The poem "Dai Li" wrote that when her son left his hometown, the mother didn't have any good gifts, only told him to wear a hat. Then, starting from "Li", she combined the feelings of home and country with maternal love, wrote a mother's lofty and great mind, and showed a mother's noble ideological realm.
2. Original text
Li Dou
Son, put on this hat,
You put your hometown above your head,
Everywhere you go, there are mushrooms in your hometown.
Mom can see your straight figure in her dream.
Son, put on this hat,
There is a bird song I made up in my hat.
Wherever you go, you can hear the voice of your hometown.
On a quiet night, birds will sneak into your dreams.
Son, put on this hat,
Let the hometown be close to your heart,
Wherever you go, you can feel the warmth of your hometown.
There will also be spring in the winter night when the cold current strikes.
Son, put on this hat,
Let this hometown flower accompany you in the downtown area,
Wherever you go, you can smell the fragrance of your hometown.
Let the fragrance of the earth fly into every window of the city.
Son, put on this hat,
You put the bright moon in your hometown on your head,
Son, this is the light in the mother's heart.
Let it shine on your head and become an unlit lamp.
3. Brief analysis
Simple language, sincere feelings. The language of this poem is simple, but it contains the author's deep love for his hometown and praise for his mother's great love. The whole poem is full of true feelings, and the reader seems to be in the persuasion and persuasion of a mother to a child who is about to leave, and also in the persuasion and persuasion of a child who is about to leave in a dream.
In a word, this poem is about true feelings, and it is a natural expression of feelings to the depths, which is undoubtedly a guide for beginners to write poems, and there is no doubt about it.