So, how can we make the theme of the article profound? In addition to the repeated refinement and in-depth excavation of the theme itself, there are also rules to follow in writing skills. One of the methods that are easy to learn and have good results is to sublimate the theme at the end. How to sublimate the theme of the article at the end of the composition? Here are some common methods for your reference.
First, from small to large. At the end of the article, the small-scale things written in front are promoted to a larger scope, thus sublimating the theme of the article.
Let's enjoy the once sensational Homesickness by Yu Guangzhong, a famous poet in Taiwan Province. The content of the poem is: "When I was a child/homesickness was a small stamp/I was here/my mother grew up there/homesickness was a narrow boat ticket/I was here/my bride was there/homesickness was a short grave/I was outside/my mother was inside/homesickness is now a shallow strait/I am here/the mainland is there."
The first three sections are about the writer's thoughts about his relatives and hometown, and the fourth section is about his thoughts about his motherland, which combines personal "grievances" with the situation of his home country at that time. Obviously, from relatives, hometown to the motherland is a process of "from small to large", which makes the artistic conception of poetry suddenly clear and effectively sublimates the theme.
Second, from things to people. In the first part of the article, something is described and portrayed from two aspects of form and spirit, while in the last part, the praise of this kind of thing is transferred to the praise of people with similar personalities to sublimate the theme of the article.
Yang Shuo's masterpiece "Litchi Honey" successfully used this method. The author first vividly described and highly praised the spirit of hard struggle and selfless dedication of bees, and then naturally transferred the praise of bees to the working people with the spirit of bees, subtly sublimating the theme.
Third, follow the crowd. The first part of the article takes a person (or thing) as the specific writing object, highlighting this person's quality, personality, habits and so on. (or the characteristics of things), and at the end, it is expanded to praise (or condemn) all people (or things with this characteristic) with this quality, personality, habits, etc.
For example, in Zhu De's Memories of My Mother, the first part of the text uses a lot of pen and ink, highlighting the essential characteristics of mothers: strong and unyielding personality and the habit of thrift. At the end, the author wrote: "Mother is an ordinary person, and she is only one of the millions of working people in China, but it is these millions who created and created the history of China ..." The author expanded from praising her mother to praising the working people with her essential characteristics, and her feelings were sublimated here.
Fourth, engage in reason. The article first tells a specific event, and finally reveals or implies the profound philosophy contained in it.
Events are the cornerstone and support of philosophy, and philosophy is the deepening and sublimation of the core of events. Although the philosophy at the end occupies a small space, it often makes an ordinary little thing intriguing and shining, which has the effect of making the finishing point.
Morton hunt's "treading on thin ice" (the first volume of Chinese for the seventh grade of People's Education Edition) describes in detail the escape experience of "I" when I was a child, and at the end sublimates the experience of this escape that my father taught me: "Don't think about the rocks far below, but focus on the first small step, and take the next step after this step until I get to the place I want." We must pay attention to sublimating the theme in this way: first, "reason" should naturally arise from "things" and never leave the event to make empty comments; Second, "reason" should be universal, novel and profound, not one-sided and superficial, and should adopt the old tune. There are five ways to sublimate the theme of a composition. The sublimation of Sun Weibin's theme in Bird's Nest Middle School in honghu city, Hubei Province refers to the gradual deepening of the theme of the article, which means that the author's ideological realm has risen from the appearance of the things described to a new height, thus highlighting the key to the aesthetic value and cognitive value of the article.
Excellent works will always work hard on the sublimation of the theme. Common ways to sublimate the theme are: 1. Horizontal layout method is a method of using horizontal thinking, grasping some similar and related materials, arranging according to their internal relations, and finally sublimating the composition topic.
For example, an excellent composition "Touched by Yourself" (Yan Min) has nine touches horizontally, six of which constitute a picture, and three of them are taken in one stroke. Six touches are for a person's consideration, filial piety, autonomy, tolerance, kindness and courage. Each stroke reflects the character of "I" from one side and one angle, and the theme of composition has basically emerged.
But the little author is not satisfied with this, but on the basis of arrangement, he uses "young and frivolous often moves me!" This sentence sublimates the theme. If there is no colorful arrangement in front, the sublimation of the theme of the composition will not be strong.
Second, the analogy mining method is a method to dig the theme to a deeper level through analogy association. The author is required to find out the similarities between what he has written and what he wants to express, make analogy and association, and link the basic ideas of the article with profound philosophy, thus raising the theme of the article to a new height.
For example, Jia Pingwa wrote in his essay Horizon that when I was a child, I rode my bike again and again to pursue the distant horizon, but the horizon was like a mystery. Every time I thought I was chasing it, I would appear in a distant place. It is precisely because of this that I am more attracted to pursue it.
The author connects the pursuit of the horizon of nature with the pursuit of the ideal of life by analogy, and skillfully connects the two, and finds the innovative theme of "always pursuing the horizon, solving this mystery, and life will be full of freshness, fun, struggle and endless energy" Third, the method of contrast matting is to compare many things with another thing by contrast matting, so that many things can contrast matting for another thing, thus improving the image of the things written and subliming the main content of the article.
Zong Pu's fairy tale Hua Yu first describes the excitement when flowers bloom. Many flowers, such as elm leaves, roses, peony, peach blossoms and winter jasmine, are more expensive than Beauty under the Moon. Finally, it wrote that a little boy picked February orchids and gave them to his teacher. The article takes many flowers as the foreshadowing, which reflects the silence of February Orchid.
