Zhuzhici rewrote the composition by 400 words.

1. Zhi Zhu Ci (Liu Yuxi) was rewritten into a composition (300) At the foot of Baidichengtou and Baiyan Mountain, local people came and went, singing local folk songs and living like a duck to water. However, the poet is a northerner, but he was driven here. Look at this situation, he has a special taste in his heart.

Qutang Gorge is one of the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River. Surrounded by mountains on both sides, it is in the most dangerous situation with fast-flowing water. It was called "Qutang is in danger for the world" in ancient times. There are rocky shoals in the gorge, and there is a "mound" at the mouth of the gorge, which is a huge stone beach. "There are twelve beaches in Qutang, and people say that it is difficult to learn from ancient times", which depicts the dangerous situation of Qutang Gorge. "Noisy", the sound of running water on the beach. "Twelve beaches" is not an exact number, but it is conceivable that there are many dangerous beaches.

In the face of the stormy and dangerous Qutang Gorge, the poet can't help but associate the danger of Jiangxia with the human feelings of the world at that time: "I often hate people's hearts like water and make waves at leisure. Qutang Gorge is dangerous because there are dangerous beaches in the water, and the world's "leisure level" will also make waves. Isn't it impossible to prevent? What "human heart" is more dangerous than Qutangxia water. This is the poet's heartfelt emotion. After Liu Yuxi failed to participate in Yongzheng reform, he was repeatedly framed by villains and hit by powerful people, and was exiled twice for 23 years. The bitter experience made him feel that the world was difficult and dangerous, so he made this cynical remark. The long-term hatred shows the poet's deep resentment against those who are used to making waves, making trouble and framing innocent people. It is said that the danger of Qutang is mentioned by "human words", which means that everyone knows it; The danger of sighing people's hearts is brought out by "long hatred" The subject is the poet himself, who points out his own human feelings and world situation in real experience and observation, and clearly expresses his attitude towards it. There is a turning point and depth between the two sentences. Qu Tang is a sinister metaphor for people's hearts, a transition from people saying I hate them, a clever metaphor and a concrete and abstract truth, which gives people a profound feeling.

2. Zhi Zhu's Rewriting Prose Bai Di is located on Bai Di Mountain near the Yangtze River. The word "health" says that Baicao appears in the second place according to the line of sight. The family is beautiful, but the homesickness is mighty, and each has its own beauty.

"A Song of Southerners" wrote that local people sang loudly with the clear water of Woong San as the background. Although this sentence does not directly write the content of the song, it is very pleasant, but because of one.

One of the beauty of the whole poem is that the verbs are vivid and the pleasing characters are outlined by line drawing. The third sentence.

On the shore of spring, strangers on the road were infected by that song, which caused homesickness. This sentence should be the main theme of the whole poem, and the son of Green Yang Liuzhi is rippling with the spring breeze. The mountains are high, the grass is green and the water is clear. Of course not affectionate. Due to the changes of social history and the influence of the author's personal thoughts, his works can be roughly divided into three types. The road is sunny but sunny, and the west is really rainy, so it is not sunny. "Northerners" are strangers. Spring is magnificent and beautiful, the songs on the shore are endless, and the grass on the edge of the city is full of vitality. "Come up" can be understood as "climb to a high place" or "come out", no matter how to explain it. "White Salt Mountain to Shu Qingjiang" was written in a low-lying place. Shujiang refers to a section of the Yangtze River at the foot of Baiyan Mountain, over which immortals fly. The beautiful scenery of spring highlights the vigorous feelings of local people who are not unhappy, and also highlights the meaning that strangers are not here, killing two birds with one stone. This kind of literature is very popular, and it has also been dubbed "Zhuzhi Ci"! (sunshine-can also-love ~ This kind of love can also be written as girls' admiration for May ~)

Zhi Zhu Ci is a poetic style evolved from the ancient folk songs between Bashu and Sichuan. In the Tang Dynasty, Liu Yuxi turned folk songs into literati's poetic style, which had a great influence on later generations. In the long historical development of Zhi Zhu's Ci, the description of homesickness is characterized by rivers and mountains and endless spring grass, but he is just in a hurry. Suddenly, he didn't want to appreciate it. The fourth sentence, use local songs to contrast the homesickness of strangers. Meanwhile. To the east is sunny Wan Li, stroking the calm river from time to time. When I heard my brother by the river sing a song, the image of being infatuated and unable to control himself came to my mind. Grass is fine because of the city; These three categories are all seven-character quatrains written in Zhi Zhu's ci style.

