1. "Yuan Ri" has been written into ancient poems and stories
"The cold autumn light of silver candles paints the screen, and the light fan blows at the flowing fireflies. The sky is as cold as water at night, and I sit and watch the Altair and Vega." . This is the ancient poem "Autumn Evening". It is the first Tang poem that I can recite. It is the poem that led me into the ocean of ancient poetry.
When I was young, I lived with my grandfather who loved Tang poetry, and I listened to him reciting various Tang poems all day long. Over time, under the influence of my grandfather, I became poetic and picturesque, and often took the initiative to read various Tang poems.
Once, my grandfather taught me a song "Song of Everlasting Regret". One of the lines I appreciate the most is: "If a young man does not work hard, the old man will be sad." This sentence is concise and clear, and it expresses to the point that we should cherish it. Don't waste the good time now, otherwise it will be too late to learn when you are old and you will be left with a lot of sadness. In this poem, "The sunflowers in the green garden, the morning dew awaits the sun." I am very confused because I don't understand why the poet wrote this sentence. I think this sentence is redundant. Later, I went to ask my knowledgeable grandfather. When he saw it, he smiled and answered the question for me. It turned out that the poet's description of the scene was to better set off the artistic conception of the following and to pave the way for the next chapter. In this way, I learned another trick from ancient poetry. This trick also played a decisive role in my daily homework and added a lot of points to my composition. So I love ancient poetry more and more, because reading ancient poetry not only benefits me a lot, but also makes me more proficient in using writing skills in my compositions. For example, I learned from ancient poems that the ending should be written to summarize the whole text, so that it can be the finishing touch. I also learned that when writing, some places need to be highly concise and some places need to be written in detail. I also learned that writing should be divided into clear paragraphs and clearly organized so that people can read comfortably and get high scores.
In short, thousands of words are condensed into one sentence, ancient poems, I love you! I have benefited a lot from you. I not only gained knowledge, but also purified my soul! 2. An essay about the rewriting of the poem Yuan Ri
In the early morning, I was awakened by the sound of firecrackers. Looking outside, my eyes fell on a group of children who were setting off firecrackers. "Crack!" The firecrackers rang, bursting out a high flame, which was getting higher and higher just like people's lives.
I walked towards the door and smelled a scent. ah! It turns out that people are drinking Tusu wine to the east in order to pray for peace!
Thousands of households are illuminated by the rising sun. How warm it is!
At this time, people had already torn off the old Spring Festival couplets on the door frames and replaced them with new ones. The Spring Festival couplets looked particularly bright in the sun. This aroused my
feeling to change the law and benefit the people. I
believe that by replacing the old system and implementing the New Deal, people's lives will definitely be improved in the near future. building! 3. Change the poem "Yuan Ri" into a short composition of 200 words
"Yuan Ri" is a seven-character quatrain composed by Wang Anshi, a politician in the Northern Song Dynasty. This poem describes the moving scenes of excitement, joy and renewal of everything on New Year's Day, expresses the author's thoughts and feelings on political innovation, and is full of joy and positive spirit.
Amidst the roaring sound of firecrackers, the old year has passed; the warm spring breeze brings the new year, and people happily drink the newly brewed Tusu wine. The rising sun shines on thousands of households, and they are all busy taking down the old peach charms and replacing them with new ones.
This poem describes the scene of getting rid of the old and welcoming the new during the Spring Festival. The sound of firecrackers bid farewell to the old year, and I felt the breath of spring while drinking the delicious Tusu wine. The rising sun shines on thousands of households, and the peach charms on every door are replaced with new ones.
This is a poem about welcoming the New Year in ancient times. It is based on folk customs, sensitively absorbing typical materials of ordinary people celebrating the Spring Festival, and capturing representative life details: lighting firecrackers, drinking Tusu Wine and new peach charms fully reflect the joyful atmosphere of the New Year and are full of strong flavor of life.
