Second, choose a good example. When writing a person's article, you should also write examples, and express the characteristics of this person through one or several examples (it is best to write that a person has two or three things). When choosing cases, we should choose those that can impress, influence and infect people, that is, we should choose typical and novel cases. When writing, don't use the first situation you think, and don't use the second situation you think. The third or even the fourth or fifth situation you think of is generally attractive and impressive. This is because it is easy for you to think of it, and it is easy for others to think of it. Everyone writes such a thing in the composition, and the composition becomes a "staple food" that can't get high marks or praise from the teacher. The selected examples should fully show the character and quality of the characters. When you finish reading "Timid Me", you will have a deep impression on "I" and your composition will be successful.
Third, use description. If you want to write the characters vividly, you must use various description methods such as action, language, psychology, expression and portrait. For example, in "Timid Me", "I let out a cry of fear, blindfolded quickly, and my heart was pounding." This action description vividly describes the timid character of "I". The description should conform to the age, identity and occupation of the characters. The same thing, what a primary school student said is definitely different from what a university professor said.
Fourth, write the details. It is necessary to show the subtle movements of the characters and their changes concretely and vividly. For example, "I left my gift in an obvious place" in "Timid Me" and "I forgot it on purpose" the next day. One "let go" and the other "forget" bring my timid character to life.
Fifth, make good use of contrast. Contrast is a common writing method in writing. You can compare your own characteristics, hobbies and specialties with others, that is, horizontal comparison; You can also compare how you compare yourself in a certain way now with how you compared yourself in a certain way before, that is, vertically. Through horizontal and vertical comparison, we can vividly show a person's ideological quality, mental outlook and main characteristics. Contrastive description is not suitable for forced improvisation, but suitable for contrastive writing, not suitable for contrastive writing.
Sample text
Timid me
I am a timid girl. Speaking of my cowardice, there are still many.
I like watching cartoons very much, but I dare not watch them when I encounter terrible scenes. Once I watched Doraemon, there was a big crocodile with a big mouth and sharp teeth, which suddenly came out of the water to eat a little girl. I let out a cry of horror, blindfolded quickly and my heart kept beating. Even when I sleep at night, I dream about that terrible crocodile, so I have to ask my mother to sleep with me until dawn.
Last Teacher's Day, I prepared a beautiful gift for my teacher. Before going to bed at night, I am afraid that I will forget to bring my gift the next day and put it in an obvious place. But the next morning, I was afraid to send it, so I forgot it on purpose. When I arrived at school, I saw many students happily giving gifts to the teacher, and the teacher happily accepted the gifts from their classmates. Seeing this, I regret it very much and envy their bravery. I think I will definitely give my teacher a gift on Teacher's Day next year.
I must get rid of my timidity and become brave!
Writing a good friend's composition has many characteristics. Read it first, then write it yourself.
"Friends have lived together all their lives, but those days are gone. In a word, the love of a lifetime, a glass of wine … "On hearing the song Friends, I thought of my good friend, Wang XX. Wang is 10 years old this year. He is very cute, with a smile on his round face.
There are a pair of small eyes like black gems under the crescent-shaped eyebrows. When they are very small, they will narrow into a line. When you meet her, you will be moved by her innocent, lively and lovely image.
Wang XX likes playing the violin and has been trained by her mother since she was a child. She studies very hard. No matter which piece of music she plays, she is absorbed in it and never misses a small detail. Once, while she was playing the piano, I was listening. It sounds like stepping into the palace of music, sometimes immersed in high melody. Sometimes immersed in a low rhythm.
In a word, I was intoxicated by her wonderful piano sound. Wang XX not only loves playing the piano very much, but also is a good boy who is reasonable and considerate.
The thing is this: one morning, it was sunny outside, but I was sitting alone in the classroom staring blankly. My good friend Wang XX walked up to me with light steps and said to me kindly, "XX, what's the matter?" I said with a straight face, "I'm in trouble because I failed the exam."
