Evaluate my concubine's works as if at home.

I want to say that the peony in the flower is like a pen, but I don't want to say it. Cloud childe feel the same way. However, the name of my comment has been decided. It's hard to say that Lotus, the son of Yun, is as holy as me, so I have to split up with my usual personality. Let's talk about our drifting away. The first person to appear in this game is just cannon fodder with one life left, and each name has a strange aura that blends with its own personality. Just like Shen Gongzi, I only think that the girl who came out of the hole is called Han Chu, which sounds better. Although it is wonderful that the cloud has no intention of coming out of the hole, the name of Chuhan has already penetrated into my heart, making people feel pity when they see this word. Dongzi Shen, a veteran lover, has excellent physical strength and fierce skills. However, in the early Han dynasty, it was a bit schizophrenic after repeated battles and defeats here. Generally speaking, women only lose their IQ when they are in love. This man seems to have no IQ when he is pursuing a secret love for a woman! Not only IQ, but also EQ, which can be regarded as a model of lightning speed. Dongzi Shen, are you swollen? I have a life here. Can I lend it to you? Chasing girls is no joke. I don't know who will bear the responsibility if one goes astray according to Dongzi Shen's route. Master Yun, it's good, but it's a little too fairy. Of course, this is just the beginning. Yun Gongzi hasn't written it yet, and there's nothing to stand on the opposite side of Miss Dong, causing conflicts. Unlike Shen Gongzi, he can be called a person who wants to do it without creating contradictions! Cloud childe's character image, but therefore less flesh and blood, a bit vague. I didn't say bloody, absolutely not! Every step of the cloud childe, I think of the little mermaid, the mouth of the cave can't say. Together, these two men became a classic written by Andersen. I feel sorry for myself again. I am the perfect candidate for blx and Bai Lianhua, and Tao Tao is full of sympathy. At present, the plot is developing. Is it the first orgasm of YunGongZi and Cave Girl? The confrontation with the Ming family in the previous paragraph was a good ups and downs, which made people feel a little dark. Instead, dying without regret is the happiest plot. Lao Tzu killed someone at the first level, and you refused? Refuse to accept the reincarnation of your next life! Jin Shen's thinness caused widespread discussion before, and then I saw this description today, which is very well written. When I saw the girl who described her slim figure, I felt that I was addicted to watching handsome guys look at other people's abdominal muscles. There is only one person, one word and one role. If the fonts are too similar, imitate them slightly. I think, I don't know who, sitting at home grinding a calligrapher with a pestle, turning a hundred jars of water at home into ink on paper, and writing is the most worrying thing. Speaking of thin gold, let me tell a joke. Forget it, stop joking, so as not to get a little annoyed. You want to judge a brick, but you are close. Others don't walk in the world by brick and tile, but I do. I just judge friendship by flowers and price by bricks. What brick do you want me to shoot, write demand, talk about planning and talk about price? We can give you an injection! Yes, I'll explain my poem by the way. In short, the whole poem is: men are unreliable. When you see a reliable one, follow it quickly! That's what I'm talking about. How many abandoned women are there, and how many can meet true love for the second time? Then, follow quickly! ! ! Big wedding! Big wedding! Big wedding! Big wedding! No action ...

How can plum blossom fragrance be without biting cold?

