The specific method has four steps: the first step is to clarify the topic; The second step is to seize the key words; The third step is to clarify the relationship (figuratively speaking, clarify the metaphorical meaning); The fourth step is to make an accurate idea. Example 1: Ma Yun, a famous entrepreneur in China and founder of Alibaba Group, Taobao and Alipay, said: "If you graduate from a prestigious school, you should look at others with appreciation; If you graduate from a third-rate or fourth-rate school like ours, look at yourself with appreciation. "
How did this material inspire you to think? Please write an article with your own experience and feelings. The first step is to define the topic.
How to look at others in different positions and how to look at your own problems. Step 2: Grasp the key words.
Appreciate others and yourself, and try not to change "appreciation" into other words. Step 3: clarify the relationship.
It should be noted that the premise of "appreciating others" is "I graduated from a prestigious school", which means "when I am better than others"; Similarly, the premise of "appreciating yourself" is "I graduated from a third-rate or fourth-rate school", that is, "when I am not as good as others". It is very important for us to recognize this relationship.
The fourth step: accurate conception. Combining the above analysis and combing the language, we can imagine that when people are tall, they need to appreciate others; When people are depressed, we need to appreciate ourselves.
You can also choose one of the two sentences that makes sense. Example 2: Shandong Volume 20 10 Read the following text and write as required.
All the changes, charm and beauty in life are made up of light and shadow. -lev tolstoy Please write an article of not less than 800 words according to your thoughts and associations.
Step 1: Clear the topic. What is discussed is the beauty of life and the meaning of life. Step 2: Grasp the key words.
The third step of light and shadow: clear metaphor and clear relationship. Light and shadow should be metaphors, and we need to find a proper ontology.
"Bright" refers to all exciting events and aspects in life, such as flowers, applause, prosperity, success, a calm and happy life, sweet love, sincere friendship and family harmony. "Shadow" refers to decadent, negative and painful events and aspects such as setbacks, hardships, valleys, adversity, bad luck and misfortune in life. The relationship between "light" and "shadow" must be clearly explained. They are two sides of the same thing.
It is an inseparable and interdependent relationship; Is the opposite or complementary relationship; It is a relationship of mutual promotion, mutual foil and even mutual transformation: the two together constitute life. The fourth step: accurate conception.
Based on the above analysis, this material can be conceived as: life has both pain and happiness, and we all have to experience it, so that life will be better and more attractive. Similar exercise: 1. The president of China Changan Group said in an interview with The Son of the Orient that the failure of an enterprise is often due to its success.
The first success is relatively easy, the second is not easy, and the third and fourth is even harder, because it can't be zero. It's like a saying in a TV series: "Life is to start all over again."
But for successful people, it is especially difficult to start over and return to zero. How to treat and experience the above materials? Please write an article to express it.
2. "Suffering is like a dark cloud. From a distance, you can see the darkness; However, when you immerse yourself in it, you will find that it is only gray. " -Li Xite's "Chang Gung Hang", please write an article of not less than 800 words according to your thoughts and associations.
Second, there are more than two famous sayings in this kind of materials, and the meanings of the two famous sayings may be the same or the opposite. For famous sayings with the same meaning, we should use the method of seeking common ground; For famous sayings with opposite meanings, we should use the method of seeking differences.
Example 3: Read the following three materials and write an argumentative essay of not less than 800 words with a self-designed topic. Lu Xun said: "In any case, as long as you keep collecting materials, you can always become a scholar after ten years."
When it comes to accumulating materials, Goethe once said: "A person has accumulated a lot of silver coins and copper coins when he was young. The older he is, the higher the value of these coins. Finally, the property of his youth turned into pure gold in front of him. "
A history professor said to his students, "If you collect 20,000 cards, you can become an authority on history." Seeking common ground while reserving differences: these three famous sayings discuss the same topic-collecting materials.
From this, we can conceive from the perspective of the importance of collecting materials. Generally, this kind of material is similar to a single famous aphorism, and it is not difficult to examine the questions, so I won't go into details.
Example 4: ① Florence poet Dante's famous saying: "Go your own way and let others speak!" (2) Polish proverb: "People who often ask for directions will never get lost." First of all, you can analyze the problem in the way of a single famous saying, and then use the method of seeking differences.
