Amin Huang Fengchi compiled "Painting Spectrum" and "Four Spectrum of Zhu Mei Lanju". In the introduction of "Painting Spectrum", he said: "Those who learn and understand, and take the four kings of Zhu Mei Lanju alone, have no one else, so they can cleanse people's dirty intestines and make their bones clear."
The four gentlemen have their own characteristics. Plum, spit in the snow; Bamboo, accompanied by the moon in the mountains; Orchids, fragrant at the bottom of the valley; Chrysanthemum, field frost. Today, people's feelings for Mei Zhulan Ju are always based on the profound national cultural spirit, and they call Mei Zhulan Ju "four gentlemen" to flaunt the virtue of a gentleman, express his nobility, praise his modesty, praise his elegance or praise his elegance. The four gentlemen are beautiful and virtuous, without any secular state.
China's excellent culture, including "Four Gentlemen of Zhu Mei and Lan Ju", is unique and has influenced generations of young people. Maybe you like the Four Gentlemen, maybe you prefer one of them. Why? Please write an article on this basis. Requirements: choose a good angle, define the concept, define the style, and draw up your own topic; Do not copy, duplicate or disclose personal information; Not less than 800 words.
Proposition analysis
There is no deviation in writing this proposition. However, it may not be easy to deduce the unique character of "Four Gentlemen". Generally speaking, writing on one side can be profound, even if the "four gentlemen" all "love", but the writing is inevitably superficial and difficult to shine. The writing of a case corresponding to a gentleman is often inaccurate. Fear mainly lies in the accumulation of knowledge and the quality of thinking.
From the propositional point of view, the reasons for "like" ("why") are tangible and intangible, and "self" is bound to be among them. In other words, focusing on the unique feelings of "I", talking in general without self-feeling, or just taking other people's examples to prove the characteristics of "gentleman" is not in line with the meaning of the question.
In fact, it should be about life attitude and life orientation. "Noble", "humble", "elegant" and "elegant" are not enough to accurately and comprehensively summarize Zhu Mei Lan Ju's personality, so they can be used in writing, but they must be suitable for its characteristics.
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Peeking at people in the bamboo forest
Mei Lan and Zhu Ju are four gentlemen among flowers. If plum is clean, orchid is quiet and chrysanthemum is light, then bamboo is a combination of beautiful mountains and rivers, clearing the intestines and bones. Look at the growth of a bamboo, not as wanton as other flowers, but leave a cool breath in your life. Through the green appearance of bamboo, we can see the backbone of an individual and a nation.
Bamboo spent a lot of time in the dark. How much darkness we have to endure, how many days and nights without the sun, 30cm is only a tiny unit of length for us, but it takes four years for bamboo to break through the solid soil, and then it grows crazily and rapidly at a speed of 30 cm every day. In fact, in the first four years, bamboo did not wait, but silently extended hundreds of square meters of roots in the soil, and finally paid off. In the growing bamboo, I got a glimpse of the persistence and perseverance needed by the rise of a nation and a country. Just like Yang Ronglian, a sister of milk tea, who has been quietly dedicated to her post for more than ten years, she finally broke through the solid soil like bamboo, was well known and recognized by people, repaid the society and achieved personal greatness. In our country, our nation, there are countless Yang Ronglian in their posts, quietly taking root like bamboo, gritting their teeth and persisting, and they should not be forgotten.
Look at that bamboo. Now it has grown into a towering bamboo. Its life goes on. It's exposing itself. Bamboo shoots bring people the enjoyment of taste buds, bamboo clothes provide people with good materials for making cloth shoes, and bamboo poles split to attract people to Qingshan Spring. However, bamboo rafts, bamboo curtains, bamboo chopsticks and other humble uses have simple dedication. From bamboo, I saw the selfless dedication and greatness of self-sacrifice. Wu, a retired military doctor, moved the whole of China with his selfless dedication like bamboo. Wu always treats patients with endless sincerity and liver surgery with pure love. Doctors are kind, and a great doctor touches the world not only with his medical skills, but also with kindness. He took out his burning heart and lit up the hearts of many patients with liver disease like a torch. He is like a bamboo, silently dedicated, and more willing to dedicate himself.
