In terms of propositions, such materials are open, and different people have different opinions.
When examining the conception of the topic, we can grasp the central event, examine the components of the central event, and then choose a side and an angle to conceive.
In writing, you can generally write critical articles, that is, comments, which can generally be divided into two categories: practical and practical. The so-called matter-of-fact, mainly to comment on the material itself, express their views, can be justified, justified; The so-called on-the-spot reasoning is to make a concrete and in-depth analysis of the evaluated things, fully reason and clarify a truth, rather than staying on the spot. Writing style also requires "opening your mouth small", grasping a problem, explaining a truth, discussing a matter, seeing the big with the small, and the so-called "seeing the small with the big".
When writing, we should grasp the central content of the material-President Gu's "jam loss" and discuss this point from two aspects.
1. Defend President Gu: "No one is perfect, no gold is enough" and "there is specialization in the technical field". Although President Gu is the president of Tsinghua, he is an expert in physics, and it is inevitable that there will be unfamiliar words. We should be tolerant, not perfect. 2. Criticize President Gu: Tsinghua is an institution with a long history and culture. As president, it should be. It also reflects people's neglect of humanistic spirit.
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The flowing water is full of sadness, endless smoothness and agility. Why should it be as lofty and magnanimous as a mountain? The earth is solid and vast, why not, to seek the boundless vastness and reverie of the sky; Li Bai married mountains and rivers, and wrote about mountains and rivers. Why ride on the battlefield another day? Gu, the president of Tsinghua, is not specialized in literature. Although the word "Yi" is stuck, why bother asking for it?
Qian Zhongshu composed Fortress Besieged and wrote Pipe Taper, telling his life and smiling proudly at the sky. But when, when literature flourished, Neo-Confucianism weakened. Tolerant Tsinghua tolerated him and made his literature shine. If a weak bachelor of science was not allowed in the halls of Tsinghua at that time, I'm afraid the elegance of Tsinghua today is inferior.
The combination of arts and sciences, complement each other, is bound to be valuable, but one's own strengths already exist, and deliberately pursuing another place is bound to achieve nothing.
"Shi Shuo" says: there is specialization in the art. In the heyday of the Tang Dynasty, Han Yu, a literary giant, exhorted his disciples. Why should we get hurt? Yu Wenbo and Li Yu are experts, and the two cannot be confused. It is true that there are many scholars who are proficient in China and the West at present, but we should not abandon the original accumulation, otherwise the loss will outweigh the gain.
Zhu Gekongming, strategizing and winning thousands of miles away, studied the art of war, astronomy, geography and ancient and modern times, which made the change of the art of war. However, he is a scholar after all. But his talent surpassed all the people at that time. He didn't have the physique of a general, and he didn't have the courage to charge in the army. He just needed a moment's thinking. This is an attack. With his strategy, he played a sad historical song for his life, which was sad but painless for three days.
Should we be calm when we berate the ancient president? It is also difficult for physicists to read the ancient Chinese characters with clear pronunciation and mellow voice. Maybe we will be hurt by the monuments in Tsinghua, but that's the truth. President Gu specializes in Neo-Confucianism.
Mi Fei specialized in calligraphy, but suddenly became an official, creating a great calligrapher through the ages; Yuan Longping was obsessed with cross breeding, regardless of fame and fortune, and eventually became the father of modern agriculture; Liang Sicheng painstakingly studied ancient buildings and wrote the architectural history of China.
There is specialization in the art, that's all. Don't care about your own unknowns, every kind of beauty is beautiful.
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2. Seek a happy calendar for an article based on "Introduction and Discussion"
Page after page, the calendar of life turns over, with sad tears, a bright tomorrow's vision, and a little happiness from maternal love.
Turn to a page of childhood, recording the heavy breathing sound of bicycles. When I was a child, I was in poor health and often fell ill. Going to the hospital became my daily routine. It was when my father was working in other places, so it became my mother's most important task to take me for intravenous drip after school every day. When I went uphill, the heavy breathing of the bicycle was intertwined with my mother's breathing, but it hit my heart like a heavy hammer, shaking and shaking. However, I know that I am happy, because sitting on a bicycle, grasping my mother's skirts, I know that I have caught a warm dependence.
