First, read the following text and write as required.
Once upon a time, when a farmer visited a barn, he accidentally lost a famous watch. Because he couldn't find it anywhere, he decided to offer a reward for finding the watch and asked the children on the farm to help him find it. The reward is $500. All the children tried hard to find it under the reward, but there were piles of grain and straw everywhere in the barn. Everyone was very busy, and they didn't find anything until the sun went down and gave up one by one. There is only one child who is still searching for that huge reward. It was getting dark and everyone was gone. When the barn calmed down, he suddenly heard a strange sound. The sound of "tick-tock, tick-tock" kept ringing, and the child immediately stopped all actions. The barn became quieter and the tick-tock became clearer. The child followed the sound and finally found the expensive watch in the dark barn.
Quiet is the reward of nature, quiet is a wonderful state of mind, and quiet is a harmonious and warm social customs painting. ...
Please write a composition of not less than 800 words with the theme of "quiet charm" combined with your own ideas and style.
[Writing Skills] Combining the propositional materials, especially the intelligent notes in the second paragraph of the materials, and carefully reading the title "The Charm of Quiet", we can realize that the central word of the title is "Charm" and the key modifier is "Quiet". This composition should be based on "quietness", appreciate people's beauty with "quietness" or "quietness", and purify people's soul.
Quiet charm
Acily Liu
Still water depth, not obvious. Beneath the quiet and obscure appearance, there are hidden inner strength and profound thoughts. A word "quiet" is so profound, so Zen and so charming.
Only by being quiet can there be no distractions; Only by concentrating on thinking can we gain great wisdom. Zen seems to be the first to understand this trick. The compulsory course of Zen Buddhism is also an introductory kung fu-meditation, which requires practitioners to sit still and meditate. As soon as you close your eyes, you shut the rolling world of mortals, dirt and dust out of your heart; When you are still in your heart, you will not be served by external things but meditate. Since the Indian Lotus Master, many monks have dug holes and lived in the Himalayas, longing for nettles and snow water. They are haggard and finally "quietly" think about the true meaning of Buddhism and become a generation of eminent monks. Those who face the wall, or think, or realize, the premise of success is silence. Quiet as water, not revealing, can make your mind travel thousands of miles.
Only when you are calm can you become an immortal independently. Simple body static, my mind is still full of thoughts, and naturally I can't get the Tao. Be calm when you are quiet. Don't think about the world, just soak an ice heart in the snow, and feel that tranquility, that coldness, that coziness and relaxation. On a higher level, even if the body can't meditate, the heart can still be like water. Therefore, you don't have to be surprised by Tao Yuanming's feeling that "building a house is human, but there are no horses and chariots", just because he is "self-biased"; You don't have to wonder that Su Dongpo was demoted to Huangzhou, but he can still sail under the Red Cliff. It is precisely because he has never changed his silence and realized the great realm of "things are infinite" that he can "be as broad as Feng Xu's wind, and I don't know where to stop; It's like independence, feather and immortality. "
Wise men cultivate their morality and realize the Tao in silence, become immortals in silence, and condense thousands of years of wisdom and unfathomable power in silence. But they still keep that silence, and maybe habits have become natural. It was not until one day that they broke the silence that you were surprised at their wisdom and broadness, which is why "if you don't fly, you will fly to heaven;" If you don't sing, it will be a blockbuster. The first master in Tian Ba Long Cloth turned out to be an unknown sweeping monk in Shaolin. Hou Shengyuan, who helped Wei Gongzi steal the symbol to save Zhao, was only the gatekeeper of Daliang Yimen. Zhuge Liang, the symbol of wisdom, was just a farmer plowing in Nanyang before he became a rookie ... Their silence in the past reflected the terrible power explosion one day, just like the silence of a volcano. It is not a simple silence, but an outbreak after accumulation!