Look at that bamboo. No matter the wind and rain, it has been thriving there. Savoring the growth of a bamboo can not only be moved by the tenacity of life, but also appreciate the backbone of a nation and a country. Peeking at people in bamboo, we can see the pride and nobility of bamboo, and we can also see the backbone of a nation like bamboo. If each of us can have a clear idea, will our society be clearer? Just think, if any nation can have more "bamboo forest", will its "spring scenery in one garden" be particularly different?
It is necessary to cultivate thousands of bamboo poles, love thousands of people, manage one branch, and write the spring scenery of the world. The love for bamboo should be based on the contemporary prosperity, and the quality of bamboo should be based on the contemporary and a bright future for a nation.
General comments:
Content: the article glimpses people from bamboo, and glimpses people's persistence and dedication; Write people, society and the Chinese nation with bamboo; Combined with the growth characteristics of bamboo, step by step is more convincing; Count 20 points.
Expression: natural language and clever cohesion; Without thorough discussion, but revealing personal views; 20 points.
Development level: 20 points for "richness" and "creativity".
Score: 20+20+20=60
A gentleman should be like bamboo.
A few bamboos stand in the mountains, and the strong wind is beating the flying sand, maintaining the same strength. The beautiful moon praises them with white flowers and holds them down with green leaves. Bamboo is a gentleman's thing, sober and modest, and a gentleman's way is also.
"Romance of the Three Kingdoms" once lamented: "Bamboo can be burned but its festival cannot be destroyed." If you have ever lived in the countryside, you will know that bamboo often breaks into long segments after wildfire burning. But even if it is burnt to charcoal color, the prominent bamboo joints will never be burned out. Not afraid of the roaring tigers outside, not attracted by the tide of glory, and firmly maintain the integrity of the heart. People are similar to this, either herding sheep alone in a remote desert but still retaining people to return home wholeheartedly, or sighing over the death of senior officials, or hiding in the mountains and forests without cutting their hair. You are not Su Wu, but you should also raise the national flag in your heart. If you are not Wen Tianxiang, you should also bring the mountains and rivers of the motherland into your heart. If you are not Zhang Dai, you would rather die than eat "Zhou Su". Where can there be a home without a country? As a member of a nation-state, the primary duty of a national citizen is to love her and this country that has gone through many vicissitudes. No matter where you are, no matter when you walk, the country-mountains, rivers, land and people-has already become a daily necessity, infiltrating your body and mind bit by bit, casting a soul that supports you to move forward. And a person can never lose his soul, patriotism is the foundation of a gentleman.
Oscar? Wilde said that "people are born kings, but most of them die in exile", and Gu Cheng once said that "people can be born as ants and beautiful as gods". Bamboo is born in a rocky area, but it still yearns for the sky overhead. Life is a hard exercise. When we encounter setbacks and pains, we should stick to ourselves. We believe that rain is the messenger of sunrise, and we can meet the challenge with a smile. The monarch is on the throne, but everyone can be a monarch. Your success does not depend on your position, but on your determination and persistence, self-confidence and tenacity. Li Bai is a "fairy in wine", but his experience is not without twists and turns. It was because his son of heaven called him off the boat that he became a wild poet. Li filmed Song Jiang's lyrics in Water Margin, painstakingly seeking and practicing calligraphy, and finally showed Song Jiang's free and easy pride perfectly; As a mediocre person, the delivery man in the Chinese poetry conference confidently stepped onto the field and became the most grass-roots poetry champion with his love for poetry and self-persistence. "Feces and insects are filthy, autumn wind turns into cicadas, rotten grass is dull, and Xia Yue turns into fireflies." Clean books come from pollution, bright books come from darkness, and I have my own heart.
