Grandma Dong completed her historical mission and waved goodbye to the earth. Miss Chun came to the world quietly with warm greetings. With a pair of dreamy hands, she clothed the earth with a green coat, making the world present a vivid portrait.
Spring girl walked lightly into the village lane with a magic pen. She makes every corner smell of spring. She blew the grass just sticking out of her head green and pulled the buds out of the branches. Pink peach blossoms, white pear blossoms, purple roses, and fiery red Panzhihua are in full bloom, just like stars dotted with this flower branch. Colorful flowers bloom against the messenger of spring, they shake their heads proudly in the wind, emitting a faint fragrance …
Miss Chun's rustling footsteps came into the field. Infinitely bright spring scenery in the fields makes the river more enchanting. The grass on the shore dances lightly in the spring breeze and looks like a green carpet in the sun. Flocks of sheep happily came to the river to eat grass and drink water. The lamb jumped in its mother's warm arms. Rhododendron and magpie sang sweet songs in groups on the branches with crisp songs, as if praising the beauty of spring. The wind, the messenger of spring, shakes the trees on the mountain. They opened their eyes, opened their delicate shoulders and twisted their thick waists. ...
This spring is full of beams of youth and hope. It is more brilliant than Xia Guang, more charming and beautiful than flowers!
As the saying goes, a day's plan lies in the morning and a year's plan lies in the spring. Spring is the season of sowing, and people from all walks of life are very busy. Everyone hopes that the Spring Festival will be a good start and lay a solid foundation for a good harvest at the end of the year. We primary school students are not to be outdone. With this spring breeze, we study hard, make progress every day, and strive for a satisfactory answer sheet in the final exam.
2. There are many figurative sentences and personification sentences. 300-word reference: figurative sentence 1. The thin spring rain is like the thread spun by a spring girl.
The curved moon hangs in the night sky like a boat. The vast grassland is like an endless carpet.
The round pond looks like a big mirror. My brother's face is as round and red as an apple.
6. White clouds in the sky wander around like sheep. 7. The sun hangs high in the sky like a big fireball.
Elephant's ears are like two big cattail fans. 9. The apples on the tree are big and red, like lanterns.
10. A dictionary is like a teacher who can't speak. The stars in the night sky twinkle like countless eyes.
12. Willow branches are like countless green ribbons. 13. After the rain, the beautiful rainbow hangs high in the sky like a colorful bridge.
14. The hedgehog's body is like a ball full of steel needles. 15. The winding river floated away like a ribbon.
16. This sentence seems to be a ray of warm sunshine shining directly on my heart, soothing my injured and young mind. 17. Books are the key to wisdom. 18. Look down on a thousand fingers and bow your head as a willing ox. 19. It's really cold these days, and the cold wind blows on your face like a knife. 20. Qiu is like a huge stone.
2 1. That man is very thin. 22. This man is as strong as an ox. 23. He drools in the library, just like a stalactite in his later years. 24. Qian Zhongshu said in Fortress Besieged: Snoring is like flying a kite. 25. The West Lake is like a jasper and a mirror.
26. Cotton is like a snow shelf. 27. Just looking at one person's work will lead to bad results: you won't get many benefits.
You must pick many flowers like a bee, so that you can brew honey. If you bite in one place, your income will be limited and boring. 28. The clouds in the sky are like mountains, rivers, lions and galloping horses.
... 29. Whenever night falls, the surrounding mountains are like tall mountain gods, like mysterious castles, like depressed giants, like continuous carpets. 30. The neon lights in the distance light up, like bright rainbows, like dancing nepotism of fairies, like colorful bridges, like dazzling clouds. My heart is like a knife, and my eyes are confused with tears 3 1.
32. The sun glows and gives off heat. This is a big fireball. 33. The crowd rolled around and the dam became an open-air stage.
Zhuge Liang ordered the bow to face west and the stern to face east. The devil officer sitting on the edge of the kang was red-eyed, like a wild dog who had just eaten a dead man. "
He broke a piece of glass and ran away like a monster. 37. Spring has come and the earth has become a green carpet. 38. A silver-gray hovercraft, like a thoroughbred horse, sped by on the sparkling sea.
