1. I wrote good Chinese compositions in junior high school, but I can no longer write compositions in high school. Why do I often go off topic?
The quality of a composition depends on your intention, conception, and layout. The use of words and expression methods have a lot to do with each other. However, if you "go off topic" in your composition, you have not understood and read the topic correctly, you have not grasped the central idea in your writing, and you have not understood the requirements of the topic. Even if you are writing If you perform well in other aspects, it will be in vain. Therefore, reviewing the topic is the first step in writing a good composition, and it is also a critical step. Your Chinese teacher must have taught you a lot about how to review the topic, such as the analytical method and the comparative method. Wait, I won't repeat it again. I would like to ask you to tell me, what should you pay attention to when reviewing the question? When reviewing a topic, we should generally pay attention to the "three reviews". The first is to review the object clearly, that is, to clarify whether the composition is about people, events, scenes, or objects; the second is to review the scope, that is, to clarify the choice we have made. What are the restrictions on the time, space, quantity, person, and scope of the materials? The third is to review the key points, which is the "question eye", such as "like" in "A Toy I Like", "I Learned _______" "Learn", etc. in "Three Reviews". If you grasp these "three reviews", you can basically grasp the meaning of the question, and "off-topic" problems can naturally be avoided. To review "big questions", we can use the "supplementary method". This method The characteristic is to supplement the "big topic", make it concrete, turn the big topic into small, and make the big problem small. Let's say "An Unforgettable Lesson". We can supplement it into: a Chinese class, a nature class, or a A visit, a team activity, a report, or an enlightening and educational conversation with someone, etc., concrete it into "small questions", and then choose the ones that best reflect the "unforgettable" It will be much easier to write about that lesson. There are several essay questions below. You may wish to use the "supplementary method" to review them so that you can master them. 1. My weekends; 2. My extracurricular life; 3. Unforgettable primary school life... 2. When I was in junior high school, my composition writing was pretty good, but everything changed after high school: Teacher Pick
First of all, this classmate asks you not to take this matter too seriously, because it has been said since ancient times. The benevolent sees benevolence, the wise see wisdom. Everyone has different tastes in different articles. Also, your teacher may not be able to understand your article due to her own academic qualifications, taste, age, identity or experience. There is no need for everyone to understand when writing an article. . My past articles are not very good now. I personally thought they were good at first, so I showed them to a teacher. His evaluation of my articles at the time was: good, come on, the punctuation is very good, just keep writing. You will definitely succeed. So I persisted, and now I am engaged in secretarial work. I am very grateful to that teacher. If my article was not well written, he would say that I used punctuation well, so I persisted.
Secondly, there is a big difference between junior high school composition and high school composition. Junior high school composition continues the primary school composition method of writing about people and chronicles. Although the proportion of argumentative essays is greatly increased, Due to the limitations of students' age and experience, they mainly focus on writing methods, language, and rhetorical methods, as long as they follow what others say. The high school composition is very different. On the basis of meeting the requirements in the above aspects, it also requires you to have your own ideas or creativity. Therefore, to write a good high school composition, language alone is not enough. The most important thing is good ideas and creativity. In daily life, you should strengthen your exploration and collection of current affairs politics, social hot spots, people's livelihood issues, historical events, natural sciences, folk customs, traditional culture and other aspects. Then you should gradually develop your own ideas and write your own language style and characteristics. But be careful not to be too unconventional, especially in terms of ideas, not vulgar, reactionary, or angry. You can also find some articles written by everyone, study them carefully and absorb the essence. I personally bought some works by Lu Xun and collections of essays and poems by well-known domestic writers such as Yu Qiuyu and Yu Guangzhong when I was in junior high and high school. In the writing process, I could sometimes imitate their styles, and sometimes achieve unexpected results.
