How to write "a teacher who has a far-reaching influence on himself" with couplets? A group of friends who love couplets wrote two beautiful poems to the teacher. Teachers may wish to see if some sentences have touched you.
Ji Shan is a teacher.
I haven't asked my husband how he is for a long time. It's still very cold in spring, but I hope to take care.
Today, I still learn from it, and the Qingxi is getting warmer. Is there a motto?
-why do you say that you are full of acacia?
Comments: Shang Bi's full concern is beyond words; The next one is full of respect. Write it down. Telling the truth is not tactful.
Take the first teacher for example.
For more than 30 years, I have lamented the fate of teachers and recalled that teaching is still ploughing, not only the new seedlings are strong in the fields;
Three hundred miles to find the old site, sad broken ruins, why not let tears grow in the wind?
-lifelong injury.
Comment: the upper and lower links are clear, one from human feelings and the other from geography; The common practice of elegiac couplet is to recall the past love and talk about the present situation with comparative legal interests to add sadness to it. It's a pity that the writing is not elaborate, but I finally feel too familiar.
Send it to middle school teachers
Cut the porridge and make something. I don't want to teach you to shine on a cold night, but think about the road at night.
I have planted flowers and grass for more than 20 years. I only hope that my husband will take spring wine and watch Fang Fei go home all the way.
front row
Comments: this couplet is elegant, recalling the past and depicting the teacher's hard work from several details; The second couplet is a greeting, and the style of "seeing Fang Fei home all the way" is quite high enough to support the whole couplet. The whole couplet is clearly connected and refreshing to read.
Send it to primary school teachers
I remember a primary school teacher who took special care of me. Take this opportunity to send my best wishes.
The sound and pronunciation are still faded, and the scenery is blurred before the morning reading class and during the evening self-study class;
If the memory is refreshed, it will return to Hongyan in the south and flow to you in the east. Thank you for being in the sky.
-Used to be a canoe
Comment: The picture in my memory has gradually blurred. Where are the grateful people now? There is a shallow sadness in the statement. It's just that this couplet is miscellaneous and some dialogues are rigorous, so you can think about it again.
To my first teacher.
Regret being alienated by the voice, long memory and small face. Looking back, it seems like yesterday;
It's a pity that the new school has eliminated the traces, but the plum paste can't be found, so it's difficult to send the fish book. I'm looking forward to it. Wipe it at once.
-idle view of the mountains and rivers.
Comments: The melancholy of the lost years and the regret that the old traces are hard to find are memories of teachers and feelings about the lost years. It's just that this joint article is not enough and too straightforward.
Hold a foreign literature teacher
My teacher was the deputy editor-in-chief of Foreign Literature Studies, and died of sudden illness at the age of 46.
Pointing to Asia and Africa, orpiment Europe and America, the sound of string songs is still yesterday, and the teacher is convinced that peaches and plums are flying red and cold;
Such as rafters, pillars of the heart, the economy is not exhausted, the poor day is jealous, and the phoenix tactic goes to the sky.
-Flowers and ivy
Comments: Vigorous, sad and sad, people want to see a teacher who died young, but still in his prime, and people feel endless sighs. The artistic conception of the two sentences is too close. If it can be broken, so much the better.
Send it to Liu Jiaoshou
Liu Jiaoshou is a professor at the School of Asian and African Studies at the University of London and dean of CUHK Art School, studying China's philosophy and literature. I was lucky enough to be appointed by the college to help him sort out his research results. But he told me that there was nothing to sort out, so he might as well go to his house to study. He personally taught me this stupid student for more than two years, studying together and eating together, just like family members. No matter how you calculate it now, you can't repay his kindness.
Modest gentleman, falling in love with China, willing to understand that being born late is both Lu and stupid, and it is a falling line;
The mountains are vast and the water is surging. I would like to establish a virtue with my ancestors and answer my teacher year after year.
Lu Chengfeng
Comments: The sentiment is meaningful, but the sentence is superficial and not delicate enough. The sentences are weak and too familiar.
To the king and my teacher.
Wang Ji, a native of Jiaojiang, Taizhou, Zhejiang, is a member of China Calligraphers Association, a member of China Natural History Society, a former director of Zhejiang Calligraphers Association, a vice chairman of Taizhou Calligraphers Association and a chairman of Jiaojiang Calligraphers Association. His calligraphy is vigorous and vigorous, and he has all four.
The golden seal in Weibei, Li Xing, Cao Kai, catches up with the flying snow on sunny days, and there are many pagodas in the world of beautiful books;
Through Su Huang camouflage, there is a beautiful face and Zhao Zi, and the ink style can cover mountains and rivers. We are really beautiful!
Antique kitten
Comments: In one go, deliberately rendering the teacher's calligraphy attainments, and integrating many praises. It's just that both Bibi said that his calligraphy achievements failed to break through the level. After all, he wasted his exhibition space, but he felt cumbersome. If the second part can be written from other places, so much the better.
Send it to distant teachers.
Wen's classmates, one by one jiaozi Feng Tengqi, regretted that I didn't know the snow;
Look at my generation, every year is cash-strapped, and later schools are advised to do more court work.
