2, the beginning is concise and to the point
3. The beginning of the article is novel and serves as a warning. Let readers have the impression of … as soon as they meet.
The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.
5. The language of the article is vivid and readable.
6, the beginning is extraordinary, attracting readers.
7. The beginning is touching and has a real feeling.
8. The beginning of the article is very clear, which plays a leading role in the full text.
9. The choice of articles is novel, which arouses readers' desire to read.
Synthesis process:
1, full of passion, describing ...
2, focused, detailed and appropriate, specific content.
3. The metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid.
4. The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life and friendly to read.
5 ... tell us in a relaxed and happy tone, which is unforgettable.
6. The narrative is natural and vivid, with compact structure, coherent connection with nature and prominent center.
7. For the description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is touching the scene, and the scene is naturally integrated.
8. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off.
9. This article is lyrical in narration.
10, make full use of the combination of static and dynamic writing, supplemented by metaphor, personification and other techniques.
1 1. The author observes carefully and narrates orderly.
12, the use of some subtle words invisibly adds a lot of interest to the article.
13, the article is elegant, fluent and coherent, especially the characters' language is humorous.
14, the article is reasonable in imagination,
15, through vivid language description, let readers feel like they are in a dream.
16, the article has clear clues and prominent themes, closely surrounding …
17, the details are quite clever. Extremely rich in skills.
18. It is a major feature of this article to describe the characters' language, demeanor and movements in detail.
19, delicate description, strong life breath, accurate and vivid words and sentences.
20. The language is accurate, vivid and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and specific.
2 1. The story is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their identity characteristics.
22. The article comes from life, so although the language is not so beautiful, it is really interesting and well written.
23. This article makes ... detailed.
24. The language is lively and interesting.
25. A lot of spoken English in life makes the article more natural and friendly.
End of synthesis:
1, the ending is just right, the center is clear, the language is concise and profound, and it is thought-provoking.
2, use the feeling switch, ending with feeling. In this way, the article is coordinated from beginning to end, and the theme of the article is repeated, which is very infectious.
3. The praise for the characters at the end is sincere and touching.
4. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing.
5. Focus on the end to express emotions, give consideration to the beginning, and summarize the full text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.
6. The vivid description of details reveals the inner world of the characters in a beneficial way, which is the success of this paper.
7. The article ends with …, which is concise and full of charm.
8. At the end of the article, the central sentence is really clear, and the conclusion is short and powerful.
9. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm. Words are done, meaning is still unfinished.
10, the poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read, love to read, and can't bear to let go.
1 1. Although it is a trivial matter, it is vividly described by the author, and the indispensable ending highlights the theme of the article.
12. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching.
13, the end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
14, ending in …, clear and meaningful.
General comments:
1, the article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, but it can be detailed and focused.
This article fully and appropriately exaggerates the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the key points of the article.
3, ... practical, contains simple and profound philosophy, exciting and emotional to read.
This article is full of passion. Between the lines, we can understand the little author's love for …. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.
5. The case narrative is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is in line with the previous metaphor. Finally, the author expressed his feelings for … in a few words, which is touching.
6. The article is well organized and forms a complete image.
7. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can grasp the main features of things, and the length is short and pithy, which is worth reading.
8. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.
9. The article is meticulous, orderly, vivid and concrete, which is a masterpiece.
10, the close-up is unique and interesting. The full text is full of childlike innocence and interest, and it is very kind to read.
1 1. This article can be described in fresh and interesting language ... Between the lines, it is full of childlike interest and laughter, which is a masterpiece.
12, appropriate details, and the combination of reality and reality are the two major characteristics of this article ... the content is richer and more vivid.
13, the full text is fresh and elegant, kind and euphemistic, simple and unconventional, and it is worth learning.
14, the full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile.
15, the full text is easy to understand and interesting.
16, the full text is clear, vivid and compact, and interesting.
17, pay attention to observing specific things and develop appropriate imagination, which is the success of this paper.
18, the article melts into the scenery, describes the scenery while expressing emotions, and is good at using analogy to make the article vivid and concrete.
19, the article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible.
20. This article is based on real life, with appropriate materials, novel ideas, clear paragraphs, natural transition, full of interest and strong readability.
2 1, with fluent language and free and easy writing, is a relatively successful work.
22. Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions and interesting reading.
23. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, hit the floor, exciting and exciting.
24. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
25. This article narrates the events of … in the order of events. The language is fluent, the level is clear, and it looks very enjoyable from beginning to end.
26. The full text has a lively rhythm and fresh language, and it is always full of humor and fun to read.
27. The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and fluent, and the feelings are sincere and touching.
28. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, and it is interesting and fascinating to read.
29. The author is clever in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing.
calligraphy
A, the notebook is beautiful and neat, just like the street in a seaside town, but it is not dirty ... The straight handwriting makes people really comfortable to read ... Your calligraphy is as beautiful as printed ... I am ashamed that my calligraphy is not as good as yours. ...
B, whatever, the handwriting doesn't look like a cat's ... The handwriting isn't in the middle of the grid, of course it doesn't look pleasing to the eye ... Is it because the wind is too strong today, and your handwriting is blown like this ... I don't believe that your handwriting is not good, and you will keep scribbling ... carefully and patiently, and you will write better than me. ...
content
First, such a rich content is almost the same as what the writer wrote. ...
Your practice is flesh and blood, which is really a great enjoyment to read. ...
Your composition is very specific, and I like reading very much. ...
You must like to treat it as a document, so you have written so many words. ...
B, the dry content is like boiled water, and there is no taste at all. A little more kind words will be delicious. ...
Your composition is like a 90-year-old woman's mouth, dry and empty, and her words are straight out. ...
sentence
First, fluent and vivid sentences, like Lushan Waterfall, flow down very smoothly. ...
The metaphor is very apt, which means that you have been observing carefully. ...
How did you come up with such clever anthropomorphic sentences? ...
How appropriate is the rhetorical question here ...
This exclamatory sentence expresses your true feelings at that time. ...
The quotation of ancient poems is just right, and I will use the poems I have learned in my composition in the future. ...
The use of two-part allegorical sayings is wonderful, which makes me laugh. ...
B, the composition is bumpy and uncomfortable to read, just like walking on a bumpy road in the country, it is easy to fall down if you are not careful. ...
This sentence seems to have been cut off and incomplete. ...
Read it carefully after writing, and you will find something meaningless. ...
Don't be afraid of trouble, good articles have been changed. ...
You can't always count on others to help you correct, but learn to correct every sentence yourself. ...
level
First, the sections are clearly divided ...
Section division is appropriate. ...
Each section has a meaning and different paragraphs. ...
The levels are chaotic, and the chapters contain too much content, so I feel breathless when I read them. ...
There are too few points in this section. Can't bear to add more? ...
The middle part can be divided into several parts. ...
The first and second parts should not be separated, but should be merged. ...
This section has nothing to do with the previous section. ...
Treatment or attention to detail.
First, focus ...
The key part is very detailed and good. ...
What happened was described in detail. ...
The scenic spots are described in the order of tour, with emphasis on ...
Part b and x are too wordy. ...
I can't see the meaning of this composition. ...
It's not the point. It should be written simply. ...
subject
A, the topic is fresh, like bamboo shoots in spring, tender and crisp ...
This topic is so interesting that people can't help reading it. ...
Tell me, where did you come up with such a good topic? ...
Punctuation marks (ellipsis, question mark, exclamation mark, dash) are added to the title, which is different from others. ...
I like your interesting topic very much ...
B, the topic is the same, people will not be much interested in reading your composition. ...
Everyone will think of such a topic, which is too general. ...
The content doesn't seem to match the title.
Use your head and change what topic is more appropriate. ...
I think the title is better.
emphasize
A. Punctuation marks are very regular, which shows that you are an honest person ... Punctuation marks are very accurate. ...
B, the content is wonderful, punctuation is sloppy, and people don't want to read your composition. ...
I lost a lot of punctuation marks. You want me to read it all at once, then stall me. ...
Punctuation is not delicious ...
Too many punctuation marks make you jump around, just like a lame man walking. ...
I hope you can make every punctuation carefully. ...
When the meaning of a sentence is finished, you should stop. ...
Ellipsis occupies two squares, so you can't type in one square. ...
There are many wonderful sentences in the full text, which add some literary interest to the article.
encouraging words
This is more than the last one. keep fighting ...
Be more specific and vivid, and you will hopefully become a member of the composition team. ...
