? The ancients sometimes called quatrains "two-rhyme poems" and metrical poems "four-rhyme poems". Because the ancients thought that quatrains only needed two strict rhymes, while metrical poems only needed four strict rhymes. As far as metrical poems are concerned, it is a good proof that the ancients regarded the first five rhymes as "the right way". But for the harmony of melody and melodious singing, people also require the first sentence of some metrical poems to rhyme. This is because the rhyme of the first sentence of the metrical poem is easier to remember, and it is more pleasant to sing.
? Metric poems add a rhyme, but there is a lot of trouble. In order to reduce the burden, people have come up with an ingenious method of "cutting corners", that is, allowing the first and last sentences of metrical poems to borrow words from neighboring rhymes as rhymes. The first verse of the metrical poem uses adjacent rhymes as rhyme feet, which is called "Lonely geese leave the group", and the last verse uses adjacent rhymes as rhyme feet, which is called "Lonely geese enter the group".
? In order to concentrate on writing, this paper takes metrical poems as an example to talk about the application of "solitary geese out of the group" and "solitary geese into the group"
? In the creation of metrical poems, "lone geese stand out from the crowd" is a very commonly used "ge" (metrical). take for example
Seven Laws of Snow (Once upon a time)
I am quiet when I lie down, (Geng Yun)
You can't look at the steps. (Zheng Yun)
The paper window is as bright as the moon all night,
Cloth has been colder than ice for years. (Zheng Yun)
Stepped on my Chai Men guest,
Dai Zong returned to Zhuzhai and became a monk. (Zheng Yun)
It's a good thing that three white people are okay,
All the mountains are covered by layers. (Zheng Yun)
Dai Tian (Li Bai), a Taoist priest visiting the Five Laws
In the barking of dogs, (Dong Yun)
Peach blossoms are thick. (winter rhyme)
A deer is seen in the depth of a tree,
I didn't smell the bell this afternoon. (winter rhyme)
Wild bamboo is green and hazy,
Flying springs hang blue peaks. (winter rhyme)
No one knows where to go,
Worried about two or three pine trees. (winter rhyme)
Modern people put one thing in the east and two things in winter, which is another matter. )
? In the creation of metrical poems, "lonely geese join the group" is not often used; However, the poet is so passionate that in order to express a special emotional need, he can't find the exact words of rhyme at the moment, so he has to borrow the words of adjacent rhymes as the rhymes of the whole poem. Therefore, "Lonely geese entering the group lattice" is a kind of "lattice" that is not commonly used, but it is also a kind of "lattice" that some poets have to use on some occasions. For example:
Seven Laws and Vocabulary (Huang Jingren)
Listen to the rain and watch the clouds return to the DPRK, (Xiaoyun)
Who collected a lot of signs from the cage crane? (Xiaoyun)
Cann't help but be disgusting and smart,
I am used to doing nothing for a long time. (Xiaoyun)
In silence, the wind is full of mystery,
I am eager to work hard. (Xiaoyun)
You know, it's hard to beat the mud,
Floating life pays the mire. (Hao Yun)
Untitled (Lu Xun)
Accustomed to the long spring night, (rhymes)
There will be silk in the bride's young temple. (rhymes)
In my dream, I shed tears vaguely.
Chengtou changed the king's flag. (rhymes)
Endure watching peers become new ghosts,
Look for a poem from a knife. (rhymes)
Singing low eyebrows, nowhere to write,
Moonlight is like water (micro rhyme)
? In the creation of metrical poems, although "the solitary geese leave the group lattice" and "the solitary geese enter the group lattice" are both acceptable, these two "lattices" cannot appear in a poem at the same time. That is to say, in the same poem, it is not allowed to use both "the lone geese leave the group lattice" and "the lone geese enter the group lattice". The reason is that metrical poetry is called "four-rhyme poem", which requires a poem to use at least four rhymes in the same rhyme. If a poem adopts both "the solitary geese leave the group lattice" and "the solitary geese enter the group lattice", then there are only three rhymes left in the rhyme of the poem, which obviously does not conform to the concept definition of "four-rhyme poem".
? During the Spring Festival of the Year of the Ox, my friend sent a congratulatory message "Year of the Ox Blessing" on his mobile phone. The full text is as follows:
Year of the ox blessing
Rats in China are bitter with sweet, (salt rhyme)
Bird's nest phoenix dance writes blue sky. (rhymes)
In the Year of the Ox,
Every day is as healthy as a fairy. (rhymes)
09 Taiping plus wine,
Three thousand happy events are accompanied by housewarming. (rhymes)
Open the door and you will know the spring breeze.
Peace of mind and longevity. (salt rhyme)
The artistic conception of this poem is not discussed here. I'm only going to talk about rhyme here. Obviously, this poem has five rhymes, and the main body uses one rhyme; However, in this poem, the author not only uses "the geese are particularly lonely in the flock" but also "the geese in the flock", and the first and last sentences use two rhymes in "salt rhyme" as rhyme feet, which finally leaves only three rhymes in the main rhyme (the first rhyme) of this seven-meter poem, making the "four-rhyme poem" exist in name only. Then, this poem is not a real metrical poem.
? Attachment: Someone borrowed the first sentence of the neighboring rhyme, which is called "Lonely geese enter the group"; Borrowing the last sentence of the neighboring rhyme, it is called "the lonely geese are out of the group"; I beg to differ. Because, I adopt the traditional view and the opinion that most people agree with.