Please comment on this word, preferably in detail, and then what aspects should you pay attention to when commenting on calligraphy works?

That really depends on the original. It's easier to judge. This seems ok! It's just that some places that need light should not be too bright. That is to say, there are some places where the pen is not enough!

The evaluation of a calligraphy work can be carried out from the following aspects:

Calligraphy art is embodied in practical words, and whether it has charm and beauty is the most basic principle to appreciate calligraphy. The beauty of calligraphy is manifested in two aspects, namely, form and temperament. Reality (form and quality) is tangible and visible. Refers to the external form. It is mainly appreciated from the structure of line and frame, including pen, structure, composition and so on. Pen can be divided into delay, ups and downs, twists and turns; There is a difference between the front and back of a pen. The strokes are square and square, and they also pay attention to brushwork and gesture. The structure is odd and positive, and the density is different. The composition is expressed in the form of guest and host, reality, avoidance and coherent pulse lines. There are differences and complementarities between them. "emptiness" (temperament) is intangible, that is, it refers to the inner spirit. We must understand the author's personality and artistic style, including spirit, charm and artistic conception, from the treatment of lines and structural rules. "Reality" and "emptiness" are interdependent and mutually useful, and both * * * show the aesthetic value of calligraphy works.