High School Entrance Examination Composition Guidance Techniques: Rebound Pipa
Wengui innovation, rebound Pipa - reverse thinking is an ideal means of innovation. The so-called "rebound Pipa" refers to avoidance in writing. Open the conventional thinking mode and conceive ideas from the opposite or opposite angle. The use of this technique can sometimes have the effect of turning stone into gold and turning decay into magic, thereby writing novel and unique articles.
For example, famous quotes, aphorisms, and idioms all have a certain philosophical meaning. However, many idioms and aphorisms are often said from a certain perspective. With the advancement of the times, people’s concepts are also changing. renew. We can think from a reverse perspective and come up with completely different new perspectives.
For example, "playing tricks in a class" has always been regarded as a synonym for someone who has little talent and little knowledge, so that he can show off his skills in front of experts. It is obviously a derogatory term and has been established for a long time (sometimes it is also used to express the self-effacement of capable people) . The world has always looked down upon those who are just trying to do anything. If we break the traditional consciousness and concepts and reflect on Pipa's original idea from a positive perspective of learning with an open mind, wouldn't it be innovative? We must learn art with an open mind. How can we recognize famous teachers without going to class? How can a skilled person show his skills if he doesn't "do whatever he wants"? How can I get the recognition of a famous teacher, gain admission to the class, and further my studies in the "class" to make my skills more extensive and profound? If Hua Luogeng, who was a humble person at that time, did not dare to "drag his ax" in front of Professor Xiong Qinglai, then head of the Department of Mathematics at Peking University - and wrote a high-quality mathematics research paper, how could he have entered the sacred hall of mathematics and become famous at home and abroad? famous scientist? How can a person who is not skilled in skills dare to "play an ax" in the master's sect and become the heir of the "class sect"? Therefore, "playing the ax" must go to the "class gate". There are many people at home and abroad who dare to "do whatever they want" in ancient and modern times. They not only inherited their master's skills, but also excelled in their skills, thereby creating splendid human civilization and promoting social progress and technological development.
Another example is "contentment and happiness" means that individuals should not be insatiable in their material life needs and desires for fame, fortune and status, but should stop in moderation. Often used as words of wisdom for admonishing others and for masturbation. If we break through the scope of this idiom and expand it to learning knowledge, work progress, ideal pursuit and career achievement, it is no longer applicable. To be content is to rest on one's laurels, to be satisfied with reality. Only by knowing your shortcomings can you make academic progress, develop your career successfully, and pursue your ideals with high spirits. If we are content with thousands of years of slash-and-burn farming, how can we have modern production? If you are content with living in caves and thatched eaves, how can you see skyscrapers towering in the sky? If you are content with swords, spears, arrows and halberds, how can mushroom clouds rise to the sky? Science and technology will develop only if we don't know enough, and society will progress if we don't know enough.
For a long time, people have formed relatively fixed views on the above similar propositions. If they are conceived from the perspective of the original meaning, they will definitely have the same meaning. If you think from the opposite angle and go against the traditional view, it will be refreshing.
Of course, reverse thinking must have "degree", and the rebound Pipa must not be "off the mark". You must not misinterpret the meaning of the question for the sake of establishing your own intention, deliberately seek novelty; or violate the truth, make irresponsible remarks, and praise or criticize at will; or ignore it. Right and wrong, blindly reverse the verdict.
Let's take a look at a topic "The Mid-Autumn Festival is full again"
This topic, written from the front, is nothing more than appreciating the moon and family reunion during the Mid-Autumn Festival. However, written in reverse thinking, the Mid-Autumn Festival Why can't we see the bright moon and the family can't be reunited? It can be written that the air pollution is too serious, the visibility is low, and the bright moon is difficult to see, and then the hot topic of environmental protection can be discussed; it can be written that due to busy official duties, job requirements, military duties, etc., the family members Unable to reunite, further celebrating the spirit of dedication. What needs to be noted is that there must be proper preparation. Writing this way can achieve an unexpected and reasonable effect.
[Appreciation of Examples]
New Theory of "Qi People Worry About Heaven"
"Liezi·Tian Rui" tells such a story: There was a man in Qi State who was worried about Heaven. After the collapse, he would have nowhere to hide, so he was so worried that he didn't sleep or eat all day long. Later, the idiom "unfounded worry" was used to describe unnecessary or unfounded worries. Anyone who hears this story will respond with ridicule to "Qi Ren", thinking that his behavior is absurd and hilarious.
Isn’t it? "Qi people" are ridiculed by the world for "worrying about heaven" and have become synonymous with " mediocre people", "fools" and "psychopaths". It is said that "there is nothing in the world, mediocre people bother themselves" and "Qi people worry about heaven when nothing happens" also.
