Xiaohua is a lively and naive girl. There are always many new things in his mind that I don't know. She told me that I was her first friend because other children thought she was poor and ignored her. Perhaps because of this incident, I deepened my friendship with Xiaohua and we became inseparable friends.
One day, Xiaohua and I went out to play and were ready to go home. I feel very thirsty. Xiaohua pointed to a fruit tree three or four meters high and said, "Let's pick the fruit and eat it." I listened and found a bamboo pole, ready to knock the fruit down. Xiaohua stopped me: "If this falls, it will smash the fruit." I put down the bamboo pole, simply put my hands around the tree, put my feet on it, and climbed with both hands and feet, but I couldn't climb any more after climbing a foot, and I was so anxious that I was sweating. Inadvertently, I didn't hold my hand tightly, so I fell heavily on the ground and made me cry. Xiaohua looked at me in a mess and laughed while clutching her stomach. I saw Xiaohua holding the trunk, stepping on the stump, leaning forward and kicking hard, and repeating these actions all the time. All of a sudden, she climbed the tree easily with three or two strokes. I blushed at her lithe movements. She sat on the trunk and picked many fruits for me to eat. We ate and went home.
The holiday is over. I should go back. I should say goodbye to Xiaohua. When I left, Xiao Hua Ou made me feel sorry for a leaf. We never met again, but I still remember her innocence and liveliness.
It was a hot Saturday in summer, and my father and I went hiking in Baiyun Mountain. This mountaineering is an activity organized by dad's company. Dad's company often organizes such activities to let employees strengthen physical exercise and relax their work pressure.
Speaking of Baiyun Mountain, it is known as the famous mountain in South Guangdong, and it has been called "the first show in Yangcheng" since ancient times. It is located in the northern suburb of Guangzhou, with a total area of 20. 98 square kilometers, the main peak "Moxingling" is 382 meters above sea level. It overlooks the whole city of Guangzhou and the Pearl River in the distance. Whenever it rains or in late spring, the mountains are covered with white clouds, which is a spectacle, hence the name. Baiyun Mountain has long been famous in the world. Celebrities came and went during the Warring States and the scenery was pleasant during the Jin Dynasty, so the Tang Dynasty was famous for its resorts. Baiyun Mountain has occupied many places in the "Eight Scenes of Yangcheng" since the Song Dynasty. Citizens always like to hike here, especially on holidays, and take climbing Baiyun Mountain as a pleasure. At this time, the bustling scene of supporting the elderly and loving the young constitutes a unique picture of Yangcheng.
Mountaineering can exercise the body, exercise the will, absorb the fresh air of nature in the countryside, and adjust the body and life. Now is the information age, with advanced technology, many things can be done without going out. People stay at home all day, work in the company, seldom exercise, and get sick easily. Since the outbreak of SARS virus, it is particularly important to strengthen physical exercise, improve personal physique and ensure the quality of work and study.
Two days after Typhoon Ibudu, the temperature in Guangzhou dropped slightly due to heavy rain, but it was still sultry, and dark clouds appeared from time to time. Early in the morning, I prepared an umbrella and drinking water, put them in my backpack, got on my dad's car, and we set off. The car stopped at the foot of the mountain. Dad said that because of the fear of rain, this time we chose a relatively flat, easy-to-walk, but far-away road to climb the mountain, but in order to achieve the purpose of exercising, we decided to board the destination at one breath. After entering the mountain gate, we walked all the way up. In less than 10 minutes, I was already sweating. The summer sunshine seems to be trying to pull out the swaying green trees and pass them on to my face, which is burning. We walked and enjoyed the scenery on both sides. People are bustling on the road, probably because there is a holiday on Saturday. It seems that everyone has a sense of strengthening fitness. There are many famous natural attractions on Baiyun Mountain. We have been climbing along the mountain road. The mountain road is lined with tall green trees. There is a rest point every other road, and there are stone benches and trees everywhere. Looking down, the spring water in the mountain is flowing out, which is really comfortable. Oh, it used to be called Pugu. There are unknown flowers everywhere, and the insects around are busy collecting nectar. It's really a vibrant scene. At this time, we went to the grassy lawn again, just like a huge green carpet, where the grass was everywhere. A breeze blew in the mountains, and the grass and small wild chrysanthemums shook their bodies as if calling to us. The wind took away the heat wave under the scorching sun, leaving a fresh, really refreshing. In 28 minutes, we arrived at Nengren Temple Scenic Area. Father told me that we were halfway to the destination of Peak Park, and there was a steep slope ahead. He asked with concern, "Are you tired?" Do you