1. Write a specific 500-word essay in different levels
We middle school students are always so carefree, as casual as the T-shirts and jeans we wear, and as casual as... The ponytail and yellow ribbon on the back of her head are as free and easy as ever.
Although sometimes there are worries and troubles, but in the end they all dissolve into unrestrained play. Look, isn't that us? Please listen to my introduction! The tall one with delicate features was called Hong Jing.
Don’t underestimate her, she is the “top seed player” in our class, and it seems that she should always take the top spot. Next to Hong Jing, a short, chubby, and very cute little girl was chewing chocolate with relish. At a glance, she knew that she was a "little daughter" who grew up in a "happiness jar".
She is the famous "Miss Jiao" - Little Heart. Hey, what are Mei Qiong and Jing Li whispering? These two people "stick" together, like old friends who haven't seen each other for decades. They chatter endlessly, which is really enviable! I am the "pervert" among them, others call me "young man". I don't want to pretend to be quiet like a girl, nor do I like to imitate the behavior of celebrities.
I love reading. In the sea of ??books, I will forget everything. At this time, I held "Boys·Girls" in my hands and read eagerly.
"get out of class is over!" "Stand up -" The classroom was boiling with the sound of packing schoolbags. "Meiqiong, hurry up!" "Oh, Hong Jing, why are you working so hard! Let's go out and rest for a while!" Then, our energetic figures appeared on the playground again, echoing with our silver bell-like laughter.
Some people say that girls are born critics. This is true. We often get together to watch TV, discuss novels, celebrities, and classmates.
The ten minutes between classes has certainly become the best time for us to comment. "Ouch -" Xiao Lingxin stretched out and complained, "It's annoying to do calculations all day long!" "Isn't that right? Teachers only focus on scores," Jingli said with deep sympathy.
Standing in the first position, I couldn't help it: "Don't forget, the teacher is also good for us!" "Nowadays, there are very few books we want to read. I don't know those funny things in the past." Where did the book go?" Hong Jing, who had always been taciturn, also opened her mouth. Mei Qiong also said with an unhappy face: "That's right, it makes my mother search my drawers all day long, fearing that I will be affected by bad books and periodicals."
Teacher's Day is coming soon, and we all discussed how to prepare An amazing program. Hong Jing stared at her big eyes and immediately took out her precious repeater from her bag. She turned the sound loud and full of ideas. We all listened to it for a while, and suddenly Xiaoling My heart screamed loudly, twisting her thin waist and saying, "Look at me!" She jumped up with the music, wow! Not to mention how beautiful she is, she dances more charmingly than my idol Jay Chou. So in a few days, we learned the "Fengjian" dance from her. We were so happy that it was time to go on stage. In just a few moments, the sound of support was enough to break our ears. The next day, the teacher told us that the "top dance" in the class won first place.
Of course we were the happiest, because this honor was due to our sweat. 2. Spring composition There are 500 words of hierarchy, and there are 5 idioms
The colors of spring are really colorful, the sun is red, the sky is blue, the treetops are green, and the winter jasmine flowers are yellow... No wonder Poets love to sing about spring, and painters love to depict spring, because spring is the fusion of all the beauties in the world and the sum total of all colors.
I am very surprised, why do these colorful colors choose spring to come to the earth? The rain is continuous and gentle. It moistens the earth, touches the earth, and calls to the earth softly. When people don't know it, they quietly merge into small rivers and accumulate into deep pools. Oh, it turns out. It is the spring rain that brings green life to the pond.
Wind and rain always come together.
In early spring, the slightly cold wind wakes up everything. The treetops are green, the earth is green, and even the platforms of tall buildings are green.
Wang Anshi of the Song Dynasty wrote a poem: "The spring breeze turns green to the south bank of the river." How well said! But it’s more than just “green”? Blown by the wind, the wild flowers all over the mountains and slopes opened their eyes, one, two, one clump, two clumps...connected into a piece, forming a sea.
People face this. 3. A 600-word essay on home is written in different levels
Everyone has a home, and everyone loves his home very much, so I am no exception.
Home, It can give people a warm feeling, make people full of confidence, and cheer up from failure. However, home is the most important pillar for people everywhere.