Read more books, observe carefully and think hard, and your work will be published in newspapers and periodicals soon. ...
Neither Xxxx nor xxx are prodigies. What they can do, I believe you can do it, and you will perform better than them. ...
Are you still afraid that your writing level will not go up? ...
Insist on reading more extracurricular books, which is how I mastered a lot of good words. ...
nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind on it; nothing is impossible to a willing mind; where there is a will, there is a way ...
Now you practice more words than before, which is the result of your careful diary. ...
Don't you want to be a pop star? Practice a pair of "thief eyes" and let your keen observation make you write flowers. ...
Congratulations on reading your composition in public in class last time. Try to write better next time, ok? ……
Don't always worry about being more stupid than others. As long as you follow the teacher's requirements, your dream will come true sooner or later. ...
You can never write anything, because you pay too little sweat. ...
It will be of great help to lend out the diaries and compositions of the students in the composition group to read more. ...
Inspiration never likes to visit lazy people. ...
Diligence, diligence, diligence, when your name appears in the newspaper, you will feel that suffering is worthwhile. ...
Wonderful comments (1)
1, did your throat get blocked by rice balls when you were eating, otherwise, how could there be so many useless sentences?
I read your words, as if I had just returned from a spring outing, and I was still in a happy mood.
3. The first exercise is too long, like a person's head is very big and it looks uncomfortable.
Your handwriting is crooked, as if you were drunk and dancing.
5, the sentence is difficult to read, like a river blocked by stones.
In your practice, I want to find a good word and sentence, which is more difficult than finding a needle in a haystack.
7. The content is not interesting at all. It reads like being hypnotized. I really want to sleep.
8. After reading your composition, my agitated mood suddenly brightened up a lot.
9. There are many incomprehensible sentences in this composition, as if the clear lake is full of rubbish.
10, the characters are big and small, just like a group of big ants with small ants going out for food.
1 1. After the conversation, you always close the door without double quotation marks. Don't you usually wear clothes without buttons?
12, there are too many shortcomings in the exercise, just like drawing the height of a rectangle, you can draw countless blocks.
13, I hope your writing level can rise like bamboo shoots in spring.
14, the disadvantage is that the words are not beautiful, like the traces left by chickens when they are looking for food.
15, the second paragraph of the article is too long, even longer than a golden python.
16, the full text has no beautiful words, just like a bald person without a hair.
17, the typos in the exercise can't fit in a truck, which is simply scary.
18, the characters speak without expression, as if they have been talking to others with a straight face.
19, the title of this article is general, just like a Zhang Qian rice paper, lacking the feeling of moistening.
20. The full-text sentence is fluent, just like a silk scarf, and it feels very smooth.
2 1, the composition is full of nonsense, like a lot of fat on a fat man.
22, the title is very attractive, like a magnet, attracting readers' attention.
23. There are many typos in the text, like the spots on toad's body, which is disgusting.
24. The facial expressions of the characters are not described in the dialogue. Are they made of plasticine?
25. The words lost in practice pile up into mountains. Will you be careful in the future?
Wonderful comments (2)
1, many words are used inappropriately, just like a person's hand reaching his neck, which makes people uncomfortable.
2. The sentence reads very smoothly and naturally, just like drinking a bottle of cold soda in hot summer, which is very enjoyable.
3, the content is a layer of dry skin, peeled off, there is no blood and no meat, how can others not feel uncomfortable?
This metaphor is very subtle, even better than the idea of a clever fox.
5. Punctuation is serious, with a total of * * * missing *. Do you like punctuation as a meal?
6. You used many dialects in your composition. You seem to be an expert in this field.
7. Titles with ellipsis are vivid and fresh, like green leaves.
Your article is like a withered flower, with no fragrance at all. Think about it, how can we make the flowers smell again?
9. The content is specific, but unfortunately there are too few natural paragraphs. Are you afraid of spending money and reluctant to divide more paragraphs?
10, there is a sentence in the composition that I don't understand, just like you told me to breathe with my ears, which makes me feel puzzled.
1 1, some things seem to be made up by you, which is not true, so when I read them, I couldn't help but put a question mark in my heart.
12, your exercise is no longer like boiled water, but now it is a little sweet. Keep working hard and I will shout "Come on" for you!
13, the sentence is not smooth, like my cousin's face is covered with small pimples, reading makes me uncomfortable.