Sunrise in the east, rain in the west, but the sun, singing full of emotion. The local people stopped to listen to a high song. In this turn, they wrote about the widespread reproduction of hundreds of plants.

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Appreciation of Liu Yuxi's Nine Poems of Zhi Zhu (Ⅰ)

Spring grass grows at the head of Baidicheng,

Baiyanshan Mountain falls under Qingjiang River.

Southerners come up to sing a song,

Northerners are unfamiliar with their hometown.

"Nine Poems on Bamboo Branches" is a folk song-style Yuefu poem praising local customs, and it is the first poem in "Nine Poems on Bamboo Branches".

Write a sentence or two about the beauty of mountains and rivers. "Spring grass grows in the head of Baidicheng" is about height. Spring has arrived, and the whole city is covered with grass. The word "move" in the fourth sentence is even more vivid: one is the folk songs collected and preserved by literati: the river is clear and reflected in the sky, with a towering white salt mountain as the background and mountains and rivers set each other off.

Third, the meaning is long and indirect, and the realm is lofty. The poet's third sentence, from scenery to people, made him feel excited; The second is that the literati absorbed and integrated the essence of Zhi Zhu's ballads and created a poetic style with strong folk songs. A word "move" describes the appearance of a northerner, causing readers to sing again.

Secondly, a scene serves two purposes, setting off characters and magnificent scenery, so readers can naturally appreciate the beauty of singing.

Tang Yuxi's four words: a pen turns and a bamboo branch turns

Willow trees are green and rivers flow smoothly;

Sunny weather, 400 words to rewrite the composition. It is urgent. Autumn has come, the sky is getting higher and higher, and the air is much fresher. That's right.

Ye Shasha sand fell to the ground. We walked on the road with leaves and heard the sound of rustling sand. Deep in the mountain, watching the red sunset fall from the other side of the mountain. The surrounding clouds are red, as if they had been dyed by the sun. In the countryside, watching the light smoke from the farmhouse chimney fly gently into the sky, it must be that the farmhouse is preparing a sumptuous dinner. On the broad mountain village road, many trees withered, and crows in twos and threes called out sad voices on the dead branches. This vilen is even more desolate.

Red leaves fall on the ground, the mountains are blue, the water is green and transparent, and the grass in Yuan Ye has withered, but some Hollyleaf are still green, and yellow chrysanthemums are everywhere! Ah, what a beautiful autumn scenery!

This is not Qiu Si. .

4. Drunk Hua Yin adapted a 400-word composition. If you practice, Qinghui will sprinkle cold air on the earth and suddenly add a little sadness to some lonely earth. The whole attic is shrouded in a veil-like mist, and the attic seems to be looming in the air.

I tried to pluck the strings, but I thought you weren't around. "I want to give my heart to Yao Qin, but I don't have many bosom friends. Who listens to the strings? " I can't bear to let the beautiful piano sound break this lonely and sad night. Even if it is broken, it only makes the night less lonely and sad.

The bright moon is in the sky, I wonder if you are also looking forward to the moon at this time. ...

Drink with the moon

I still remember, with my husband, you played chess and had tea in the study. Every time I win, there is always a look of shame and sigh on your face, which makes my wife have more love, and then you look happy. Your wife made me tea. The moon is still there, but people are not. The tea was cold and boring, leaving only a cup of bitter wine, which made me forget my sadness.

When you left that day, your eyes looked at each other and you didn't choke. This jade attic locks me, why can't it lock my heart? Watching you, walking slowly, persuading and singing, people didn't stop. There is a cold liquid gently sliding across my face, but I clearly remember my peerless face blooming like a flower. ...

At the beginning of the night, a thin figure under the moon is having a drink. In the mellow alcohol, I opened my eyes and watched you come to me slowly, stroking my hair and calling me "Zhao Er" softly. I smile like a flower and reach out to hug you, but my hand is just a mass of alcohol. I feel the moonlight covering me like ice, and I feel extremely cold.

How can a person get a sad word when he looks at the moon and laments?

Lying in a jade pillow account

In the middle of the night, the coolness is even worse. I lay on the jade pillow on the dresser, only feeling the cold coming. In the moonlight, I saw that I completely plucked my eyebrows. I looked at the peeping moonlight outside the window and asked softly, "Are you alone with me tonight?"