Therefore, it is not difficult to understand that Ji Kang, in the face of crowding round, talked about ostentatiously visiting his bell club, but still ignored it, only busy silently in the raging fire and the sonorous hammer. Can the tranquility of sages be broken by the noise of the world? Wise people enjoy water, while benevolent people enjoy Leshan. A thousand years ago, a wise man realized Zen from the deep stream of still water. This Zen is not unspeakable, but now, how many people can calm down and feel it? This may be the sorrow of modern civilization.
[Teacher's comment] The author of this article is accurate in examining the questions and profound in the views of the article, especially in the last paragraph, which compares the mentality of ancient sages with the impetuous and vulgar mentality of modern secular people, cleverly asks questions, makes people think, deepens and sublimates the theme of the article.
Second, read the following text and write as required.
"There is no way to doubt the mountains and rivers, and there is another village." These two poems by Lu You, a poet in the Song Dynasty, describe the feeling of getting lost and the joy of seeing a new scene, and show the regularity of life or social change and development, which is full of philosophy.
Do you have similar life experiences in this respect? Any new feelings? Please write an article of no less than 800 words.
Ask to choose an angle to conceive the composition, make your own ideas, choose your own style and draw up your own topic; Don't deviate from the content and meaning of the material, don't copy it, and don't copy it.
[Writing Skills] Read the material carefully and try to figure out its connotation. You can know that "the mountains are heavy and the waters are heavy, and there is no road to doubt, and there is another village in the dark" is a metaphor for adversity and suffering, and "the future is bright" is a metaphor for a bright future. So the best meaning of this composition test is that adversity often contains infinite hope. No matter how difficult the road is, as long as you have firm faith and are brave in pioneering and enterprising, life will be able to "save the day" and usher in light, success and glory.
The Call of "Bright Future"
Zhang Yu
Dark clouds can't cover the brilliance of the sun, and thorns can't stop the footsteps of brave people.
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"There is no way to doubt the mountains and rivers, and there is another village." This is a poem by Lu You, a great poet in the Song Dynasty. Recite this philosophical poem, and your mind will be refreshed with Xia Feng, and the dark clouds will disperse one by one. Even in the face of adversity and suffering, I will always be strong and optimistic.
"There is no doubt about mountains and rivers", and the mountains and rivers become rings, and the steps become rings. In this world, everyone will encounter adversity, but the loss of mountains and rivers will not shake the firm belief of the pioneers. We believe that after "step by step", there will be a bright future.
"There is no way for mountains and heavy waters to return to doubt, and there is another village with a bright future" is God's test for mankind, while "the future is bright" is God's life call for mankind with wisdom and openness.
On the journey, the call of "bright future" will give people spiritual comfort and warmth. Luo Yingzhen, the wife of an ordinary policeman, fell into a desperate situation when she learned that her husband was seriously injured in a fight with gangsters and was admitted to hospital. When the doctor told her that her husband would never wake up from a coma and become a vegetable, she was in a desperate situation of "no way to regain her doubts" However, Luo Yingzhen's spiritual pillar did not collapse. Her ears echoed with the call of "a bright future". She cared for her husband with love, patience and gentleness, and finally miraculously woke him up. This is a miracle of loving the truth, and it is also a miracle that life calls for.
The call of "a bright future" will give people tenacious will and strength. Looking back on 2008, the earth shook and the houses collapsed, and the Sichuan people who lost their homes and relatives were bleeding and crying. However, the people of Sichuan have not been pessimistic, and have not lamented the philosophical call of "the sky will fall" and "the future is bright", so that with the care and support of the people of the whole country, they are struggling to resist earthquakes and provide disaster relief. As a result, the faces of Sichuanese are full of sunshine, and the land of Sichuan is full of "Vientiane renewal" that attracts worldwide attention.
The call of "bright future" will bring people many fruits of success. Shi Tiesheng, an outstanding contemporary writer, was crippled in both legs and suffered from bad luck in life. However, his mother's comfort, the inspiration from the altar and the philosophical call of "a bright future" finally made him get out of the confusion of "mountains and heavy waters have no way to regain doubts" and opened up a new world. Beethoven, a talented musician, was deaf in both ears, but the call of "a bright future" wiped the tears from his eyes, awakened his belief in struggle, and made Beethoven's tree of life bear the music fruit of "symphony of destiny", which shone for generations.