"The sound of firecrackers marks the end of the year, and the spring breeze brings warmth to Tusu." The custom of setting off firecrackers during festivals has been around since ancient times and continues to this day. It is an ancient custom that on the first day of the first lunar month every year, the whole family drinks Tusu wine, then wraps the dregs in red cloth and hangs it on the door frame to "ward off evil spirits" and avoid the plague.
The third sentence, "Thousands of households on the same day", inherits the previous poetic meaning, saying that every household is bathed in the light of the morning sun in early spring. The last sentence describes the forwarded discussion. Hanging peach charms is also an ancient folk custom. "Always exchange new peaches for old talismans" is a compressed and omitted sentence pattern. "New peaches" omit the word "talisman", and "old talismans" omit the word "peach". They are used interchangeably. This is due to the word limit of each sentence of Qijue. for the sake of.
Poetry is the voice of people. Many commentators on poetry have noticed that the artistic conception and reality expressed in this poem also have its own metaphorical and symbolic meaning. Wang Anshi's poem is full of joy and positive spirit because he was serving as prime minister at the time and implementing new laws. Wang Anshi was a famous reformer in the Northern Song Dynasty. During his tenure, just as people replaced the old with new peach charms, he abolished the old policies and implemented new policies. Wang Anshi was full of confidence in the New Deal, so he was particularly cheerful when it was reflected in his poems.
This poem praises the birth of new things as full of vitality as the "spring breeze brings warmth"; the "Sunday" shines on "thousands of households". This is not an ordinary sun, but the beginning of a new life. The reform brings What is given to the people is a bright light. The final sentence, "Always replace old talismans with new ones," expresses the poet's joy and joy at the victory of the reform and the improvement of people's lives. It contains profound philosophy, pointing out the law that new things always replace things that are declining.
Although this poem uses line drawing techniques to exaggerate the joyful festive atmosphere, it also expresses its own thoughts through the customs of Yuan Day renewal in a subtle way. 4. Help rewrite the narrative of "Yuan Ri" in 300 words
The Spring Festival of the new year has arrived, and Wang Anshi saw that the Spring Festival of the new year is so beautiful.
Wang Anshi looked for the place where the sound of firecrackers came from, and he saw: a group of naughty children lighting firecrackers, with faces full of joy. Wang Anshi thought to himself: What cute children! How popular the Spring Festival is among children!
Wang Anshi also saw busy adults who went out early and came back late. At this time, they were welcoming the Spring Festival with their children and drinking Tusu wine. Wang Anshi stared at the joyful children, and he thought of how happy he was when he was a child to welcome the Spring Festival. During the Spring Festival, you can eat fish and meat at home, and you can also receive some lucky money and some gifts. You can wear beautiful new clothes, and you can see your dear friends setting off firecrackers happily in the morning. We also built snowmen and had snowball fights with them. Mom and dad were also watching them having so much fun. It’s what you see in your eyes and enjoy in your heart! In the afternoon, you can also play with your friends or visit a neighbor’s house. It’s so fun! However, although our children have grown up one year happily during the Spring Festival, and the adults have become one year older, they are still happy and joyful.
It took a while for Wang Anshi to regain his composure. The sun had already risen high at this time, and he saw that the adults had put up new Spring Festival couplets. Every household becomes more beautiful under the sunshine. 5. Rewrite the essay with 400 words on "Yuan Day"
"Spring Festival" is a traditional festival of our Chinese nation. At this time, every household will gather together to have a reunion dinner. Migrant workers are busy packing their luggage. , ready to go home, with a year's salary, and a warm heart; we children, having achieved good results, are happy in our hearts, waiting for the praise of our parents... It is everywhere on the street, in the community, and in the supermarket. It was a joyous and lively scene.