14, the focus is not very prominent, just like a water fight, the water splashed everywhere, but the target of the attack could not be found.
15, when the dragon and phoenix dance, the handwriting flies. Maybe you want to be a cursive calligrapher?
16, there are too many typos, like sesame seeds on sesame cakes. Can we try to photograph the sesame seeds on the sesame cake?
17, the handwriting is very crowded, aren't you afraid of burning?
18, the phenomenon of losing words is serious. I wonder if you often break your umbrella in rainy days?
19, the content is as dry as dead leaves in autumn, how can people be willing to watch it? Read more extracurricular books to ensure that the dead leaves turn green again next spring.
20. There are so many typos as a hornet's nest ... I'm a fourth-grade student. How to use pinyin instead of words that can't be written? Is your dictionary sleeping?
2 1, the content of this article is vivid, and it feels like just eating a piece of fresh milk cake, with endless aftertaste.
22. Actions are rarely written, like branches in autumn, with no leaves.
23. Your sentence is a goldfish in a jar, which is not alive at all.
Punctuation is well-behaved, like a smooth floor tile.
25. The handwriting is scrawled like grass on the ground, wobbly and stiff.
Content:
1. The content is close to modern life, novel and unique, grasping the pulse of the times and showing the flavor of the times.
2. The context is clear, the sense of hierarchy is strong, and the narrative is orderly and not chaotic.
3. Proper details, clear priorities and clear thinking. Carefully selected, the material seems to be tailor-made for the theme.
4. The narrative is detailed and concrete, the details are vivid and vivid, the characters are vivid and prominent, and the images are full and vivid.
5. Use the environment to set off the emotions of the characters, and the scenes blend, the feelings are in the scene, and the scene is in the scene.
6. Rich imagination, strange ideas, not divorced from the truth of life, tied with the association of life, broaden the reader's thinking and make people feel lively and interesting.
7. Scenery description is vivid and lifelike, words and sentences are appropriate, scenes are born together, and scenes blend together, just like a vivid sketch painting presented to readers.
8. Imagination is wonderful. It not only comes from life, but also transcends life, broadens readers' horizons and is full of artistic charm.
9. The description of the event process is detailed and specific. Although there are many contents, it seems to be orderly, which reflects the author's clear thinking and planning ability for the layout of the article.
10. The appearance is lifelike, the characters are lifelike, and the clothes are decent, just like a mirror reflecting the characters' personality, which is really called "life depends on each other".
1 1. The description of the environment is objective and true, and the environment serves the characters, which better explains the ins and outs of the formation of the characters' personalities.
12. The expression is vivid and vivid, and there are not many words, which outline the personality characteristics of the characters at a glance. The words and manners of the characters have distinct and unique personalities.
Content:
The content before and after 1. is not closely related, and some contents are too isolated and not closely related to the main body of the article.
2. The narrative is simple and rough, with only one frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics.
3. Inappropriate details and unclear priorities.
4. The content is mostly outlined by lines, and there is no detailed description based on points.
5. Can't keep up with the times, and the content is too old.
Theme:
1. Focus is prominent, the center is clear, and the thinking is clear.
2. Clear views, clear likes and dislikes, making people clear at a glance.
3. Directly highlight the theme in the content, clear and to the point, without redundancy.
4. The theme is serious, the thought is noble, and the enterprise is strong.
Theme:
1. The center is not clear enough and the concept is not clear enough.
2. The theme is vague, the meaning is vague, and the purpose of writing is unknown.
3. Although there is a central theme, the expression is not strong enough, but it seems empty and powerless.
The theme is not serious enough, and there are still dross in thought.
Plot:
1. The plot is tortuous, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curvy beauty of the plot and is fascinating.
2. The plot is strong in faltering, and there are accidents at ordinary times, which can attract readers' attention.
3. The plot changes unconventional, with occasional suspense, waves and surprises. The development process of the event embodies the author's innovative ideas.
Plot:
1. The plot develops smoothly and lacks certain ups and downs.
2. The plot changes are unremarkable and lack of new ideas.
3. The plot is straight, there is no suspense, and it seems to be a running account.
The process is very detailed, but the ending is short. The structure is unreasonable, giving people the feeling of anticlimactic.
