Knowledge goal:
1 Be sure to read the betting words in the text and understand the meaning of the words.
Master rhetorical devices such as parallelism, metaphor and personification.
Master the poems, proverbs and allusions quoted in the text and understand their functions in the text.
Ability goal:
1 Clarify the context of the article, and master the writing time and spatial order of the author.
2. Grasp the writing characteristics of this article, which is informative and loving.
Learn the different description methods adopted by the author according to the characteristics of each scene.
Emotional attitude values
Cultivate students' feelings of loving the great rivers and mountains of the motherland and enhance their conscious awareness of protecting the environment.
Analysis of Teaching Emphasis and Difficulties
Key points:
1 Learn the different description methods adopted by the author according to the characteristics of each scene.
2. Grasp the writing characteristics of this article, which is informative and loving.
Difficulties:
Master the narrative writing method of travel notes with knowledge, talent and emotion.
Teaching process:
first kind
First, import
1. Recite Li Bai's Early Making Baidicheng;
Early in the morning, I bid farewell to Jiangling city, which is high into the sky, thousands of miles away, and the boat is only one day away.
The cries of apes on both sides of the strait are still unconsciously crowing in their ears, and the canoe has passed the heavy green hills. )
2. Question: ① Where is this poem written?
3. Introduction to the author
Sister Liu, a modern scholar, writer and translator, 1904- 1977, from Yueyang, Hunan. 1925 entered the institute of waseda university in Japan. After returning to China, he served as a professor at Anhui University, director of the Chinese Department of Sichuan University, dean of the College of Arts of Jinan University, and editor of Dadong Bookstore. After the founding of New China, he served as a professor at Fudan University, acting director of the Chinese Department, member of the Standing Committee of the All-China Federation of Literary and Art Circles, and deputy director of the Shanghai Municipal Committee of the Agricultural Workers' Democratic Party. China's masterpiece of literary history. He is the author of On Characters in Wei and Jin Dynasties, Thoughts and Characters in a Dream of Red Mansions, and An Introduction to German Literature.
4. Introduction to Three Gorges
The Three Gorges of the Yangtze River, one of the top ten scenic spots in China and the first of the top 40 tourist attractions in China, is the most magnificent canyon in the upper reaches of the Yangtze River, consisting of Xiling Gorge, Wuxia Gorge and Qutang Gorge. The Three Gorges, with a total length of193km, spans Hubei and Chongqing, starting from Chongqing Baidicheng in the west and reaching Nanjinguan in Yichang in the east, and is praised as a landscape gallery by tourists.
Here, the peaks on both sides of the strait are sandwiched, the harbor surface is narrow and tortuous, and the beaches and reefs in the harbor are dotted with turbulent water. The text Three Gorges, which we learned in the seventh grade, is a vivid description of the magnificent scenery of the Three Gorges. There is a saying in ancient poetry: once the sea was difficult for water, it was amber forever. People who have seen the sea in Wang Yang have no respect for the water in other places, except for the colorful clouds in Wushan. This shows the beautiful scenery of Wushan sea of clouds. Li Bai, a great poet in the Tang Dynasty, has a famous poem "Arrive at Baidicheng Early", which is also a spectacular scene describing the Three Gorges for an instant.
Now the Three Gorges, with the construction of the huge Three Gorges Project, has become a world-famous tourist hotline. There are many beautiful scenery in the Three Gorges tourist area. In addition to the steep natural scenery, the famous cultural landscapes include Baidicheng, Du Feng Ghost Town, Zhongxian Shi Baozhai, Yunyang Zhangfei Temple and Gezhouba Project.
Second, read the text aloud.
Next, let a classmate read Sister Liu's travel notes "Three Gorges in Badong". Let's listen to the beauty of the Three Gorges in Sister Liu's works, and ask the students to think: What impression did the Three Gorges give you?
Students communicate freely and speak freely.
Third, clarify the thinking of the article.
Students clearly discuss and communicate:
1. Analyze the structure of the article according to the content of the text.
The article is written first and then divided, in chronological order.
The first part (1, 2 natural paragraph): The Three Gorges is always sinister.
The second part: (3~9 natural paragraphs) describes the scenery of Xiling Gorge, Wuxia Gorge and Qutang Gorge respectively.
The third part: (10 natural paragraph) Write the mood after leaving the Three Gorges.
