In life, work and study, everyone is familiar with writing. Writing requires a complete text structure, so it is necessary to avoid the appearance of an endless composition. Do you know how to write a standardized composition? The following is an excellent composition that I have compiled for you. I have been praised for 5 words. It is for reference only. Let's have a look. I was praised for 5 words of excellent composition 1
"You don't know what you are doing in this exam!" My heart thumped and my heart began to accelerate. The blackboard is clean and there is no dust, but the teacher's eyes are very serious, looking at every student. Shit, I shrank down, for fear that the teacher's charged eyes would aim at me. What score will I get in the exam? 8？ 7？ 6？ ..... I dare not think about it any more.
it's windy outside, and a burst of wind blows into the classroom, which makes my heart cold. Be sure to get 1 points! I have already boasted to my mother that I have gone to Haikou. Pocket money, popsicles, computers, I'm going to say goodbye to you, 555 ... Somehow, it's getting a little gray, as if it's going to rain, and my heart is going to rain. I studied for a whole night. Don't let me down. The classroom is very quiet, everyone seems to hold their breath, and even the arrogance of the monitor has gone outside the cloud nine.
"But-one of my classmates got 1 points." The teacher paused a little. Hmm? My spirit came at once, and my blood began to boil all over. I straightened my waist and stretched my neck out, trying to find out who the man who got 1 points quickly. The speed of the electric fan doubled, and "Hoo-Hoo-Hoo-Hoo-Hoo" turned wildly. My heart beat faster and faster, and I felt a sense of excitement. "This classmate is Chen Yuxi. She is the only one in our class who got 1. It is worthy of praise!"
I looked at the bright red "1" with my paper, and I was very excited. I thought: I am the only 1, and I have been praised by my teacher! I was praised for 5 words of excellent composition 2
In my life, criticism made me sad, lessons made me educated, and there is one thing that can make me happy all day, and that is praise.
When I came into this world, until I finished kindergarten and went to the first grade of primary school, my mother took care of me. Even when I walked from the village entrance to my home, she accompanied me. I never did anything independent. But an accidental opportunity gave me an independent opportunity, and this time, I was praised by my mother. On a Sunday when I was in the first grade, I was studying calligraphy at the calligraphy teacher. When it was over, I received a phone call from my mother. She told me to wait at the teacher's place for a while, and she came to pick me up later. After that, I thought, Really? There is so much calligraphy homework this week, if I don't go back to write, I won't be able to finish my homework. No, I have to walk back by myself, right! Just do it. So, I set foot on my way home. When I reached the intersection, I was still full of strength, thinking: Is it easy to walk? I only used such a little strength to walk so far, which is really boring. Forget it, go home early and rest early. I'd better keep walking. So, I walked leisurely again, but walking is a sport that can't be underestimated. When I first got to the intersection, I was panting and thirsty, and then I thought, No, I have to work harder. So, I ran for a while, but when I just ran for a few tens of meters, I was already out of breath. Just when I was desperate, I suddenly saw a man running from behind and running in front of me. That man's behavior gave me encouragement, so I ran home with great enthusiasm. After my mother saw it, she kept praising me for being independent.
This incident has left a mark on my heart, which I will never forget. I was praised for 5 words of excellent composition 3
In life, there are praises and criticisms everywhere. Praise accompanies our growth, gives us self-confidence, and encourages us to forge ahead. I have also been praised by many people: teachers' praise, parents' praise and friends' praise ...................................................................................................................................................
At that time, I was alone at home. At that time, I was so bored, my homework was finished, and there was nothing to watch on TV, so I just sat on the sofa in a daze. Suddenly, the doorbell began to ring "Ding Dong Ding Dong", which startled me. I was stunned and thought, Ah, it must be my mother! So I was excited to open the door and came to the door. I didn't feel quite right. Isn't it usually so heavy for my mother to knock at the door? Who is it? I stood on tiptoe and looked through the cat's eye. I was a strange uncle. At that time, I was so scared that I almost cried. Later, when I thought about it, crying could not solve the problem. The knock on the door was getting bigger and bigger, and the door seemed to be knocked open by him. I quickly thought of a way. I shouted at the door, "Mom and Dad, come on! Someone is coming! "
Look into the cat's eyes again. I have scared the "Hercules" away!
