Look at how the couplets of the ancient college entrance examination encouraged the candidates.

The first trick is to let the commentator fall in love at first sight-with a wonderful face and an ugly appearance, it is difficult to see the beauty of the soul in an instant. These four things are called "faces" of the article. Writing neatly refers to scribbling on the roll surface at will to reduce "barbed wire" and "mud"; Beautiful writing is clear, symmetrical and beautiful writing; Font specification refers to not writing typos, other words or coining words; The correct payment is that the index title, paragraph and signature position are appropriate, and the interlacing, top box and punctuation meet the requirements. These four items are the external forms of aesthetic objects and the first impression of the aesthetic. The charm produced by this external form can make people enjoy beauty directly. This "face" is clear and beautiful, and "looks like a beautiful woman" will make the reviewer fall in love at first sight, and the reviewer will also have a "preference" for your article in a happy mood. On the other hand, the "face" looks like an ugly woman, and the reviewers will feel bored and wonder: will people who have problems with their choice of words write good articles? Because their first impression is not good, even if your article is rich, they will not read it carefully. The marking teacher will look for the reduction factors in the test paper, not the highlights in the composition. Remember: ugly appearance makes it difficult to catch a glimpse of the beauty of the soul in an instant. College entrance examination is a large-scale comprehensive examination. From examination to marking, from marking to admission, work is linked one by one. As an intermediate link in marking papers, time is tight, tasks are heavy and requirements are strict. In addition, in addition to the collective marking of standard papers, other papers can only be operated separately. A person's score, plus the reviewer's marking, is to complete a test paper. From this perspective, the exam composition is written for the examiner. Because it is difficult to list items on paper, writing should be considered as a factor of comprehensive score from the new standard of composition score in 2000. The requirement of a good composition is that the font should look good. But in the process of composition grading, the impression given by a good "face" grader is very important; On the other hand, reviewers have a bad impression, and the level of composition also needs to be considered. Whether the writing style, writing style, font and lines can arouse the examiner's pleasure is also an important factor related to the success or failure of the composition in the examination room. Beauty is the trump card of love at first sight. The external physical charm of the article we emphasize is not to require candidates to be "moderate in heaven and earth, beautiful and elegant" like the calligraphy competition, but to be clean, correct, beautiful and standardized. Looking closely at the college entrance examination papers in recent years, there are many people who have failed in "scribbling". Some articles are scrawled and illegible; Some articles are scratched and covered with "spider silk"; Some paragraphs are difficult to distinguish, and different punctuation will cause different expression effects; Some are "while the dragon flies and the phoenix dances", and some are "buried in peace"; Some people, in order to save time, use a different word to replace the standard word at will, add and subtract pens at will, and even create new words to hinder the expression of content. There are two main reasons for these situations: first, insufficient attention is paid to writing, and writing is very casual, even the vision is quite vigorous, and scribbling is regarded as chic, more as maturity, and writing letters as conception; Second, because the examination room was tense, I lost my vigilance and was afraid that I was not satisfied. These are difficult to arouse the aesthetic desire of critics. Therefore, candidates are required to write in a standardized way, punctuate accurately, pay attention to the style, and carefully revise it, so as to make every effort to write accurately and fluently. In short, as long as the examinees pay attention at ordinary times and the examination room is calm, we can write neatly and beautifully, with standard fonts and correct lines, so that the external form of our article causes the reviewers' aesthetic pleasure with unique charm. Remember, beauty is the trump card for reviewers to fall in love at first sight. The second trick is to confide the truth to the reviewers-writing a composition with sincere feelings requires not only calmness and reason, but also passion and truth. Passion inspires. Passion makes wisdom, and true feelings make fine products. We often have this experience in our lives. When you are eager to convince the other party, a strong impulse will come up with many unexpected words, and you will be surprised afterwards. This is a strange passion effect. When writing, the excited mood must be healthy, and "mental health" is a clear requirement for writing in the exam instructions. Candidates should express positive thoughts and feelings in their compositions and resolutely abandon one-sided, negative and vulgar things. Some candidates just ignore the most important examination point of ideological quality, and show a bad tendency in the establishment of theme, the guidance of content and the positioning of emotional appeal. For example, 1998 college entrance examination composition, many candidates wrote how to find an excuse to instruct mom or dad to wash another shoe; Write how I forgive my mother's negligence and give her a chance to correct it: write how to borrow a pair of shoes or buy a new pair of shoes. This is a reflection of an idle mind that hates work. Many ideological problems are also exposed in the great works. Some are born tough or fragile and do not need to "pursue" or "overcome"; Some write complaints, spend most of their space telling how fragile they are, and only express their desire to overcome vulnerability at the end; Some wrote that the pursuit of tenacity or overcoming fragility is only for temporary needs and self-interest. Of course, such a composition is not a kind of article. The fundamental way to solve the above problems is to clarify the relationship between composition teaching and quality education. Composition teaching should not only attach importance to skill training, but also ignore ideological and emotional education. From the proposition point of view, the college entrance examination composition should continue to reflect the strong sense of participation in the construction of socialist spiritual civilization, continue to highlight the examination of the ideological content of the composition, continue to be close to the life reality and ideological reality of middle school students, and make the consciousness of attaching importance to the ideological content of the composition firmly take root in the hearts of teachers and students. 