39. Her article is very good. Structure is as close as the relationship between neural nodes and neural networks in human body.
40. Little brother's face is chubby and red. It really looks like a lovely big apple. I really want a bite. 4 1. From a distance, the pine trees on Mount Tai are connected into a thick line, which looks like a knife-shaped eyebrow across a person's cheekbones.
42. When meals are served in the canteen, all the students are crowded together like ants on hot bricks. 43. The enemy plane fled, and our plane followed closely, like a jackal chasing a white rabbit.
44. Like goose feathers, like reed flowers, like cotton wool, heavy snow is falling. 45. The flaming maple leaves fall like sparks.
46. The athletes rushed to the finish line like arrows. 47. The Polaris oak lamp hangs in the sky like a street lamp.
48. Dream is like a small fish, swimming around in the water, trying to catch him, but he has run away. 49. Dream is like a snowflake, flying in the air, trying to catch it, it has melted. 50. Like a kite, it can't fly far, and the pain swings out like a swing. Back to the anthropomorphic sentence 1, the wind sang a song and woke up the sleeping earth.
Naughty raindrops like dancing on umbrellas. The waves splashing from the bow are singing a happy song.
It's autumn, and the golden red fruit on the tree is smiling. She nodded and smiled at us. 5. Begonia fruit shakes its round face and nods and smiles at you.
6. That Bo Xue seems to be suddenly ashamed and slightly pink. 7. Pomegranates are hidden in the branches like cute smiling faces of little girls.
8. There are also one or two lights leaking from the cracks in the tree. What is listless is the sleepy eyes. 9. The huge waves opened their arms and pulled me up suddenly.
10, the radio keeps talking every day, which makes the neighbors very annoyed! ! ! ! ! ! 1 1. Oil flies sing here and crickets play the piano here. 12, the spring is still shallow, but the plum blossoms on several hills are struggling to spit out red buds.
13, breezy, gently caressing my face. 14. The lotus flowers in the lotus pond are all blooming shyly.
15, fallen leaves dance with the wind. 16, I bathed in the embrace of nature, let the gentle evening breeze caress my temple and blow away all my depression and troubles.
17, in the spring of March, the silver pear tree, which had been sleeping for a winter, was awakened by the misty rain. 18, it took off its shabby coat and started a new life; It greedily sucks the fresh and sweet dew of spring and slowly grows lovely tender branches and green leaves.
19, midsummer night, the breeze is blowing slowly, and the bright moon is chasing the sunset, climbing over the hill early and hanging in the sky. The moonlight seems cool, driving away the residual heat left by a cool day. 20. Spiders drag flies around. When the flies are exhausted, spiders enjoy a delicious meal happily.
2 1, when the sad water flows into the steady mountain, the sadness of the poor children also evokes the sadness of the mountain, so their hearts are broken together; Water buries its head in the ground, but the mountain hides the fragments of its heart. So there are complicated caves, all kinds of stalagmites and springs that suddenly open.
22. Home is like a root, and it is always the home of leaves; Home is like a red stripe, always tied to the heart of a wanderer. Home is like a coat, it won't make the temperature rise, but it will give people warmth that can't be replaced by a stove. 23. Life is like a long journey. There are smooth roads and detours in the journey, so you can face the team with a calm mind every day, challenge yourself, keep moving forward, and keep moving towards your destination as always. At the terminal, you will find that there are joys and sorrows, laughter and tears, and even a little more, which constitute the whole journey of your life.
24. Dreams fly in the air like snowflakes.
3. There are ten figures of speech in the sketch clip to pursue dreams because dreams are bright moonlight and because they have the confidence to create a clear and ethereal world; Pursuing dreams is because dreams are dandelions, because it believes that it can bring the earth back to colorful places.
This sentence uses figurative rhetoric to write the beauty of dreams. A child in a wheelchair looked up at the beautiful little girl flying freely in the sky. For a long time, she turned around and asked her father standing behind her, "Why does it fly?" The father replied, "It has a pair of wings.
