I shook my head and said, "No, I can't swim".

1. Select excellent exercises and invite them to read on stage. Guide the students to evaluate each other by guiding words such as "What do you appreciate about this exercise" or "What is worth learning from this exercise" and "What suggestions do you have for this exercise". Teachers can also point out which ones are well written and suggest revisions. 2. Project or read an intermediate level exercise. (1) Tell me how to write this exercise well. (2) What should be modified? (3) How should it be changed? Change at the same table 1. Guide: According to the revision opinions of the students just now, exchange reading exercises at the same table and revise each other. Students revise each other, and teachers patrol to find better examples of revision. 2. Give a good example. (1) Is the revised article better than the original one? (2) What's good about it? Indicates self-correction 1. After correcting each other, ask students to summarize the problems that should be paid attention to when revising this kind of exercises: (1) Is the narrative process specific and whether it highlights the personality characteristics of the characters? (2) Are the words appropriate and vivid? Is the article smooth? (3) Is punctuation used correctly and writing standardized? 2. Students correct themselves. Please revise your homework carefully according to the revision notices summarized by everyone and the revision opinions of teachers and classmates, so that the depicted characters can be more vividly displayed in front of everyone. The person who impressed me the most whenever I am alone, I will think of Xiaohong, my good partner who used to get along with each other day and night. Xiaohong has a particularly good constitution. I also like sports, so I became a sports member in our class. Although she is usually a quiet girl, she is as keen as a boy. I really admire her. Speaking of her love, I really want to thank her! I remember one night last summer, the weather was very sultry. Xiaohong and I went swimming in the river. Before I learned to swim, I brought a life buoy and learned the "dog planing" in shallow water. Xiaohong is diving and swimming in the river. Just then, several "troublemakers" from the village came. Although they can't swim, they keep throwing water at me. So much water rushed to my face.

Please, I can't open my eyes and I can't breathe. I had to shout desperately, but those damn boys still laughed while splashing water and gloated. "Stop it!" Suddenly there was a cry. I opened my eyes and saw Xiaohong swimming over. I saw her glaring, her little fist clenched tightly. I know her strong temper has come back. Sure enough, as I expected, she grabbed two of them by the arm and asked sharply, "Look at you bullying female classmates! Ok, I will let you taste the water today! " As she spoke, she put her hand against the heads of two people and pressed it desperately into the water. The two "troublemakers" called their parents and begged for her pity. Several of their partners were also dumbfounded. They just look too proud to know where they have gone. Seeing them like this, Xiaohong let go and said, "Do you still dare to bully our female classmates?" Those "troublemakers" shook their heads like rattles, and Xiao Hong let go and smiled proudly. I held her hand tightly and said gratefully, "Thanks to you today!" Xiao Hong shook her head indifferently and said, "Nothing". Alas, it's a pity that my friend has transferred to another school for more than a year. I really miss her! Train of thought analysis: there are two ways to describe the appearance of characters: one is to describe the appearance and dress of characters from head to toe in detail; Second, outline the appearance characteristics or mental state of the characters with extremely concise pen and ink. This paper uses the second method to describe Xiaohong's appearance. Ex. 2: A mute uncle in Lu Yu You Yue. On Sunday morning, my mother and I went to my grandmother's house to play. When I came to the village entrance, I saw a few people gathered not far away, and one of them seemed to be saying something proportional to painting. I ran over curiously, and it turned out that a dumb uncle was communicating with others in sign language. He is wearing a light blue sweater. A pair of jeans washed white. His face is clean and fresh, which stands out in the sweaty crowd. I told my mother to go to grandma's house first, so I leaned over to give it to him. I saw him write the word "calligraphy" on the ground, and then stood up and put on a writing posture. Finally, he took out a piece of paper from his pocket, which read "Recruit 20 students to learn Chinese characters". The paper is not big, but the words on it are strong and beautiful, which makes the onlookers admire. Seeing everyone's attention to words, he cheerfully wrote four words "Lucky Year of the Ox" on the ground.

A big word. The font is full and natural, and it can be seen at a glance that it contains profound connotations. It's admirable that such words come from this dumb uncle. After writing, he introduced his living habits to everyone in sign language: he writes a lot of words every day, sometimes he is too tired, so he washes his face with cold water and writes after waking up. He also told everyone that when writing, you should concentrate on it and not be half-hearted. Although his hands are full of calluses, he still keeps practicing. Everyone was moved by his spirit of not being afraid of hardship and gave him a thumbs-up sign. Dumb uncle was a little embarrassed, scratched his head with his hand and smiled shyly. "Xiao Lin, Xiao Lin" I heard grandma crying. I know I've been standing for too long. Just as I was about to leave, I saw him write another sentence on the ground: "Tianning is really beautiful. I love Tianning people. " My heart was deeply touched: the powerful words seemed to have entered my heart deeply, not written on the ground. Train of thought analysis: this paper describes the appearance of dumb uncle in short words. The verb "write, stand and dig" is used to describe the dumb uncle. Dumb uncle left an indelible impression on me, mainly because the young author chose these vivid materials: "writing, profound calligraphy skills, self-introduction, practicing calligraphy, grinding out the cocoon, loving the feelings of hometown." Example 3: Impressive person-my deskmate I have been in Navigation Primary School for three years, and the person who has been impressed so far is my monitor and my deskmate grandson who I really admire. He was called "the king of humor" by his classmates. In our class, Sun always takes part in everything, big or small. I remember in that debate, the topic was: "Can we leave the collective life?" Since there are always pros and cons in the debate, and everyone is unwilling to act as the opposing party, Sun has to act as the opposing party. In the face of many talented students in the class, Sun is fearless and speaks eloquently. After a heated argument, he actually gained the upper hand. Sun is not only persuasive in the debate, but also humorous during the break. That time, I had a history book in my hand and didn't pay attention. I accidentally turned to the picture, which can reflect the Japanese crimes. I blurted out "shameless!" Unexpectedly, Sun came over and said, "Hey, who said there was no tooth?" You see, you have me and he has so many teeth, how can you say that you have no teeth? " I inadvertently pointed to his strong and neat teeth. After hearing what he said, I was really a little angry and said, "Look at this."

I pointed to the picture in the book. He suddenly became serious and said, "I was joking just now." They don't have no teeth, but show their teeth. " In my eyes, Sun is not only humorous, witty and eloquent, but also I admire his courage. Whenever, Sun always does whatever he wants with this courage. With this courage and hard work, I have always achieved good results. He is warm and cheerful and deeply loved by his classmates. Three years have passed, but I still clearly remember what happened in the past. Something seems to have happened yesterday.

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