1, forget the grievances and leave the true feelings from the beginning. Emotion is the bridge between the author and the reader, and the calcium carbide that ignites the collision between the aesthetic subject and the object. In exam-oriented writing, only when candidates integrate their emotions into the composition materials, and use their true feelings to pluck the strings of the examiner's joy, anger, sadness and joy, so that "the aesthetic subject and the aesthetic object interweave and blend together to produce a * * * sound", will they produce a "moving" charm effect. On the contrary, there is bound to be a fate of seeking fish from the wood. 1989 college entrance examination composition, let teachers, parents and students write a reply to their friends about applying for professional advice. In the article, a candidate lashed out at the teacher, saying that the teacher only wanted personal fame and fortune, regardless of the students' future, and even used many inappropriate words. At that time, the marking teacher was disgusted at the sight of this volume, and it was too late to read it carefully. Some candidates approved in the blank space of the test paper: please continue to look down and look down carefully. This is not refueling, this is discouragement; Others are approved on the edge of the test paper: thank you, teacher! This is not a thank you, this is a verbal bribe, and now there is a bribe, not a good student. There are also students who write "notes" to make the teacher sympathize with him. It is not easy for him to go to school, and the exam is also difficult. This is a serious "overstaffing" component. 1980 college entrance examination, the test question is the feeling of reading, but a candidate approved a doggerel after writing it: "The teacher's topic is too biased, and the candidates scratch their ears and bite their pens. If they meet the teacher's face, they will not be soft in punching and kicking ",expressing a barbaric emotion in rude language." As a result, the marking teacher flew into a rage after reading it, and wrote on the student's test paper with a pen: "The teacher's questions are impartial, complaining that your boy is not professional, and before you meet the teacher, you will be awarded zero points and get out of here first." It can be seen that in the exam, the examinee's mood is contrary to common sense, which will inevitably cause the hatred of the marking teacher. Some students are confused, strange, complacent and narcissistic. For example, a candidate wrote in an article entitled "It is not difficult to see the following answer": "Nowadays, aboveboard things should be done in secret; Well-founded, there must be ghosts; Clear skies and daytime should be done when black people are quiet. On the contrary, stealing chickens and touching dogs should be aboveboard; You should do it with a clear conscience. If you don't see it, buy government bonds. As far as policy is concerned, ignorant people are wise, talented people are greedy, handsome people spend a lot of money, and civilized people are barbaric. " This examinee really looks at the society coldly and turns it into an article. Such words appear in the composition of the college entrance examination, which makes people really dare not compliment. Some candidates are vague and talk nonsense; It is absolutely unacceptable for teenagers to talk about right and wrong, subjectively and preconceived. You should know that all examiners are the most emotional teachers. They understand students and are the most considerate. Let's "forget the grievances, leave the true feelings and start from scratch". Candidates have to impress them with their true feelings in the text, so that they will understand us. Let's put the emotions of our candidates and examiners on the same track, collide with the spark of the soul, and merge into one, resulting in the effect of mutual resonance. 2. Sadness is also a touching song. A celebrity said: "The effect of tragedy is the most touching." Therefore, in the exam composition, "sadness is also a touching song." For example, in 1988, the examinee wrote a classmate named john young, who went to the fifth floor every day to visit a paralyzed girl named Cai Xia, carried her downstairs, pushed her to school in a wheelchair and told her stories, but Cai Xia had an accident. The author wrote: "But Cai Xia doesn't have time to stand up and pick up stars for john young, so she won't drag on john young's brother any more. She left against her will and left forever with an eternal apology. " "Years of habits, john young climbed to the fifth floor step by step, raised his hand and knocked on the door. He was shocked and burst into tears." That powerful hand can't knock out the usual three tones, as if to tell Cai Xia' I'm coming', but the habit is still there, and john young doesn't know what to do. Although the article was not written by the author himself, the author put himself in the position of speculating the activities and thoughts of the characters. The writing is sad, sincere and moving, and the reviewers are unconsciously influenced by the author's emotions. The article is rated as an excellent composition. What happens in society cannot be arranged according to the requirements of writing. We should learn to use intuitive thinking and set the situation for our own use. For the first time in A Dream of Red Mansions, a pair of couplets on both sides of the dreamland is: "When it is false, it is true, true and false, and nothing can be done." Reveal the subtle relationship between truth, falsehood, existence and nothingness from the perspective of philosophy. We don't emphasize writing what is necessary in life, but we can write what will happen in life. Feelings are created for feelings, not for feelings. 3, there is love in my heart, which makes the article soar. These phenomena often appear in the composition of the examination room: writing for the exam, speaking directly; Full of sighs ("ah" and "ah"), affectation; We should understand what Bai Juyi said-people who touch people's hearts, don't worry about their feelings first; Understand what Goethe said-there is no art without emotion. The article is ruthless. How can I impress 1998 college entrance examination composition "tenacity-the character I seek" and "overcoming fragility" There is a phenomenon that parents are waiting outside the examination room to take their children home, but the children have already decided their parents' divorce in the examination room, found out their serious illness and even sent them to heaven. In fact, we have longings, dreams, longings, feelings, love, confusion, distress, frustration, regret and hate in our hearts. It can be said that adolescent students, everyone's heart is complex, sensitive, subtle, fresh and free from secular contamination, as long as they dig, there will be a lot of room for expression. In fact, there is a kind of love in everyone's heart, and waves shine everywhere. This love is the river of the times, and these waves are also the flashes of social waves, because people's love and hate are influenced by the times and society. Candidates can only love what people love and hate what people hate. Only by playing the strongest voice of the times in exam-oriented writing can the examiner's voice be triggered.