See the article "Reading at night: moonlight at home in how bright!
Look at the topic. The article is entitled "Moonlight at Home, how bright! Peace of mind is the way home. " The title uses two poems, the first is a quotation, and the second is to express two meanings.
The former quoted "He knows that the dew will be frost tonight, and how bright the moonlight is at home!" In Du Fu's Moonlight Remembering Brothers. Expressed the yearning and love for the "hometown"-the motherland.
The latter uses Bai Juyi's "First Farewell from the City", "Born without a hometown, peace of mind". The author changed the "homecoming" in the original poem to "homecoming", which is a true portrayal of reality, that is, homecoming, and truly shows the frank and peaceful state of mind after suffering.
Second, look at the space. The full text of *** 1047 is more in line with the author's actual situation of "returning to China" and readers' reading expectation that the author will return to China after being detained in Canada 1028 days. In a few words, it may be difficult to "talk about your love"; If it is a big talk, it is not true.
A testimony article of more than a thousand words, with short narration, moderate discussion and lyricism in a specific situation, focuses on "going home", highlights the true feelings inside, and expresses deep feelings with "thanks" as the main theme.
Look at the structure This is a very important point and needs to be said more. The full text consists of six natural paragraphs, the first and second paragraphs echo each other skillfully, and the brushwork from "reality" to "emptiness" is unique.
1 paragraph, that is, at the beginning, from the real environment-"it is dark outside the porthole and the navigation lights on the wing keep flashing", write personal feelings-"In the silent night sky, these shimmers are particularly warm." Then write that I'm on the flight home-"At the moment, I'm flying over the North Pole and heading home, and I'm about to throw myself into the embrace of the great motherland, and my motherland, which has been away for three years, is close at hand." Naturally, that's right.
At the end of the sixth paragraph, I used a sentence: "Dreaming at midnight is the bright moon in my heart, the spring water in the river, the homesickness, and the spiritual destination of every minute of my three years in a foreign country." "Autumn wind, Vancouver need warm clothes before boarding the plane. At this time, the autumn of the motherland is clear in Wan Li, the sun is warm and the sun is shining, and I look forward to a good year's scenery, and then I will enjoy the orange, orange and green ",which is cleverly connected with the realistic situation at the beginning and echoes at a distance.
In the first two paragraphs, in the author's brief narrative from reality to emptiness, we feel the author's inner excitement and joy, and focus on the key contents described by the author. It is not difficult to find out where this warm feeling comes from and where the clear and clear environment comes from, which inspires and guides readers to think deeply.
The second paragraph expresses that the author can regain his freedom, first of all because of the strong leadership of China's * * * production party and the strength of the motherland. Recalling the past, the author used three parallelism sentences, which highly condensed the grievances and hardships suffered by the author in the past three years. In the third paragraph, neat sentence patterns and poetic language count "tears", "struggle" and "gloom" and express "firmness", "emotion" and "warmth". "There is always a light among thousands of lights that gives me warmth, and there is always a light in the vast Milky Way that gives me hope, touches my heart and appreciates my feelings."
Paragraphs 4 and 5 take care of paragraphs 2 and 3 respectively. Wonderful! The fourth paragraph expresses the exploration of the reasons behind our living in such a "peaceful era" and "great country". That is, under the correct leadership of the Communist Party of China, the people of the whole country "worked hard day after day for decades", "made our motherland prosperous and the people rich, and made great contributions to world peace and development." In connection with my freedom, the article naturally expressed "thanks to my dear motherland, thanks to the party and government." It was that brilliant China red that lit the fire of faith in my heart, lit up the darkest moment of my life and led me on a long way home. " Such heartfelt words.
In the fifth paragraph, I express my deep gratitude to my family, friends, colleagues and people who care about "my you and you". Parallel, the combination of reality and reality. From personal "joys and sorrows" to everyone's "helping each other in the same boat", this concern and encouragement, this support and responsibility, "like a rainbow, colorful corner of the sky on the bumpy road."
Fourth, look at the performance art and its effect. This testimony article of more than a thousand words has a clear theme, rich connotation, profound thoughts, sincere feelings and brilliant literary talent. It not only embodies the height of thought, but also embodies the massiness of culture. Parallelism strengthens the profundity and intensity of emotion, and poetic language highlights the aesthetic pursuit of the article. Combination of reality and reality, blending of reason and reason. Be reasonable because of things, and be reasonable and emotional. "Although the road home is tortuous, it is the warmest road home in the world." Here, it comes naturally and comes to an abrupt end, which is memorable.
Note: Chen Dongping, male, senior Chinese teacher of Guiyuan Middle School, reading promoter of "Lighting Man" campus in Guangdong Province, member of Guangdong Writers Association; Adjunct professor of Hubei Normal University and part-time teacher of College of Literature and Journalism of Hubei Engineering University; Member of Shenzhen Literature Society, member of Shenzhen Literature Critics Association, "Top Ten Literary Teenagers in Shenzhen Campus" and "Excellent Tutor".