After that, I took out the test paper and showed it to her. She glanced at me and said, "Look, these questions are all caused by carelessness. Just be careful in the future."
It's been several days since the exam, so don't look back in the future, because it won't make progress. You should go forward bravely, keep climbing and strive to create your brilliant future! "What she said touched me very much.
At this time, I am all smiles and refreshed. She's right. I can't fall down and get up because of a little stumbling. So, how should I face the complicated society when I grow up? This is, I suddenly woke up and said to Wang XX, "Thank you, Lulu. If you were a calligrapher and I asked you to mention words, what would you write?" Without thinking, she said, "Adversity is absolute and prosperity is relative. We should bravely accept the challenge of life.
"She just finished, a ray of warm sunshine shot recently, as if to boast about deer deer doing right; It also seems to symbolize the eternal friendship between our schools. From what she said, I understand that there will always be setbacks and bumps on the road of life, so you should face them bravely.
My good friend Wang XX and I will always be good friends, and will always be friends who are United, friendly and help each other. May our friendship last forever.
It is raining again. I remember when it rained last year, I asked you if I wanted to write you an article. You smiled and said, well, I really hope to see myself in Yan Yan's article. Later, no, no later, only once and now.
When it rains again, it's been a year, and you and I have become strangers. Looking at the rain outside the window, I think of you and me, so familiar but so far away. It turns out that there is only a long rainy season between the past and the present.
Learn to be strong. It's just that I'm not strong at all now
I thought I would be stronger after an autumn, but when I stand in winter and see dead branches all over the street, I always inadvertently think of the same rainy winter, the same withered street and myself walking in the winter rain. Suddenly I don't understand why people always have to remember. Are you afraid to face the present and look forward to the future? Learn to be strong, but I have never been able to learn. At the beginning, Yan Yan in your eyes was full of confidence, but now, only Yan Yan now, without learning to be strong, is no longer full of confidence.
How did this happen? Did I forget you or did I forget myself? It doesn't matter what others think, what matters is what you think. So, am I thinking too much? Or did I not see myself clearly? It is raining again. It's cloudy in winter for a few days, and when it rains, the mood begins to lose its season: familiar scenery, familiar people and familiar things are now "once".
Today, when I walked through here, I was just a passer-by, just a passer-by. Reach out and I'll brush the dust away. I smiled and turned to leave.
Rainy winter should not come to look for memories, just like I left stubbornly: it suddenly rained on a sunny evening. When I turned to leave, it was doomed that there would be dust on it, right? After pressing four numbers today, the door was actually opened. I reached out and brushed the dust off the painting by the door. I turned and left. Looking at the open door, I can only turn and leave, but the door slowly closes behind me. There are my 20 10 memories in it, about an unfinished autumn and the yellow scene that suddenly floated in autumn.
Only after that rain, there was less rain in the sky, and those rains turned into autumn in my eyes. After a whole autumn, I came to a rainy winter, just like last year. It's another rainy winter, but I don't know if I will, should I, look forward to a sunny day in such a cold winter with the same rain, and will I see myself clearly through the memory of rain? And restore a little confidence? I have many good friends, one of whom is my best friend, Jiang Songnan.
She is one year younger than me, only nine years old. Although she is younger than me, she is half a head taller than me.
Jiang Songnan has big watery eyes, black hair and always wears a ponytail. The small mouth of red cherry looks very spirited.
Jiang Songnan often wears this little yellow sweater and a pair of jeans. Jiang Songnan has many hobbies. She likes playing the piano, reading, dancing and painting. Her painting was praised by the teacher in the art class. My good friend has many advantages, and she is especially helpful.
One day is Thursday. There was a science class that day. There was a ring at the bell I went out to get my science book. I rummaged through my bag. Hey, why didn't I see my science book? Where did the child go? I turned my schoolbag upside down again and couldn't find my precious nature book. At this moment, I remembered that I took out my nature book last night, but forgot to put it in my schoolbag.