However, when we focus on real life and look at today's serious environmental pollution problems, we have to complain about this "unfounded man" who is ridiculed by the world for "worrying about the world". The rapid development of modern science, such as the "ozone layer hole theory", "sunspot theory", "earth environmental resource crisis theory", etc., all prove that there is no permanent peace between heaven and earth. It can be said that the imagination of "Qi Ren" that the world will collapse is not only reasonable, but also quite forward-thinking. From this point of view, it is a historical misunderstanding that "unfounded worries" have become an eternal joke.
If we look at "Qi Ren" with modern people's thoughts and concepts, his "worry about the world" can be called "preparing for danger in times of peace", and he has a strong sense of worry. This spirit should be appreciated by us. affirmation and praise. And those who have the mentality of "if the sky falls, others will bear it", "it has nothing to do with themselves, hang it high", and "everyone sweeps the snow in front of their own door, regardless of the frost on other people's tiles", and "Qi Ren" In comparison, it does lose the identity of modern people.
Look at some people around us. They clearly know that running a factory must deal with waste water, waste gas, and waste residue, but they are reluctant to spend money to treat these "three wastes." As soon as the factory started operating, the environmental pollution problems were fully revealed: the fresh air in the past changed its smell; the blue sky and white clouds disappeared; the fish and shrimps in the ponds and rivers disappeared; in the clear night sky, the stars were blocked by dark clouds... These people , based their personal interests at the expense of the human living environment. They don’t know that human beings only have one earth, which is the home that each of us depends on for survival. Without it, how can we survive? Therefore, we should indeed have some "unfounded" sense of worry.
At present, environmental protection has become a worldwide national action. Let us have a more "unfounded" sense of worry, worry about the sky and the earth, and protect the homeland on which we live - the earth!
Comments:
This is an argumentative article written in the form of a "topic composition". The author adopts a reverse thinking method, "rebounding the pipa", and elaborates on an opposite thesis from the idiom "alarming people worry about the sky": "a new theory of the idiom "alarming people worry about the sky", which is an ancient saying that is used today, full of personality and creativity. The article's selection of materials is novel, its conception is ingenious, its arguments are sufficient, and it is persuasive. It provides warnings and lessons to people after reading it.
[Student Work]
Pain blooms with beauty
Luo Fangqing
The meaning of life does not lie in eternal enjoyment, but in the painful experience Finally, the eternal beauty blooms. ——Inscription
The eagle is the emperor in the sky. It flutters its wings and makes people awe-inspiring. But who knows how much pain and torture the eagle has endured! When the young eagles can just poke their heads out of the nest, their mother puts them on the edge of the cliff and pushes them down. The young eagles that have not yet fully grown their feathers fly upward with all their strength. Of course, those that cannot fly will be killed. Thrown to death. What's more painful for the young eagles is yet to come; the mother eagle breaks their wings and then pushes them off the cliff again. When the last eagle flies up from the cliff, it will have plump feathers and stronger wings. It will be the overlord of the vast sky, roaring loudly, swallowing up mountains and rivers!
The eagle endured endless pain in the first half of its life, but in the second half of its life, everyone is amazed by its charm and compelling momentum!
Yes, pain blooms with beauty!
I watched the TV program "Moving China". The characters in it made me truly feel the beauty of the world. I was even moved to tears. Wei Qinggang showed his true colors as a hero when he jumped across the sea; Tai Lihua embodied the magnificence of human nature in silence; Huang Boyun "returned to the country for thirty thousand miles and sharpened his sword for twenty years"... They all showed all the beauty of human nature after countless pains. And the climax, I remember Hong Zhanhui said: "The experience of suffering is not our capital to win sympathy, struggle is the most important." The reason why he can grow from an unfortunate child to a man who cannot be defeated by suffering, I believe he must I have experienced pain that others cannot imagine.
The reason why they moved us was not because of their current achievements and fame, but because of their painful experiences that made people cry.
Yes, pain blooms beautifully!
In life and in study, those who dare not face pain are not only a fragile person, but also a person who has been eliminated by society. Then your life will be dim and ultimately in darkness. Finish.
Remember! Pain blooms with beauty. Perhaps the more pain you have in your life, the more beautiful your life will be.
Comments:
The biggest advantage of this article is the reverse idea, rebounding Pipa. People yearn for success and appreciate beauty. Who wants to suffer failure and pain? The author of this article can view the value of pain dialectically. Surprisingly new and eye-catching! Furthermore, the article has a clear point of view and strong logic. It uses a combination of facts and principles to make the article very convincing and infectious. The title is concise and clear, points out the main idea, and leads the whole text at a glance. The title is the content of the article. Highly summarized, it appears repeatedly in the article, creating a loop and making the article compact and powerful!
