Asking about the metrical problem of poetry

This poem is a seven-character quatrain, and the meter should be like this:

There are seven words in each sentence.

The first four sentences are two four sentences, and the last three sentences are three sentences and four sentences.

No ending punctuation can be found at the end of the first four sentences.

The last three sentences are punctuated at the end of each sentence.

But this poem is not seven words per sentence. The first four sentences have ending punctuation, and the last three sentences lack ending punctuation. So there is something wrong with the meter of this poem.

The following is the revised version:

Hideteru Nanshan Trail is extremely far from the forest.

I'm at the end of my rope, but I'm afraid I'll be idle.

Standing alone in Ling Yunshang, I can see the mountains with great pride.

If you are interested, it doesn't matter if you have been a firefly for ten years outside of Gankun.