Turn to the back page of the calendar and record a sad look and a gratified smile. When I was eleven or twelve years old, I had a whim and promised my mother to keep a diary every day. My mother told me with a smile that I must never break my word. When I am free, she will check it. However, at that time, it was the age of fun. Within a week, keeping a diary was forgotten. That afternoon, when I gave my diary to my mother with trepidation, I thought my mother would severely blame me, but she just gave me a deep look. Those eyes mixed with sadness and a little anger made me feel like an out-and-out bad student, and tears poured out like a disappointed market. My mother's hand came around and hugged me gently. Her breezy words passed by her ears: "In the future, I must keep my word." I nodded in despair ... now think about it, I was happy at that time, and my mother watered the seeds of my inner integrity.
The calendar turns to today, and when I go home at night, I hear my mother calling my nickname gently and see the smoke curling up on the roof. This is the most essential and mellow happiness. Today's calendar records the purest smile that my mother and I showed after crossing the heart bridge.
Calendars will turn from page to page, and happiness will be passed on again and again. Turn over a new page, and you will find that this page will record the happiness carefully created by your mother for you. ...
(Narration is the most taboo, but the article is cleverly conceived: three typical events in life (my mother sent me to see a doctor, encouraged me when I was slack in my studies, and waited for me at home at night) were refined into several exquisite details (the heavy gasp of pushing a bicycle, the encouraging eyes and smiling at me, the breeze-like words, and the smoke rising from the kitchen roof), which were vividly highlighted with exquisite descriptions, and my mother was connected with me. In prose style, the leading sentences of "turn to the * * * page of the calendar, which records ..." are connected in series, and the topic echoes from beginning to end, but it does not disperse. )
3. Write four articles about Robinson Crusoe in the order of introduction, discussion and contact. Open the first few pages, as if the protagonist is a little boy. Under his father's repeated discouragement, he still "ventured" to realize his dream, but he didn't see the obstacles in front of him. But come to think of it, we are not now.
Knowing Robinson's experience, I can't help but realize the importance of persistence, optimism and perseverance.
I don't know how many times "persistence" appeared in our mouth, but for Robinson, persistence solved all the difficulties. When he came to the isolated island, he had no food or daily necessities, but insisted on seeking a glimmer of hope on the desert island. He found a broken boat, carried all the wood on it, built himself a small wooden boat, and brought some gunpowder and guns soaked in it. He found a group of wild animals in the forest with a gun, found his own food, and built a house for himself with his own hands. He often fights with wild animals because they will break into his house. When all the wild animals disappeared, he learned to grow all kinds of food with few seeds. When the food was stolen by animals, he tried to catch them. He learned to make bread and constantly improved his life. In this way, he spent decades. For decades, he kept a diary every day, counting his days on a desert island. He experienced the war with the aborigines and owned the sovereignty of "castle", "country house", "loyal minister" and this desert island. From these difficulties, he learned to face life optimistically and how to use his strong perseverance.
In the face of difficulties, he used to be confused, afraid, complaining and even desperate, because the difficulties he faced were beyond ordinary people's understanding. After a period of despair, he told us not to complain about the problems that life has brought you. Indeed, we often complain that without my efforts, other students have achieved better results than me. Why do people always see my shortcomings and fail to see my advantages? In fact, an effort is a harvest. As long as you persist, one day, you will know that victory belongs only to those who work hard. If we can't make it to the end, how can we know that we will fail, let alone see that we will succeed one day?
Compared with Robinson, we have less difficulties. In our study, many students give up their efforts because of a little difficulty, because they can't stand setbacks. How can a setback make us give up pursuing our own ideals? We should learn to adjust our mentality and learn to treat everything calmly. Just like Robinson, convince yourself that everything has just begun, so that we can see everything better. We can solve our own difficulties better. Robinson's optimism rekindled his hope for life. Optimism can make us never give up, have the spirit of studying hard and have enthusiasm for life.
We need perseverance more. Robinson can create a new world of our own without any tools. In our life, perseverance can make us not afraid of difficulties and make full use of all the strength we have to overcome them, whether in study or in life. We often can't persist in fulfilling our dreams, but also because we don't have perseverance. We are afraid of difficulties and don't know how to face them. We are afraid that we will fail. In fact, perseverance is everyone's motivation to win the fruits of victory. Perseverance is the only hope to keep working hard and stick to it. If we don't even have the perseverance to pursue our ideals, how can we expect to realize our ideals and reach the end of our dreams like others?
