1, good at lyric.
Delicate, sincere and profound expression of the feelings between father and son. The author wrote a lyric prose to express his feelings through simple narration. What the author writes is different from the description of general objective things. Here, narration is regarded as a lyric tool. So all kinds of things are shrouded in emotion, showing the deepest affection between father and son.
2. Use the skills of line drawing.
Show superb artistic skills. The author focuses on his father's back, so the word "back" is also the title of the full text. This proposition is undoubtedly very appropriate. The words described before and after the article must explain that this is the foreshadowing of the middle description; Without all kinds of indispensable explanations, only writing the background of this special situation and special occasion will make the clues of the article unclear, and there will be no artistic effect of this article.
3. The language is concise and clear.
The so-called "sketching" means faithfully reappearing the scene in front of readers with simple words without metaphor, rhetoric, modification and description, so that others can feel immersive. Mr. Lu Xun said that sketching is "true meaning, whitewashing, less affectation and no ostentation" (the secret of composition).
Extended data:
On the back is a reminiscence essay written by modern writer Zhu Ziqing at 1925. This essay tells the story that the author left Nanjing for Peking University, and his father sent him to pukou railway station to take care of him and buy him oranges. What impressed me the most was the back of his father climbing up and down the platform when he bought him oranges.
The full-text language is faithful, simple and elegant. By means of line drawing and side contrast, the author expresses his father's love for his son deeply, delicately and sincerely, and shows his concern and love for his son from ordinary events.
"Back" expresses the father's concern and consideration for his son, and the son's respect and reluctance to his father from the trivial things in life.
The full text can be seen as several short stories interspersed: the father took his son home to attend the funeral, and the father was worried that his son would personally take his son to the railway station. Because there were too many sons, the father hired someone to help his son with his luggage, and the father carefully selected seats for his son on the train. The father climbed many platforms to buy oranges for his son. These short stories reveal extraordinary fatherly love in the ordinary.