Today is New Year’s Eve. In the morning, the golden sunshine fills the earth. My mother and I went shopping on the street, and the street seemed to have changed overnight. All in all, the streets were decorated with lights and colorful decorations, and every household had posters of "bad luck" and couplets, and hung red lanterns. People dressed in festive costumes went to various markets with smiles on their faces, some shopping and some watching. , a happy and peaceful scene
At 8 o'clock in the evening, the "Spring Festival Gala" began. Our family sat in front of the TV and watched the "Spring Festival Gala". The program of the party was very exciting: Beautiful songs, humorous skits, and funny cross talk... The program was so colorful that I was dazzled.
"Dang, dang, dang..." As the New Year's bell rang. , the fireworks and firecrackers exploded in unison. My father and I took out the fireworks that had been prepared and lit the fireworks tube. There was only a loud "boom", and a firework bomb rose into the air and exploded in an instant. The exploding fireworks seemed like a beautiful lotus opening its petals in the air. At this time, fireworks erupted from the fireworks tube again, like countless bright and brilliant meteors, flashing across the sky... There were still fireworks in the sky. There were other fireworks flashing, some of them were like strings of pearls, some were like shooting stars, some were like blossoming chrysanthemums, some were like waterfalls... I was dizzy with the loud sound of firecrackers. A radiant, brilliant firework flew in the sky, all kinds of colors, decorating the sky like a flower. The night sky suddenly became dazzling. The scene at this time was filled with laughter, firecrackers and shouts. Surrounded by the melody of sounds and music, it was really lively.
On the first day of the new year, it was time to go to the park. In the morning, after we washed up, we had glutinous rice balls for breakfast. Boiled eggs and brown sugar, because there is a custom of "not killing animals" and "not eating meat" on the New Year's Day morning in my hometown. After breakfast, we set off happily. As soon as we arrived at the entrance of the park, I was attracted by the rich snacks. I was really dazzled when I entered the park. I took my little cousin to row a boat, ride a small plane, ride a pony, and ride a monkey sedan. My father also took a lot of photos of us.
My Spring Festival this year is so meaningful and I am so happy. It reminds me of Wang Anshi's "Yuan Ri": the sound of firecrackers marks the end of the year, and the spring breeze brings warmth to Tusu.
Thousands of households always exchange new peaches for old talismans.
The new year is here again. In the new year, everything will change, and I will grow up again. I hope that good luck will always accompany me this year, and I will work harder to achieve excellent results in this year. When I grow up, I will make a huge contribution to the construction of my hometown.
2 Spring Festival Notes
The Spring Festival of 2008 is here, and the streets and alleys are full of people. People who have worked hard for a year have come out of their homes to enjoy the leisure time of the festival. Everyone was filled with cheerful smiles.
The colors on the street are also much brighter than usual. I saw colorful flags flying, and various merchants' slogans and banners fluttering in the wind. There are big red lanterns hanging at the entrance of the shopping mall, which warms your heart just by looking at them. In the blue sky, the colorful balloons are dazzling under the sunlight. The breeze blows, and balloons big and small dance in the wind, and they seem to nod to passers-by.
The cheerful and frolic scenes in the shopping mall shine into the eyes of passers-by through the bright glass doors and windows, making people involuntarily follow the colorful flow of people and merge into it. The Spring Festival is not only a festival for adults, but also for children. The counters for children's toys, books, and stationery are extremely busy. Children come one after another to take away their beloved toys, leaving behind laughter and laughter.
During the Spring Festival, homes at home are also different from ordinary times. The word "福" must be posted on the door, firecrackers must be set off during meals, fireworks must be set off at night, and the Spring Festival party must be watched. There were more people eating than usual, parents, uncles, aunts, grandparents, all gathered together. The dishes on the table are also more plentiful than before, including chicken, duck, fish, and delicacies. After dinner, everyone chatted together, drank tea, and chatted.
The Spring Festival is so lively. I really want to celebrate the Spring Festival every day. 6. Rewritten text about the poem Yuanri
Rewritten text: The Spring Festival of the new year has arrived, and Wang Anshi saw that the Spring Festival of the new year is so beautiful.