Zheng Banqiao Fu: "A bamboo with an open mind has bowed its head." Mature wheat often bows its head, and inner abundance and spiritual nourishment make people more rational and mature. Openness, that is, seeing the world with a pure heart, is a bright but not dazzling brilliance, and a mellow but not unpleasant voice. This not only gives you a compliment on your talent, but also adds a height that is not steep. Swearing: "Modesty makes people progress." There was an ancient saying, "Confucius studied jars, Changhong, Shi Xiang and Lao Dan. Scorpions' disciples are not as clever as Confucius. Confucius said,' Where there are three people, there must be a teacher.' "Ancient sages, Confucius learned six good poems, still learning from others. Such modesty made Confucius. It is this modesty that makes Confucius constantly learn and improve himself and bring himself closer to the way of sages. Confucius has made today's Confucian culture with his constantly acquired knowledge. Therefore, "wait with an open mind to see the wizards." A gentleman can only make progress if he keeps learning and consulting others with an open mind. Otherwise, blindly think that you have become a "saint", and if you don't advance, you will retreat. Only by calming down and looking at everything can we discover a new world and create new opportunities. With a normal heart, you don't need to stretch your thickness, but a smile that ignores the noise is enough.
In life, if you bow your head to do things and look up to be a man, you will be a gentleman, have a tough spirit and behave badly. A gentleman should be like a bamboo, be modest, and see a wizard with strength.
General comments:
Content: Taking "bamboo" as the writing object, highlighting its "gentleman's way" of "keeping chastity and modesty", deepening its attitude and orientation towards life, and examining the topic can reach the category of "fitting the meaning of the topic"; In the process of discussion, the focus is on "keeping the festival open-minded", and the center is prominent; Poetry and famous sentences are handy and rich in content. Count 20 points.
Expression: in line with stylistic features, flexible sentence patterns, fluent language and brilliant literary talent; Layer upon layer, interlocking, highlighting the author's rigorous thinking. Count 20 points.
Development level: 20 points can be scored from three aspects: literary talent, richness and profundity.
Score: 20+20+20=60
It moistens everything silently and gently.
I remember that Lin Bu likes plums and Tao Qian likes chrysanthemums. Celebrities in Wei and Jin dynasties still love bamboo, but I pity Lan alone.
Elegant colors, quiet and faint floral fragrance, Leng Yan and fragrance. Although not gorgeous or ostentatious, he is like a modest gentleman and seems to symbolize all good things.
Most of my impressions of Lan come from Qu Zi's ci. He can really be called the first Mulan in the ages. After reading Chu Ci, Lan is everywhere. He loved Lan's "seclusion and solitude", and his long-cherished wish to serve the country was broken by the bad king. What he did was "tread" and "stay in the orchid", which really didn't hide his love for orchid. He planted orchids, eulogized orchids, pitied orchids and cultivated orchids, hoping that he could be as noble and quiet as orchids. It's a pity that he was bound by the times and eventually died at the bottom of the Miluo River, leaving only long paragraphs of text for future generations to daydream about a world where orchids are in full bloom.
Besides the orchids in poetry, calligraphy and painting, I also have three or two pots of orchids in my room. Not very eye-catching, with slender leaves and white petals. You can't smell the fragrance unless you smell it carefully. Only when you sit alone at the table the night before you are tired of reading can you find a faint fragrance, which is faint and very light, but it can fill your nose and make people feel awake. I spent countless months in the spring with this fragrance, and one day when I was reading a book, the fragrance floated again, which made me feel that the quality of a gentleman should be invisible like an orchid.
The ancients said that orchids have four qualities: clear air, clear color, clear spirit and clear rhyme, which really shows the clarity of orchids to the fullest. People love orchids, not only because of orchids themselves, but also because of their spirit. Orchids are graceful and elegant, and have always been called the gentleman in flowers. With humanity, orchids are not only fragrant plants in the morning dew, but also have the character of a gentleman.
