The brush calligraphy in the photo has a certain foundation, but as far as calligraphy is concerned, it is only a glimpse. The whole word looks too clever and formal, such as: the ink should be light and dark, the words should be large and small, the ranks should be dense, and words should be avoided. Although these are all available, they are too mechanical and rigid. The so-called change is to change. In this way, the strokes lost their spirituality, the words lost their care and the whole story lost its charm!
These are amateur comments, don't be too abrupt!