Persistence, optimism and perseverance are the starting points of our victory. Persistence can bring us faith, optimism can bring us confidence, and persistence can bring us motivation. Persistence, optimism and perseverance belong to each of us. As long as we believe that we can face all obstacles in life and confidently say to ourselves, I can do it, everything is just a new starting point.
4. After reading the Water Margin, there are 600 words, with quotations, arguments and conclusions. It is divided into four paragraphs. "The First Secretary of the Water Margin" tells the heroic story of 108 heroes headed by Song Jiang who were murdered by traitors from Juyi Liangshan Park, to the imperial court, to the Liao army and finally to the rebels. Read the whole book.
Loyalty means doing your best for your motherland, your relatives and friends around you. Song Jiang is still loyal to the motherland under various threats and inducements, which is loyalty; Lin Chong's wife refused to surrender to Gao Qiu's son, and finally hanged herself, which was also loyal. In today's society, I believe many people can achieve the word "loyalty", but few people can achieve the word "righteousness". Eliminating violence for the people, risking their lives only for the word "righteousness" Therefore, although there are only three words of "righteousness", sometimes it takes a person's life to write. In real life, almost anyone can give up his seat, but not everyone can save people from danger. Because it takes considerable courage, even life. They can risk their lives for justice and truth, because a strong sense of justice clearly tells them what not to do and what is worth fighting for with their lives. A person who has no sense of justice will not understand this, because his sense of justice has been swallowed up by numbness, his struggle has been frozen, but his soul has been assimilated by some ugly things in society. I still clearly remember a hero in the Water Margin. He is reckless and grumpy, and often conflicts with people because of trivial matters, even leading to murder. But he can see the rugged road and draw his sword to help those unscrupulous guys, which makes them feel scared. In real life, although there is no such thrilling event, the word "righteousness" permeates our lives. Loyalty to friends is a piece of cake. Also used for strangers or things. It is a sense of justice in the practical sense. Our Chinese nation is a nation with a sense of justice. When Japan invaded China, many revolutionary martyrs with lofty integrity died indomitable with blood, which made today's thriving motherland. Dong Cunrui laid down his life to bomb the bunker, and Huang Jiguang blocked the enemy's machine gun with his chest. These are the continuation of China people's sense of justice and the lingering glory in the history of China. One can't believe in God. "sacred". At present, the most important task for us teenagers is to build our motherland more prosperous. Therefore, this is also the foundation of our national justice. Let us believe in this sacredness and defend it with our own hands.
5. Write a 400-word activity composition with quotations, feelings, connections and knots. I can't wait to rush to school. When I got on the bus, I found these six minerals.
For example, when we came to the world we longed for, the students suddenly went their separate ways and played. What about me? I chose the geological prospector, although there are only ten coins, which is the best. I cherished it and gave it to the staff aunt like a baby. There is a bright spot, although small, but I saw a long transparent stone, crystal, chalcopyrite, fluorite, coal. It's time to get paid, a small shovel! Under the light, I learned from my classmates that today is great! Today's autumn outing is as sweet as honey. Is it my labor income? After learning the last lesson, I quickly ran to the aunt of the administrator: whatever you do, be patient after you go in. The world we are going to, for example, dig hard, dig hard, look around and frown for a while. She exclaimed, "Son, it's really hard for you to dig the crystal!" I am ecstatic.
Then she took us to a room and helped her chin for a while. She said that the battle has already begun. I immediately selected a piece of land, took a shovel in both hands, put some sand in the soil, leaned up hard, and dug hard like this: "This is just an ordinary stone."
With that, he threw it away disdainfully. I had no choice but to dig again and stare at the bright spot in the sand. When we were ready, she introduced calcite to us and picked it up. For me, it takes determination. She picked up the stone and the shovel.
It's finally our turn. I won't say anything! Listen, it's time to gather. We left reluctantly. The most important thing for geological prospectors is seriousness. The smiling staff aunt gave each of us a mask and a dress. This activity is very beneficial, it makes me understand the pain of making money, and it also makes me understand a lot of truth, garnet, but it is warm in my hand after all.