A letter to Winter
He Xinyan
Dong:
Hello! Your messenger, Qiu, has told me the news that you are coming to the earth as a guest, and I am looking forward to your arrival. I remember that when you came last time, you also brought your friends. We played together, and the snow fell quietly on the branches. We played hide and seek on the branches. Sometimes we ran to the branches, and sometimes we hid under the dead leaves, which annoyed the little ants. Shouting disturbed its sweet dream. You brought Feng, the makeup artist, too, right? Look, she ran among the branches and put a pure white silver dress on the tree, and the tree happily nodded to her to express thanks. She jumped up and down with joy, and even pulled the hats of pedestrians to celebrate with her. How naughty! Later, the snow and the wind met together, and they discussed how to play tricks on people. No, they suddenly got into my sleeves when I wasn't paying attention. When they saw me, they exclaimed. They laughed even more and ran to play tricks on me again. Later, the little snail complained to you that its house was blown down by the wind. You brought Feng back again and pointed out her mistake. Feng also knew that she was wrong, so she went to find the little snail to apologize. There was no wind, and the snow fell lightly from the sky. I stretched out my hand, and a small piece of snow fell on my hand. It melted in an instant, and lay quietly in my hand, and fell asleep. Look at the distance again, hey, Dong, you are so amazing, you must be the master of the wind, otherwise the earth would be covered with silver, forming a white world. Is this your dream? Create a unique white world - your world.
Dong, good friend! If you come, will you bring the wind and snow? Bring them here, without them you will lose your glory. A person needs friends. However, next time you bring them here, tell them not to be naughty again, otherwise I will punish them. Dong, when you come, the world will have one more color, one more joy, and one more hope.
Wish: good health
Happiness
Your good friend
Comments:
Article The title is "A Letter to XX". The young author went against the norm and broke out of the conventional ideas that most students write to their parents, teachers, friends... and found a new way to write a letter to "Winter". The language is very poetic and the idea is novel, which is really rare for an eighth grade student.
On strengths
Hu Yanmei
If you say that you suffered some failure because of one of your shortcomings, you will definitely not refute it. But if your strengths also bring you disaster, you will definitely not agree. In fact, strengths do not necessarily bring luck to people.
We all learned the story of Mr. Dong Guo and the Wolf in elementary school. Mr. Dongguo in the story is a good man with a bodhisattva heart. When he saw a fleeing wolf, he couldn't help the wolf's pleading. He was so kind that he helped the wolf avoid the hunter's pursuit. But his kindness almost cost him his life: after the hunter left, the wolf insisted on eating him. Kindness is undoubtedly a person's moral advantage, but this advantage did not bring luck to Mr. Dongguo, but disaster. Fortunately, the farmer arrived in time and wisely got rid of the evil wolf, so the kind-hearted Mr. Dongguo survived. It seems that if the advantage is used in the wrong situation, it may harm yourself.
Zhuge Liang was a well-known figure during the Three Kingdoms period. In order to complete the great mission entrusted to him by Liu Bei, he "dedicated himself to death until he died." His diligence and prudence were one of his great strengths, but this strength of his was sometimes overused: "Everything must be done by hand." He was involved in all matters, big and small, and eventually passed away at the age of fifty-four due to overwork. If he does not overuse his strengths, does what he should do by himself, and does what his subordinates should do, he might be able to live for a few more years, and the Shu Kingdom will not perish so quickly.
As the saying goes: “If the trees are beautiful in the forest, the wind will destroy them.
"Show" is the strength of that tree, but "show" is likely to bring "wind" intrusion to that tree. As the saying goes: "Most people who drown are those who know how to use water." "Being able to swim is a person's strength, but this strength also provides more opportunities for drowning. There is an idiom that goes like this: "He who plays with fire will burn himself." "A person who plays with fire must be a person who understands fire. This can be said to be one of his strengths, but the final result is likely to be attacked by fire.
From this point of view, the strength is really a It is a double-edged sword. When one side of the sword is pointed at the enemy, the other side is pointed at yourself. Therefore, students must not think that they can show off their strengths everywhere. When it comes to your own strengths, you must be like a sword: learn to use the sharp edge facing the enemy, but also be careful about the sharp edge facing yourself!
Comments:
This article is an argumentative essay with a novel perspective. Usually people only see the advantages of strengths, but ignore that the strengths themselves also have shortcomings. The article puts forward the object of discussion in the title, and briefly explains what the world has learned about the strengths and weaknesses. The author first uses the story of "Mr. Dong Guo and the Wolf" to say that "kindness" is a person's moral advantage. When the situation is wrong, it may harm yourself; Zhuge Liang, who is admired by the world, has brought bad consequences to himself and the country because of his excessive use of his strengths. He used two examples to make a strong argument. The author also quotes common sayings to demonstrate his argument. In the last paragraph, he puts forward the argument that strengths are a double-edged sword and warns everyone to use their strengths correctly. The article has a clear focus, rigorous structure, and powerful persuasion. A relatively successful argumentative article.
