Don’t know how old you are? Overall, it's good, and the hard pen has a bit of a taste. It feels like they are similar in shape, but many strokes are not very similar in shape. For example, the dots and strokes of words such as Yong and Shui, and the curved hooks of words such as Liu, Qi, Feng, Tuo, etc. are not in place and are not "similar in shape". ".
From the whole article, your hands will probably get tired at the end, and the last six lines are quite different from the original work.
It is recommended that you continue to copy the original work stroke by stroke, and carefully copy the original work stroke by stroke two hundred times, and you will benefit greatly!