If you want to gain the approval of your teacher, there are many ways to do it. You can take advantage of your status as a class representative. First, find articles approved by your teacher, analyze the validity of them, and find you. Teachers’ excitement and preferences. Of course, what your teacher likes may not necessarily be what all teachers like. You have to control this yourself. The second is to humbly ask the teacher for advice. Take the article you think you have written best, ask the teacher for the deficiencies and shortcomings, and then make targeted corrections. The third is to choose some articles by writers that your teacher recommends and imitate them, and quote some good sentences in your own writing.
If it is in normal exams, including college entrance examination essays, many times no one will read your article in its entirety. Therefore, if you want to get high scores, firstly, your handwriting must be neat, and you can practice more on your own. It is very important to write good hard-pen calligraphy when writing Chinese characters; secondly, the level must be clear and clear at a glance, and the beginning and end must be carefully crafted. This is also an important point for all good articles to achieve high scores; thirdly, the title must be novel and the content must be novel. ; The fourth is to connect social hot spots, current political hot spots, and highlight the main theme of society.
I personally think that your teacher said that your article was not well written and asked you to be the Chinese class representative. This shows that your teacher still attaches great importance to you and expects you to Very high, at least the requirements for you are stricter than others. If he says your article is not good, it means that at least he has read it. Nowadays, many teachers seldom read it very carefully when they mark students' compositions. I want to congratulate you on this. You have met a more rigorous and dedicated teacher.
For you personally, I think you are a qualified and excellent student, because you at least consider the issues of learning and writing with your heart, and have the vision to improve yourself. As long as you have this heart, you will definitely succeed. . Finally, I will pass on the words my teacher gave me to you: as long as you persist, you will definitely succeed. 3. How to write a good Chinese composition for the junior high school entrance examination?
In junior high school, most people write narrative essays. If you write argumentative essays, you may be more outstanding.
To write an argumentative essay, you need to master many examples, that is, arguments, of course the essence and novel ones, not Edison and the like.
Then we start to construct a structure, the simpler one is the parallel type. Generally speaking, it is the beginning (proposing a point of view), transition, three examples, which are three paragraphs, summary, and conclusion. Case-based arguments usually start with points, and then describe the examples. Do not write examples in a narrative style. Remember to make more arguments.
An argumentative essay is an argument or an argument, and you must firmly grasp the center of your article, which is your topic, and never deviate from the center. Also, try to use better writing techniques at the beginning and end. For example, famous quotes are best, and the beginning cannot be very long, and it cannot be too beautiful and lyrical, because it is an argumentative essay rather than prose.
Read more full-score essays, choose the one that suits you, and find out how to write the essay. Write more essays and bring them to the teacher for help with revision. Memorize many famous quotes and famous examples. (This is my experience, for reference only) 4. Give me an essay looking back at junior high school and looking forward to high school
In the blink of an eye, the three years of junior high school are coming to an end.
Looking back on the past years, we have experienced too many hardships and dangers, made too many hardships and efforts, and had too much happiness and sorrow... Faced with all this, we can't help but sigh: The years have passed. Cantabile! Time is like a song. In these three years, we have weaved brilliant rainbows, allowing ourselves to walk freely in the sky of our dreams.
In these three years of study and life, we have learned to be humble, learn to cherish, and learn to be grateful; in these three years of study and life, we have friendship, family affection, teacher-student relationship, and we have cultivated There is a bit of anxiety about "Don't wait any longer, the boy's head will turn gray, and there will be no sorrow." So, we work harder and work hard for a beautiful life.
We can’t help but sigh: Time is like a song! Time is like a song. In these three years, we are like small rivers, letting ourselves flow into the river and merge into the ocean of the class.
In these three years of life, we have learned to be strong, to face, and to struggle; we understand that there are still many difficulties we have to face, and our little river is flowing. In the process, there will be obstacles from stones and interceptions from aquatic plants. However, no difficulty can stop our passionate pursuit. We have the perseverance to "bite the green hills and never let go".
Therefore, we are always ready to accept challenges and work hard to reach the other side of success. We can’t help but sigh: Time is like a song! Time is like a song.