"There's no way for mountains and rivers to be suspicious, and there's another village in the dark" is the golden test given to you by God. "Bright future" is God's wise life call.
"There is no doubt about mountains and rivers, and there is another village." Let's listen quietly and remember silently that this is the most precious call of life!
[Teacher's comment] The author of this article has accurate examination, proper conception and clear and profound theme. In particular, the article "There's no way for mountains and rivers to be suspicious" is a golden test given to you by God. The sentence' a bright future' is God's wise call to life. It is novel, unique and rich in literary talent, and it is really the finishing touch.
Third, read the following text and write as required.
Nature is a profound textbook, which can inspire people to think about life and seek the meaning of life. Mountains teach people to be strong, while streams teach people to be cheerful; Chrysanthemum teaches noble, green teaches simple; The sea teaches an open mind, and the forest teaches a solemn silence. Wait, wait.
Please write an article on the theme of "natural revelation" in combination with your own ideological experience; Self-defined, self-selected style, self-designed topic, not less than 800 words.
[Writing Tips] This is a topic composition test with distinctive characteristics. Candidates should pay attention to the following two aspects when writing this article: first, according to the writing characteristics of the composition materials, especially the writing requirements, it is best to choose the prose genre that expresses the will; Second, carefully read the composition materials, carefully ponder the writing requirements, and carefully grasp the topic orientation of "Life is inspired by nature" from the aspect of composition examination, and take this as the starting point.
Reed in sandbar
Ye Xiaofei
I love reeds, and I love reeds in early spring above sandbars-reeds with sharp buds and bright luster, full of indifference and simplicity of life. In the early spring, when it was warm and cold, the reeds in the sandbar had quietly spread their roots, absorbed some nutrients from the soil, sprouted vitality, broke the ice and jointing, and thrived. Although it clearly knows that there is no greenhouse, no chemical fertilizer, no hard care of farmers, no gentle singing and admiration of pear garden singers, as long as there is a bright blue sky and white clouds, it will feel satisfied and happy. With these, when the first ray of sunshine slides into their eyes, they can start an ordinary and poetic life and stage a simple and indifferent life movement.
I love reeds, and I love reeds in autumn on sandbanks more-"White dew is frost", and frosted reeds can best explain unyielding tenacity and strength. The autumn wind is rustling, the flowers are dying, but the reed flowers are holy and chic; The severe frost struck and paraquat withered, but the reeds in the sandbar still stood upright and indomitable. You know, in the historical time and space, the reeds in the sandbar were burned to the ground by the bonfires of the Three Kingdoms, but "wildfires never completely burned them, and they grew tall again in the spring breeze". When the branches of red apricots bloom in spring next year, the reeds in the sandbar are lush and have infinite elegance; You know, in the memory of history, "the wind blows and the water cools, and the strong men are gone forever." Jing Ke has embarked on an eternal road of no return for Yan to destroy Qin, and the reeds on the sandbar are accompanied by the bleak autumn wind, accompanied by the knocking and rustling in the high opinion, which makes Jing Ke heroic; You know, in the history of the Anti-Japanese War, the Japanese invaders trampled on the reeds in the sandbar of Baiyangdian in the north, but one reed fell, and thousands of reeds in Qian Qian stubbornly gathered together. The thunderbolt flashed, and the boundless sea of fire burned the brutality and arrogance of the Japanese aggressors to ashes.
I love reeds, and I love reeds on sandbars in spring and summer-reed leaves float and reed stems stand. At this moment, the reeds in the sandbar can give people a subtle enlightenment of "harmony but difference, being kind to others". You see, the river rises, the lake is full, the sandbar disappears for the second time, and the reeds are integrated into the big family of rivers and lakes. Red fish shuttled through the reeds, frogs sang at the heels of the reeds, naughty dragonflies circled and played in groups in the reeds and above the reeds, while the reeds were like honest brothers. They are not annoyed or angry, one by one, I am right next to you, building a arbor for the big family, and they have no regrets about being destroyed by the wind and rain.
