Second, letting children express and write in their own language is to let sincere feelings flow out from the depths of their hearts. You can write whatever you want, without too many restrictions and norms, and you can't impose on adults things that are arrogant and have more practical significance and use value. The most important thing is tolerance. Being loyal to your heart and life is the first key to open the door to writing. Use short sentences, common vernacular, common examples, less abstract sentences and more descriptive language. Be straightforward and flexible in writing.
Thirdly, from the perspective of imitation, people can learn and train in a hurry by imitation. Especially children, they are very good at learning and training in imitation. If they can't imitate, they must have many difficulties. In the beginning, copying can focus on remembering other people's structures, just like stealing a few tricks. Naturally, copying "structure" means learning tricks and stealing primary and intermediate internal skills. Copying with "design conception" and "perspective" means learning secret recipes and stealing primary internal skills. Copy other people's "thinking mode", learn the essence and steal high-end internal strength. There should be independent innovation in imitation, and children should be taught to think like masters. It is not difficult to like a master, as long as you don't hide your attitude towards life, don't be sentimental, and treat life honestly, especially the life you know best and are most interested in. Let the children study hard and sort out their observations and ideas and write them down. Look, think, write, practice and swing. In the long run, there is not only life, but also ideas. Thinking can promote the thinking and expression of life.
Fourth, write more and practice more, and change Ba Jin's works more: "Only writing can write a good article." Lu Xun said: "Good articles are changed." Revision is the last process of writing a composition, which is very critical. Tolstoy's book Resurrection has been revised six times. Travel, play, reading, meditation training, truthful recording, sincere expression and biochemical changes will all become good compositions! In shaping the core literacy and function of Chinese, we must pay attention to shaping children's reading, understanding and writing level.