Which is better than the poem "Zhongshan Mountain is like a dragon rising to the west alone, trying to ride the long wind to break through the huge waves" or "Zhongshan Mountain is like a dragon climb

Which is better than the poem "Zhongshan Mountain is like a dragon rising to the west alone, trying to ride the long wind to break through the huge waves" or "Zhongshan Mountain is like a dragon climbing to the west alone, trying to ride the long wind to break through the huge waves"?

Judging from your above two sentences, the meaning has not changed, but in the latter, ‘上’ rhymes with ‘wave’! ~ But looking at the whole poem, the river comes from thousands of mountains, and the mountains all flow east of the river. Zhongshan is like a dragon rising to the west alone, trying to break through the huge waves and ride the long wind.

‘东’ and ‘风’ rhyme, and I always feel that the word “东风” is more appropriate. Haha! ~Actually, I don’t even understand, so don’t laugh if you’re wrong