In the past three years, we have painted sunsets, letting ourselves bathe in the afterglow of the setting sun, and letting ourselves radiate more beautiful brilliance in the hazy. In these three years of life, we have learned to express our feelings, learn to adapt, and learn to look forward; in these three years of life, we have learned that the sunset can only shine when the sun sets.
So in these three years, we have worked hard to use our wisdom and show our talents. We understand that the road to life is far away, and there are more challenges waiting for us. We need to work harder, as the song sings: "I discovered the difference between dreams and reality. Facing the wind, I let myself experience every feeling. Like a fable, I shed tears of joy after seeing this day.
I want to pursue and pursue the perfect world: I still want to fly, fly high and far in my world." Therefore, we work hard to draw a more beautiful blueprint for life.
We can’t help but sigh: Time is like a song! The years are like a song, it creates enthusiasm and sings joy... We have felt the beauty and joy in these three years of junior high school life. We sigh: The years are like a song... Composition 2 The wind passes without leaving a trace, on the lake But it leaves ripples; the twists and turns leave no trace, but my thoughts leave memories. The quicksand of time slips out from your fingers and carves an eternal song on the disk of life.
Childhood memories always stay in the world of dolls. The fun of "Dancing with Dolls and Bears" filled the whole childhood.
I never remember how many dolls were disassembled into one-eyed dolls, but I remember that they will always be with them, waiting for the little swallows to fly in in the spring, dressed in colorful clothes. Memories of childhood are as cheerful as children's songs, and innocent children's voices sing innocent songs.
Carrying a small schoolbag as the swallows fly back and forth year after year. I don’t remember whether I made a mistake in calculating 1 plus 1 at that time, but I still remember “You are so young, carrying your schoolbag to school...”.
In the singing, the schoolbag became heavy. I no longer ran and jumped to school, but walked step by step with a steady pace. The figure of the children's song has faded, and in my ears is "Flowers once came." Tell me how to get through...". It is the song of sweet dreams, carrying the hope in my heart along the way.
Growing up among campus folk songs, youth begins to sprout. The road has gone farther and farther, the marks of time have become deeper and deeper, and I have moved towards transformation.
I no longer look innocently at the sky and ask whose eyes are shining there. Instead, I listen to the melancholy blues, look across the sky, and wait for the one meter of sunshine in the sky. He doesn't care about what the lyrics are interpreting, but follows the melody and mobilizes his own emotions.
In the melancholy blues, I am thinking about life and perhaps also maturing. As the sun sets in the evening, I may not be old enough to look at the sunset and reminisce, but I still can’t help but look at the red-stained sky and imagine the old music, and the songs that accompany the faltering footsteps.
The disc of years is still being engraved. On the gramophone, the disc of years is spinning, and the song of memories is singing. Touch the traces of the years, listen to the eternal songs of the years, and continue walking. Years are like songs, songs are like years Composition 3 (If you want this article, you may have to change some of it) When I received a call from Teacher Ling, he told me that Li Middle School was about to hold its 60th anniversary and asked me if I could write some articles about my memories. .
I agreed solemnly, put down the phone, and the memory of my alma mater suddenly came back to life, as if a door in my heart had been gently opened inadvertently. There are always many memories in a person's heart. Some can be shared with friends, while others can only be savored in the dead of night.
Whenever I think of my alma mater, there will always be a trace of reluctance in my heart.
My laughter echoed on the green paths, my figure lingered in the wisteria corridor, my youth was fighting for my life on the green playground, and my ideals were realized in every classroom... At that time, the sky was always blue, and the wind was always blowing. I was very soft. At that time, I always complained that graduation was too far away.
I studied at Lili Middle School from 1983 to 1989. At that time, the school was located at the east end of Lili Town. There are two bridges to cross from the shore to the school. In my impression, the Xiangjia Bridge is quite high. I push my bicycle across the bridge quickly, and I always have to go back and forth several times a day.