at that time, I was exhausted, waddled into the room, fell asleep on the bed ................................................................................................................................................. When I woke up completely, I rushed to my mother and told her what happened today in detail. My mother gently stroked my head and said to me in a whisper, "It's really nice! It's great that you can face things by yourself now! " After listening to my mother's words, I smiled, and then fell asleep tired ... < P > Praise feels really good, it is like a sweet piece of fruit candy, which makes people feel comfortable; Praise is like a honey, which is sweet when eaten; Praise is the spiritual pillar, which makes people full of hope and self-confidence. With the happy feeling of praise, everything is sweet! I got 5 words of praise. 4
Childhood is like a long road. Will there be small stones to stop you, and birds will sing to you from time to time?
since the first grade, my level has been in the state of planting. It is useless for my parents to find a class for me; It's no use teaching me by hand. One day, I followed my friends to the world of books, smelling the books and enjoying one short story after another.
On this day, the teacher walked onto the platform with a stack, and her sharp eyes scanned us, scaring us to move. Finally, she cleared her throat and said, "Now I will announce the students who have written better this time." I clenched my fists and felt a little frustrated. I'm sure there won't be me. My writing is so bad ... When I hate posting, every disappointment comes from this moment ...
I'm in a trance, and waiting makes me suffocate more than criticism. Suddenly, my deskmate gave me a push and said, "Hey, you are here!"! Why don't you respond at all? " I looked up blankly and looked around, and the students next to me looked at me with envy. I let go of my hands, breathed a sigh of relief and smiled. I am no longer disappointed!
The teacher came up to me with a smile, reached out and touched my head, with a shallow smile, and two small dimples were exposed. She said: "There is progress this time, and continue to work hard next time." She picked up mine, read it again, and said, "Look, this sentence is very well written! These two words are misspelled. Oh, this sentence is a bit confusing and strange to read. If you read more books, don't be careless, you will definitely write better and better. I am optimistic about you! " Ah, how beautiful my teacher is at this moment! Long hair falls gently on the shoulders, eyelashes are like the wings of a butterfly in Shandong, and big eyes are like deep pools of water, looking at me happily. Originally, how terrible the teacher is in my eyes! I spat out my tongue, held back my excitement and smiled faintly ... < P > I was praised! I finally got the teacher's praise! I was praised for my excellent composition of 5 words. 5
"Please raise your hand if you get the best." Miss Huang scanned the class with expectant eyes. I raised my hand in fear and trembling and looked around at the same time. Wow! Even I got an "A" for only six people. This paper is too difficult!
to tell the truth, I was too scared to get this "A". Because I have read the test paper carefully, there is an application problem behind which my deskmate helped me to correct it. The real score should be 88, but now I got a false 92. At this moment, I am so entangled: should I show it to Teacher Huang? If I don't read it, I get an "excellent", but this score is not true. If I read it, I will drop from "excellent" to "good". I hesitate again and again, and think this bright red "92" is too dazzling, because Teacher Dong has told us countless times: be honest.
I made up my mind to walk to the podium. After reading the examination paper, Miss Huang praised me in front of the whole class instead of criticizing me for being "good". Having been praised, I returned to my seat with this 88 points of peace of mind.
when school was over, my mother came to pick me up. She praised me cheerfully: "Miss Huang has been distributed in the group. Today, there are only six A's in the class, and you are in it. Keep working hard next time!" I "hmm" and didn't dare to go on. My mother deserved this praise!
when I get home, my heart is like fifteen buckets of water, and I'm so anxious, because according to our "mother-child agreement", I can buy a set of books I like if I get full marks or "excellent" five times in a row, and today is the fifth time, so this "excellent" is precious. After dinner, I held the test paper with trepidation and wanted my mother to sign it. Sure enough, my mother looked at the corrected score and couldn't help but frown. I feel that a storm is coming. So, I quickly confessed truthfully ...
"Great! This' good' is good! You must buy the book you promised, and you must not get an' excellent' once. It's okay, we can continue to work hard, but we must be honest in doing things ... "Mom's face turned from cloudy to sunny. I received great praise unexpectedly.