The more I get to the end of a short message, the more I feel scared. As the saying goes, "the hardest thing to do" is actually wrong. In my opinion, "the end is the hardest." It's hard to imagine a good-looking article without a complete ending. Many articles have fascinating beginnings and disappointing endings. This is a mistake that many authors have made. However, after reading Sin Luan Nie, I have great confidence in Yan Li's ability to control the ending, and I am also looking forward to the ending of Heart in Hometown. It is said that the last 200,000 words are left. According to the author's speed today, it is actually only one month. I'm going to say goodbye to my heart at home in a month, which is very sad and emotional. The advantages of Yan Li's prose are obvious, and everyone has mentioned it many times in their comments: such as beautiful written language, profound poetic skills, profound theme implication, meticulous plot design, outstanding personality description, meticulous psychological description, etc ... Everyone has praised it many times, so I won't elaborate here. I mainly want to talk about Yan Li's control over a complete text. If I remember correctly, Yan Li once said in a message that she couldn't write a novel and didn't know how to write it, because all the stories that should be explained were explained in the text. Many writers like to put the stories of supporting roles outside the norm. The first is afraid of affecting the main line, and the second is afraid of weakening the protagonist's scene. Of course, many people don't know how to integrate the story of the supporting role into the main line, so they put it outside the model for another narrative. However, in Yan Li's story, the supporting role and the protagonist are one. In a main line, the ending of the supporting role is also explained one by one, and the rest need not be written. This is actually a descriptive technique in the form of film and television dramas. In film and television dramas, the stories of supporting roles and protagonists go hand in hand, they happen at the same time and blend in the big story background. In fact, this is a skill that not every author can master. Many supporting roles in many online articles I have read have come and gone without a trace. The author grabs whoever he thinks, and there is no ending if he uses it. Or that is to say, the character's personality is off course and can't be linked before and after; Or the plot is contradictory, and the story of the supporting role is also confusing; In other words, the story of the supporting role is gradually separated from the protagonist, and finally it can only be explained by foreign sources. Seeing this passage about Shan Xin and Nie Qi, I can't help clapping my hands and admiring Yan Li's foresight, which is meticulous and long-term. Not long after Dan Xin appeared, I once vaguely felt that she was like Luan rewelding. At that time, I thought that the author preferred this kind of girl, so every article always wrote a glib girl. Finally, in the previous chapters, Nie Qi, who has become a genius emperor, said a word to Dan Xin: "You are like a human being." When I saw this sentence, I was aware of the author's thoughts. The whole 600,000-word foreshadowing gives this article a vivid ending for its first positive female match (note that it is "positive"), at least I think it should be a good ending. Judging from the fact that the author asked Nie Qi to walk on at the same time in "Deep Luan Nie" and "My Heart is Straight", the author should be biased towards Nie Qi, and this bias also gives me enough reason to believe that Dan Xin and Nie Qi will have new stories. This is a meticulous conception, a profound connotation, which can not only fuse the two texts together, but also develop a new intriguing relationship between the stories and characters that have ended. Unexpected, but reasonable, as if you went deep into the jungle and found that something unexpected happened. Anyway, there are many supporting roles in this article besides indifference, good and bad, dead and alive, and their endings have not yet appeared. Light rhyme, cloud imagination, Ming brothers and sisters, and what ... I believe that they all appear when the plot needs them, and I believe that the author will arrange their stories one by one, even if they leave a few strokes less, they will have a complete ending, which will be pleasant and serve the main plot. I once said that Sin Luan Nie is a man's story, and My heart is like a room is a woman's story. I'm not the only one in the comment area who thinks so. A reader in Taiwan Province Province also commented that "my heart is like a house". To some extent, this is a story that women are strong and men are weak. In other words, whether it is status or personality experience, the rise of men is not as fast as that of women. I experienced a lot of ups and downs when I left the cave. I have been abandoned, lost my beloved, kept my promise alone, supported my family and struggled with a group of pure men. And the stories of those supporting roles, while vivid and clear, are also setting off the protagonist and enriching the story of the protagonist. Xia Yanran's infatuation calculation was killed again; Yun Qi and Yan Yan are ambitious, but they think highly of themselves; The nondescript love between Yunxian and Siyi came to fruition. Taifuren from resentment to sincere acceptance; Ming brothers and sisters fell from high above to home; Lian Qi's marriage is just a form ... Some people cry, some people laugh, some people are happy, some people are unfortunate, and together with * * * form my heart at home. Yunci made me deeply sad, and Shen Yu made me deeply moved. I feel helpless for Nie Jiu and deeply sorry for Nie Qi. In this story, the theme of fate is more obvious and the meaning of growth is more profound. No matter the leading role or supporting role, it takes practice and practice to grow into an earth-shattering legend. If you don't freeze, you can't smell plum blossoms. Of course, they are legendary enough in Yan Li's works.