The child said with tears, "I have no wings!" " The father was silent for a long time, squatted down, stared at the child's eyes and said word for word: "Remember, son, you can fly with your dreams!" " "Dreams are soaring wings. With dreams, there is a direction to go; With dreams, there is motivation to move forward; With dreams, there is hope of success. (Using rhetorical devices of parallelism, we wrote the importance of dreams to us.
) Dreams are so important that pursuing them is a prerequisite for success. For those of us who have entered junior high school, we may feel that life in junior high school is tense and busy, books are piled as high as a mountain, exams are closely linked on January 1, and life at home, learning to fall in love and remedial classes are noisy and boring.
However, although life is hard, we can still have fun from it. As the saying goes, "you have to suffer to be a master." At present, the difficult road to study is the course of pursuing our dreams and the witness of our efforts to pursue our dreams. I was stunned by the sudden disappointment in the examination room, by the continuous criticism, and I was complacent because of the joy of victory. )
But whenever I think of my dream of becoming a lawyer, I will quickly calm down, analyze and recall everything with rational thinking, and become as usual, just focusing on continuing to work hard and study. There is a saying in the ancients that "if the sky is going to be sent to Sri Lanka, you must first suffer from its mind, strain its bones and muscles, make its body weak, and mess up its actions, so be patient and have benefited from its incompetence."
(In the rhetorical device of quotation, we write that suffering is just an experience. Today's difficulties and setbacks are nothing, but a card to test whether we can achieve great things.
As long as we hold our heads high without fear, go forward bravely, spread our wings and pursue our dreams, we will certainly be able to "see the bright moon when flowers bloom" and find that beautiful blue sky. Dreams are heroic rivers and seas, full of passion; Dreams are the vast soil that breeds fruits; Dreams are soft white clouds, flying away; Dreams are bright stars, accompanying me forward.
By using rhetorical devices such as parallelism and metaphor, the beauty of dreams and the beauty of chasing dreams are written. Pursuing my dream gives me the courage to find my own blue sky.
4. Suffering is an indispensable wealth. Rainbow is beautiful, it symbolizes the best things in the world.
Although the rainbow is beautiful, how can we see a beautiful rainbow without a storm? People just want to appreciate the rainbow, and who has tasted the wind and rain? (I used two rhetorical questions in a row to write about the importance of suffering and tell people that "after the rain, it will clear up." ) Pupa is strong and never flinches in the face of hardships.
People have no clear impression of the pupa, but only pay attention to its appearance after metamorphosis. The process of changing from pupa to butterfly is painful and a great tribulation.
However, it is this kind of suffering that brings rebirth to the pupa, which shows its strength and courage to everyone with a brand-new look. It is suffering that gives the pupa new life; It was suffering that saved the pupa.
The eagle is great. It is not only reflected in the prestige on weekdays, but also in the unflinching face of hardships. In our eyes, eagles are fierce and fearless, but they are also afraid. It is afraid of the relentless passage of time.
After 40 years of spring, summer, autumn and winter, the eagle has ushered in a life-and-death choice. Either endure the terrible pain of broken claws and teeth and be reborn; Or starve to death because you can't eat.
The eagle chose the former, so it succeeded. It was suffering that gave the eagle another 40 years; It is suffering that gives the eagle a chance to fight in the sky.
Beethoven is persistent, and he still stands in the face of suffering. Fate was so cruel to Beethoven that he took away his hearing at the beginning of his musical career.
But the music giant Beethoven didn't give in. He fought to the death with a little hope left. During this period, he finished many famous Chinese and foreign songs.
It was suffering that gave Beethoven the motivation to struggle; It was suffering that helped Beethoven reach the pinnacle of his career. Mencius has a saying: "When heaven falls on a great task, people must first suffer their minds, work their bones and muscles, starve their bodies, and empty their bodies."
This sentence uses the rhetorical device of quotation, and it is written that a person must go through some hardships if he wants to achieve something. If you want to succeed, you must go through some hardships first. No one will succeed easily. Suffering is indispensable to successful experience. Smooth success will not last long. Suffering is the most beautiful scenery on the road to struggle.
