"Spring banquet, green wine, a cup of songs, and then a toast to Chen Sanyuan", the first three sentences of this word say that a sunny spring will set up a sumptuous banquet. A glass of wine and a song, thanks and three wishes:
First of all, writing love in white poems is more appropriate than writing friendship. In the concrete description, the characters' thoughts and feelings are set off by the corresponding concrete environment description. Bright and warm spring day is not only a beautiful scenery, but also a symbol of precious youth time. Rich booze and sweet love songs are not only a kind of enjoyment, but also a symbol of happiness in life. "Old bottled new green" (Bai Juyi's "A suggestion for my friend Liu") and a word "green" (called "green" in ancient times, sometimes slightly yellow) write the lovely color of new wine, which makes people smell intoxicating fragrance and increase the feeling of a better life.
"I wish my husband a thousand years old and wish him a healthy growth; Three wishes are like a beam, and we often meet each other every year. " These words mean: I wish Mr. Lang a long life; I wish you good health forever; I hope we are like Liang, we are all right and happy.
In this poem, all the scenery is full of emotion. Although the ending "Liang" is a metaphor, it is also the scene in front of the Spring Art Gallery. In this way, spring, green wine and whispering words constitute a very beautiful realm, which is a very powerful foil for the expression of love. Feng's poems are almost as long as Bai's poems, but their contents are particularly rich and substantial, which has a lot to do with it.
Secondly, both Feng Ci's and Bai Shi's works use numerals. The first word has the repetition of "one", "again", "three", "one", "two" and "three", and the number of the first group of tables and the order of the latter group of tables change in the repetition. The two "ones" in A Song of Green Wine are two "ones" in isolation, but when combined, they will add new ideas. Can you have a drink at this spring party? Every time I drink a glass of wine, I sing it once, which will be "one" in words and "three" or more in things. This is fixed and different from Chen Sanyuan's "three". Three Wishes shows the hero's strong desire. The protagonist does not seek wealth, but only wants husband and wife to be together for a long time. Although the will is strong, the desire is not extravagant. Compared with Bai Juyi's poems, the phrase "the world is clear and peaceful" is removed and changed to "I wish my husband a thousand years old", which means the same as "I wish you good health". What is more obvious is the concentration and simplicity of will. The imagery of poetry is also more prominent.
Third, compare Bai Juyi's poem "Give a Dream". The long and short sentences of this word make the form more vivid and the content more appropriate. This word focuses on three wishes, so it is quite simple and wonderful to write about the environment with the shortest sentence "Spring Banquet". The last two sentences are long sentences: "Three wishes are like a beam, and we often meet each other in years", which is the most affectionate wish of the protagonist, so we feel that sound and emotion are one.
Generally speaking, this poem by Feng Yansi expresses a virtuous wife's loyalty to her husband and her desire to "meet often". The whole word is simple and rich, simple and elegant, highly unified, easy to understand but able to express the deepest feelings, won the essence of folk songs, and truly turned ordinary into magic.