This sentence is a poem written by Su Dongpo when he was young. It was originally written as "The gentle breeze dances on the thin willows, and the pale moon hides the plum blossoms." Then Su Dongpo changed one word in the middle of each sentence to "The gentle breeze supports the thin willows, and the pale moon hides the plum blossoms." ". The word "help" not only describes the gentleness of the wind and the delicacy of the willows, but also the intimacy between the wind and the willows, making it more vivid; the word "lost" is also more appropriate than the word "yin", which not only emphasizes the moonlight. The brightness of the plum blossom also takes into account the cleanness of the plum blossoms, highlighting the scene where the two merge into one color, which is more consistent and appropriate.
Legend has it that one day, Su Xiaomei, Su Dongpo and Huang Shangu were discussing poetry together. Su Xiaomei said : "The willows are soft in the breeze, and the plum blossoms are in the pale moon. Add a word in the middle of each two sentences, which serves as the 'waist' of the poem and becomes a five-character couplet."
Su Dongpo thought for a while and then said: " The gentle breeze shakes the thin willows, and the pale moon reflects the plum blossoms." Su Xiaomei said: "It's pretty good. However, this 'waist' is not beautiful enough." Huang Shanshangu then chanted: "The gentle breeze dances on the thin willows, and the pale moon reflects the plum blossoms." Su Xiaomei said He said: "It's a good sentence, but it still doesn't use the ideal word." At this time, Su Dongpo couldn't help it and asked: "So, sister, what word did you add?" Su Xiaomei said: "Brother's 'shake'" The word "ying" does describe the movement of willows and the brightness of the moon, but Duke Gu's "wu" and "yin" are slightly better. Because "wu" imitates human movements, it reflects the posture of willows more vividly. "Yin" is an exaggeration to make the brightness of the moon more prominent. And what I want to say is: "The breeze supports the thin willows, and the pale moon loses the plum blossoms." Su Dongpo and Huang Shanshan listened and applauded together, saying: " Wonderful!"
Fortunately, Su Xiaomei's personification of the word "help" and the word "lost" is more accurate. It not only expresses the gentleness of the wind, the fragility of the willow, but also the The wind and willows are intimate and clinging to each other, so the "dance" in Huangshan Valley is more vivid and appropriate. The word "lost" is also more expressive than the word "hidden". It accurately writes the scene of the moon and plum blossoms blending into one. .
I don’t know about my thoughts and feelings.
The gentle breeze supports the thin willows, and the pale moon loses the plum blossoms
This does not seem to be a poem~
-_-!