Step 1: Make clear the title: These two materials discuss whether to stick to your own path or ask others for directions. Road should be a metaphor.
Step 2: Make a clear analogy: the road refers to the road of life, and asking for directions refers to listening to other people's suggestions. The third step: the method of seeking difference.
These two materials express two opposite views. First of all, we should grasp one of them, so that we can have two angles: 1, regardless of other people's opinions, and stick to our own path.
2. Listen to other people's suggestions with an open mind and avoid detours. Then, we can also grasp the differences between the two and get inspiration from the comparison.
These two materials, for the road of life, one emphasizes to have a firm belief, and the other emphasizes to ask for advice with an open mind. Which is right and which is wrong? It should be said that they all make sense, but in one respect, they are highly complementary. If we combine them, it will be comprehensive and reasonable. Therefore, we can have a third perspective: we must have a firm belief in "going our own way" and an open-minded spirit of "always asking for directions" in order to live a good life.
Similar exercises: 3. Read the following text and write as required. Indian poet Tagore said: "Life should be brilliant.
2. 18, composition: writing thinking: this is a narrative material.
After reading the materials, we will think about many phenomena and problems in the current society: why is the impetuous atmosphere of quick success and perfunctory things prevalent? Why is it patriotic to shoot anti-Japanese "drama", smash cars and abuse? What does the Chinese nation seeking the road to prosperity depend on to stand among the nations of the world? The main enlightenment of materials to people is to pursue perfection and strive for perfection. Intention: (1) From the perspective of ancient tea gardens, the reason why tea gardens still enjoy a high reputation from ancient times to the present is because of the spirit of pursuing perfection and striving for perfection.
From this perspective, how can products sell well, how can brands be established, how can enterprises survive, how can countries be strong, and so on. (2) From the monk's point of view: the standard can't be changed casually, pursuing consistency, striving for perfection, never perfunctory, and making persistent efforts.
(3) From the point of view that the ancient tea garden does not accept tickets or tips, it is not utilitarian, not profitable, keep the initial heart, be cautious in doing things, and not change for the sake of the world. (4) From the point of view of Japan, the Japanese nation's pursuit of perfection is worth learning and thinking about.
To prevent all kinds of Japanese aggression, we must do everything with a more serious attitude and overcome the bad habits of perfunctory, speculation and quick success. This is true patriotism. Off-topic: 1 Comparison between China monks and foreign monks: China monks (such as Shi Yongxin) set up companies, but foreign monks don't accept money. 2. The tourists persisted until the end and finally saw the beautiful scenery.
3. How to conceive a new composition based on poetry? I am a candidate of the 20 12 class. Below, I will tell you some of my experience in reviewing senior three.
In recent years, the material composition is called "new material composition", which generally consists of two parts: material and requirements. There are various forms of materials: stories, fables, quotations, pictures, etc. The characteristic of new material composition is that its idea is based on material. Moreover, the writing requirements are very flexible: candidates can choose and interpret materials from multiple angles without seeking perfection; There is no best idea, but ideas related to the material can; Don't insist on quoting materials, get rid of the fixed mode of "quotation-discussion-connection-conclusion" and let candidates play freely; Style is not limited, except poetry and drama. Although the new material composition has great flexibility, it also has limitations. How to wander between flexibility and limitation has become the key to writing. It is still necessary to comprehensively interpret materials from multiple angles.
When reviewing the composition of materials, we should pay attention to the ideographic trend of materials, which is the so-called "language context". The following methods are helpful to better grasp the ideographic trend.
1. Grasp the central idea of materials
Although the material composition allows "self-selected style" and "self-made topic", it generally requires "don't deviate from the content and significance of the material". Therefore, it is the key to interpret and accurately grasp the theme.
For example, the composition material of Fujian Volume 20 1 1 tells the birth of Grimm's fairy tales. In order to seek the connection between folk stories and the history of human development, Brothers Grimm compiled 86 legends. This research has no results, but inadvertently produced a masterpiece. But this theme is exactly contained in this "intentional flowering, unintentional flowering".
2. Grasp the key words
Keywords in the material, even words expressing opinions are strengthened in the material.