Looking up at all sentient beings and mountains and rivers, I want to say, I love reeds, and I love reeds on sandbars near the water.
This reed, green and lush, is deeply rooted in the sandbar. Every year, year after year, it shakes the vicissitudes of life, dripping with the enlightenment of life, teaching me to be indifferent, simple and strong, teaching me to be kind to others, and teaching me to smile at the warm sunrise every day. ...
I love the reeds on the sandbars by the water!
[Teacher's comment] The author of this article examines the questions accurately, and the description is very literary, and the lines are full of passion. With the help of sandbar reeds, the author has realized the philosophy of life of "indifferent and simple", "tough and strong" and "harmonious life", with distinct levels and strict logic. "Red fish shuttle through the reeds, frogs sing behind the reeds, naughty dragonflies hover in and above the reeds in groups, and reeds are like very honest brothers. They are not annoyed or angry. One plant after another, you are next to me, I am next to you, building a arbor for the big family, and the wind and rain hit and destroyed without regrets "is quite poetic.
20 12 college entrance examination materials composition guidance training and model essay (2)
Read the following materials first and write as required.
With the company of dreams, the desert can rise to a green color, the blank space is full of a color, and it is full of vitality when it is lonely. With the company of dreams, the earth will be more vibrant, life will be more vivid, and the soul will get more comfort. With dreams, the future will be brighter.
What's your experience, experience or opinion about "walking with your dreams"? Please write an article with the theme of "Accompanying with your dreams" in your own style, with no less than 800 words.
[Writing Tips] "Dream" refers to a beautiful ideal. "With Dreams" should first talk about the significance of setting up a beautiful ideal in life, and then explain that once a person sets up a beautiful ideal, he should always use this "dream" and spiritual pursuit to demand himself, spur himself, motivate himself, and make himself move towards a beautiful goal forever.
Accompanying dreams
Chen Zhenhua
Dreams can bring us unlimited expectations and give us unlimited motivation. With the company of dreams, our life journey is no longer desolate, monotonous and lonely, but full of vitality everywhere and forever.
With our dreams, we will continue to work hard, make unremitting efforts and keep fighting. If we live in a dream, we will be very happy, but if we lack the motivation to rush to it, it will stay in the "hotbed" of fantasy forever and die in the wasteland of fantasy.
People who forge ahead towards their dreams often do not fear difficulties and make unremitting efforts, and finally climb the peak of success. Song Lian, a writer in Ming Dynasty, had a dream when he was a child. Because his family is poor, he always tries to borrow other people's books, then writes them down by hand and studies hard. He experienced many difficulties on his way to school, but all the difficulties didn't scare him. He didn't envy others' superior life, and insisted on reading for a long time, thus achieving himself and casting the glory of life. From the article "Preface to seeing Ma Sheng off to Yang" left by him, we feel the spirit of the hero's unremitting struggle and draw endless motivation from it.
Accompanied by dreams, Song Lian made the desert of life green; With his dream, China swimmer Zhang Lin also added luster to the motherland. Zhang Lin accompanied his dream. After very hard training and many failures, he never lost heart. Instead, he constantly smeared the color of hard work and unremitting struggle in his life, and finally he succeeded. At the 2009 World Swimming Championships, he improved the men's 800-meter freestyle world record by 6.53 seconds.
As you can imagine, if Song Lian is poor and has no conditions to study, he will be frugal and lament, and he will not have the motivation to make progress and become a great writer.
We can also imagine that if Zhang Lin gave up his dream, lost the courage to pursue his dream and didn't train hard because he saw that China had never won a world championship or an Olympic champion in men's swimming, then he certainly wouldn't have achieved such good results.
With dreams, through hard work, struggle and struggle, our world will be full of green and beautiful scenery; With the company of dreams, our life will be more lively, life will be more vivid and our hearts will be more comforting. With dreams, our life will always be full of sunshine!
