1, original:
The lake is clear in autumn night, so I go to Dongting Lake to get white. Lianzi was charming as if she were talking to me, but she broke my medicine string.
Explanation:
The clear lake sparkled in the bright moonlight. On the lake in the south, a beautiful girl picked white apples in the moonlight. The budding lotus flower, like a charming and affectionate girl who wants to talk, makes people fascinated and infinitely sad.
Appreciate:
This poem depicts a charming autumn scenery that is more beautiful than spring. In the first sentence, the poet wrote about the scenery. The water in Nanhu Lake is green and clear, which makes the autumn moon brighter. A word "Ming" describes the bright and lovely autumn moon in South Lake. The second sentence is narrative, saying that women choose white apples. Three or four sentences, clever and clever. Lotus is not only "charming" but also "easy to talk", not particularly "easy to talk" but very attractive, which makes the girl who is rowing to pick apples very jealous. The choice of words is wonderful, the setting is wonderful, and the lotus is vividly written.
2. Original text:
The shadow of the mountain rises suddenly, and the moon in the pond rises slowly from the east. Hang your hair in the shade at night, open the window and lie down in a quiet and spacious place. The evening breeze sent waves of lotus fragrance, and the dew on the bamboo leaves made a crisp sound. I thought I would want to make a song, make a song, I just hate my friends in front of me. Feeling for a night, I miss my old friends all night, and it is hard to miss them in my dreams.
Explanation:
Sunset suddenly sets in the western hills, and the bright moon at Dong Tang Point gradually rises to the east. Let go of your hair and enjoy the cool tonight. How quiet and comfortable it is to lie around with the window open. The breeze slowly brings lotus fragrance, and the bamboo leaves gently drip dew. I wish I could pick up the piano and play a song, but I only hate that I don't have a bosom friend to enjoy. On this beautiful night, I can't help but miss my old friend. I can only dream about it in the middle of the night.
Appreciate:
Meng Haoran is good at capturing poetry in life. This poem is nothing more than the taste of leisure and self-satisfaction, with a little feeling of no confidant and no heavy ideological content; However, writing about feelings is implicit and poetic. Words are like flowing water, with beautiful and simple form, natural layering, and full of charm.
3. Original text:
Green locust, high willow, swallow and new cicada. The wind began to enter the strings. The blue screen window is full of smoke. The sound of chess scares the day and sleeps. After a light rain, Xiao He turned over. Liu Bloom wants it. Jade basin hands understand the spring. Zhu Qiong is broken but round.
Explanation:
The locust tree is flourishing, the willow tree is tall, and the new cicada singing in the dark green suddenly breaks. The warm wind blows slightly, and under the green screen window, the incense burner rises with the light smoke of agarwood; A pleasant day's sleep, I was suddenly awakened by the sound of playing chess. After the rain in Mao Mao, the breeze turned over the lotus leaves. Pomegranate flowers are lined with wet green leaves and are as red as flames. Touch the spring water in the pool, and the splashing water drops into the lotus leaf, just like crystal pearls, which are broken and rounded for a while.
Appreciate:
This word is full of emotion in the scene, and many scenes are full of emotion, so it is scattered but not chaotic, giving people a sense of wholeness. The author is good at grasping subtle psychological feelings and invisibly comparing subtle changes in the objective environment. By describing the scenery and environment, he formed a lively and natural garden interest, which embedded the heroine's simplicity, innocence and love for nature and life.