-Wang's Notes on Poetry Reading Teaching
Text/Si Yanping
I have always admired and worshipped Wang Wei. His noble temperament and quiet spirit make me intoxicated and obsessed. How to pass on this appreciation to children, I thought of integrating reading teaching through composing poems, and bringing students a friendly journey of enlightenment.
How many poems should I choose? A 40-minute class is not easy and complicated. After much consideration, I decided to combine Autumn Night in the Deep Mountains, Retreat in Zhongnanshan and Birds in the Mountain Stream. By studying these three poems, I opened a window to understand Wang Wei's poetic art and humanistic thought.
Students, Teacher Hong Yan, a special commentator of Tencent, once wrote an article-"I only like the feeling of unrequited love". In that article, she said that one of her favorite poets is Wang Wei, and the temperament expressed in his poems deeply fits my soul and is the place where I want to fly in impetuous and complicated days. If you want to travel to the Tang Dynasty, what you are most willing to do is to be a waitress around Wang Wei and feel the inner peace and passion of men in the alternation of piano and whistle. It turns out that a person's silence can also produce great power. In this class, we will approach the quiet and noble king. "How to attract children with an open class with great feelings? I remembered an article written by Hong Yan in my early years. I only like the feeling of unrequited love. In that article, Wang Wei was a charming son with Jing Ya bearing, which fascinated me deeply. Like Hong Yan, I have countless admiration and appreciation for Wang Wei.
Reading poetry is naturally an essential link. No matter whether it is passionate poems or Jing Ya's leisurely poems, you can't enter the country without reading them, and you can't understand them without reading them. Children read first, make comments and adjustments on the basis of children's reading, and experience the sense of tranquility of Wang Wei's poems in reading.
On this basis, the first main question is put forward: reading Wang Moqi and seeing the beauty of the picture. Macro thinking: which of Wang Wei's three poems is the most picturesque? Tell me why. Su Shi commented on Wang Wei's poems, including paintings in poems and poems in paintings. The picture beauty of Wang Wei's poems is fresh and vivid. How to guide students to feel the beauty of the pictures should be the beginning of teaching. Therefore, I put this main problem in the first place. Xuanqi said that the second song was the most beautiful, with the breath of people in it, and the second song had the beauty of life. Xiao Yang said, "Birding Creek" is the most beautiful, and this poem has a quiet beauty. I asked, where can I see the beauty of leisure? You can see it in "osmanthus flowers fall when people are idle" What kind of person? A leisurely person. What kind of osmanthus? Withered osmanthus. This poem constitutes a kind of leisure beauty that both people and flowers know. Si Tong said that Autumn Night in a Mountain is the most beautiful, and Bright Moon is very emotional. The bright moon shines on the clear spring, and with the gurgling sound of running water, such a picture has the beauty of agility. "You just answer is in place, all caught a beautiful point to describe. Let's take a look at the teacher's summary. " Autumn Night in a Mountain is the most beautiful picture, with fresh rain and gentle mountains. In the autumn, the bright moon is in the sky, mottled pine shadows, tinkling springs, laughing girls and fishing boats picking lotus flowers are quiet, clear and lively. What a wonderful picture! The most beautiful pictures in Bird Watching Creek are fallen osmanthus, silent night, empty spring mountain, bright moonlight and singing birds. What an ethereal and quiet poetic picture! "Did you find it? What method can be used to describe the picture? " Yes, we can use adjectives and images to guide children to say "autumn in the evening, bright moon, quiet mountain stream" and so on.
"If you want to classify these three poems in pairs, which two will you put together? What is the standard? " As soon as my voice fell, Jia Ying said, one plus two, the first song and the second capital are five laws. Yi Ming said that if the first song and the third song are put together, these two songs are more about scenery, and the second song is about people's activities. Anything else? What is Wang Wei's poem number? Shi Fo, keep thinking along this line. Zheng Yibo said that the second and third songs can also be put together. The two capitals are Zen, and the words "poor" and "empty" are very Zen.
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The second main question: "Reading poetry in the middle view: Su Shi once said:' There are pictures in poetry, which are fascinating; Look at the picture. There are poems in the picture. "Of these three poems, which two do you think best confirm Su Shi's evaluation? According to Hong Ying, I will walk until the water blocks my way, and then sit and watch the clouds rising in Ran Ran write about Wang Wei, just as he is watching the excitement (laughter), that is to say, his heart is very carefree. Cao Yang said that there is moonlight in the pine forest, crystal stone in the stream and bright moon in the pine forest, which is very artistic. Wu Zhe said that "the tits are surprised when the moon rises, but they flow in the spring", and the bright moon he wrote surprised the tits. This painting is very beautiful. Rain lemon said: "The sound of bamboo calls the washerwoman to return, and the lotus leaves are in front of the fishing boat." It is beautiful, and writing a smile about the washerwoman is a portrayal of life, which is particularly vivid. Noisy and moving make the whole picture more vivid and full of breath. "People idle osmanthus", osmanthus falls gently, and quiet people seem to hear the sound of osmanthus falling. Please look at this group of poems, "There is moonlight in the pine forest, and there is crystal stone in the stream", "When people are idle, sweet-scented osmanthus falls, and the night is quiet and the spring mountains are empty", "Birds are surprised in the moon, and birds are singing in the spring stream". What is the secret? The children said that these three sentences used a combination of static and dynamic, with static in motion and static in motion. Yes, the quiet moon moves the clear spring, the quiet spring mountain, the sweet-scented osmanthus, the quiet spring stream and the mountain birds. It is this beautiful combination of motion and static that makes Wang Wei's poems wonderful.
