Comments on calligraphy practice

Not bad, not bad. It should be noted that the Buddha strokes in the first picture are relatively light and can't be suppressed. There is something wrong with the stroke on the right, so it can't be written as two horizontal hooks (like the word "Wei", which is wrong). In addition, attention should be paid to the rise and fall of lines and the change of thickness, which should not be written as strokes of hard pen calligraphy; The cross-linking of the Buddha in the second picture is too obvious to distinguish the light from the heavy. It would be better if it were incoherent or a little more detailed. Of the two words, the best one is "heart, give up".