Please master Yazheng, my calligraphy is qualified! to tell the truth

At first glance, I thought it was a mess, but after careful examination of every word, I still made up.

Because you don't have a good grasp of the layout. I haven't mastered the shelf structure of Chinese characters, but the strokes are ok. Practice typesetting more.

Nor does it have its own style, and it is ingenious.

Practice more, the class has already started, and it's almost there.