Continue to think deeply and read poems from a middle perspective: Wang Wei is called "Shi Fo" and his poems are full of Zen. Where can you read it? Chen Shizheyuan said that "My middle-aged heart found its way, and the player played in Nanshan" was very Zen, so he wrote Zen directly. Zheng Yibo said, "All my beauty is lonely", which is Zen. The poet is carefree, solitary and takes care of nothing. Xie Xiaoyang added that "empty self-knowledge" seems to think that he knows everything and nothing, and writes his psychological state as if he has seen through everything. Think about the trend again, and you will understand that this is actually an introverted cultivation! Wei Bin said that "the night is quiet and the mountains are empty" is Zen, and he feels everything and himself in the empty realm. Sum up with the children: "I will walk until the water stops me, and then sit and watch the rising clouds." I am full of Zen, walk at will, have no direction, walk to the end of the running water, still sit down calmly and simply, look up at the flowing clouds, and be carefree. "People are idle, osmanthus flowers fall, the night is quiet and the mountains are empty" is full of Zen, and flowers bloom and fall, all of which belong to the sound of nature. Only when the heart is truly "idle" and the obsession with worldly distractions is put down can the individual spirit be promoted to the realm of "emptiness".
The third main question: "Read Wang Mosha three times and taste poetry". Let the children sum up Wang Wei's poetic style in one word and explain the reasons. Xu Zhouyang said that Wang Wei's poems are "immortal". He seems to be a fairy on earth, and his poems are like sounds of nature, very immortal. Chen said that Wang Wei's poems are "high", and his poems are very clever and natural. He is like a master, sitting and watching the flowing clouds; Nonsense, Wang Wei's poems are "empty" and very Zen; Shi said that Wang Wei's poems are "static" and his poems are a combination of static and dynamic. Cao Xu Anqi said that he believed in Buddhism in his bones, and there was Zen silence in his poems. Even if he moved, he wrote silence. Zheng Yibo said, "emptiness", Wang Wei's poems seem to be illusory, and Wang Wei's poems seem to have an illusory beauty, which makes people's hearts quiet in a nothingness. The children's speeches were brilliant, and finally they concluded: "Wang Wei's poems are" quiet "and" quiet in the spring stream "; Wang Wei's poetry lies in "emptiness", and emptiness lies in the indifference of "all my beauty there"; Wang Wei's poems lie in "leisure" and the fate of "sitting and watching Yun Qi"; Wang Wei's poems are "expensive" and "elegant when people are idle" "
The fourth main question: "Reading Wang Mosha four times, thinking about personality", showing Wang Wei's experience and my initiating article "Xu Jinggao Wang Mosha", guiding children to finally observe Wang Wei's character and tolerance deeply. Children say that Wang Wei is a very noble person, Wang Wei is a personable person, and Wang Wei is a quiet person at heart. Finally, sum up with the children: Wang Wei was indifferent all his life, but attracted everyone around him in indifference, condensing the eyes of Datang; Wang Wei is leisurely and elegant. He himself is an ink painting with a bright moon and a flowing spring. Wang Wei is ethereal, quiet and noble, like a lonely flute, listening to the ear and listening to the heart, not accepting; Wang Wei is as warm as jade, not surprised, not worried or happy, standing under the romantic Tang Dynasty, holding a picture scroll. No wonder Hong Yan didn't say that he wanted to marry Wang Mo, but that he wanted to be a waiter beside Wang Wei. His noble manners are awesome!
Students, moving like a rabbit, quiet as a virgin. If kinetic energy makes our life full of high spirits and static energy makes our life full of certainty, your best life coordinate is to move, calm down, and combine static and dynamic, which will be a big situation and great use! The focus of the classroom is to pursue a dynamic and quiet life. I hope that children can think and realize the Tao quickly and quietly in silence after being lively and smart. Thanks to Wang Wei's classroom enlightenment and life sentiment!
How to break through the joint between pragmatics and humanities in Chinese classroom? Master Jun's "Youth Chinese" links life methods with teaching methods, and closely links Chinese classroom with life realization, so pragmatics and humanities are no longer separated. I am willing to seek such a classroom environment all my life. The integration course of Wang Shi Hua is an attempt, practice and record.