-Jianghu drinkers
Comments: The first part uses the classic of Cheng Men to establish Si Nuo, and the second part uses the classic of Kong Li's courtship. Originally, it was very relevant, but the first two sentences lost the same aesthetic feeling as the slogan and failed to integrate with the canon, which felt strange.
Send teachers remotely.
Only when you are in trouble can you know the importance of a teacher's language. If you regret being stubborn for a while, you will only rebel.
I'm afraid the goose will come late when I get the book. I am far away in Qin and Hubei, how can I care?
front row
Comments: If you only keep the first clause, it will taste better, and there are too many last two sentences.
Give it to Miss Gao.
Miss Gao is very kind and serious. At that time, we were young and inexperienced, and we were nicknamed "Gao Laotou" in private.
Lan Zhi in the nursery, peaches and plums are unique, focusing on flogging all his life, ignoring the color mixing of autumn and frost;
Self-cultivation is talent, and morality is maintenance. After 20 years of re-education, it's still raining.
-Yunshan Yinqiao
Comments: One is about the professionalism of teachers, and the other is about the influence of teachers on themselves, with distinct levels and clear structure. The writing is also brilliant, and the vivid image has shaped the image of a good teacher who is dedicated and talented.
In memory of Grandpa (my first teacher)
In a blink of an eye, 22 years later, three tile-roofed houses and half an acre of vegetable fields were hastily married to their neighbors;
In a trance, on the day of March, the inkstone and the post are on your lap again.
——Ftjm277
Comments: Only ordinary words, no surprising words, can move people, and they are bred in them, like a gurgling stream, slowly flowing through their hearts.
To the middle school class teacher.
The spring and autumn calligraphy calendar, speaking out of turn, a piece of paper;
The mind is inherited from the north and the south, with little fame and little profit. Learn ancient literature to be a man.
warm sunshine
Comments: The structure of couplets is clear, but the whole couplet is too formal, and finally it loses its charm.
Send it to Mr. Xiaoxi
Professor Xiao Ximinzheng, a student studying in Japan, is also a life mentor. Architecture major, so writing = architecture; Mr. Wang is slightly thin and shy, trying to tease himself that he is a Tianzhu person.
I often hear about making a surplus car, and occasionally remember to hold a whip in silhouette and chase overseas dharma monks in a graceful manner;
The feeling of learning is still in sight, and I have other plans. At first, I fell in love with Mr. Fujino and failed him.
——Sir_zy
Comments: Compared with Tathagata and Mr. Fujino, the language is novel.
Send it to the junior high school class teacher
Confucius still has 2928 incompetent people. Ask me who is in my class?
Xinde Long-distance Broadcasting in Jiaohe Town, Botou, Hebei Province is backward. After learning a few words, it has grown into a south.
Pregnant with him.
Comments: at the beginning, there are whimsy. "Ask my classmate who is not a peach and plum" is enough to highlight the teacher's "cow"; The bottom ratio is slightly exaggerated, and the sentence of "learning a few words from the teacher" is also awkward, which is suspected of being repetitive with the top ratio and can be avoided.
Mr. Wang Shufeng, a teacher of Yeyi High School, chats and sends sixteen rhymes.
A night of wind, sigh and phenological shock. You Yan gradually became noisy and scattered all over the city. After five years of tossing, the sun is still shining. About from the porch, standing at the door, greeting. It depends, but ask slowly and look at the old marks. Measure your distance and don't be trapped in your hometown. The world flows because of water, and everything goes its own way. Do nothing but dive into the stream and try to swim into the sea. Hearing this, I felt ashamed, twisted my clothes and frowned. I'm not A Jin Taijun, I'm wasting a foot. The world is 300 billion, and there is no glimpse. Sail a reed in the maze and hope to cross the river diligently. If you smile at youth, it means that my heart is not open. Gentlemen embrace loneliness, while children gather in groups. The story is as profound as the story. I can't sleep when I think about it, but I try to imagine at night.
You can also send it by joint mail:
In the floating world, truth and falsehood are mixed, and the three of them dare not learn from them. They got something, but they didn't say it. They lost it and couldn't save it.
Remember, it's a long time, and one sentence can benefit you for life. Learn to be cautious and independent, and be as generous as possible.
-Flute and murmur
Brief comments:
The poem is written for a high school teacher with sixteen rhymes, and it is slowly reeling. It evokes the teacher's inculcation and expectation of himself, and also evokes his uneasy mood of fear of losing trust. The language is plain and unpretentious, and the feelings are not delicate and artificial. Although there is no ups and downs, it is ups and downs and gradually deepens. Finally, there is endless meaning.
Couplets are full of strangeness and flowing style, but they are full of rich sentence changes and full of charm. The alliance in the first part seems to belittle itself as "muddleheaded", while the alliance in the second part encourages a pen, which says that the teacher's words of "being cautious and trying to be modest" are still in my ears, and I dare not go beyond it, which shows that I am not chaotic. This kind of brushwork, which wants to promote and suppress first, quietly raises the image of the teacher without feeling stiff, and is a wonderful pen.