1. Compositions using exaggerated techniques
The soul is a vast sky, which contains everything in the world; the soul is a peaceful lake, with occasional bursts of anger. Ripples; the soul is a snowy field, which reflects a colorful world. 2. Pain is groping in the dark, and the road ahead is full of ups and downs; pain is the sadness that no one understands, and the helplessness in the face of all setbacks; Pain is the deepest torture of the soul, without tears and unable to express it; pain is an expression that is not born, and is the devil in troubles. 3. Stupidity is a kind of natural helplessness, an acquired laziness, and a self-sown evil fruit. , is a worm in a good fruit. 4. A lie is a worm in the soul, eating people's hearts beyond recognition; a lie is a deep quagmire, which makes people trapped in it and unable to extricate themselves; a lie is an endless black hole, It can make people fall into the abyss of sin forever. 5. Insidiousness is a wolf in sheep's clothing, doing hidden deeds; insidiousness is the public enemy of kindness and jealous friend; insidiousness is an iceberg of the soul, which allows people to see through What I feel clearly is bursts of chill. 6. Selfishness is a mirror, in which you can always only see yourself; selfishness is a piece of cloth that covers your eyes and cannot see the pain of others; selfishness is a layer of glass that looks like Transparent, but always separated from each other. 1. Love: Love is a piece of sunshine shining in winter, making the poor and sick people feel the warmth of the world; love is a spring that appears in the desert, making people on the verge of despair People can see the hope of life again; love is a song floating in the night sky, so that lonely and helpless people can gain spiritual comfort. 2. Beauty: Still life is the beauty of solidification, and the moving scene is the beauty of flow; straight lines are smooth Beauty, curves are graceful beauty; noisy cities are prosperous beauty, quiet villages are elegant beauty. There is beauty everywhere in life, as long as you have a pair of eyes to discover beauty and a heart to perceive beauty. 3. Accumulation: ancient saying It says: "If you don't accumulate small steps, you can't reach a thousand miles; if you don't accumulate small streams, you can't reach a river." Anyone who makes a name for himself in the world starts from a small place, pays attention to the accumulation of bits and pieces, and consciously cultivates his own moral character and talents. , continuous self-improvement. Without the perseverance of hearing the chicken dance every day, how could Zuti's Northern Expedition to the Central Plains and become famous throughout the ages! How could Wang Xizhi be revered as a sage of calligraphy without the long years of writing and ink dyeing in the pond? Without the blood and sweat of studying and calculating the draft for half his life, how could Chen Jingrun be able to pick up the pearl and become famous all over the world? 4. Error: Galileo, Newton, and Edison are humans, not gods, and their shortcomings and mistakes are inevitable, but this does not prevent them from becoming "giants." Who can deny the law of falling, the law of inertia, and projectiles in physics? Was Galileo established or discovered the laws of motion and the isochronic phenomenon of pendulum vibration? Who can deny Newton's status as the founder of classical physics? Who can deny that Edison was a great inventor who made significant contributions to human material civilization? 5. Determination: If you have all kinds of "envy" and no intention of "making a net", you will definitely achieve nothing. Although this truth is simple, in fact, not everyone can clearly understand it. Some people hope Become an Edison-like "King of Inventions", but they are afraid of the difficulty of delving into scientific knowledge; some people want to win the title of "King of Short Stories" after Maupassant, but they are frightened by the hardship of practicing pen all year round; They want to become a "music giant" in one fell swoop, but they are too lazy to work hard on the field of musical notation; some people want to become sports stars, but they are too lazy to "hear the chickens dance" and train. With such ambitions, they are on the journey of a sparrow. , can't even catch a small fish, let alone realize the grand ambition. 2. A full-score college entrance examination essay using elaboration techniques
Sample essay: The beauty of farewell
The dandelion bids farewell to the branches, in order to go to another land to bloom the beauty of its youth; the shooting star bids farewell to the universe, in order to Cutting through the night sky to show dazzling beauty in the darkness; the stream bids farewell to the mountains and forests, rushing to the sea to experience the vast beauty through the four seasons. The beauty of farewell is the convergence of the future and the past, the intertwining of hope and disappointment, the blending of determination and reluctance.
The beauty of farewell is in the cold wind of Yishui.