Wang Anshi looked for the place where the sound of firecrackers came from, and he saw: a group of naughty children lighting firecrackers, with faces full of joy. Wang Anshi thought to himself: What cute children! How popular the Spring Festival is among children! Wang Anshi also saw busy adults who went out early and came back late. At this time, they were welcoming the Spring Festival with their children and drinking Tusu wine. Wang Anshi stared at the happy children, and he thought of: When he was a child, he was so happy when he came to welcome the Spring Festival. During the Spring Festival, he could eat fish and meat at home, and he could also receive some lucky money and some gifts. You can wear beautiful new clothes, and you can see your dear friends setting off firecrackers happily in the morning.
We also built snowmen and had snowball fights with them. Mom and dad were also watching them having so much fun.
It’s a joy to see and enjoy in your heart! In the afternoon, you can also play with your friends or visit a neighbor’s house. It’s so fun! However, although our children have grown up one year happily during the Spring Festival, and the adults have become one year older, they are still happy and joyful. It took a while for Wang Anshi to regain his composure.
The sun had already risen very high at this time, and he saw that the adults had put up new Spring Festival couplets. Every household becomes more beautiful under the sunshine.
Expanded text: One early morning in the Song Dynasty, the sky was dim and bright. Outside the window, a loud sound of firecrackers woke me up from my sleep. Oh, today is the first day of the first lunar month that everyone has been waiting for.
I got up quickly and went outside the house. There were already several friends gathering in the courtyard to set off firecrackers. They were my fifth-grade classmates in a nearby private school. Setting off firecrackers is everyone’s favorite activity.
After a while, we held the "Colorful Flower Stick" and shook it to create colorful patterns; after a while, we took out the "Colorful Bead Tube" and the flying paintballs turned into beautiful colorful flowers, which won everyone's cheers. ; After a while, we lit several "thunder cannons", and the violent explosion frightened the sparrows that were parked on some old camphor trees in the courtyard. They flew far, far away with our laughter... Just then When we were having fun, our parents called from behind. It's time for dinner.
Open the door, wow! It’s so lively. All the relatives of the whole family gathered together, holding their wine glasses high, blessing each other and celebrating with the Tusu wine they brewed. Everyone's face was filled with smiles and they were immersed in the atmosphere of happiness.
At this time, my father took out the brand-new peach charms that he had prepared and replaced the old ones. Everyone cheered. What an exquisite new peach charm, shining in the morning sun. Hui. It indicates that people's lives will be richer and the country will be richer and stronger! The scene in front of me is just as described by Prime Minister Wang Anshi: The sound of firecrackers marks the end of the year, and the spring breeze brings warmth to Tusu.
Thousands of households always replace old talismans with new peaches. Your approval is the motivation for my answer, please accept it. 7. Yuan Day 100 words rewritten from Wang Anshi’s ancient poem
Yuan Day Author: Wang Anshi The sound of firecrackers marks the end of the year, and the spring breeze brings warmth to Tusu.
Thousands of households always exchange old talismans for new peaches. Amidst the roaring sound of firecrackers, the old year has passed; the sound of firecrackers bid farewell to the old year, and I feel the breath of spring while drinking the mellow Tusu wine.
The rising sun shines on thousands of households, and the peach charms on every door are replaced with new ones. The whole family drank Tusu wine, then wrapped the dregs in red cloth and hung it on the door frame to "ward off evil spirits" and avoid the plague.
The warm spring breeze ushered in the New Year, and people happily drank the newly brewed Tusu wine. The rising sun shines on thousands of households, and they are all busy taking down the old peach charms and replacing them with new ones.
Every household is bathed in the light of the early spring sun. 8. "Yuan Ri" has been written into ancient poems and stories
Yuan Ri
Author: Wang Anshi
One year is passed away in the sound of firecrackers, and the spring breeze brings warmth to Tusu. On the first day of the twelfth lunar month, thousands of households always exchange new peaches for old talismans.