need a rest? "I'm thinking," we must work hard to reach our destination, so as to achieve the purpose of exercise, and we must not be discouraged. "I took two sips of water from my backpack and handed it to my dad. I replied, "Let's go on! "Dad looked at me and seemed to say," Well done! " Looking at the green grass and green hills, and the city that is constantly far away from us, we continued to move forward, turning from the avenue to the stone mountain road, and came to a scenic spot called "Tiger Hill". It's so hot, my father asked me if I want to eat an ice cream to cool down. I quickly agreed. We ate My Sweetie's ice cream and climbed the mountain. Going hiking is really interesting. On the way, we kept passing my father's colleagues when my father's cell phone rang. Oh, it was a colleague of my father who sent an interesting short message in the distance: "You are eating ice cream with sunglasses, and your son is behind you". We couldn't help laughing after reading it. Walking, I feel my legs are heavy and my clothes are soaked with sweat. Dad also said that he was a little breathless. I watched my dad still firmly ahead, and I kept encouraging myself in my heart. "Persistence is victory!" . At 40 o'clock, we arrived at the destination "Peak Park", watching the sweat flowing down from our foreheads, but we couldn't hide the smile on our faces from the joy of victory. We stood at the top of the mountain, overlooking Guangzhou, where there are many tall buildings at the foot of the mountain, shouting "Hi! How are you? " With the melodious music in the park, the sound echoed in Shan Ye, forming a picturesque scenery. The beautiful scenery of Baiyun Mountain intoxicated me and made me linger.
3. Composition about the Action of Class 350 Teacher Xie is the teacher of our innovative composition training camp. Teacher Xie is in his forties, very handsome, with round eyes like small tears; With a pointed nose, like a character in a comic book. Usually, Mr. Xie looks very serious, but we find that Mr. Xie has always been smiling.
Teacher Xie is a special primary school teacher and a senior middle school teacher. His articles often win prizes. I feel very honored to listen to Teacher Xie's lecture.
Today, Teacher Xie told us how to write a composition. He first told us his student's article: Why did Teacher Xie come to teach us? Suddenly, the teacher fainted. We cooperated with Qi Xin to send the teacher to the hospital and saved the teacher. What's more, it rained that day, and there was a stream next to the school. The teacher was washed away by the raging waves in order to carry us across the stream. It took us two hours to find the teacher and save him ... there are many examples. We all laughed at this. In fact, we often do this in our writing. Teacher Xie told us that writing a composition is to say what you think and want to say with your mouth, and to write down what you see, hear, think and think with a pen truly, concretely and vividly. I am deeply inspired by these two sentences in this class, which makes me feel that writing is not so terrible, and I can also write a good composition.
I like this good teacher, and I like the composition class taught by this teacher more!
4. 400-word action description paragraphs in Chinese composition require beautiful language. When it comes to action description, verbs must be used accurately.
For example, the words that express the action of "look" include "glance", "stare", "glance" and "learn", so the action of writing a character cannot always be "I took a look". We can write "I gave him a casual look" or "I stared at him" according to the situation at that time. In this way, through the accurate use of verbs, the actions of characters can be written accurately, concretely and vividly.
Students can do this by using verbs accurately. But some students will have questions: teacher, I used verbs, why not write them out in detail? For example, I wrote "She raised her hand". Why did our teacher say that my writing was not specific? In fact, the student has used the verb "Ju" accurately and can describe the actions of the characters. In order to make the description more specific and the characters more vivid, the teacher will introduce some tips to you.
Coup 1: the method of verb+modifier This method is very simple, that is, when we describe the actions of characters, we must first use verbs accurately, which is the foundation. Then before or after this verb, add words indicating direction, degree, severity, speed and quantity.
Such as: direction+verb-he raised his hand high; I lean to the right. Light and heavy+verb-the teacher touched the student's head gently; His foot hit the wall.
Speed+verb-the kitchen knife in the chef's hand is dancing fast; He jumped up at once. Degree+verb-Dad slapped Xiaoming hard.
Verb+quantity-He ran a few steps forward. These words can be used alone or in combination.
Let's have a try. Is this writing very specific? Coup 2- action splitting method. In fact, no matter how complicated and coherent the movements are, they can't be completed at once. When observing and describing, if we break the action into several steps, carefully observe it step by step, and choose appropriate verbs to describe it step by step, it is not difficult to write the actions of the characters concretely.