3. A composition describing a friend's personality. Who is she? You see, she is neither tall nor short, thin and fair-skinned. Round head, with a pair of croissants. Xiu Xiu's angry face has a pair of sparkling eyes under his light eyebrows. The flat mouth is like a duckling's mouth, and there are two rows of white and neat teeth in it. Wearing colorful children's clothes and a red scarf around her neck. She is my good friend-Wen.
Wen cares about me. I remember the first day of school, the sky was clear in Wan Li. Before the music class, we went downstairs to raise the flag. Let's just go upstairs and squeeze into a pile, squeeze and squeeze, ah! Oh, no! I fell and hurt my leg. I had to sit on the stairs and scream.
Just then, my good friend Wen appeared. She ran up to me and said kindly, "Are you all right?"
I said sadly, "I fell down the stairs and it really hurt!" " "
Wen Sunlin asked anxiously, "Do you still hurt?"
I cried and said, "Of course it hurts!"
After listening to my words, Wen Sun Linli reached out his hands and gently stroked my wound. With her help, I reluctantly stood up and said to her, "shall we go to the playground to raise the national flag?"
Wen Sunlin helped me limp to raise the flag. I gratefully said to Wen, "Wen, you are so kind to me." Thank you for your help today. Wen Sunlin said happily, "I'm glad you're all right. As friends, you should help each other, right? " I nodded happily. Wen Sunlin, you care so much about me. You are really my good friend! I hope we will be good friends forever, ok?
4. Write a composition with the characteristics of a friend. When I mentioned my good friend in 450 words, I felt a sense of admiration.
She is Li Hong. Speaking of her "three characteristics", I should introduce it to you. Don't believe me, look! Speaking of this first feature, it is the "tweeter". As long as you walk into the noisy classroom, the first voice you hear is her.
Therefore, the title of "propaganda Committee member" belongs to her! When talking in class, you can hear her voice no matter where you are in the classroom. The second characteristic is "ready to help others".
I remember once, the school organized a trip to the "Gold Coast" because we went by bus. On the way, Yujie got carsick and threw up all over the floor. I thought to myself, Shit, I just sat in front of him and it stinks! "Who can change seats with Yujie?" Teacher Chen said.
But everyone looked at you, you looked at me, and no one answered. Suddenly, a clear and crisp "I"! Students look inside, ah! It's Li Hong. Li Hong went to Yu Jie's seat and sat down, as if he didn't smell the bad smell, but he still sat casually.
"Yan Lihong, find your own pain!" Suddenly, there was a lot of talk in the crowd, but I was moved by her. "The Justice Commissioner is here!" Yes, Li Hong has always been impartial.
Take the last time I borrowed a book for example! One sunny afternoon, I went to the library to borrow books, ah! What a coincidence! Li Hong is on duty today. When I borrowed books, Li Hong kept saying, "Be careful, don't break it!" " ""all right! Tired of it! " I said impatiently. But when my cousin came to my house to play at night, he accidentally tore several pages of the book.
"Oh, no, it's nine o'clock. It's too late to make up now. By the way, maybe Li Hong will forgive me tomorrow! " I comforted myself. The next day, I went to the library to return books. Li Hong smiled and talked to me when he saw me coming.
Suddenly, she frowned. "How to break so much!" "Shh, keep your voice down. I accidentally tore up the book. Nobody saw it anyway. Besides, we are still' iron sisters'! " "What, what, no, you can mend it and return it, or go back and mend it!" "well! Make it up, we will wait and see! " When I finished, I muttered, "I'm not a friend enough. I just broke a few pages and made a mountain out of a molehill. " "Shi Xiao," li hong to catch up, "public property should be taken care of. If everyone does this, then.
""well, I'll make it up! "I bow my head in shame, but I admire her in my heart! Look! This is my friend Li Hong. Do you like her? .
