put up with the humiliation of cattle and horses, jumped up, broke Wu and returned, and achieved your own hegemony.
You sowed the seeds of patience and finally harvested the fruits of success.
Have you ever regretted your choice?
You don't want to bribe the greedy painter Mao Yanshou, but you can only sit alone in the palace. Things! Kiss! You made a choice that no one in the harem dared to make. So you hold the pipa, and your eyes firmly pushed open the door of Alakazam and disappeared into the yellow sand all over the sky.
She came out of the purple palace and entered the desert. Now she has become a green grave in the yellow dusk. Wang Zhaojun, what kind of strange girl are you? Do you know that under your shy appearance, the whole world is amazed at your strong heart? Do you know that the famous "Zhao Jun went out to the fortress" in Pipa Story was written for you?
You planted a career without regrets and finally harvested the fruits of respect.
Qin Yi, how do you feel when you kneel in front of Yue Fei's tomb in the West Lake and accept the complaints from tourists from all over the world? You traitor, who is widely hated, should have done such a thing to frame General Yue, a loyal minister who has repeatedly made meritorious military service. The world remembers your meanness and your ugly face.
You planted evil causes and finally bore the fruit of disgust.
Shang Zhouwang, who died in the fire, did you shed tears of regret when you were suffering in the raging fire at the last moment of your life? If you had been diligent in governing the country instead of indulging in debauchery, would the outcome have been different?
You planted a dissolute career and finally got the fruits of destruction.
The long river of history has come and gone, and the pearl gravel in it seems to tell future generations: As you sow, so do you reap?
Composition topic: Write a composition on the topic of causality.