The action splitting method is simply to divide a big action into several coherent small actions and describe them one by one in slow motion. As we all know, in the traditional martial arts action or TV slow motion, an action is often broken down into several parts, or a big action is broken down into several small moves, and then each part and every small move is displayed or described in detail according to a certain level, so that the whole action is lifelike.
Using this action splitting method, the simple action of "knocking at the door" can be broken down into the following small moves: ① to open the door; 2 stop; ③ Raise (right) hand; 4 bend your fingers; ⑤ Knock on the door. Accurately describe these continuous actions and form fluent sentences, so that the process of "knocking at the door" can be written in detail.
In this way, we can write a paragraph with the big action of "knocking at the door": he came to his mother's door neatly dressed and gave a gentle push. The door is closed, and there seems to be light inside. Hesitated, he raised his right hand, thought about it, slowly bent his index finger and knocked on the door a few times. There was no response. He knocked three times and nothing happened.
He summoned up his courage and tapped on the door. No one came out to open the door, and he suddenly stood there. Students, with this method of action splitting, can we write the action in detail at once? I hope students can also use this method in their own compositions to make the articles more specific.
Today, the teacher just told us two ways. I believe these two methods will help students write actions easily and make them more specific! Coup 3: Accuracy The word "accuracy" used here has two meanings: one is to reflect the personality characteristics of the characters, and the other is to combine specific situations. This requires avoiding using those "common words" when writing the actions of the characters.
What is a common word? It's those omnipotent words. For example, the following sentence: I walked to the door
I walked up to my mother. I walked over.
"Go" is a common word, as well as "look", "take" and "eat". These words seem to have no problem to use, and can be used to write the actions of characters.
But you should know that sometimes these common words are absolutely impossible because they are not accurate enough. As we all know, there are no two people exactly the same in the world. The character's gender, personality, age and identity are different, and the characteristics of action are bound to be different.
Therefore, when describing the actions of characters, we should fully combine the gender, personality, age and identity of the characters to show their characteristics. For example, a child with a rich family has a dollar in his hand.
And a poor child, he will have a dollar in his hand. For another example, when a shy person laughs, his mouth will be pinched and his mouth will be slightly tilted, while when a cheerful person laughs, his mouth will be opened wide and his teeth will be exposed.
Second, people's actions are different in different situations and environments, and more attention should be paid to the accuracy of words. For example, if you walk after dinner, is it the same as being late for school? It must be different.
When drinking water at ordinary times, you may "pick up the cup, put it to your mouth and take a sip with your neck tilted." How to drink water when you are thirsty or pressed for time? It must be "grab the cup, put it to your mouth, lean back your neck and drink it off." You see, the same person who drinks water, the verbs you choose must be different because of different situations and different actions.
Remind students to pay attention to the word "quasi" when describing characters' actions-to grasp the characteristics of characters' actions in specific situations. Only in this way can the movements of the characters be written accurately and the characters be written alive.
I hope I can help you.
5. A 600-word composition describes the actions in the classroom. The most unforgettable lesson is that a ray of cool Xia Feng blows into the classroom.
A teacher is giving a lecture, full and happy, and his forehead is shining. The students are sleepy, with the unique laziness in the afternoon, and sleepy in the sunshine of knowledge.
Suddenly, a discordant note jumped out and destroyed this seemingly calm ensemble! I heard the teacher shout loudly, "Who tied me with rubber?" "I was shocked and looked up. Everyone was shocked. The teacher's "lion roar" shook the earth and the air solidified instantly.
A second later, the brain came to its senses, reflected it and burst into laughter. Laughter, like a rapidly swinging ripple, spreads relentlessly and violently impacts the teacher's eardrum.
The teacher's face is redder, rising like a purple eggplant; Small eyes suddenly jumped out of the meat, as if they were about to explode and catch fire; My lips kept shaking, as if to say something, but I couldn't say a word. Finally, in the crazy laughter of my classmates, I threw down a book and slammed the door angrily! Look at something that is still clicking, as if it were about to burn; My lips kept shaking, as if to say something, but I couldn't say a word. Finally, in the crazy laughter of my classmates, I threw down a book and slammed the door angrily! Looking at the still banging door panel, the students stopped laughing gradually, looked at each other one by one, and began to feel the seriousness of the matter: another teacher was angry! Alas, I'm sorry to say that our class is a "trick-or-treating class" famous for raising schools. All the students are smart and naughty, but they just like being naughty! Often make the teacher cry. This makes our best-tempered geography teacher angry again-maybe because geography is too difficult to understand, maybe because the teacher is a foreigner, maybe because his accent is different from ours ... anyway, we don't like learning geography! But after a while, everyone began to whisper: "The teacher is very kind to us at ordinary times."