5. A good friend who writes a lot about describing the characteristics of his handwriting.
My good friend is called Zhang Xiao. He is of medium height and slightly fat. His face has a pair of bright eyes, full of wisdom. He often has an innocent smile on his lips. Zhang Xiao's excellent study and helpful spirit are my role models.
Once I dropped the cover of my correction tape, but I couldn't find it. He looked as if I was looking for something, so he asked me and I told him what was going on. Without saying anything, he began to help me find it. After a while, I haven't found it yet, and I want to give up. I said to him, "keep the change. I don't want that hat." But he kept looking and finally found it. Another time, I forgot to bring my pencil case and wanted to borrow someone else's pen. As a result, I asked several people and didn't borrow them. However, I only said one word to Zhang Xiao, and he immediately opened the pencil box and took out his pen and lent it to me. ...
At the end of the last class yesterday, we all played under the teaching building. Just as we were having fun, the bell suddenly rang and we all rushed to the classroom. Suddenly, a classmate who was much taller than me bumped into me. I was knocked to the ground and the skin on my knee was broken. I was in tears and couldn't stand up. At this time, Zhang Xiao saw it and ran to help me up and helped me to the classroom. My heart is full of gratitude to him.
This is my friend Zhang Xiao, a helpful and enthusiastic person. Would you like to make friends with him?
6. The characteristics of my good friend's composition, my good friend
I have a good friend. Her name is Wu Shuai.
Wu Shuai has short black hair, curved eyebrows and big bright and clever eyes.
She is gentle and quiet, and she is a very simple girl. Girls of our age are all beautifully dressed. Everyone has several sets of fashionable and colorful clothes, but Wu Shuai always wears a yellow shirt that should have been retired a long time ago. That shirt has faded and been washed white. Old and big, it looks even bigger on Wu Shuai's thin body. Once I couldn't help asking Wu Shuai, "Why is this dress so big?" Wu Shuai smiled nonchalantly and said, "This is my sister's. She can't wear it. It's a shame to throw it away. I will always wear it. " I said doubtfully, "Your family condition is not bad! I don't lack the money, why not buy a new one? " Wu Shuai spat out his tongue at me, blinked and said, "Haven't you heard a word at the Spring Festival party?" Others compare with my parents, and I will compare with others tomorrow! Clothes! Just wear it! "Listen to Wu Shuai, I think of yesterday I pestered my mother for that set of" Mickey "children's clothes, and my face can't help burning.
Wu Shuai is not only frugal, but also the top student in his class. Once, the math teacher gave us several thinking questions. I looked at the topic, frowned and thought, "it's so difficult, I can't do it for sure." Let's go out and play! " I looked up and found that the classroom was empty. Only Wu Shuai sat there quietly. She frowned, her lips were tight, her right hand was writing, and she was writing and drawing in her notebook. After a while, Wu Shuai suddenly straightened up, put down his pen and gave a comfortable smile. I quickly ran up and asked, "Wu Shuai, what's so happy?" Wu Shuai replied, "Look! These problems have been solved by me! " Looking at her cheerful appearance, I finally understand why her study is always among the best!
Look, this is my good friend, a frugal and hardworking person! How's it going? Is she worth learning?
7. the characteristics of writing friends, my fourth-grade friend.
When I was a child, I thought that friends were partners who shared food with me and played with me, and I didn't know much about real friends. Later, I met Xiao D, and we lived together day and night, studied together, played together, felt the happiness and pain of growing up together, and became real good friends.
One noon last summer vacation, I was about to have lunch when the phone rang in a hurry. I quickly grabbed the receiver. It turned out to be little d, "I can't solve two math problems." Can you come to my house and tell me about them? " Little d said anxiously. My math score has always been better than that of Xiao D, so he always asks me some math questions. "Don't you know what time it is, man? Can you wait for me to finish my meal? " I rudely pinched him back. "Oh, I'm sorry, I was too busy doing the problem to look at the time. Excuse me, can you come back after dinner? " Little D said shyly, "I see, let's do this first." I said impatiently, and then I put down the phone and went to eat my lunch. To tell the truth, I don't want to go to his house at this time. It was noon, and it was scorching outside, and the heat wave was rolling. Besides, my family lives on the sixth floor and his family lives on the fifth floor, with 22 floors and more than 200 steps.