"If you live with goodwill, you will still enter Lan Zhi's room. If you don't smell its fragrance for a long time, you will melt with it, that is, compare a gentleman to a orchid; Confucius said: "Lan Zhi was born in a deep valley, and he is not fragrant because there is no one; A gentleman cultivates himself, not for poverty. "That is to say, the gentleman and orchid. Orchids, which moisten things silently, can not only infect people around them, but also educate the world. Otherwise, how can you "smell the wind and smell the fragrance" in a place where "Peng Ai is nowhere to be found"?
I feel sorry for Lan alone, and I'm good at it.
General comments:
Content: From the form to the meaning of orchids, write the "moistening things quietly" and "humanization" of orchids, with prominent center and lofty ideas; The article is mixed with reality, mixed with things and me, and has a strong cultural atmosphere. Unfortunately, the topic is slightly flawed; 19.
Performance: beautiful language and brilliant literary talent; The gradual deepening is higher than the average in "structure", but it seems that the end of the full text is missing; Style is considered as argumentative (or cultural prose); 19.
Development level: 20 points can be scored from three aspects: literary talent, richness and profundity.
Score: 19+ 19+20=58.
Who gave bamboo love?
"Study clearly, take meilan four monarch, Zhu Ju alone. With its elegance and elegance, it can clear the intestines and clear the bones. "
Plum, spit in the snow; Bamboo, accompanied by the moon in the mountains; Orchids, fragrant at the bottom of the valley; Chrysanthemum, field frost. However, I love the appearance of bamboo "sharing weal and woe, being modest and open-minded".
I remember that there is a dense bamboo forest in the back of my hometown, and the seasons change. It seems that living outside of time only cares about living high. "Section after section, thousands of leaves are saved. I don't blossom, so I don't want to tease bees and butterflies. " This is the proud part of bamboo.
Although Mei is charming in the snow, there is always a kind of indifference that "strangers are not allowed to get close", and only by appreciating each other can we have a heartfelt connection with her; Although orchid fragrance has been around for a long time, it is easy to become an arty thing for boring literati; And chrysanthemum, although it is the representative of hermits, has a little pride, which makes people reluctant to get close. But when it comes to bamboo, everything seems different: it has charm, which is a hidden power; It is fragrant, fresh and natural, and refreshing. It also has pride, but its pride is the pride of moving people and making changes. How can such bamboo make people not love it?
I especially like the simplicity of bamboo. Who says modesty is weakness? Hollow bamboo joints still grow upward and soar into the sky, with a strong character that is often unattainable. The power of humility is a powerful force generated from the inside out, and it is the power contained in the body to support people to forge ahead and realize themselves. The modesty of bamboo is a valuable spiritual wealth for many people in modern times, and it is worth our repeated taste.
I also love the meaning of bamboo. Whenever and wherever you see bamboo, if it is a plant, you will definitely not be interested, but if it is a bamboo forest, the peace in your heart will be drawn out. Bamboo seems to know its own characteristics, but it doesn't do it deliberately. It just makes it grow, brings shelter to animals, brings shade to farmers and brings peace to anxious people.
On the other hand, the pace of modern life is getting faster and faster, and people's natural innocence is covered with a thick layer of ash by material interests. Even bamboo has added the word "wealth" before its name [exotic species. The utilitarian heart can be seen from this. Unfortunately, bamboo has never settled in the city, the environment in the city forced it to leave, and the utilitarian and impetuous people in the city also made it eager to leave this land of right and wrong.
However, we humans really need a bamboo forest to nourish ourselves, not only to appreciate the beauty of bamboo, but also to understand its meaning.
Who gave the love of bamboo to all beings?
General comments:
Content: The main body of the article describes the "pride", "modesty" and "implication" of bamboo, grasping the characteristics of bamboo, but not closely following the style of "sharing risks"; The article is full of facts and facts, and it is "rich in content"; 17 points.
Expression: fluent language; "Special Love" and "Love Also" show the author's structural consciousness; 17 points.
Development grade: 17 can be scored from two aspects: "literary talent" and "richness".
Score:17+17+17 = 51.