After the storm, water and sky are in front of us; Out of the thorns, the road ahead is covered with flowers; When you climb to the top of the mountain, there is a misty sky under your feet. This passage uses rhetorical devices of parallelism and metaphor to write that after going through some storms, good things will come. )
Suffering is inevitable, but suffering comes with success, and a life that has experienced suffering can be called complete. Learn to choose the more prosperous city, the more criss-crossing intersections, the more majestic rivers with tortuous tributaries, and the more successful life with intricate forks.
This sentence uses the rhetorical device of parallelism to write that we are faced with choices all the time. ) And we just need to learn how to choose the right path.
Salmon that choose to give up will swim back to the fresh water area before the spawning season, regardless of difficulties and obstacles along the way in order to lay eggs smoothly. After spawning, the salmon does not leave immediately, but stays next to the young fish.
Young fish can't feed on their own and can't maintain their growth. So the mother fish chose to give up, give up her life, and let the young fish eat themselves bit by bit until the young fish grow up.
Salmon chose to give up their lives, but more new ones were born. Young fish is the continuation of salmon life. If you want roses, you must give them up. If you want clear water, you must give up the strong tea in the cup; If you want to succeed, you must give up your present comfort.
This sentence tells us in rhetorical devices that we should learn to give up in some cases. ) choose to give up and make our goal longer.
The man who chose to stick to him was a man who grew up in the palace. After he became a historian, he naturally inherited the position of historian after his father retired. Many years later, he was jailed for pleading for his friends, but such pain did not crush him.
He persisted and traveled all over the country, constantly asking about the past history. Finally, I finished the Historical Records, which is the swan song of historians. It has no rhyme, and successfully recorded the history from the Yellow Emperor to the Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty for thousands of years.
He is Sima Qian. If you want to stand on the top of the mountain and enjoy the scenery, you must walk a long way persistently; If you want to be a knowledgeable person, you must persist in studying hard for ten years; If you want to succeed, you must work tirelessly for your goal.
Using the rhetorical device of parallelism, I wrote that everyone perseveres, and only perseverance will succeed. ) Choose persistence to make our will stronger.
Choose optimism Lincoln lost his mother in childhood and lived alone with his father. Many years later, his fiancee who was about to get married also left him, separated by Yin and Yang.
Lincoln was ill in bed for half a year, but after the struggle, he failed again and again: failed to run for the state legislature, failed to run for the legislature, failed to run for the vice president ... but Lincoln was not discouraged. He chose to treat these failures with optimism and challenge his fate again. Finally, he became the president of the United States.
Choose optimism, let us taste the happiness of "However, China keeps our friendship, and heaven is still our neighbor" when we are apart; Choose optimism, let us experience the boldness of "people have joys and sorrows, and the moon is full of rain and shine" when we are frustrated; Choose optimism, let us realize the open-mindedness that "the blade comes from sharpening, and the plum blossom fragrance comes from bitter cold" when we fail. This article uses the rhetorical devices of quotation and parallelism to teach us to face life optimistically. )
Choose optimism to make our mentality healthier. Choose to give up, so that our vision is longer; Choose persistence to make our pace more firm; Choosing optimism makes our hearts easier.
Learn to choose, so that our eyes are no longer confused; Learn to choose, so that our thoughts are no longer naive; Learn to choose, so that our gestures will not hesitate ... (using the rhetorical device of parallelism, it is written that we should learn to choose in front of a fork in the road. ) Pursuing dreams is because dreams are bright moonlight, and because you have the confidence to create a clear and ethereal world; Pursuing dreams is because dreams are dandelions, because it believes that it can bring the earth back to colorful places.
This sentence uses figurative rhetoric to write the beauty of dreams. ) one.
My figurative composition teacher said that we must learn to analyze sentences, for example, it uses figurative rhetoric to vividly express the author's thoughts and feelings.
The teacher also said that to learn to use rhetorical devices, the most common is metaphor. If we want to say its advantages, we can express them vividly ... My metaphor sentence 1: Life is like a flowing stream, which is as slow as silence, but in fact, it has crossed thousands of miles. Example analysis: The author compares his life to a stream, which is not as turbid as a river or as dark as a ditch. It is just a proper analogy to a stream, which reminds people of the winding green water at the foot of the mountain and clearly reflects the beautiful scenery, vividly expressing the author's love and praise for life, and thinks that life should be as clear as a stream.
