The Preface to Wang Teng Pavilion is correct.

It should all be the version before brackets. I have a copy of Wang Zian Notes by Jiang Qingyi in Qing Dynasty, which belongs to Shanghai Ancient Books Publishing House and should be more correct.

However, there are too many disputes about these words. The version of Su Shi's calligraphy is the one in brackets. In fact, it is easy for the ancients to make mistakes when copying.