What's the difference between the new edition and the old edition of Zhang Zhishun Daochang's book?

In fact, the general content is similar, but obviously the old paragraph is more fluent and understandable than some new paragraphs.

Zhang Zhishun (1912-2015), former honorary president of Hainan Taoist Association, honorary abbot of Anwanshou Baxian Palace and abbot of Yumen Temple in Hainan. Shenqiu, Henan, was born in 19 12. At the age of seven, it was the late Qing Dynasty and the early Republic of China. Leave home to beg because of poor family.

At the age of 12, he studied with a teacher, and at the age of 17, he became a monk in Huashan, Shaanxi Province. In the Taoist temple, Zhang Zhishun worked hard all day to hone his mind. Because of his clear mind and unique cultivation, he was handed down by his teacher, and he was the twenty-first generation successor of the authentic Longmen Taoism in China.

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