For example, 20 1 1 Hunan volume composition material: a famous singer talked about his changes when interviewed by CCTV. Before, her first sentence in front of the audience was "Hello, everyone, I'm coming!" Now she says, "Thank you for coming." . Its key word is "change", which can't be understood as the change of greeting, but changes the role orientation and attitude towards life from the perspective of greeting.
3. Analyze the image of the material
The images in the materials, their words and deeds always reflect their thoughts, methods, attitudes, spiritual qualities, personality characteristics and so on. If you analyze them thoroughly, it is not difficult to grasp the main idea.
For example, the Liaoning composition material in volume 20 1 1 tells three stories about Tony's handling of "gains and losses". From Tony's stupid snatch when he was 3 years old, to Tony's rational choice when he was 20 years old, and then to Tony's wise action when he was 58 years old, Tony's image has changed, which not only vividly explains the dialectical relationship between giving up and not giving up, but also shows a kind of survival wisdom-being good at summing up experience in practice and perfecting himself.
4. Interpret material metaphor
Many material compositions will provide metaphorical materials such as fables and stories, so it is necessary to understand metaphors and refine opinions according to semantics.
For example, 20 1 1 Anhui volume composition material: plant rice in the depths and lotus in the depths. It is about the reasonable arrangement of planting different plants in different places, which contains the profound truth of proceeding from reality, adapting to local conditions and acting according to objective laws.
5. Analyze internal relations
If a group of materials is given, we should seek common ground while reserving differences, seek differences from the same, integrate and summarize the materials, and use dialectical thinking to find out the theme of the materials from phenomenon to essence.
For example, the composition materials of 20 1 1 Hubei volume are related to "fantasy" materials and belong to "homogeneous" materials. A simple induction can lead to a point.
Step 6 explore the reasons
Many things exist in the form of cause and effect. In the material composition, if we can infer the essential reason from the phenomenon or result, we can often get the best idea.
For example, for the composition materials on the 20 1 1 Shanghai paper, candidates may wish to ask themselves why Danes are not in eat small fish. In this way, the key words of survival law, ecological balance and sustainable development are easy to think of.
Note: If you really can't see what the center of the material is, then write shallowly, cover a little more, and don't write too deeply, so as not to digress from Wan Li; Moreover, we should always order some materials to give the tired teacher a psychological hint: every sentence I write is written according to the materials and there is no digression.
I hope my tips can help you, and I wish you success in the college entrance examination.
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The third year of high school is to make up your mind and ask for four or five examples. The title is "Do not forget your initiative mind", just like senior three! I have written a similar topic before. This example is really difficult to cite. 1 can be referenced. Mo Yan's: "The purpose of my writing is never for an award, but for my own ideals" (probably this meaning). 2. Peng, of course, this example of Peng is not appropriate, but the key lies in how you say that if the original intention of guiding Peng step by step is to take off, then it is in line with this original intention, and you will be smooth. Negative blue sky. Then compare it with learning pigeons. It's an example. However, this example has some shortcomings, and it is best to polish it with good writing. 3. A group of people are jealous because they have no intention of fighting for spring. The scattered mud is ground into dust, and only the fragrance remains. Plum blossom can actually be used as an example of sticking to oneself and not forgetting the original intention. 4. A counterexample can be Fang Zhongyong, who wrote poems with a pure heart from childhood to later. So I can only give some close examples. If there are materials, the cited materials can also be used as a paragraph to form a standard 6-paragraph formula. If the writing is wonderful at the beginning and the topic is deducted at the end, the composition will be fine.
5. Write an article about ancient poetry. As soon as Du Mu's A Fang Gong Fu came out, it attracted the admiration of scholars and rushed to read it.
Du Mu inherited the tradition of ancient prose movement in Tang Dynasty, used prose style, introduced prose brushwork and sentence patterns into Fu, managed the world, criticized the current malpractices, broke through the trend of more and more harmonious, rhythmic and formal Fu since the Six Dynasties, and created a new style of China ancient Fu-San Fu. "Epanggong Fu" is full of odd and even sentences, which are parallel and scattered, combining length and length, and integrating narrative, description and discussion. The full text is full of the rational style of historical theory and the brilliance of poetry and painting.