2. From Yichang to Chongqing, the author swam the Three Gorges upstream. Where did he pass along the way?
The ship set sail from Yichang.
Starting from Xiling Gorge, * * * is divided into four sections: Huang Mao Gorge, Dengying Gorge, Kongling Gorge and Micang Gorge, with Xiangxi as the outlet.
The ship crossed the border to return to Badong and entered Wuxia Gorge.
Cross Wushan and enter Qutang Gorge.
After crossing Qutang Gorge, we will arrive at Baidicheng, and finally the boat will dock on the river bank of Kuifu.
The order of the author's travel (first of all, it is necessary to make clear that the author traveled from Yichang to Chongqing to the upper reaches of the Three Gorges)
Yichang-Xiling Gorge (Huang Mao Gorge, Dengying Gorge [including Huangling Temple], Kongling Gorge [including Niuganmafei Gorge and Kong Ling Beach], Micang Gorge, (Xiangxi)-Zigui, Badong-Wuxia-Qutang Gorge (Baidicheng, Mrs. Sun).
Fourth, read the text intensively and taste the language.
1. In the Three Gorges, Wuxia is the most attractive place for tourists. Listen to paragraphs 7 and 8 of the text. Read the tape and find out what these two paragraphs say. See where the body of the martial arts is now.
(These two paragraphs mainly describe the rivers, mountains and seas of clouds in the martial arts. )
2. Read the seventh and eighth paragraphs freely and find a parallel sentence, an anthropomorphic sentence and a figurative sentence respectively.
The risk of river course is narrow, steep, tortuous and multi-beach. This sentence captures the words narrow, urgent, tortuous, and many beaches, highlighting the dangers of the river.
2 personified sentences: this peak is very high, and that peak is higher. A row in front, a row in the back, and countless rows in the back. You surround me, I surround you, you bite me, I bite you. This sentence highlights the characteristics of mountain peaks-high. It is very vivid to describe the towering Wuxia Mountain with personification, which brings the mountains to life.
(3) Wuyun is like an ox and a horse, like a tiger and a leopard, grotesque and everything. This sentence vividly describes the fantastic and changeable clouds.
Fly hard, fly hard, always feel that it is not easy to fly over the peak.
By repeatedly using rhetorical devices, it is written from the side that birds can't fly over the peak, which sets off the sublimity of the peak.
5. Read the text carefully and complete the table in groups:
Landscape features, poetic feelings, proverbs and allusions
Always say the Three Gorges: sinister, the most sinister. The Wuxia Gorge of the Three Gorges in Badong is long, and the apes are shocked by tears.
Xiling gorge:
Huang Mao Xiashan is high and dangerous, and the water is urgent.
Jiangbei Mountain in Deng Ying Canyon is steep, dry and tasteless. Jiang's impromptu poems are relaxed and leisurely. Nanshan is exquisite and beautiful, with lush and lovely trees. Konglingxia Niuganmafeixia: The mountain is like a knife, and the green beach is not a beach, which is extremely terrible and becomes a narrow gate. Kong Ling is the Ling Gang Beach at the Gate of Hell: water pours down from a height.
The water in Micang Gorge is not as urgent as before, but the mountain is steeper.
Thousands of mountains and valleys are close to Jingmen, and girls grow up in Sri Lanka.
Martial arts: water risks, strange mountains, strange clouds, interesting.
Qutangxia: The mountain is slightly flat, and the water is still dangerous. Liu Huangshu is lonely and desolate.
Baidicheng and Lady Sun Temple;
Pine trees, eight arrays, bells
After walking through the Three Gorges: the mountains are wider, the rivers are wider and the water level is flatter. relaxed
Abstract of intransitive verbs
The Three Gorges is a scenic spot in China. The magical and magnificent natural scenery and its human landscape fascinate us. I hope the students will have the opportunity to experience the magical scenery of the Three Gorges.
Seven. homework
1, word accumulation, explanation, sentence making
2. Exercise 4 after class
Second lesson
First, review.
Students collect relevant information, communicate in groups, and recommend representatives to take the stage to tell the imaginary scene after the completion of the Three Gorges Project.
Second, analyze the function of quoting poems, proverbs and allusions.
1. The folk proverb is that the Wuxia gorge in the Three Gorges of Badong is long, and the ape sings three times with tears.