I have a dream since I was a child, that is, I want to be a "genius", just like being on the throne of "genius"
In that way, my burden will be gradually lightened, I will have fun, bid farewell to textbooks, formulas and words forever, and I can get the first place in the exam.
However, the ancient prose "Going to Zhong Yong" made me re-recognize the true face of "genius" and understand what I should do.
Fang Zhongyong, a commoner in Jinxi, was born in a "hereditary" family. Zhong Yong didn't know writing tools since he was a child, but he was able to write a poem, which surprised people and was called a "genius". Later, people from the same county bought poems from him and invited his father as a guest. Zhong Yong's father thought it was profitable, and he was "unlearned". In the end, Zhong Yong "suffered others" and "disappeared from everyone".
This tragedy was caused by his father, but it was also caused by Zhong Yong's own factors. If Zhong Yong insists on the education after tomorrow and his father lets him study, then Zhong Yong is a 100% genius. On the contrary, Zhong Yong's acquired education can't meet the requirements, and his father "doesn't make him study", so Zhong Yong's final result is "forgetting everyone".
Edison said that genius = 1% inspiration +99% sweat. It is not impossible to be a genius, but you need your own efforts.
Newton was called a "stupid" student by his teacher when he was a child. But he finally discovered many things and became a figure worshipped by people. Edison was not clever when he was a child, but he also invented many things and made contributions to people.
Therefore, we can't stop learning because we are naive and smart, but we can't feel stupid and give up on ourselves. You know, a genius can become a fool, and a fool can also become a genius.
7. 1. To get a review of Robinson Crusoe of about 600 words, it is necessary to quote Robinson Crusoe, the hero, on his first voyage and encountering a storm; The second voyage was captured by pirates and served as a slave for several years.
Later, he fled to Brazil to run a plantation. Due to the lack of labor, he and his companions sold slaves. On the way, the ship was sunk by a storm and Robinson was trapped on an island.
He lived and worked in peace on the island and saved a new fortune and income. I know from the stories in the book that labor is of great significance to human survival.
Robinson Crusoe is a novel written by daniel defoe, the father of European novels, in his later years. Robinson he created is a representative of the new bourgeoisie and an idealized hero.
He not only endowed Robinson with courage, strength, wisdom, love of labor and other excellent human qualities, but also endowed him with the spirit of hard work, religious belief and rigorous style that an "ideal" bourgeois should have. With vivid details of student associations, the author makes the fictional scene seem to be immersive and makes the story have a strong sense of reality.
After reading this novel, I not only admire the author's unique writing technique and rich imagination, but also admire Robinson's unyielding character in the rough experience. I deeply realize that Robinson's colorful experience is inseparable from his fighting spirit and strong character.
And I just lack this spirit and character. I have long been used to the superior conditions created by my parents.
Just like the flowers in the greenhouse, if you don't experience the wind and rain and love the tempering of life, you won't realize the hard-won happiness. Being content with the status quo all day, not making progress, only talking about ideals, lacking a serious and solid spirit of struggle.
In my study, I often encounter some difficulties, but these difficulties are nothing compared with the difficulties and obstacles Robinson encountered when he lived alone on a desert island. He can work miracles with his hands. Why can't I summon up the courage to overcome the difficulties? After watching the legendary career of an adventure hero, I was deeply shocked by the indomitable spirit and soul of a hero.
Then from now on, I will be strong and brave, and face a better life with a positive attitude. Robinson Crusoe, the hero, was born in an upper-class family, but he is not satisfied with his present life. He has a great ambition since he was a child-sailing around the world.
But his parents are firmly opposed to him going sailing. He can only continue his dream without telling his parents.
On the first, second, third and fourth voyage, the ship encountered a reef and unfortunately sank. Robinson is the only one who survived and drifted to a desert island. He found necessities from the sunken ship and lived on a desert island for nearly 30 years. Rich children who live in high society are generally favored by their parents and can't stand all kinds of setbacks, just like flowers in a greenhouse, while Robinson makes all kinds of food and supplies on his own, which is incredible.
This is the most primitive ability of human beings, and anyone will have this ability in adversity. But the important thing is that when an unexpected thrilling event happened on the island, Robinson made a correct reaction and judgment.
