Sketch is a method to grasp and highlight features with the most accurate pen and ink without rendering. The most important description of the snow scene in this paper is: "the fog is heavy, the sky is high and the clouds are light, and the mountains are white;" The shadow on the lake is just the trace of a long bank, a small pavilion in the middle of the lake, a mustard tuber on board, and two people on board. Just three. " With ethereal brushwork, the author captures the most important features of the snow scene, highlights the snow scene with the most refined and simple words, and writes a night snow picture of lakes and mountains with fuzzy ink and wash.
"Wusong pit field" describes the snow and water vapor on the lake, mixed with lemons. "Heaven and clouds, mountains and water, white up and down", overlapping the three words "and less", seems to think that heaven and clouds, mountains and water move together, which is more interesting than simply writing "Heaven and clouds, mountains and water, white up and down". Heaven, clouds and sky; Mountain, water, also. These two sentences vividly describe the white and indistinguishable scene between the sky, clouds, mountains and rivers and lakes. The author always writes a sentence first, which is like taking a panoramic view of "white from top to bottom" From the point of view of snow, it accords with the general feeling and impression at first sight. Then change the perspective and turn it into poetic close-ups: "a mark on the long beach", "a small pavilion in the middle of the lake", "a mustard tuber on the boat" and "two or three people on the boat". This is a hazy painting, a dreamlike poem, giving people a feeling of being absent from the scene and being in a daze. The author's tempering of quantifiers has to amaze us. You see, the word "one" of "up and down and one white" is to describe chaos and make people feel the biggest; The words "one mark", "one point" and "one mustard" are equally matched, which makes people feel small. This is really a word "one", and the realm has come out. At the same time, from "a sign on the long embankment" to "a small pavilion in the lake" to "a mustard in the boat" and "two or three people in the boat", the lens is getting smaller and smaller until it is minimal. Quantifiers such as "mark", "point", "mustard" and "valley" are as small as one, describing the movement of sight, the ripples of ships and the changes of scenery, which makes people unaware. This passage is about scenery, but it is not limited to scenery; From this chaotic world of ice and snow, it is not difficult to feel the author's deep affection for life as vast as "the rice in Taicang".
2. "Looking at the Lake Pavilion Snow" is the representative work of Zhang Dai, a writer in the late Ming and early Qing Dynasties, which is selected from Volume III of Tao An Meng Yi. With refined pen and ink, this paper describes the process of the author's own viewing of the snow scene in the lake, describes the quiet and far-reaching white snow scene he saw, and shows the author's lonely mood and faint sadness. It highlights the author's unique and outstanding elegant taste. It expresses the author's joy and regret when he meets a bosom friend, reflects the author's yearning for the motherland, and also embodies the author's quality of not drifting with the tide, his feelings of staying away from the world and enjoying the happiness alone, and at the same time, he places a faint sigh on life.
3. Original text:
In December in Chongzhen, I lived by the West Lake. It snowed for many days, and the noise of pedestrians and birds in the lake disappeared.
At about eight o'clock this evening, I took a boat, wore a fur coat and took a stove to see the snow in the middle of the lake. Haze, sky and clouds, mountains and water are all white. The shadow of the lake, only a trace of a long beach, a little outline of the lake, and my boat, two or three boat people on board.
On the gazebo, two people sat opposite each other. A boy was cooking wine and the stove was boiling. Seeing this, Yu was overjoyed and said, "How can there be such a person in the lake?" Pull me together and drink with me. I tried to drink three glasses of wine and then said goodbye to them. Ask them what their surnames are. They are from Nanjing and are guests in this place.
When he got off the boat, Zhou Zi murmured, "Don't say" xianggong "is crazy. There are more people like" xianggong "who are crazy."