2. How to sublimate the theme when writing a composition The author extracts inductive methods from classic reading articles, which are listed as follows, hoping to help students improve their writing ability:
First, from the outside to the inside, sublimate the theme by revealing the essence.
For example, at a place, I squatted down to carry my mother, and my wife squatted down to carry my son. Although my mother is tall, she is thin and naturally not heavy. Although my son is very fat, he is young and naturally light. But my wife and I walk slowly, steadily and carefully, as if what I carry and what she carries add up to the whole world.
(Mo Huaiqi's Walking)
Commentary: It is very common for a family to go to a difficult place and two middle-aged people in the family to carry an old man and a young man on their backs. The back is a kind of appearance, but the author reveals that middle-aged people should have the life responsibility of "connecting the past with the future" and "respecting the old and loving the young" through the appearance of "back", thus revealing the profound essence behind the appearance.
Second, from point to surface, sublimate the theme by revealing universality.
For example, the more firsts in your life, the more colorful your life will be. May you cherish your first time.
(Zhou Sushan's "It's good for the first time")
Explanation: Life is always composed of specific events and individuals, and there is a universality between events and people. If we can reveal the universal law of human society from point to point and from specific people and things in the composition, the theme of the article will be sublimated. Doing all kinds of things for the first time has risen from the good feeling of doing things for the first time to many firsts in life, which will greatly improve the individual and the whole.
Third, from here to there, draw inferences and sublimate the theme of the article.
Trust, for example, often creates a beautiful realm. (Feng Jicai's Pearl Bird)
Explanation: Things are always similar, and some laws between other things are also applicable to human society. If we can find the rules when describing other things and extract them to regulate the behavior between people, it will be the sublimation of this and that.
In Feng Jicai's Pearl Bird, the author describes the process of raising birds. The author didn't interfere with the birds and let them gradually trust themselves. The bird began to dare to approach people, and finally fell asleep on the author's shoulder confidently and boldly. Birds trust people, and this trust creates a beautiful realm. The author thinks of personnel from this "bird affair", thus sending out the feeling that "trust often creates a beautiful realm"
Fourth, from the specific personnel sublimation to the general principle of dealing with people.
For example, I have repeatedly found that whenever I feel depressed, I can cope with everything as long as I remember the experience I learned on that small cliff a long time ago. I remind myself not to think about the rocks far below, but to focus on the first small step, take this step, and then take the next step until I get to where I want to go. (morton hunt's Step by Step)
Note: This is often said, from specific personnel to general principles of dealing with people. When writing this kind of article, it is best to avoid talking about it, but to know the autumn by seeing a leaf.
Morton hunt's Take One Step at a Time tells a short story. Because I was a weak child, I ventured to climb a high cliff and wanted to come down by myself. In my opinion, this is an impossible task, but my father told me not to run into the rocks far below, just take one step at a time. I finally took one small step at a time. However, at the end of the article, the author jumped out of this trivial matter and talked about how people should deal with difficulties. Judging from the experience of this small matter, the author thinks that the same is true of dealing with difficulties. As long as the difficulties are greatly reduced and one small difficulty is overcome at a time, small victories can be accumulated into great victories, thus achieving lifelong success.
Five, by the individual contact with the country, from personal destiny to national destiny.
For example, now
Homesickness is a shallow strait. I am on this continent and I am on that side.
(Yu Guangzhong's homesickness)
Commentary: This is the last paragraph of Yu Guangzhong's homesickness. In this poem, the author chooses four images to vividly explain what homesickness is. Although these images are touching, without this last verse, the poem always seems to be not atmospheric enough. In the last section, the author raised his personal anxiety about missing his relatives in his hometown to the anxiety that the people of Taiwan Province Province could not be unified with the mainland of the motherland, which made the theme of the poem leap qualitatively and made the poem grow.
Students may wish to think deeply in their writing, so that our composition can sublimate the theme at the end, make it ideological and send valuable spiritual wealth to readers.
What does the composition teacher mean by sublimation? 1. Summarizing the full text, the sublimation theme is not necessarily the last paragraph, but in most cases it is the last paragraph;
2. When writing a composition, the penultimate paragraph can also be used to sublimate the theme. However, in the general middle school students' composition paper, the paragraphs that sublimate the theme should generally not exceed 4 lines, and 3 lines are the most appropriate. In this way, if you want to write another paragraph, considering the problem of "not dragging your tail", this last paragraph can only be written in 1 to 2 lines.
3. How to analyze an article depends on what kind of article it is-narrative, argumentative or lyrical prose. Each style has its own different analysis methods. I won't go into details here.
4. Finally, it discusses how the sublimation center writes that the sunset closes the last ray of light and several bright little stars drill out in the dark blue sky.
The moon climbed quietly to the treetops, and the bright moonlight spread all over the earth.
There are more stars in the sky, more people outside the house, and insects in the grass are whispering.
At this time, grandma under the big tree was counting the stars, and I immediately became the nearest star to the moon. ...
Grandma counted me, and I gave her a naughty wink.
Grandma and I chat. I listened carefully to her chatter and secretly smiled. Will grandma recognize me?
The night is getting deeper and it's quiet around. It's time for grandma to have a rest.
I fell to the ground again, carefully holding my grandmother, and walked back to the house.
The night opens, leaving only a group of naughty little stars. ...