[Teacher's comment] This article comes straight to the point, puts forward opinions and shows the author's distinct attitude. When discussing truth, consistently choose materials around the central argument and repeat examples. The forms of argumentation are diverse and profound. The author pays great attention to the requirements of writing, and the ending and beginning of the article are handled skillfully, which makes the article structured and integrated, showing a solid writing foundation.
Second, read the following text and write a composition of not less than 800 words as required.
People always want to travel to distant places. It seems that there are some things that can't be found around them in the distance, not only natural scenery and cultural resorts ... but also a dream, a spiritual destination and a yearning for the soul. What is near in life is reality, and what is far away is poetry. So distance is always like a sacred fire, burning in people's hearts. Therefore, we always look forward to the distance, full of the desire to fly our hearts.
Requirements: choose an angle to conceive the composition, independently determine the concept, determine the style (except poetry), and formulate the topic; Don't deviate from the content or beyond the meaning of the material, don't copy it, and don't copy it.
[Writing Skills] This is a new material composition test, and the given material is an article full of literary talent and philosophy. Read this material carefully, grasp its ideological attitude as a whole, especially the key words such as "distance, dream, home, flying soul", carefully ponder its connotation, summarize and integrate it. The idea of writing can be to fight for the ideal and never give up; Can be to abandon all worldly distractions, indifferent to fame and fortune, so that the soul will always be calm and peaceful; It can be to realize one's life goals, dare to break through all traditional concepts, emancipate the mind, blaze new trails and create new glories in life. ...
Flying soul
Zhou Tao
"I finally soared. I'm not afraid to stare with my heart. How far will I fly when there is wind ... "I was deeply moved by the faith conveyed in the song, and my impetuous heart was calmed down by it, and my broken heart flew into the sky through those wings. When a heart is scarred by disappointment, when the blooming flowers gradually shrink, when the beautiful moment suddenly ages the outline, when the body and mind feel tired in the busy life ... At this time, we might as well find ourselves a free sky, a quiet harbor, and let our hearts fly freely and breathe freely. At this time, you will find that the dull life is full of vitality everywhere, and the gloomy life actually implies beauty.
Letting go of the soul is the tranquility of Tao Yuanming's "picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely"; It is Li Bai's free and easy "five mountains are sacred mountains, and there is no distance, according to my unchanging habit in my life"; It is the atmosphere of Lu you's "making boats and snows at night, crossing melons and crossing continents, and the iron horse and autumn wind are scattered"; It is also the heroism of Yue Fei's hunger for pork and thirst for Huns' blood. Maybe you don't have Tao Yuanming's indifference and Li Bai's freedom, but you can have another world besides fame and fortune, let your heart soar in the free sky and gallop in the grassland of dreams, and you will have a pure land of mind.
Emancipate your mind, you can collect dew along the winding mountain road; You can walk on the soft beach and pick up bits and pieces of shells all the way; You can also watch a meteor pass by in the silent night sky, and the moment of wishing is eternity … too many things to do, too many roads to walk and too many roads to choose.
You don't need a lot of money, a year or so, and you don't need to think hard, you can set your mind free. All you have to do is stand by the window, listen to the beautiful rhythm of raindrops beating on the window and taste the eternal meaning of life. At this time, you will have no worldly troubles, and you don't have to be tired of trifles. At this moment, your heart has already spread its wings and soared in the dream sky!
The yellow sand has blown away the vicissitudes of the years, and camel bells are still ringing in the hearts of wanderers. But what blows down is the bitterness of tears, the hesitation of the heart, and the camel bell swings out a clean heart!
[Teacher's comment] This article has a clear theme, brilliant literary talent and passion between the lines. As far as the artistry of writing is concerned, this paper makes good use of the opening method of "entering the topic with beautiful articles" at the beginning, and the discussion at the end is not empty and vague, poetic and meaningful, and gripping.
Third, read the following text and write as required.