Then, the author describes its quietness, which is not as utilitarian and debatable as the secular world, but only listens to the "slow" flow of nature. The artistic conception is elegant, fresh and fragrant, and life is so ordinary and not vulgar, always accompanying people, "as if it were still and silent". Then, although the author still expresses his feelings with a calm brush stroke, the brush stroke has changed and the stream has inadvertently rushed to the distance.
And almost the same crystal clear in front of me is not what I saw before. Calculate the time, only to find that time has passed and life has not changed. The author implicitly expresses the feeling that time flies and happiness is short with clever language.
My analogy 2: Maybe just for a moment, I feel like a pendulum, and my life's career just keeps swinging as time flies. Example analysis: the pendulum is a symbol of time. When the author realized that time was "flying", he looked back at himself and compared himself to a pendulum. This is an innovative way of writing.
Here, the swinging back and forth of the pendulum is not only its own work, but its only meaning in this world. It still has life, just because it is "constantly moving", which proves that it still has breathing and heartbeat.
But unfortunately, it is always manipulated by time. The author himself is a pendulum, which is linked with the writing background at that time. The social competition is fierce, but there are many contents to learn and less time. In order not to be eliminated by society in the future, the author has to be busy against time. With the passage of time, from primary school to junior high school, high school and university, she has been forced by time to find a job, and she has always obeyed and obeyed the requirements of society, as if this was her life's mission.
The author vividly expressed his helplessness to time and his sorrow to his own destiny with appropriate metaphors. The third sentence of my metaphor: the ranking of this achievement is like a sharp knife with cold light, which is polished. The farther you sit, the closer you get to the danger.
Example analysis: When the author wrote this sentence, her pendulum-like mission was undoubtedly learning. In the competition, if you want to get ahead and prove that you have completed your mission seriously, you must get the post-test ranking, which is what the author calls "performance ranking".
This is very common, but the author compares it to a "sharp knife", and it also shines with cold light. It shows that the ranking has killed all students' dreams. Cold light is not only cold enough to penetrate people's hearts, but also chilling. How difficult it is for them to climb up along the smooth "polished" blade. But when the author climbed to the top of the mountain, she felt that she was not the first in glory, but the top of the mountain was very cold and the air on the top of the mountain was very thin. The huge pressure made her shoulders numb, but she had to resist.
The author skillfully uses metaphors to vividly express the bleak, helpless and desolate mood. General comment: Three figurative sentences, from beautiful and quiet to cruel and sad, completed the natural transition and great transformation in just a few crosses.
The metaphor is very appropriate, connected with reality, and the content is well connected, expressing true feelings and profound thoughts and reflecting practical problems. After enjoying my three metaphors with narcissism, I showed them to the teacher with joy. "Do you think you are a famous writer?" ? Such an ordinary sentence, who has leisure time to slowly interpret it! "So, I can only use more than an hour to complete my appreciation and show it to others. I wonder if you have time to read so many words about common metaphors? .
6. Write a sentence with rhetorical devices. Hello, I'm glad to answer your questions. If you have any questions or questions, you can ask them and I will answer them as soon as possible.
Metaphor:
Spring is a beautiful music that fills the world with notes.
Summer is coming, just like a lively and beautiful girl wearing green clothes.
Autumn is like a gift from God to mankind, full of the joy of harvest.
Goose feathers and heavy snow fly down like white butterflies.
Personification:
Spring has come quietly and gently.
Summer is like a child's face, sometimes sunny and sometimes cloudy.
I like red maple leaves dyed red by autumn frost, because in autumn we can see golden rice bending over and smiling, and we can have a picnic and climb mountains in the suburbs.
Grandpa Dong brought us snow dolls, grandma Feng and ice girls.
Parallelism:
Spring is the bright eyes of wave and light flow, with round luster; Spring is the mouth of cherry Su Fan, which is smart and moving; Spring is a willow with a small waist, slender and lovely.