"Yes, his geography class is not easy to understand, but he is so serious every time!" "Yes, yes, he told me a question that I was not good at last time ..." "And his accent is different from ours, but the lecture is the most humorous!" All kinds of words, you give me a sentence, I find the teacher so cute. So everyone began to blame the "culprit".
This guy seems to know that he is wrong and dare not say a word, let alone admit it. Finally, the monitor stood up: "Take the initiative to admit your mistake and invite the teacher back."
"yes! Right! " Everyone responded unanimously. Six group leaders followed the monitor into the office.
A pair of expectant eyes stared at the door quietly and nervously. Wait, wait ... When we finally heard footsteps, everyone immediately sat up straighter, looked at the teacher eagerly and whispered their regrets.
The teacher's face softened a lot. He coughed and his voice was hoarse. "The saddest thing is that other people's work is ignored and trampled on." The teacher paused slightly and then said, "I am working, aren't I? In fact, you are also paying for your study. If you don't cherish it, you will eventually regret it. Maybe I'm a foreigner, maybe I can't adapt to the local customs here, and everyone seems to be unconvinced by me.
But I really want to teach you well. I always believe that you will eventually accept my labor and get some insight into my contribution.
I don't ask you to remember me more, I just hope that students can really learn some knowledge, at least go to the society in the future and support themselves! "The students all bowed their heads in shame. The teacher seems to have choked up: "classmates, please be a teacher, study hard and be a serious person!" "Your parents are more sad than the teacher! ..... "The whole class was deeply moved.
Eyes are red. After the sound of * * * sounded, 36 students in the class bowed deeply to the teacher! So serious! So sincere! ..... Since then, the word "teacher" has become stronger and stronger in our hearts.
I think the teacher planted the word "sensible" in our hearts with tears ... and another cool summer breeze blew into the classroom. A teacher is giving a lecture, full and happy, and his forehead is shining.
The students blinked their bright eyes and gave out a burst of cheerful laughter from time to time, like a fish with a free tail, swimming happily in the ocean of knowledge … an unforgettable lesson.
I just opened the textbook and suddenly saw a picture under the glass plate. "Deer, my favorite sika deer, draw it." I thought to myself, open the painting, pick up the brush, divide three times five by two and tick off a deer. However, because I didn't observe it carefully, I painted the deer head as a child's head. How much is not beautiful! Erase the repaint, but draw it to the right. I had to draw another duck swimming in the river on the left side of the paper and "twist" the deer's head to make it look at the duck. I've finished painting. It's really good.
In the fifth grade, I joined a calligraphy interest group. Under the guidance of my tutor, I picked up a brush dipped in black juice for the first time. According to the instructor's instructions: the index finger and middle finger are stuck outside the pen container, and the ring finger and little finger are stuck inside the pen container. I write carefully one by one. A point, a horizontal, a vertical, a si. But it's outrageous. It was clearly painted by a three-year-old child. A little, it is a thick ink group; A horizontal, winding like a small snake; A vertical one, but as thick as an elephant's legs and feet in art; A slap is even more outrageous, like a bald broom that has long been scrapped. I looked at my masterpiece and smiled. These strokes are uneven and asymmetrical, not to mention the shelf structure. But the tutor said, "well written!" It seems that you have a bright future. If you practice hard, you will succeed in the future. "
3. I saw a male classmate come up to the stage, quietly spread out a roll of white paper, raised a brush full of thick ink, meditated a little, and painted while flying like a phoenix. With the constant bleeding of the brush, a lifelike horse appeared on the drawing paper. It holds its head high and goes forward bravely, showing an irresistible force.
4. Disgusting "smelly elder sister", so nobody cares, do you want to ruin my experiment? I gave my finger a heavy flick. Who knows it didn't bounce off, but it angered this "smelly elder sister". It immediately gave off an unpleasant smell and made me run back to the house, covering my nose.
The room is quiet, only the TV is ringing. Dad suddenly grabbed the corner of the table with a wave of his hand. 1 of "beep", slapped on the table, bowls, plates and chopsticks all jumped up, and the glass at the corner of the table fell to the ground and broke.
6. Holding a small hazelnut in one hand and a heavy pair of pliers in the other, look directly at the hazelnut. The pliers drop slowly, but they often hit one side. After a while, their hands were smashed several times. There was a painful expression on her face.
7. xu teacher teaches us Chinese. She holds chalk in her dexterous hands every day and writes carefully on the blackboard. We can't help imitating her handwriting in our notebooks.