Rendered the sinister and sad atmosphere around the Three Gorges, and set the tone for the full text.
2. The poem in front of the author has the flavor of Jiangnan, as well as weeping willows and flowers.
The flowers in the south of the Yangtze River are crying in the poem, which vividly depicts the beauty of the landscape around Huangling Temple. Highlighting the beautiful environment of Huangling Temple.
3. Proverbs: Green Beach and Leaf Beach are not beaches, but Kong Ling is the gate of hell.
It shows the sinister and terrible beaches in Kong Ling. The first sentence highlights Kong Ling beach by contrast, and the second sentence describes Kong Ling beach by the gate of hell, which is obvious and daunting.
4. Poetry: Wan He is close to Jingmen, and girls grow up in Sri Lanka.
It highlights the wonderful use of the word "qu" in the poem, further shows the mountains on both sides of the Yangtze River, and the last sentence of the poem also praises the princess Wang Zhaojun of the Ming Dynasty.
5, allusions Liu Huangshu entrust an orphan to.
On the one hand, the article describes the lush, exquisite and lovely trees in Baidicheng, on the other hand, it also describes the tragic story of Liu Huangshu orphans here, which highlights the rich historical and cultural connotation of the Three Gorges scenery and is even more intriguing.
Step 6 summarize
Since ancient times, all the famous mountains and rivers have formed indissoluble bonds with celebrities, poems, proverbs and allusions, showing a strange phenomenon that they are brilliant with nature, complement each other and set each other off. On the one hand, the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River is a natural landscape, ranking first in the world because of its majesty, strangeness, precipitousness and beauty. On the other hand, it also lies in its numerous cultural landscapes. Thanks to the poets and poets who devoted themselves to the Three Gorges in the past dynasties, they left a series of glorious footprints on the mountains and rivers and wrote immortal poems for future generations. How many eternal songs and stories are flowing in the endless torrent of the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River! The Three Gorges gave the literati literature nourishment and creative passion, and they rewarded the Three Gorges with Wen Zhen, Mo Bao and celebrity effect.
Third, taste the language
Thinking exercise 3: Students discuss, communicate and summarize.
1, the author summed up the risk of the river in a very concise language, and the four comparisons are short and powerful, which gives people a sense of suffocation when reading. Narrow, sharp and winding, many beaches are chilling. The parallelism sentence is neat, slightly changed and harmonious and interesting to read.
2. Grasping the characteristics of many peaks and heights, the arrangement of languages is like the waves of the sea, each wave is higher than the other, giving people a sense of hierarchy. Using anthropomorphic techniques to describe static and dynamic, vividly shows the mode of chasing after each other and keeping up with the joneses. In addition, surround me with authentic techniques, I surround you, you bite me, I bite you, giving people a sense of cycle, which is very interesting.
3. Metaphors such as cattle or horses, tigers or leopards vividly depict the changes of the sea of clouds in Wushan. In addition, it is more interesting to highlight the clouds in Wushan than those in Lushan by means of comparative writing.
Fourth, summarize the writing characteristics of the article.
1. The article narrates and describes the scenery in turn according to the author's travel notes. Well organized. This paper first makes a general introduction, and then goes upstream to describe and describe Xiling Gorge, Wuxia Gorge and Qutang Gorge respectively. When describing the longest Xiling Gorge, it is introduced in four paragraphs, which is clear at a glance.
2. When introducing the scenery, you can grasp the characteristics and be appropriate and detailed.
3. Use a variety of rhetorical devices and writing techniques to describe the scenery vividly. Use personification, metaphor, parallelism and other rhetorical devices to highlight the characteristics of the scenery, and use the brushwork of comparison, contrast and contrast to highlight the sinister nature of the Three Gorges.
4. In this paper, ancient poems, proverbs and his own impromptu poems are quoted appropriately, which plays a role in making the finishing point, being concise, rendering the atmosphere and adding charm to the travel notes.
Verb (short for verb) homework
Practice two or three after class.
Attached book design:
1 Badong Three Gorges
Yichang-Xiling Gorge (Huang Mao Gorge, Dengying Gorge, Kongling Gorge and Micang Gorge)
-Zigui, Badong-Wuxia-Qutangxia-Jiang 'an of Kuifu
Teaching reflection