Tian Jiayuan Day
Author: Meng Haoran
Last night the fight returned to the north, and today the new year starts East. I have become an official in this year, but I have no salary and still worry about the farmers. My father plows the mulberry fields, and he follows the shepherd boy with his hoe. The Tian family has a good climate, and the emperor said that this year will be prosperous.
Yuan Day
< p> Author: Li ShiminThe warm spring scenery in the high building, the bright morning light in the pavilion. The colorful flying in the Tongting, the bright sun in the green sky. Respect oneself to the four poles, hanging clothes to control the eight wastes. The frost halberd column Danbi, a long corridor with silk and bamboo rhymes. Mu Yun is flourishing, and Emperor Kangzai is prosperous. The following text follows the later track, and follows the ancient example of the former king. The grass shows the old spring color, and the plum blossoms make up the past. The great river is full of thoughts and wishes, and finally I send it to you. Zhou Hang.
Yuan Day
Author: Sikong Tu
Jiazi is numbered today, and life is only self-pity. Diligent Yuan Day, and the next year is next. < /p>
Yuan Day
Author: Cheng Yanxiong
Dai Xingxian held a cup of wine to congratulate Yao, and in the mirror he was shocked by the frost on his temples. Fortunately, he secretly smiled in front of the lamp, but Tu Su couldn't. Taste it first.
Second rhyme Lu Qianxian Yuanri Chunqing
Author: Wang Shouren
The sunset in the city is snowing outside the city, and it is cloudy and sunny ten miles away. We also know that creation What did I mean? The bottom of things is that people's suffering is not over. The reflection of the cypress tower is reflected, the cold sound of Mao Ci, pines and bamboos is heard. The quilt is not covered with sorrow and stiffness, and the accumulation of elements is as high as the dawn.
Yuanri< /p>
Author: Wen Tingyun
The divine brilliance breaks through the dim atmosphere, and the new sun enters Yanwen. The wind of Xu wind tunes the jade and blows, and the end of the day responds to the copper. The majestic phoenix and the Yao triphen, the dragon rises and protects the jade. Door. The rain is bright and spring is warm, and the hair is shining brightly.
The morning rooster is reported twice on the first day of the year
Author: Fang Qian
The morning rooster is reported twice At the end of the night, there is no sound from the fighting. The warm sun shines on the mountains to adjust the righteousness, and the east wind dances in the trees. The cold remains. The car in the carriage wants to know the feeling of the world, and it is necessary to come to the emperor to see the new year. Only then did Su Su decide his age, and he just smiled while sitting in it. Hair spots on the temples. 9. A 500-word narrative composition rewritten on the first day of the year
The Spring Festival of the new year has arrived, and Wang Anshi saw that the Spring Festival of the new year is so beautiful.
Wang Anshi looked for the place where the sound of firecrackers came from, and he saw: a group of naughty children lighting firecrackers, with faces full of joy. Wang Anshi thought to himself: What cute children! How popular the Spring Festival is among children!
Wang Anshi also saw busy adults who went out early and came back late. At this time, they were welcoming the Spring Festival with their children and drinking Tusu wine. Wang Anshi stared at the joyful children, and he thought of how happy he was when he was a child to welcome the Spring Festival. During the Spring Festival, you can eat fish and meat at home, and you can also receive some lucky money and some gifts. You can wear beautiful new clothes, and you can see your dear friends setting off firecrackers happily in the morning. We also built snowmen and had snowball fights with them. Mom and dad were also watching them having so much fun. It’s what you see in your eyes and enjoy in your heart! In the afternoon, you can also play with your friends or visit a neighbor’s house. It’s so fun! However, although our children have grown up one year happily during the Spring Festival, and the adults have become one year older, they are still happy and joyful.
It took a while for Wang Anshi to regain his composure. The sun had already risen very high at this time, and he saw that the adults had put up new Spring Festival couplets. Every household becomes more beautiful under the sunshine.