Throughout the full text, the following three authors are unique and have always been respected and praised by people. First of all, the description of Epang Palace is magnificent, which fully shows the author's high foothold and broad mind.
Open the first sentence, "six kings finish, the four seas are one; The rhyme of "one side of Shu is Chu" is abrupt and powerful, giving people the feeling of "Taishan topping the top". It not only briefly explains the background of a square palace, but also puts the full text in the perspective and height of the rise and fall of a country and the replacement of dynasties. Then, the author uses the so-called "camera" technology to drive readers' vision to feel the grand and exquisite beauty of Epang Palace architecture from multiple angles.
Seen from the air, the words "Overpressure" and "Mount Li" describe the vast area and scale of Epang Palace. The sentence "corridor waist" belongs to the concept of looking up, with heavy buildings and high eaves and extraordinary momentum; The phrase "a good dish" lengthens and broadens the lens, and looks at groups of pavilions from a macro perspective; The sentence of "long bridge" and "multiple roads" makes the reader's eyes shift with the camera and directly brings the reader into a colorful picture. Here, the author shows the grandeur, magnificence, wonders and brilliance of Epang Palace from far and near, combining with reality.
Secondly, this paper focuses on reality and is ambitious, which fully shows the insight of a sober politician. Du Mu lived in the late Tang Dynasty when domestic troubles and foreign invasion deepened. He has been concerned about state affairs since he was a teenager and has the ideal of reviving the Tang Dynasty.
The book "Revelation" says: "Paulie has a big palace, full of voices, pretending to be" Epang Palace Fu "." It can be seen that this article reminds the rulers of the Tang Dynasty that extravagance will inevitably lead to boiling public grievances and the destruction of the country and the nation, showing the feelings of an upright scholar who cares about the country and the people and helps the people.
This paper consists of two parts. The first part mainly describes and elaborates the extravagant and dissolute life of the rulers of the Qin Dynasty from three aspects: palace architecture, palace beauty and palace treasures. The second half is mainly about reasoning and discussion, which summarizes the historical lessons of the demise of the Qin Dynasty.
"Qin people can't help but feel sorry for themselves, and later people mourn for them. Later people mourn for them without learning their lessons, and they also mourn for future generations." What's more, it is like a huge cymbal Hong Zhong, echoing in the historical sky forever, echoing in people's ears, alerting the rulers from generation to generation. Thirdly, the cross-use of various figures of speech is the prominent feature of this paper.
As a pioneering work of prose, this paper breaks through the four-sentence style of parallel prose. Full-text sentence patterns are different in length, parallel prose coexists, and there is considerable leap between sentences, which has the meaning of prose. Sometimes pure prose sentence patterns are used, which makes the article have the characteristics of agile and changeable prose and prose poetry. Especially in rhetoric, this paper uses a variety of techniques, such as parallelism, exaggeration, duality, metaphor, comparison and so on. , and often combined with several criss-crossing rhetorical devices, so that the language of the article is concise, novel and strange, giving people a strong sense of beauty.
On the whole, the two sentences of "Long Bridge" and "Multi-channel" use duality, and the single sentence uses metaphor to unify the preceding and following sentences, while metaphor vividly depicts the wonders of the bridge and multi-channel. On the whole, six sentences use parallelism, and single sentences use "strong metaphor" figuratively, implying contrast and exaggerated rhetoric; It is precisely because of the combination of parallelism, metaphor, contrast and exaggeration that this passage effectively highlights the number of various items available to the rulers in Epang Palace, thus showing that the life of the rulers in Qin Dynasty was extremely luxurious, and the luxury and enjoyment of feudal emperors were based on the painful life of the people.
"The stars are shining, and the cosmetic mirror is opened ..." The five sentences also use a variety of rhetorical devices, such as parallelism, metaphor and exaggeration. In particular, the use of metaphor, put metaphor in front of the ontology, highlight metaphor, first give people a vivid picture, and then the ontology appears, arousing readers' rich imagination, deepening readers' impression, and indirectly rendering many beautiful women in Epang Palace. Du Mu's "Epanggong Fu" got rid of the slender and elegant style of writing in artistic style, swept away the old habits of the Six Dynasties and was very original. In terms of interest and knowledge, it is appropriate for him to stand tall and see far, and to satirize the present with the ancient and express his deep concern. The general catalogue of sikuquanshu evaluates him as "a broad-minded and multi-cut".