He was holding a glass of wine, and his hands could not help but tremble. The people in front of him were familiar yet unfamiliar, the bleak autumn wind was roaring, and the strong wine was surging in his chest. He knew his mission. The person he wanted to kill was sitting in the palace of the King of Qin, ambitiously trying to unify the Central Plains. Another glass of wine made him soberer, and he sang "The wind is rustling, the water is cold, and the strong man will never return once he is gone." When Prince Dan said "Take care", he got on the carriage without looking back, thinking silently in his heart: Ying Zheng, die!
The beauty of farewell lies in the generosity and tragedy of "a scholar dies for a confidant".
The beauty of farewell is on the banks of the Miluo River. He stood motionless, staring into the distance for a long time. By the river, the setting sun was slowly sinking. Is this person who chanted "Everyone is drunk and I am alone awake" drunk now? Then why did he let the autumn wind blow across his wrinkled cheeks, let the waves slap his feet running for the people, and let the afterglow sting him to see through the turbid eyes of the government and the public? He turned around quietly and looked at the capital in the distance: "Farewell, motherland." Everything disappeared in the endless river.
The beauty of farewell lies in the sincere persistence of "searching from top to bottom".
The beauty of farewell is among the chrysanthemums in the distant mountains.
He has long been accustomed to his current life. In the early morning, the mist is gentle, the birds are singing and the flowers are fragrant. Walking among the chrysanthemums and working in the fields are leisurely and comfortable. The outside world was blocked by the mountains. He smiled slightly, remembering his determination to say goodbye to officialdom. With the words "I won't bend my waist for five buckets of rice", history is fixed at the moment when he left angrily, leaving behind a departing figure for future generations, full of disdain for the dark career of intrigues and intrigues.
The beauty of farewell lies in the calmness and tranquility of "picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence and leisurely seeing the Nanshan Mountains".
From ancient times to the present, the beauty of farewell flows in the long river of history. Say goodbye to childhood, tenderness, ignorance, willfulness... The beauty of saying goodbye has actually been deeply imprinted in life. The beauty of this farewell is interpreting all things and flavors of life. 3. A 200-word essay describing the scenery of my hometown
Spring is here, and the spring girl’s overflowing laughter quietly wakes up the sleeping earth, and a bustling scene ushered in spring.
The grass was bent by the breeze as if bowing to welcome the arrival of the spring girl; the willow branches swayed with the wind as if playing with the spring girl; several small swallows stood on the telephone poles The chirping sounds seemed to be singing; the most conspicuous primrose in the flower garden grew a small trumpet as if to announce the good news: "The long-awaited spring is finally here!"
I came to the fields with joy, breathing deeply the fresh air brought by spring, and the fragrance of the earth came to my nostrils. Those endless square fields are hazy in the clouds and mist, like mirages; those fields are like rolling mountains. The fresh spring rain falls like silk, nourishing the earth that has just been freed from the bitterness of winter. Everything seems to wake up and nature regains its vitality.
I followed the path in the field to the small river. The willows on both sides were fluttering in the wind, and the newly grown buds were so tender that they seemed to be able to squeeze out water. As I walked along the river, I saw those flowers. Not to be outdone, the little flower buds bloomed, colorful, and scattered on the green grass; the breeze blew by, exuding the faint fragrance of the flowers, attracting hard-working bees and beautiful butterflies. This kind of spring is yearning, really pleasing to the eye and refreshing to the heart.
At this time, the sun rises slowly, and the white primroses are dyed red by the morning glow, which looks like a shy red face, but also seems to have been wiped with rouge. The crystal clear dewdrops are rolling on the petals, in the morning glow. It looks particularly precious under the light. Strips of white fog slowly dispersed, and farmers came to the fields one after another and began to work; sowing seeds and transplanting rice seedlings. The joyful face seemed to see the fruits of the harvest. Children chase each other. Playful laughter. Farmers working in the fields cheer. . .Constitute a beautiful "spring scene picture".
Now, spring has arrived. Spring is the most beautiful season of the year. Throughout the ages, people have used almost all the beautiful words and poems to describe and praise spring. Spring brings vitality and hope to people. 4. A 150-word composition using flashback techniques
Part 1: "How to write a flashback composition"
How to write a flashback composition
The benefits of starting with a flashback: use The biggest advantage of a composition conceived with flashback technique is that it can highlight the important plot that the author wants to express most, highlight the fragments that best embody the main idea of ??the article, make the structure of the composition richly varied, and the plots are scattered and ups and downs, thereby achieving the purpose of attracting readers.
