To tell you the truth, I think this cow word on the original tablet is quite ugly. Really stupid like a big stupid cow. The whole word is stupid, and every stroke is heavy. Comparatively speaking, I prefer the example sentences that Mr. Mi Chang showed us in class. You can compare it.
However, Master Mi said that we must study the original tablet strictly, so I still analyze it with the cow's word of the original tablet. I think we should pay attention to the following points when writing this word well. The first is to highlight the main pen. Every word has a main pen, and the main pen should be the most eye-catching part of the word. For this cow character, the main pen is obviously the hanging needle in the middle. The hanging needle of the original monument cow suddenly became thicker when it was semi-upright, which should be caused by the damage of the monument surface. The edge of this pen should be smooth and regular (refer to the cow written by the teacher Mi Chang on the right). The second is to press the pen when collecting the pen horizontally. In calligraphy, horizontal lines are not as straight as vertical lines, and are generally written on the right. The last point is very important. Without this button, horizontal painting will be out of balance. This pressing force should not be too strong or too weak, and it should have a sense of balance with the pen. The third is the intersection of vertical painting and horizontal painting. Pay special attention to the relationship between vertical painting and long horizontal painting, and count one-third from the right. This golden section rule can be found in most Chinese characters.
I wrote this cow-shaped pen with a hanging needle, and I never overcame the sharp problem. I estimate that writing a little thicker may ease it, and I will share it after practicing for a while. Moreover, this shaft is too long, and it almost touches Tian Zige, so we should try to avoid it in the future. In addition, the position of the second picture is to the right, and the overall structure should be better at one third.