5. Rewrite a 400-word article for Wang Lun. On a sunny morning, a man in a robe and a scholar's hat was standing on a boat and looking at the beautiful scenery in front of him. This man is Li Bai, a famous poet in the Tang Dynasty.

Suddenly, there was a trampling song on the shore, and then Wang Lun, a good friend of Li Bai, appeared. As soon as Li Bai saw Wang Lun, he went up to meet him. Wang Lun patted Li Bai on the shoulder and said, "Why did you leave quietly without saying hello? If I hadn't found out earlier, I'm afraid I wouldn't see you now. "

Li Bai said shyly, "I am a person who values brotherhood. I didn't want to see my brother sad about his brother's departure, so I wrote you a farewell letter, but you found out so early. "

Hearing this, Wang Lun quickly grabbed Li Bai and said, "Brother Li, why did you leave so soon? Why don't you stay at my brother's house for a few more days? Brother Li, are you coming? "

Li Bai said awkwardly, "It's not that I am ungrateful, but that I have lived in my brother's house for many days. You are so hospitable that I am embarrassed to stay any longer."

Wang Lun still wouldn't give up, and quickly said, "Li Ge, you have nothing to do at home anyway, just stay in my house for a few more days!" Seeing that Li Bai had not made up his mind, Wang Lun went on to say, "Is there anything wrong with my younger brother?" Brother, what do you have to hide? "

Seeing that Wang Lun misunderstood him, Li Bai quickly replied, "It's not your fault. If it is wrong, it is still my fault. I am a person who likes to travel everywhere, thus forming the habit of being at home all over the world. I have stayed at my brother's house for so long, and it's time to go home. "

After hearing what Li Bai said, Wang Lun showed a sad look on his face. Li Bai looked at the sky and said, "Brother Wang Lun, it's getting late now. You'd better go home. I should go, too. "

Seeing that Li Bai couldn't stay, Wang Lun said affectionately, "Well, see you later."

So, the two shook hands on the spot to say goodbye. Standing on the boat, Li Bai looked at the affectionate Wang Lun and recited a poem: "Li Bai was about to go boating when he suddenly heard the singing on the shore." Peach Blossom Pond is deeper in thousands of feet than in Wang Lun. "

6. Rewrite A Gift for Wang Lun. Rewrite A Gift for Wang Lun with a narrative of more than 400 words.

"To Wang Lun" [Tang] Li Bai

Li Bai was just about to leave when he heard a farewell song from the shore.

Even if the Peach Blossom Pond is deep, it is not as deep as Wang Lun's sending away my love. The next morning, Li Bai received a letter from Wang Lun, which wrote:

Brother Li Bai, I know my brother likes traveling. Peach blossoms are ten miles here, and my brother tastes better. There are ten thousand restaurants here. Brother, if you are free, you can take a walk in Xiaodi Villa.

Wang Lun

"ha! Can you not go to such a good place? All right! Go! " Li Bai packed his luggage and rolled over to get on the horse. Here we go.

A few days later, we arrived. Wang Lun stepped forward immediately. Li Bai asked, "Brother Wang Lun, where is this Peach Blossom Pond?" "I'll show you around this place." "'a place'?" "Oh!" Wang Lun got the message. "Here, there is a peach blossom pool ten miles away." "That' Wanjia Restaurant' won't be a restaurant opened by thousands of families!" "My brother is so right." Knowing Wang Lun's good intentions, Li Bai settled down in this small village.

A few days passed. Li Bai suddenly remembered his agreement with Mei's brother, and it was time to go. But Wang Lun has been very kind to Li Bai these days. Li Bai can't bear to say goodbye to him face to face, so he is ready to leave quietly.

The next morning, Li Bai left a letter and went to the lake alone to wait for the boat.

A few hours later, the ferryman came. Just as Li Bai was preparing to leave the boat, he vaguely heard someone singing, clapping and neat footsteps on the shore. I went with authority-I saw Wang Lun singing in his head, followed by villagers clapping their hands and stepping on their feet.

"Brother Li Bai!"

"Wang Lundi!"

Two affectionate calls made everyone cry.

The two men looked at each other for a long time, and their reluctant feelings touched everyone's heartstrings.

But in the end, no one left anyone.

Li Bai is gone. When Wang Lun came home, he saw the letter "to Wang Lun".

(I wrote it myself, and it is expected to be deleted)