These are some rhyming Tibetan poems that I asked netizens to write for my friends' surnames. I write in Chinese calligraphy, hoping for calligraphers and calligraphy lovers and the Internet.

Your cursive writing is good, your brushwork is smooth and your words are vivid and powerful. It seems that I have been practicing calligraphy for some time, and it will be better to continue practicing. Disadvantages: (1) The layout is rigid, the typesetting is not lively, it is not very breathable, and the whole page is the same size, which makes people look hard. (2) The imitation trace is too obvious, and there is still a distance from "free play". (3) Some strokes are exaggerated: I, Qiu, Sun, and Qian are bold and blunt, which destroys the aesthetic feeling. (4) Cursive writing should use the skill of "dry pen". Sometimes the ink in the pen runs out. Insist on writing one or two more strokes and put them there like dead branches, which often has unexpected effects. . . . My point of view is not necessarily correct, for your reference only.