People who want to know about calligraphy can help me to see if the overall writing is better?

In fact, both of them write well, and they can't tell the difference in skills. At present, the outstanding shortcomings of these two kinds of calligraphy are:

Generally speaking, some words are not structured enough. For example, the obvious words: education, Jiang, Qian, Xu, Ze, etc. The word structure is even worse. It is necessary to further read and deeply understand the words beside Sanshui and the end of the month, and find out the method of writing; The distance between the thousand words and the horizontal is slightly higher, otherwise it will appear unbalanced and unsightly; Then the words are too close to the left and right, and there is insufficient ventilation. That's all. I hope I can make progress and write better works after reading the copybook carefully.