Example:
Memories of past events caused by things in front of me: Standing on the stage, looking at the smiling faces in the audience, listening to the thunderous applause from the audience, I suddenly It reminds me of the first time I sat in front of the piano seven years ago and the first time I tried to touch the black and white keys. A 600-word composition with flashback techniques
Let’s move forward to the most exciting plot: This morning, on Taoli Street, a junior high school student hurried to school, followed closely by an old man. In the blink of an eye, the junior high school student rushed into the school and walked straight towards the class. The old man also hurriedly followed. Why is the old man following this junior high school student? Things have to start from last Sunday afternoon.
Let me tell you the ending in advance: In my drawer, there is a brooch. This brooch is not an ordinary brooch. This brooch embodies my grandma's meticulous care for me. Whenever I see it, grandma's loving face appears in front of my eyes. Whenever I hold it up, I can't help but feel... I recalled that unforgettable past event. Note: There must be a certain article transition between flashbacks and forward narrations to ensure a natural connection. For example: at the transition between flashback and forward narration, it is clearly explained that "things have to start from last Sunday afternoon", "it can't help but remind me of that unforgettable past event", "that scene of past events" The starting point of events such as "flowing out of my mind". 5. A 150-word composition about my classmate, using a variety of rhetorical techniques
My classmate Li Xiang is versatile, proficient in playing, chess, calligraphy and painting. Many people call her a "little talented girl". She is very beautiful, with big black eyes, her hair tied into a ponytail, she looks very fashionable, and she has a mouth like a cherry.
Li Xiang has two major advantages. The first is that her composition is well written.
Once, Li Xiang's essay was published in the City Business Daily. It was an article called "Wisteria on Campus." While she was reading it, I listened with fascination, as if I was dancing under the wisteria tree. Smelling the faint fragrance, spinning constantly, so freely, it feels like being in a fairyland. After reading it, the classmates all praised her composition for its beautiful wording and it was very comfortable to listen to. I asked her why her composition was so good? She smiled and said: "Because I often read books, no matter how late I am, I will read them. Only by reading them over and over again can I remember many good words and sentences. For example, "Youth Digest"." I nodded, thinking to myself : She is so diligent. Look at me again, ugh.
The second advantage is the words. Today, I accidentally saw her practicing calligraphy. He was there intently practicing one stroke after another. If he didn't write well, he would write it again until it was good. Li Xiang told me that there are six things to write about: carefulness, patience, confidence, concentration, and meditation. ,perseverance. After listening to his words, I suddenly had an idea - I want to be her pen. It is very happy to be with her every day, and what a wonderful thing it is to have such a master!
I envy her, her handwriting, and her composition. This is my classmate Yi Li Xiang. I must learn from her! 6. A 180-word essay written using various rhetorical techniques
1. The sword finally transformed from a piece of steel into a sword. It was sharpened on sand and gravel over and over again, reflecting its own value. .The plum blossom finally experienced hardships and bloomed in the cold moment, becoming the best role model for people. This kind of tenacious spirit is especially needed on our road of learning. Learning English is a very boring thing and gives me a headache .I really don’t want to learn, but I have no reason to give up. Learning is one thing, but learning well and mastering it is another thing. It cannot be learned overnight. Only by persevering and persisting in learning every day can you learn well. Learn English This is especially true. I used to be so afraid of learning English. Looking at the words that the twenty-six letters evolved into, I had to be able to read, write, memorize, and form sentences and phrases. It was so difficult to think about it. However, when I realize how important it is for me to learn a language, do I still have fear? If I play less for twenty minutes, I can memorize five words; if I play less computer for a while, I can memorize a phrase; if I watch less TV, I can listen to the recording several more times. Although the effort is not much, over time, I can memorize a phrase. But I can master this language. Compared with the environment that Meihua is in, I am really much happier. So I have to learn its perseverance and perseverance, so that I can learn better and better on the road of learning. Far, and finally achieved good results. Winter is coming, and I seem to smell the unique fragrance of plum blossoms again. I like plum blossoms very much! I prefer people who are fearless of difficulties and have the courage to face and overcome difficulties like plum blossoms.