After entering the school gate, there is a large blackboard newspaper on the high wall on the right. I remember when I first entered junior high school, I always felt a little fascinated when I saw the seniors preparing for each issue of the blackboard newspaper. Later, when I entered high school, I and a few classmates stayed with the blackboard newspaper for two years.
I am responsible for the layout design. Wu Zhonghua is a good calligrapher, so naturally the main task of transcribing is his. I remember that every time I prepared the blackboard newspaper, it was always after school. Several students stood on the high desks and wrote until very late, with the setting sun shining brightly. Now that I think about it, it is indeed a beautiful picture.
Next was an office building. I remember there was a small library, but when I saw the rows of books, I already felt like an ocean of knowledge. It was in this office building that I saw a computer for the first time. At that time, I was participating in an after-school interest group. It was an Apple computer with a small monochrome display and data input using tape.
I really didn’t expect that I would become associated with computers and have been engaged in corporate informatization work for more than ten years now. Passed. 5. How do I write a junior high school Chinese composition? I’m going crazy. What kind of taste does the marking teacher have?
I’m a veteran. To be honest, I write pretty good compositions, but my scores are generally not high. , the main reason is my handwriting. There is a boy in school who has very good-looking handwriting. He is in Chinese 142 of the High School Entrance Examination. Your handwriting is so good that the corrector will be in the mood to read it. You should start well and use some parallelism. If possible, If you want to write a title, the ending is also very important. It doesn’t matter if the words in the middle are not very good. High school entrance examinations usually require narrative essays, and argumentative essays cannot get high marks. There is no trick to narrative essays. It’s good to put your emotions into it. And The purpose of the article should be novel. Don't bring out those poorly written compositions that have been written over and over again. Such compositions usually get pitifully low scores. Again, if you have beautiful handwriting, no matter how poorly your composition is written, your score will be low. Not low... 6. What did I learn Chinese from? A 600-word essay
I learned Chinese from reading
The world of Chinese is rich and colorful, and knowledge in books is not enough. Only through extensive extracurricular reading can one truly become a knowledgeable person.
I love reading. For me, reading is like entering the kitchen, where all five flavors are present. When you see happy places, it’s like eating a plate of your favorite dishes, and every cell is happy; when you see sad places, it’s like peeling an onion, with tears falling uncontrollably; when you see people fighting for the injustices of the characters in the book, , just like eating mustard, feeling uncomfortable but unable to do anything; see... When you are truly attracted by the storyline in the book, your body and mind will be integrated with the book, and you can enjoy the wisdom of the book.
When I am emotionally impetuous, reading a short poem from "Stars and Spring Water" can always make me calm; when I am downcast, reading "How Steel Was Tempered" makes my heart Ask yourself: Paul is blind, but still strong. Why can't I face the reality with strength? When I am tired, reading "Up and Down Five Thousand Years" and understanding the glorious history of our prosperous China immediately boosts my fighting spirit.
Reading not only cultivates my sentiment, but also gives me a lot of inspiration.
After reading the book "Don Quixote", I realized the cruelty and ravages of society at that time, and felt the happiness and contentment of life in today's society; after reading "How Steel Was Tempered", I realized After seeing Paul's strong will, I learned to face life with strength; after reading "If You Give Me Three Days of Light", I realized Helen Keller's longing and yearning for life, which reflected the quality of a disabled person with a strong will. ……
Chinese is everywhere, omnipresent, and language is everywhere in life. By reading books, we get close to Chinese, learn Chinese, and love Chinese. "Books are the ladder of human progress." If we can get more Chinese knowledge and more philosophy of life through books, Chinese, I love you! 7. Who can help me write an essay about my classmates in junior high school or high school
Sample Essay 2
Unexpected Discovery
Recently, I have been feeling unwell and often cough at night. , unexpectedly, a mysterious conversation was discovered.
That was three days ago. The intense review finally overwhelmed me. I felt hot all over and was in a daze, as if I was in a dream... But I was shocked when I heard a sound that was louder and quieter. After listening carefully, it turned out that the conversation between the schoolbag and the table was:
"Brother, schoolbag, are you too fat? I really can't stand it?" said the desk.