Summer is like a warm-blooded soldier, and the blazing sun is his shining armor; Summer is like a vibrant girl, and the green leaves of the trees are her gorgeous dresses; Summer is like a lovely child playing with leather. At that time, wind, rain and sunny weather were his vivid expressions.
Qiu, a successful scientist, is silently reviewing his previous growth path; Qiu is a strategist who returned from the battlefield. He was silently thinking about the command process just now. Autumn is a politician who wins the election. He is quietly considering the future policy agenda.
Winter is a fashion designer, wearing white clothes for the earth; Winter is a magician and gives everyone big marshmallows. Winter is a musician, writing music with various styles. Winter is a strict teacher, using cold and ice as a pointer to educate us to have a strong will.
7. Use a variety of rhetorical devices to write the colors of scenery and seasons.
Spring is a green world. The grass is tender green and the trees are new green. In the spring breeze, in the sun, all the greens are trembling, and they all contain crystal green light. Everything is so fresh, quiet and poetic.
Summer is a red world. The flowers are red, the sun is red, and the butterfly on the little girl's head is red. All red is like a burning fire. Everything in the world is full of passionate emotions.
Autumn is a golden world, and golden leaves are flying in the air, like dancing golden butterflies. In the field, the crops are ripe, and the harvesters rumble here, composing a golden symphony. Everything is so bright and dazzling.
Winter is a silver world, the sky is blue, the ground is silver, the snow is white and crystal clear. Silver is a beautiful and peaceful world.
All the year round, like an endless ribbon, the tranquility of spring, the fierceness of fear, the splendor of autumn and the tranquility of winter are all on this ribbon.
8.20 kinds of 20-word compositions that begin and end with rhetorical devices need to be practiced. If you want to get high marks in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, it is more important to practice normally. We all know the teacher's habit of correcting papers in the senior high school entrance examination, so writing a good beginning means that you got a good composition in the senior high school entrance examination. Next, we will give you a rhetorical composition as a start.
Start with a parallelism sentence, which is neat and sonorous and promotes people to enjoy reading. And can serve as a foil to what will be described.
If I were a bird, I would remember the nest when I was born; If I were a sapling, I would never forget the land that nourished me. If I were a river, the snowy plateau would be a brand in my memory. ...
This passage can be used as the beginning of the composition, which leads to an unforgettable hometown.
And these sentences are the skills we learned in previous lectures. After learning to imitate sentences, we can flexibly imitate good sentences, which can not only be used in the middle of the composition as the main content, but also become our highlights; It can also be used as a foil at the beginning. Although birds, saplings and rivers and lakes are not what we want to describe, their characteristics-reluctant to source-can be used by me and become a similar comparison of my hometown. My feelings for my hometown are the same as theirs, which makes the abstract and unspeakable feelings vivid and gives us a different style at the beginning, which is much richer than "I miss my hometown very much"
At the beginning of a metaphorical composition, what the text wants to express can be the proportion of individual things, multiple things, or the proportion of the overall image shaped and entrusted in the text. Metaphors are used at the beginning of the article, which are vivid and highlight the characteristics of the article theme.
For example, "China Stone Arch Bridge" begins: "The bridge opening of the stone arch bridge bends like a rainbow."
Another example is "Chinese is our mother tongue and the most beautiful language in our hearts." It is calligraphy without random colors; There is no need to play music, and the ordinary is often rhythm. From Oracle Bone Inscriptions to seal script, to official script, to regular script and then to running script, Chinese has been condensed into square Chinese characters from all-encompassing tolerance, which harmonizes the Chinese nation and forms a heavy history of the Chinese nation. "
Stone bridges and Chinese characters are lifeless still lifes. After using metaphors, these things are endowed with life and vitality. Colorful rainbows and rhythms are the best things in our hearts, and stone bridges and Chinese characters are them respectively. Use these words to make our hearts moist and soft!
Giving things life and emotion is the essence of rhetoric. Write the beginning of a composition with rhetoric. It can also touch the teacher's heart, so what are you afraid of writing? Therefore, we should practice the use of rhetorical methods after class.