There are many reasons why I love my home. The main reason is my parents and family environment. The saying "love grows over time" is absolutely correct. Whether it is a person or a dead thing, as long as you face it for a long time, you will develop deep feelings. .Unconsciously, I have lived in my home for thirteen years. There are my most beloved parents, the most familiar environment, and my many years of stories are stored there.
At home, my parents Just like my good friends, they talk and laugh every day, no matter how unhappy I am on the way home, as soon as I step into the house, my heart feels as relaxed and free as being loosened.
The environment in which I grew up has both a happy side and a sad side. In the whole house, my favorite is my room. There is a desk, a big bed, and a bookcase in the room. , a dressing table and a computer... I do my homework on the desk every day and sleep on the big bed. Sometimes when I am tired, I just sit in front of the computer and relax, so that my brain can relax after working for a long time, and I can read it when I have time. Looking through the books on the bookcase. Everything in the room accompanies me with joy, anger, sadness, and joy. Another place I am familiar with is the small garden of my home. There are green grasses in the garden, and they are blooming. Flowers. I often play in the garden. I love my family, every member of my family, and every story in my family.
Home is the cradle for every child’s growth and the place where every child lives. A harbor. I have a warm, happy and harmonious home. I love my home.
Home is the cradle for every child to grow and a harbor for every child to live in. I have a warm, happy home. , harmonious home. I love my home.
I love my home, a happy and warm home. My parents love me in every possible way, which makes me deeply appreciate the warmth of home. Whenever I come back from school, My mother is busy cooking delicious meals for me in the kitchen. My father sits beside me and studies with me. When I encounter a question that I don’t know, my father will patiently explain it to me. My mother is very concerned about my study. , she was afraid that I would be tired from studying, so she tried her best to think of ways to improve my nutrition. She would boil me a cup of hot milk every morning, and she would always prepare the dishes for me.
I love my family, a harmonious one. A happy home. There is always a peaceful atmosphere in my home, and our family of three always gets along in harmony. My parents have a very good relationship and almost never quarrel. My father talks very humorously and always makes my mother and I laugh. .I am a very sensible child who is not willful and will not make my parents angry. If I get good grades in the exam, my parents will celebrate for me and take me to eat my favorite frozen snacks. Every time I I always pour a glass of wine for my parents first, because I know very well that in addition to the teacher's contribution, my achievements are also inseparable from the cultivation of my parents.
I love my family, A family that I can rely on. Whenever I encounter difficulties or grievances outside, it is my parents who help me resolve difficulties and listen to me express my inner depression. They teach me how to face life and face the facts. It is them Taught me that life will not be smooth sailing, but a person must know how to face the challenges and tests of life.
I love this warm and happy home, and let love stay in my home forever. 4. How to imitate Composition
Imitation composition 1. Definition: Imitation is called imitation in ancient Chinese.
The so-called imitation composition is to select an ancient masterpiece, study its layout, decoration, charm and other techniques, and then imitate this article to write an article. Imitation is a writing method that copies and simulates the structure, expression techniques, language, conception, etc. of an article or paragraph according to the requirements of the topic.
2. Purpose: The purpose of this section is to understand the characteristics of imitation, understand the types of imitation, master the essentials of imitation, and improve writing standards through imitation training. Imitation is not a mechanical copying, but a skillful application after self-digestion.
The sample essays are just examples. It is the purpose to be inspired and enlightened by them, and ultimately to innovate and draw your own gourd. Reference theory: Since ancient times, many literati have attached great importance to imitation. If there is a sentence in someone's article that is not like the ancients, they will be denounced as a wild fox. There are people who are extremely opposed to imitation and believe that imitation kills the life of literature. murderers; in addition, there are some literati who adopt a moderate approach.
It can be said that there are different opinions among different schools. I think there must be a reason for the rise and popularity of every theory. Unfortunately, later generations often go too far and become obsessed with it, which leads to the anger of many people. However, the theory itself is not wrong.
We just need to bring it back to the right path, no longer go over the top, and no longer go astray. We know that there are methods for learning calligraphy such as tracing, copying, moving, facing and back.
If a new calligrapher does not start by copying and creates his own original work from the beginning, then he will not be able to learn calligraphy well. Of course, copying has its shortcomings. Those who keep copying will definitely not be able to reach the peak of calligraphy.