"Oh, Brother Desk, you really don't know something! You don't know that my schoolbag is actually very slim, and it is spacious and comfortable in your belly!" said the schoolbag. "Yes, it was great back then! But why are you like this now?" the desk asked in confusion.
“As the little master’s education is getting higher and higher year by year, my appetite is also increasing. Now I feel so uncomfortable. Do you know how many pounds I weighed a few days ago? ”
“At most 15 jins.”
“Where, 30 jins.”
“Ah, so much.”
"Oh, what should I do?"
"Brother, I heard that a weight-loss drug has been released recently. What is it called... Oh, by the way, it's called 'Quality' "Education, how about you give it a try." "No, one of my friends is heavier than me. He weighs 35 pounds. He took a course of treatment a few days ago and it worked well, but it stopped working after a few days. , It rebounded again. Is this rebound higher than the growth rate of any bull market stock? It doesn't matter, his weight is now more than 40 pounds."
"I heard that TV. I shouted about quality education every day, but I didn’t expect that it was just a cover. When it came time to get down to business, it was completely over.”
“What, quality education, can this be the fault of quality education?” , I interjected, "Exam-oriented education should bear full responsibility. Look at me, I am exam-oriented, and my fever reaches 40℃...".
The schoolbag and the table did not expect that a third party was eavesdropping on the secret conversation. This unexpected discovery made them speechless for a moment. For a long time, I just listened to the murmuring words from the schoolbag and the table: "Actually, there is nothing wrong with quality education. If there are too many people who misinterpret it, it becomes 'wrong'."
Brief Comment
The title gives people a refreshing feeling and attracts people to read it unconsciously.
The composition is profound and well-conceived. Using anthropomorphic techniques, the dialogue between schoolbags and desks is simulated, exposing the shortcomings of exam-oriented education. At the same time, they also criticized the practice of some people who actually engage in exam-oriented education under the guise of quality education.
8. Write an 800-word essay about being a middle school student and feeling great
I am a junior high school student
Like a butterfly flying across the flowers, leaving a faint fragrance ; Like a clear spring flowing through the valley, leaving a reflection of the valley. Six years of primary school have passed quietly, and I am now a junior high school student.
I remember that I was childish six years ago and had no expectations for the future. Full of fantasy, how proud I am to be a junior high school student. However, today, six years later, I am already a junior high school student, and I have completed the childish and ridiculous dream of my childhood.
I stepped into the door of junior high school, which will be the starting line on my life track. With dreams and hope, I sprint towards the future and sprint towards a successful future. I came to this new learning environment, everything here Everything is so new to me, and I am so unfamiliar with everything here. I don’t know why. Whenever I go to bed at night, I always want to cry. I feel helpless and lonely. Maybe it’s because I want to cry. Home made it!
In this new learning environment, I have made new friends, new classmates, new roommates, and new teachers. Everything here must be done by myself, and I should get rid of dependence on my parents. , to learn to be independent. When I first came here, I was not used to it, but after getting used to this intense study, I gradually adapted to it.
I am very happy that I have a united class, just like the political teacher He said: "Only through unity and cooperation can we create an excellent class." Yes, when studying in such a class, students are very interested in learning, so the learning efficiency will be greatly improved.
The most interesting thing is dormitory life. Every night after self-study, the roommates go to bed, wash up, and after finishing their own things, go back to the dormitory to rest. After turning off the lights, it is reasonable to say that they should have a good sleep. Last night, however, several of my roommates told "ghost stories" with great interest, which made people's hair stand on end. They also asked riddles. When everyone was puzzled, as soon as they told the answer, they were amused. Everyone laughed.
"An inch of time is worth an inch of gold, and an inch of gold cannot buy an inch of time." In the three years of junior high school, in the blink of an eye, it will slip by like running water, believe in yourself! Climb to the top! I can do it soon!