5. The idea is unreasonable and the content is full of loopholes, which can't reflect the truth of life.
6. The plot is ups and downs, and the transformation is too fast and not coherent enough.
Rhetoric:
1. The metaphor is vivid, vivid and appropriate, and the ontology is similar to the metaphor, which greatly enhances the interest and persuasiveness of the article.
2. Appropriate use of contrast, comparison and other methods, through the disparity and differences between things, effectively prove the center of the article.
3. Taking advantage of parallelism to explain the characteristics of things in many ways not only enhances the language potential, but also leaves a very deep impression on readers.
4. Using personification skillfully, the images in the text have the characteristics of human behavior, thoughts and feelings, and reflect the spiritual course of the protagonist in the text from the side.
Material selection:
1. Can choose typical themes in life, and the events are more representative.
2. The selection of materials is novel and unique, not mediocre, and it is refreshing to sweep away pedantry.
3. Although it describes ordinary things, the analysis is thorough and reasonable, and the rational excavation is deep, which highlights the essence of the event.
Although the incident is small, it reflects profound truth and has certain universality.
5. Multi-angle material selection fully reflects the personality characteristics of the characters, and the characters are full.
Material selection:
1. The selection of materials is too popular and unrepresentative, and the old themes and ideas are unremarkable.
2. Although the events with certain narrative value in life are selected, the hidden truth of the events has not been deeply reflected due to the incomplete analysis and excavation.
3. The material selection is dull, too old, vulgar, simple and naive, and there is no new idea, so it is difficult to deeply reflect the times and authenticity of life.
4. Failure to reflect the truth through trivial matters, and lack of proficiency in the expression of "seeing the big from the small".
5. Lack of multi-angle description of the characters, only a narrow theme is selected, showing the one-sided personality characteristics of the characters.
Emotion:
1. Strong feelings, such as volcanic eruption and bubbling out, can deeply impress readers.
2. Sincere feelings, strong feelings, like mellow wine, make people drunk if they don't drink it.
3. Emotions are true and natural, and there is no suspicion of affectation. Show your true feelings with a plain heart.
4. The mental journey is true and delicate, and the thoughts and attitudes of the characters are clear to the readers at a glance.
The feelings are true and delicate, and the words are touching, which really comes from the author's heart.
6. Seek the gains and losses of life from self-reflection, reveal the true feelings in confession, and the words are powerful and shocking.
Emotion:
1. The language is simple, the feelings are dull, and the affection is not deep enough.
2. Emotion is too strong, and it doesn't look too emotional. On the other hand, it is complacent.
3. Emotion lacks depth, fails to convey feelings through scenes, and fails to generate feelings from events. Although feelings are hidden in words, they fail to dig deep.
4. Psychological depiction is not vivid and concrete enough to effectively express the thoughts, attitudes and likes and dislikes of the characters.
Reason:
1. Repeatedly emphasize the author's point of view from different angles and aspects, with thorough reasoning and clear thinking.
2. Quoting famous sayings and classic examples is more convincing and can express the author's point of view more powerfully.
3. Strong arguments, thorough and reasonable analysis and strong philosophy.
4. Rich examples, proper selection and description are more convincing.
Reason:
1. The logical reasoning ability is weak, and the evidence is not conclusive enough.
2. Failing to tell the truth, telling the truth, shaping the true personality and expressing the unique individual.
Statement:
1. The sentence is fluent, the sentence meaning is fluent, the text is beautiful, the narrative is vivid, the image is vivid, and the language expression ability is strong.
2. The language is concise, to the point, to the point, concise and powerful, full of pen power, and a few words can convey the appearance of the characters.
3. The language is fluent, detailed and vivid; The meaning of the sentence is implicit and euphemistic, with profound implications. After reading it, it is like a lingering fragrance after drinking.
4. The language is vivid and humorous, which makes people laugh.
5. The behavior description is accurate, and the verb series vividly highlights the psychological state of the characters and points out their personality characteristics.
Statement:
1. The language is basically fluent, occasionally fluent.
2. The language is not fluent enough, and the meaning of the sentence is vague and puzzling.
3. The statement is verbose, and the text does not convey the meaning, only the details are not omitted, and the text is redundant.
4. The language is too brief, which seems to be an outline narrative, but it fails to get an outline, with incomplete meaning, and the narrative is boring, dry and lifeless.