The next morning, I was doing English homework at home. I can't answer a few questions I was in a hurry to turn over my notes and books, but I still couldn't understand them. Without thinking, I picked up the phone and called Xiao D. "Hey, Xiao D, I can't do several English problems. Can you come to my house and tell me about them? " I said, little d hung up the phone without saying anything. My English is not as good as Xiao D. I always have to trouble Xiao D when I encounter problems that I can't solve. And he is always responsive and patient to teach me. But what happened today? I'm confused. I put the phone down, turned around and accidentally saw the watch on the wall. It's already eleven fifty. I suddenly remembered what happened yesterday. I thought to myself: this is what I always say. What happened to him yesterday reminds me again today. I went back to my room in frustration and was about to sit down when the doorbell rang. who is it? It's time to come now. When I opened the door, it turned out to be little D, with a round face full of sweat and big eyes full of sincere apologies. "Are you anxious?" He panted, "No, no, you have a rest first." As I spoke, I quickly let him into the house and poured him a glass of water. I know that this 1 1 floor 100 multi-step flight is a lot of exercise for him who is much shorter and fatter than me! He took two sips from his glass and began to tell me questions. He explained them carefully and patiently. After a while, her mother called to urge him to go home for dinner, only to hear him tell her: Is it more important to eat or to be friends? Hearing this, my heart warmed up and I was really touched. When I remembered what I did yesterday, I was ashamed to find a crack in the ground. I blushed and said to him, "I'm sorry about yesterday ..." "What are you talking about? Are we good friends? " He patted me on the arm and said that he didn't remember my revenge, but he still regarded me as his best friend. I was speechless and deeply moved.
D, let me know more about my friends. Friends are not only soul mates, they are inseparable and talk about everything. More importantly, they can help each other, encourage each other and make progress together.
A friend is like a lamp in the dark, illuminating your confused future. Friends are like the warm sun in winter, which brings you light and warmth.
"It's more important to eat or friends!" D's words often ring in my ears, reminding me that good friends should treat each other sincerely. We are friends and will always be best friends.
8. Write a composition with the characteristics of a friend (using language, movements, demeanor and appearance) My friend I have a very good friend named Zhou.
On her white face, a pair of big eyes have been blinking, like two dazzling pearls. The little cherry under the straight nose always has a charming smile on her mouth.
She is not only good-looking, but also helpful and often helps her classmates solve problems. One day, after school, several students in the class took part in the selection examination of the school's interested classes in Olympic mathematics.
Just as I was about to go to the examination room, I suddenly found my 2B pencil missing. what can I do? I was so anxious that I almost cried.
When Zhou saw this situation, she immediately said, "Do you have any extra pencils? Lend it to Liu Jing first. " Everyone looked at each other and shook their heads.
On Monday, he said decisively, "Otherwise, let's all help him find it together." So, several students searched in every corner of the classroom separately.
However, I have looked all over the classroom, but I can't find my pencil. At this time, the sound of preparing for the exam sounded. Zhou thought about it and said to me, "Liu Jing, take my pencil to the exam first, and I'll find another way."
After that, he put a pencil into my hand and pushed us out of the classroom. The exam officially started, but it took Zhou more than ten minutes to come.
I saw her face was red, and there were still a few beads of sweat on her forehead and nose tip. Seeing my inquiring eyes, she nodded to me ... A week later, the exam results came out and all nine students in the class except Zhou were admitted.
I'm sorry to see this result. Later, I learned that after we went to the exam that day, she went to the teacher's office to find a pencil. When she came back for the exam, she was already ten minutes late and didn't have time to do two big questions.
She is such a caring person, a helpful person, and a person who regards the happiness of others as her own. This is my best friend-Zhou.