In normal study, work or life, everyone will inevitably come into contact with writing. Writing is an important means to cultivate people's observation, association, imagination, thinking and memory. Have no clue when writing a composition? The following are the comments on landscape composition that I have compiled for you for your reference, hoping to help friends in need.
There is a lot of snow in Xiling, and the ground, branches and roofs on the mountain are covered with snow everywhere.
The snow in Xiling Snow Mountain is so white, as white as cotton.
The snow in Xiling Snow Mountain is thick and hard to touch.
The yin and yang boundary of Xiling Snow Mountain is very strange, with fog on one side and sunny on the other.
The ski resort in Xiling Snow Mountain is very interesting. I really like it.
I love you! Xiling Snow Mountain!
Teacher's comment: This is an excellent composition about scenery. The author described Xiling Snow Mountain to us in vivid, vivid and concise language. The scenery description is vivid and lifelike, and it is like a vivid sketch of snow scenes in front of readers. Finally, the article points out the theme and expresses the author's love for Xiling Snow Mountain.
Write landscape composition and comment 2. Spring is coming! Spring is coming! The wind shook the willows' buds.
I saw a butterfly flying in the sky. I caught it happily and released it lovingly. The yellow winter jasmine bloomed, some smiled, and some covered my eyes shyly. It looks so cute. Who scratched my cheek? It turns out that grass sticks out from the ground!
Ding Dong, Ding Dong, who is singing? Oh! It turns out that the thawed stream is singing Tintin, which is really nice. The lush branches and leaves of this tree spread in all directions.
Beautiful spring is coming!
Teacher's comment: This is an excellent landscape composition, which gives spring vitality, lively language and smooth and beautiful sentences. "It turns out that grass sticks out from the ground" vividly expresses the characteristics of grass. The beginning and end of the article echo each other at a distance, highlighting the theme and expressing the author's love for spring.
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