The same is true in mathematics. If the teacher does not teach some basic mathematical concepts, he will not give some questions on the blackboard as a demonstration; he will not give some questions as homework and give correction instructions; during the exam, he will not If some questions are given to test proficiency, can students learn it? The teacher does it once, and the students go home and do it again. This is called imitation in composition. Beginners to photography should first look at the works of famous artists to understand the techniques, and then imitate them. Over time, they will be able to create good articles with a certain realm.
The same goes for art study. Similarly, if you don’t start by copying famous ancient works when writing an article, you will definitely not be able to appreciate the beauty of the ancestral temples and the wealth of officials in ancient times.
Let’s take a look at the ancient master Yang Xiong who took the Book of Changes, The Analects of Confucius, and Erya to write Taixuan, Fayan, and Dialect. Han Yu, Ouyang Xiu, Su Shi, etc., all of them are familiar with ancient Chinese prose and imitate it, so that they can fully understand it, create new ideas, and become their own style.
Therefore, simulation should be a very important method. Imitation is a method of learning articles, but imitating articles is very hard work.
Students may reject it, because in the past it was "I write by hand and I speak". It was such a simple thing to write out what I thought. However, now they are controlled by the rules of ancient Chinese and cannot do whatever they want. Write whatever you want. Under the psychological factor of seeking refuge, it will naturally be rejected.
There are also ancient people’s opinions against imitation that can be used, so naturally there is more reason to reject them with all their strength. We should understand the value of simulation as a way to answer questions, and we should advise these weak people to face reality bravely instead of avoiding difficulties.
4. Principle: (1) What you imitate is the form and method, and your feelings and understanding are your own, so you must make your own ideas and speak your own words; (2) Imitation must be targeted and pay attention to imitation. Those things that inspire you; (3) Imitation should be done step by step and combined from point to point. 5. Method: Although imitation is necessary, it also has great shortcomings.
What should we do to improve the article without going too far? As mentioned earlier, the calligraphy techniques include tracing, copying, shifting, facing, and backing, etc. There are also methods of imitating articles, including dead imitation and live imitation.
People who are beginners in composition may not use enough words, have blocked ideas, and lack of information, so they can imitate some superficial articles. When your knowledge increases in the future, you will be able to imitate some high-level works.
When first imitating, it is good to be completely similar. If there is no way to be completely similar, there is no need to deliberately cut the feet to fit the shoes.
Cutting off feet to fit shoes is an act of imitation that is harmful, and that is an obsessive behavior. Ancient people imitate articles and even abandon contemporary words and phrases, and choose ancient words instead. Anyone who insists on using ancient words, official system, place names, etc. instead of modern ones is also an obsessive behavior.
As for the advanced learning skills, you can imitate the abstract and brilliant rules such as style, momentum, spiritual principles and artistic conception. When you reach a higher level, you have to create your own style. If you can't create your own, and always just want to be very similar to ancient texts, then it will be difficult to reach the top, just like bees collecting flowers to make nectar, but there are no flowers in the honey; It's like brewing rice to make wine. After the wine is made, the dregs must be removed.
Han Yu learned Mencius’s writing skills, but Mencius can no longer be seen in Han Yu’s articles; another example is Ouyang Xiu’s learning from Han Yu’s articles, but there is no Korean in Ouyang’s articles. This is a completely different story. If future generations of literati learn ancient Chinese but fail to reinvent themselves, China's literary world will certainly not make the great progress it has today. Therefore, if you spend your whole life just imitating and not innovating, it is also a phenomenon of going too far.
Before copying, you should thoroughly analyze the article you are going to copy. If you don’t have this skill, you should check the opinions of ancient and modern analysis and commentaries, or ask someone who understands the composition and modification, otherwise you will definitely It cannot be imitated very accurately. In addition, it is necessary to fully collect writing materials so that they can be used freely.
Imitation is an indispensable process in composition. It is advisable to imitate when you are a beginner. After you have learned a certain level, you still need to imitate, so that you can have a deeper understanding. Just like some masters who are good at calligraphy often imitate. Pro. So we must not ignore its value.
Lu. Classification: including four categories: imitation of structure, imitation of expression techniques, imitation of language, and imitation of intention. 5. How to write a clear-level Chinese composition in the 2016 High School Entrance Examination
How to make the article clear-level and get high scores from the marking teacher?