An unforgettable lesson
Li Shuang
I haven’t been home for two weeks since school. At a sprinting speed, I grabbed the bag I had prepared and rushed to the bus stop. Schools in the county were closed today, and there were many people on the bus. I used my small body and flexibility to squeeze in and out of the crowd. After a while, I squeezed into the car. It was great that there was still a seat!
The seat was right next to the door. Although everyone who got on the bus could touch me, I still felt something unspeakable. It's cool. I can finally relax and don't have to be as nervous as in class.
People are still rushing to the car. Who doesn't want to go home? The students are in the city to do things. , I still have farm work at home. The bus is packed back to back, and it is seriously overloaded. But the bus owner is still standing under the bus and shouting: "People at the door, go inside, there is room inside." Come on, come on, come on! "I saw a sister-in-law who was holding a child being pushed up, and then several students were stuffed into the car. There was really no room for anyone in the car. Finally, the car owner got into the car sideways and reluctantly closed the door.
It was cold outside, but it was very hot inside, mixed with various smells, and there was a suffocating feeling. Perhaps because of discomfort, the child in the sister-in-law's arms cried loudly. I had no intention of stopping. It was too crowded and my sister-in-law was standing next to me. I thought to myself: Should I give up my seat? It’s not appropriate. Let’s give it up for two weeks. I woke up early and was tired at night. I made up my mind not to give in. I care about others, but someone from behind shouted: "Sister-in-law, come and take my seat." "I looked back and saw a young man in his twenties. But the crowd was so crowded that my sister-in-law couldn't get through. Seeing this, the girl sitting next to me stood up. The moment she stood up, I noticed that she She was actually using a cane! She was very close to my sister-in-law, but she refused to sit down. I blushed, but I still didn’t want to stand up. I said, “Sister-in-law, let me hold the baby for you. "The sister-in-law handed the child to me. Maybe the child was afraid of strangers, or maybe the child was really hungry. He cried louder in my arms. I heard someone saying: "Young people can't stand for a while! "I was hurriedly handing the baby to my sister-in-law. The old man standing next to my sister-in-law also spoke: "Classmate, don't blame me for telling you that you can't just stand for a while and let my sister-in-law feed the child." Don't just think about your own comfort. If I only thought about myself, I would have asked for a seat for you. The seat you are sitting on originally belonged to me. If you don't believe me, look at there is something under the seat. When I went down to get my things and came back, the seat was taken by you. "I stretched my head and looked under the seat, and there was indeed a bag. I didn't know what to say, so I stood up in a panic and asked my sister-in-law to sit down. The child was really hungry. After eating the milk, he fell asleep.
The car suddenly became quiet, but the words the old man just said echoed clearly in my mind. At some point, the sister-in-law and the old man changed places, and the child was sleeping soundly in the old man's arms...
More than a year has passed since this car ride, but the old man taught me a life lesson , I still remember it vividly, it is better than any class I have ever taken in school.
Comments:
When it comes to "one lesson", our minds often think of the four corners of the classroom, the teacher's lectures, and the students' answers. However, the author of this article broke the convention, found a new way, and grasped the big classroom of life. Therefore, the intention was naturally different and one level higher.
[Writing Examples]
Wang Xizhi practiced calligraphy hard
Wang Xizhi loved calligraphy since he was a child. He practiced hard for decades and finally perfected his calligraphy art. He reached the peak of extraordinary elegance and was hailed as the "Sage of Calligraphy".
When Wang Xizhi was 13 years old, he accidentally discovered that his father had a calligraphy book called "Shuo Bi" in his possession, so he stole it and read it. His father was worried that he would not be able to keep the family heritage secret at a young age, and promised to teach it to him when he grew up. Unexpectedly, Wang Xizhi knelt down and asked his father to allow him to read now. His father was very moved and finally agreed to his request.
Wang Xizhi practiced calligraphy very hard, even eating and walking. He really practiced calligraphy all the time. Without pen and paper, he just scratched on his body. Over time, his clothes were scratched. Sometimes I practice calligraphy to the point of forgetfulness. Once, when he was practicing calligraphy, he forgot to eat. When his family brought the meal to the study, he dipped the steamed bun in the ink and ate it without thinking, and found it very delicious. When the family found out, their mouths were full of black ink.
Wang Xizhi often wrote in the pond and washed his inkstones in the pond. After a long time, the water in the pond ran out of ink, so it was called "Mochi". Now there are scenic spots called "Mochi" in Shaoxing Lanting, Zhejiang Yongjia Xugushan, Lushan Guizong Temple and other places.