Mr Ji Xianlin is a famous contemporary thinker and writer. On one occasion, Ji Xianlin was a guest in CCTV's Lecture Room. When the host asked him how young people can have rich cultural accumulation and virtue cultivation, Mr. Ji Xianlin replied, "I don't know if there is a shortcut to this problem. In my opinion, learning to listen is the best choice. " After listening to Mr. Ji Xianlin's words, everyone present applauded and sighed.
What do you think after reading the above materials? Please write an article of not less than 800 words on the topic of "The Charm of Listening".
[Writing Tips] This is a new type of propositional composition given the introduction materials. First of all, look at the introduction materials, especially a passage said by Mr. Ji Xianlin, and we have an accurate idea. Second, when reading the composition topic, "listening" means listening to the teachings and philosophical enlightenment seriously and sincerely; The Charm of Listening is to explore the significance and wonderful use of learning to listen to the progress of life and the promotion of sentiment.
The charm of listening
Lu
Touch a mountain stream and listen to the flowers bloom and fall; A song of Song Like and a song of spring moon, listening to the sound of geese crossing; Ode to a March plum shadow and listen to bamboo incense; Sing a pioneering song and listen to camel bells in the desert.
What is the charm of listening? What's the use of listening? Friend, let me tell you quietly: because of listening, we can feel the comfort of nature; Because listening, we can appreciate the elegance of nature; Because of listening, the four seasons of life have exciting brilliance.
Blooming spring flowers
In spring, in the field, listen to the sound of everything reviving. When the ice and snow gradually melt, when the grass begins to sprout, when the wind blows through the Woods near the village, when the birds begin to chirp, when the flowers in spring begin to bloom, when the New Year bell begins to ring, time goes by ... all these come from the clear voice of God washing and cultivating everything in the world. As long as you listen attentively, you will hear delicate, gentle, beautiful, but irresistible vitality and tenacious bud throbbing and spring flowers arrogant and cold.
Summer dancing is charming.
In summer, on the bluestone path in Shan Ye, a water town, break the silence of dawn and listen to the lotus pond paved by streams. The sound of frogs and morning songs spread a beautiful picture for the lotus pond: burning agarwood and cooling off the heat. Birds call clear, intrude into the eaves. The leaves of Chuyang withered all night, the water was clear and round, and the wind and lotus rose one by one.
Friends, learn to listen, learn to listen attentively, and you will hear the passion of the red dragonfly on the lotus pond, the harmony between the red fish and the white lotus mussel, and the youthful vitality and elegance of the lotus swaying skirt.
Autumn rain trickles
Autumn, in front of my hometown window, listening to raindrops lingering in my ears. In such a bleak season, learn to listen, listen to autumn rain, listen to geese, listen to flowers, listen to autumn wind, and you will hear a kind of sadness, a kind of touch, and a kind of tearful eyes that have suffered setbacks. However, when the tears dry, you will hear hope and everything will flourish again. You see, the array is empty, and the soul is bound in the distance; You see, Jin Ju fights the cold, showing the fortitude of the brave.
Snow in winter
In winter, in the campus building, listen to the sound of snow falling outside the window. Looking back suddenly, in the depths of winter snow, you will hear the special rhythm and artistic conception of winter. Although cold and dignified, although silent and indifferent, quiet. Because of the heavy breathing of winter snow, impetuous dust will be filtered out, and a mature and wise one will overflow from the depths of winter snow and grow in people's hearts. Listen carefully again, the camel bells in the desert jingle, steady and heavy, which is the pioneering progress of people in the journey.
Learn to listen, listen attentively, listen to nature, listen to seasons, and listen to the rhythm and rhythm of life.
[Teacher's comment] This paper skillfully cuts into the topic "The Charm of Listening" with poetry and questioning skills. The main body of the article depicts four pictures of spring, summer, autumn and winter, which are integrated with the scenery and have profound implications. There are beautiful sentences at the end of the article and clever care at the beginning, which makes the structure of the article natural and worthy of being a masterpiece of lyric prose.