After Haitao found the sparrow's nest, he put a flashlight in his waist, spat on his hand and climbed up. Before climbing to the sparrow's nest, he lowered his head and said to us, "Hey, look carefully and get ready to catch sparrows!" " "Say that finish, he stood on another branch and straightened up. Unexpectedly, the sparrow's head hit the sparrow's nest and got a fright. There was a creeping sound from the nest, and then several sparrows rushed out desperately. Haitao was in a hurry and reached for one. He took a photo of the nest with his flashlight, and there was only one left, which may not be crowded out, chirping. Haitao reached out and grabbed another one. He put it in a plastic bag and threw it in front of Xiao Pang. Xiao Pang happily picked it up, took the sparrow out of the bag and watched it flap its wings. He cried happily, "Have fun, have fun ..."
9. I held my breath, bent my hands into an arc, approached slowly, then swooped forward and quickly buckled my hands. Haha, look where you are going! Tingting also squatted down to watch. I slowly let go of my hand, alas, I only have grass where grasshoppers lie. "What's the matter? I clearly see this lying here. " Cousin said, "The grasshopper jumped out and you didn't notice. No, it is right there. " I looked in the direction of my cousin's finger and the grasshopper was there. I ran another button, hey, I ran away again. I looked at the grass around me. Ah, it was hidden under my feet. I stared at it, squatted down gently, and suddenly my hands were buckled at a height of about 10 cm from the grasshopper. "I know, I know!" I am so happy that my cousin dances around me excitedly.
10, obviously humming, walking in the field. Suddenly, there was a cry of "goo goo". Looking down the sound, I saw a little cuckoo jumping on the carpet-like grass. Yao Ming is very happy. He held his breath, and the cat crouched down and crept close to the little cuckoo. He put his hands in a semicircle and pounced! Mingming caught this little cuckoo. Ah! This little cuckoo is really beautiful. Although its feathers have not yet grown, its pearly eyes are very clever. Mingming lovingly stroked the soft feathers of the little cuckoo.
Pick some at will and change them yourself.
7.400 words to write a person's composition, you should describe this person's movements, demeanor and language clearly. My father is very handsome. He is about 1.7 meters tall and slightly fat. I think he is the most handsome in a suit, like a dark horse prince. His eyes are bright and he looks elegant with glasses. Don't say that he is really a master, I envy him. My father taught me the children's song "Rabbit Darling" and I sang "Dear Rabbit". Our song is crisp and sweet. Growing up, my father didn't care so much about me as a child. He became strict, making me do my homework all day, reciting more ancient poems and reading more famous books. I don't think my father is the old one. He told me to look at this and that, and I felt like I was in the world of books. Hearing my father's words, I quickly did my homework. I said, "Yes, Dad, I do my homework." I am an obedient boy. Although my father is strict with me now, he is meticulous to me. Every time he hits me, he will secretly grieve himself, and sometimes he will write "Never hit a child again" on a note when I am not at home. Another time, I was sick, that day. Dad put all his clothes on for me, but he got wet. When I went to the hospital, the measurement was 38 degrees and 7 degrees, which was one degree higher. I'll take a blood test first. The blood is abnormal and I need infusion. It was nine o'clock at night, and I lost two bottles until twelve o'clock at night. Dad was always by my side, holding my hand. I want to say to my father, "You have worked hard!" .
8. 400-word composition on action description of characters in the early morning
Early in the morning, before dawn, I was awakened by my father's cough.
I opened my eyes and saw my mother dressing my father. Neither of them said anything, but silently put on the newly washed clothes, buttoned them one by one, and then gently pulled them down. This is what my father said last night. In order to earn more money for my sister and me to study during the Chinese New Year, I will go to town this morning to catch a train to go to work in Beijing. Really, so are the children from poor families. Dad can't spend the next year at home to make money. It is said that reading is for myself, but I always feel that I don't understand that reading is for myself, but I really feel that I am sorry for my parents because I don't study hard. How hard the two of them work, aren't they all for my sister and me? You can't even spend the New Year at home!
When I was in a trance, my father mentioned the stuffed big bag and said softly, "Goodbye, the child is yours!" " "Mom just whispered" grace "as a promise. At this time, I saw him put down his schoolbag again and wanted to hug his mother for a kiss, but her mother pushed her father away and whispered, "Son, don't be a loser!" " "Dad never said anything, turned around and picked up his bag and strode out of the door. Then I remembered that I had to say goodbye to my father. I immediately got up and shouted, "Bye, Dad!" "Baidu map