Answer supplements Wang Wei's famous landscape poem Autumn Night in the Mountain in the Tang Dynasty, which embodies the poet's noble feelings and pursuit of ideal realm in a poetic way. "The empty mountain after the rain stands in the autumn evening."
It is clearly written in the poem that there is a female fishing boat. How can the poet write that it is an "empty mountain"? It turned out that the lush trees in the mountains covered up the traces of people's activities. It's called "There seems to be no one on the empty mountain, but I think I hear a voice" (Chai Lu)! Because there are few people here, "no one in the cave knows about foreign affairs, and outsiders only see empty mountains and thick clouds" ("Peach Garden Tour"), most people naturally have rich mountains and people. The word "empty mountain" points out that this place is like a paradise.
In the early days of Shan Yu, everything was new. It was early autumn evening. It is conceivable that the air is fresh and the scenery is wonderful. The answer added: "The moonlight shines in the pine forest and the crystal stone shines in the stream."
It is already dark, but there is a bright moon in the sky; The flowers have withered, but there are pine trees covered. The mountain spring is clear, flowing through the rocks, like a pure white practice, shining in the moonlight, what a quiet and clear natural beauty! Wang Wei's "Four Sages on the Classics" once praised the noble sentiments of the two hermits, saying that "there is no evil wood in the shade, and drinking water must be extreme."
The poet himself is such a noble-minded person. He once said, "If you live in a wild forest, you might as well drink the water instead of sitting on the beam and watching the princes." This month, pine trees and stones are on the ground.
6. Ask where the intention of this composition is. Read the following materials and write at least 800 articles as required. Recently, my favorite cartoons are Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf, and Good Word Juice is one of them.
After watching this episode, I gained a lot. There are so many tricks to talk about. The protagonist of this episode is boiling sheep. Please look at the first shot: he sees the new scarf of Meiyangyang and opens his mouth to comment: "Oh, what age is it now?" Why are you still wearing such an old scarf! "Meiyangyang blushed, stared her eyes and turned away.
Boiling sheep casually said, "As for being so angry." Scene 2: Boiling sheep comes to the village chief's laboratory, looks at the slow sheep doing experiments and sighs, "Village chief, why do you make these boring inventions?" Slow sheep turned green after hearing it.
Boiling sheep looked around: "Look at this ... Look at this ... Your laboratory is really well arranged ..." Slow sheep was so angry that he finally couldn't help handing the newly invented "kind words juice" to boiling sheep, who drank it in one gulp. What's the result ... Look at the third shot: Boiling Sheep seems to be a different person: "Your laboratory is decorated with characteristics, which really matches your wisdom."
Slow Sheep was told with a smile on his face, and shyly scratched his forehead and said, "Hehe, is it?" Really? "Scene 4: The next day, Boiling Sheep was late for school. He said, "Your class was so vivid that I couldn't sleep at night, so I was late. "Slow sheep listened to secretly happy, let him go back to his seat first.
After passing the seat of Pleasant Goat, Boiling Goat said, "You are really handsome today." When passing by the lazy goat seat, the lazy goat said unhappily, "Why did the village chief criticize me for being late, not you?" Boiling sheep patted lazy sheep's hair and said, "That's because your hairstyle is so cool that the village chief is jealous."
Lazy sheep is suddenly enlightened, not only relieved, but also triumphant. Boiling Sheep returned to her seat and said to Meiyangyang, "Your scarf is so beautiful that it suits your temperament."
Meiyangyang asked in surprise, "You said yesterday that my scarf was out of date." Boiling sheep explained: "I said old-fashioned is tradition, tradition is virtue, and virtue is fashion."
In a few words, a smile appeared on Mei Yangyang's face. It's really "a good word warms three winters, and a bad word hurts people in June."
Language is really a science. When we look at others with appreciation, we will naturally find the bright spots in others and talk with others with wise words. Then our interpersonal relationship will be more harmonious and beautiful. Today, I also "drank" some "good words juice". Did you "drink" .