The ancients said: "When it comes to writing, the position must be laid out first, so that the formation must be orderly and the stairs must be supported." Writing a composition is like building a house. You must first set up the frame structure. Only then can we add bricks and tiles, decorate and beautify. Only when the composition has a reasonable layout, clear organization, and distinct layers can the author's thoughts, emotions, and themes be expressed clearly and naturally, like flowing clouds and flowing water.
To make the article clear in level, you need to start with creating clues and looking for material selection.
1. Create a good clue based on the topic and content of the article to make the context of the article clear.
Creating a clue is to figure out a main line for the article that can run through the whole text before writing, and use it to solve the problem of unclear ideas when we write.
Generally speaking, as long as you master the use of the following three clues, you can follow the "vine" of clues to "find out the melon" and organically connect the materials of the article to make the article clear and concise. The theme is highlighted, which avoids the phenomenon of straying from the topic.
The first is the object line: taking physical objects or concepts as the main line.
For example, the 2010 Shanghai High School Entrance Examination essay topic "Memory on the Blackboard" can capture the object line "blackboard" and connect several memorable stories about the blackboard to express an emotion or revelation. ; Another example is "Learning to Live". You can grab a concept as a clue, such as "struggle", etc., which not only organizes the article materials together, but also repeatedly strengthens the theme.
The second is the line of speech: taking a certain sentence or a fixed classical language format as the main line.
For example, in the 2009 Nanjing High School Entrance Examination essay question "It's a good day today", you can seize the thread of "It's a good day today" to connect the materials, and interpret the rich and profound meaning of "It's a good day today" from different angles. The connotation, or expressing one's happy mood.
The third is the love line: taking emotional changes as the main line.
Generally speaking, articles that are composed of materials in the form of contrast or progression can create "love lines" to connect the materials. For example, in the 2003 Zhejiang high school entrance examination essay question "This is also a classroom", someone used "I "The emotional changes of "" are used as clues to construct the story progressively. Whether sad or excited, the sky can always give "me" enlightenment and make "me" suddenly enlightened. "The sky" is "my" classroom.
2. Find the angle of material selection around the clues
After creating the clues, you need to select and assemble materials around the clues.
I analyzed in the first lecture that when it comes to essays for the high school entrance examination, as long as you practice a prose that is a combination of narrative and discussion, you will be ridiculously proud of the examination room. This essay, which is a combination of narrative and discussion, needs two or more materials.
How to quickly select more than two materials that logically correspond to the topic? This requires finding the correct angle of material selection, otherwise the article will have single content or mixed materials.
After analyzing hundreds of essays that scored full marks in the high school entrance examination, I found that there are five commonly used angles for selecting materials:
The first is characters.
For example, the 2009 Guizhou High School Entrance Examination essay topic "I understand", after supplementing the title with "I understand you", you can seize the keyword - "you", select the material from the perspective of the character, " "You" can refer to Sima Qian, Lu Xun, teachers, etc., and then select typical humanistic materials or life materials.
The second is concept.
Another example is the 2009 Guizhou High School Entrance Examination essay topic "I understand you". After supplementing the question "I understand you", you can also expand the word string. What do I understand about you? Fill in the concept words of loyalty, heroism, loyalty to the country and other qualities before deciding on the material.
The third is location.
For example, the 2009 Sichuan High School Entrance Examination essay topic "Landscape in the Heart" can closely focus on "landscape" and capture different scenes on the street, in front of the school, in the park, etc., to express your momentary discovery or Joy, this can be regarded as the scenery in my heart.
The fourth is time.
For example, the 2008 Shandong High School Entrance Examination essay topic "Accidental Discovery" can be selected from a time perspective. Someone describes the discovery of family ties and life interests at different stages of life in chronological order, revealing the value or value of a person's life. law.
The fifth is plot fragments.
For example, in the 2010 Hunan high school entrance examination essay topic "Give Others a Flower", someone intercepted three plot fragments: the flower bloomed on the bus, in the breakfast shop, and in the elevator. The article tells us: In fact, everyone has a flower in their heart, which is happy, kind, and helpful to others... If you give flowers to others, you will also gain happiness.