He will improve his living conditions through his own judgment in adversity. If he acts blindly, doesn't use his head, and doesn't seriously analyze the situation, maybe the end of the story will not be to return to his hometown, but to fall into a worse life than the book says, or even die. For example, in the chapter "New Partner" Friday, Robinson's defense is very good. Although "Friday" is a very honest and loyal person, if he is not vigilant, he will not be able to successfully achieve his goal in the next few years.
For another example, in the chapter "English ships in distress", Robinson's wisdom is even more obvious. His strategy allowed the captain to take back the ship, and Robinson himself could return to his own country. It is not difficult to work miracles by self-reliance in difficulties. The difficult thing is to set up lofty ideals from an early age, and constantly put them into action and accumulate knowledge, so that you can seize opportunities in prosperity, overcome difficulties in adversity and achieve your goals. This is what I understand from this book and Robinson's story.
8. A 600-word article should stand out in adversity.
People's Daily reported on April 6th 1993 that Zhang Haidi had completed six undergraduate and postgraduate courses in Jilin University, passed all the required examinations and accepted the master's degree certificate issued by Jilin University. -Quote
Why does a paraplegic have such amazing perseverance and perseverance to achieve such great results? That's because she has the courage to stand up in adversity. As Zhang Haidi said, "I am the first woman in China to get a master's degree in a wheelchair, which I bought all my life." Zhang Haidi stood up step by step by relying on his own courage, and relied on the courage to fight adversity with his own life and difficulties.
The boat of human life will not be smooth sailing, and there will inevitably be setbacks. Some people can struggle with tenacious perseverance and courage to overcome adversity. In the constant struggle, they grow step by step and their will becomes stronger. In the face of difficulties, they never flinched, and gradually, they became a strong person. Isn't this what we learned in the text: "Born in sorrow, died in happiness"? Isn't the ugly duckling in the famous Danish fairy tale writer Andersen's fairy tale The Ugly Duckling a typical example? Of course, there are still some people who don't treat adversity like this. They are afraid of difficulties and failure. Once they fail, they will be devastated, discouraged and even step by step towards death. Now I often hear that XX students are pessimistic and disappointed because they can't get into college. They didn't have the courage to stand up from adversity, so they failed and became cowards forever. -Lian
Failure and difficulties are not terrible. Compared with Sister Zhang Haidi, our difficulties are so insignificant! Sister Zhang Haidi can stand up in adversity and become a strong person. Why can't we put aside all the difficulties? Why can't you stand up in adversity like Sister Zhang Haidi?
Stand up in adversity! Victory always belongs to the strong! -Knot
9. Material discussion composition, citing, discussing, mentioning, combining, deepening and concluding are all marked out in the material composition. Generally, it is pointed out that the questioner only gives some words or pictures, and the candidates are required to write their own propositions according to the given words or pictures.
Material composition is to give materials without giving topics, and the determination of topics depends entirely on the examinee's own understanding and grasp of the given materials. From the perspective of proposition, propositional composition is actually his proposition, while material composition is self-proposition, which is the main difference between them.
Writing strategies: ① Citation: Cite materials appropriately, not only at the beginning, but also during argumentation (not all of them can be copied). After analyzing the materials, summarize or summarize them in a few words. ② Discussion: It is to analyze and discuss the information provided in the materials, analyze the relationship between people, predict the results, and put forward the reasons. , paving the way for comments. This part can't be too long, just a hundred words or so.
(3) mention: put forward an argument (or viewpoint), be concise and clear in one or two sentences. ④ Connection: This is the key to the article, which can be pushed away with materials, connected with historical figures and stories, and connected with real life. You can give positive examples or negative proofs; You can put facts, or you can make sense.
At least two examples should be cited, one is ancient and one is present, the other is positive and the other is negative, and the central argument can be expounded profoundly and forcefully from many angles and sides, which can be as long as three or four hundred words. ⑤ Depth: In-depth analysis.
How to deeply analyze the reasons, explain the benefits (or hazards) and find out the crux. Conclusion: the whole article is connected and summarized. We should deepen the issues discussed, do not pretend to be amazing, emphasize refinement and strength, and do not gild the lily.