I was praised three times a day, which impressed me deeply. It is this kind of praise that has always inspired me to be true to myself! I was praised for 5 words of excellent composition 6
"Circle plus triangle equals 999, and triangle equals 1. What is the circle divided by the triangle? " The teacher gave a very simple question on the blackboard. I looked at the teacher. Her face was not wrinkled at all, and her hair was long. She seemed to be a very abusive person, but the teacher was not a abusive person. I turned my head and saw that the question on the blackboard was very simple, so I decided to answer this question and get a praise.
I was silent for a while, raised my hand trembling, but immediately put it down. I have one shortcoming, and every answer is wrong. If I answer wrong this time, I will not be praised, but will be severely criticized. But the teacher saw my hand and said, "Wu Hangchen, you answer this question." I felt very sorry after listening to this, because the teacher's eyes are very good. As long as I raise my hand and raise it very low, I will be found by the teacher. I stood up slowly and said hesitantly, "Yes, it's 998." After listening to this answer, the teacher showed a satisfied smile and gave me a praise. The big stone in my heart fell. The teacher gave the second question on the blackboard. This time, the teacher wrote a few words on the blackboard. I think: this class is a math class, not a Chinese class. The teacher should give an application question, but the application question should have many words, at least 1 words, not only 5 words. I looked at the words on the blackboard, which read: List an equation, and I thought to myself: Yo, I can get a praise again this time. I held my hand high, and the teacher saw it and invited me immediately. I said my thoughts, and the teacher listened and said, "Good!" "
I think: as long as it is the teacher's encouragement, let me overcome the obstacles I am afraid of. I was praised for my excellent composition of 5 words. 7
On the road of my life, I was praised, understood, and learned a lesson ... These are like footprints printed on the road of my life. What impressed me the most was that I was praised.
I remember when I was eight years old, it was my birthday, and my mother cooked a table of good dishes for me. It is also the first time that I invited my good friends to celebrate my birthday. Everyone lit candles for me, and I counted eight. Colorful candlelight flickers, just like twinkling stars. The students sang a song "Happy Birthday to you" for me, and then everyone ate the cake happily.
Later, we started to play the game of racing top. At this time, everyone took out their beloved gyroscopes to see who was the best. At the command of my sister, we each issued our own gyroscopes. After a fierce competition, Li Yuhao and I were left spinning. Li Yuhao's gyroscopes were really powerful. My gyroscopes stopped quickly, and his gyroscopes were still making quick choices. Just at this close call, Yu Jiani accidentally stepped on Li Yuhao's gyroscopes, and Li Yuhao's gyroscopes suddenly "smashed to pieces". Li Yuhao shouted at once: "You have to pay me, you have to pay me!"
after hearing the cry, my mother ran over to ask what happened. Finally, my mother decided to let me go to the canteen to buy a new gyro for Li Yuhao, but the canteen was sold out. At this time, Li Yuhao began to cry again. It's unbearable to watch Li Yuhao cry! So, I reluctantly gave up what I loved and gave my gyro to Li Yuhao.
My mother standing nearby said happily, "My Wewe Chan has finally grown up! Understand humility! I was elated to hear my mother's praise and Li Yuhao's laughter.
I was praised! This let me know: praise can make people feel happy. From now on, I will make persistent efforts to win more praise. I was praised for 5 words of excellent composition 8
When I grew up, I was full of joy, criticism, praise, tears, joy … but the most unforgettable thing was that kind of praise.
in my memory, many people praised me, but they never got my mother's praise and encouragement. Therefore, even in a word, I still hope to get my mother's praise in my heart.
finally, my wish came true. It was a Sunday morning, and my mother went out early and worked overtime at work. I finished my homework and stayed at home alone. It is boring. Looking at the mess at home, I thought: My mother works too hard every day. Now that I have grown up, I want to take practical actions to reduce my mother's burden.
just do it. I rolled up my sleeves, picked up my broom, and then swept the floor at home. Because in the eyes of my parents, I have always been their delicate girl and seldom do housework. Therefore, after sweeping the floor, I was a little impatient. A voice said, "Forget it, let mom clean the floor after work." Another voice said, "You said that mom worked too hard and had to do some housework? Why don't you say anything? This is not a good boy! " Finally, a second voice prevails. Therefore,