The first sentence of the poem comes straight to the point, and the writing style of Wu Si Dredging is distinct, which sets off the performer's superb skills, that is, writing things, that is, writing people, killing two birds with one stone. The word "high autumn" not only means late autumn in September, but also means "crisp autumn", which is different from "late autumn" and "late autumn"
As soon as the beautiful and melodious string songs came out, the clouds in the empty Shan Ye slumped and stagnated, as if they were listening; Xiang Eqing and Motome, who are good at drumming, were also moved to tears by this music. The sentence "empty mountain" empathizes with things and writes a cloud with human auditory function and thoughts and feelings, which seems to be better than "if the sky is affectionate, the sky will get old" ("Golden Copper Fairy sings Chinese songs"). It complements the following sentence "Jiang 'e" and brings out the best in each other. In the first four sentences, the poet deliberately broke through the general writing method of telling people, time and place in turn, and made an elaborate arrangement, writing the piano first, and then writing people, time and place in tandem, interspersed among them. In this way, he highlighted the music and had the artistic power to take the lead.
Five or six sentences, written in front of music, but each has its own characteristics. The sentence of Kunshan is written by voice, with emphasis on the ups and downs of music. The phrase "Lotus" was written in the form of sound, which deliberately exaggerated the beauty of music. "Phoenix Call in Kunshan" is graceful, and sometimes the strings are played together, just like a landslide, which is difficult to distinguish; Sometimes, a string sounds alone, just like a phoenix chirping, shaking trees, very sonorous. The idea of "Lianku Lanxiao" is very strange. Lotus flowers with dewdrops are not uncommon, and blooming orchids really give people the impression of wanting to laugh. They are all incarnations of beauty. The poet used "lotus crying dew" to describe the sadness of Qin, and "xianglan laughing" to express the joy of Qin.
From the seventh sentence to the end of the article, I wrote about sound effects. First, I write about the neighborhood. The cold air in front of Chang 'an Twelve Roads was completely melted by the rustle. In fact, cold air can't melt, because Li Ping plays so well that people are intoxicated by his wonderful string songs, and even can't feel the cold dew in late autumn. It also refers to the emperor of heaven and the emperor at that time. The poet's substitution of the word "purple emperor" for "king" is not only a novel pursuit of diction and sentence formation, but also a clever transitional technique, which connects the preceding with the following and naturally expands the artistic conception of poetry from the world to the fairy house. In the next six sentences, the poet flew to heaven and holy mountain with the wings of imagination, bringing the reader into a broader, deeper and more magical realm. Nu Wa, who is mending the sky, is fascinated and forgets her duty. As a result, the unprecedented autumn rain poured down. This kind of imagination is so bold, unexpected and touching. The word "tease" closely links the powerful charm of music with the above-mentioned strange and magnificent scenes. Moreover, breaking ground is safe, and autumn rain is the scene.
In the fifth couplet, the poet described the holy mountain from heaven. Wonderful music was introduced into the holy mountain, and the teacher was moved by it. Music has a deep sense of things, which leads to "old fish jumping thin dumplings" The poet decorated the ichthyosaur with two seemingly flat and shriveled words, "old" and "thin", but they produced completely opposite artistic effects, which made the musical image fuller. Old fish and thin dumplings used to be weak, but now they dance to the melody of music. This unexpected image description makes it invisible.
The above eight sentences are about form and sound, and most of them are moving images. They are novel and magnificent, dazzling. At the end of the sentence, it is changed to a still life for further comparison: WU GANG, who has been chopping laurels all day, is exhausted and stands for a long time, forgetting to sleep; Jade rabbit crouched aside, letting the dew in the middle of the night keep falling on her body, soaking her sweater and refusing to leave. These beautiful images full of thoughts and feelings, like the bright moon projected on the water, are deeply imprinted in the readers' hearts, distant, amusing and memorable.
The greatest feature of poetry is its peculiar imagination, vivid image and romanticism. The poet is committed to transforming his abstract feelings, feelings and ideas about sound into concrete images with the help of association, making them visible and sensible. There is no skill to judge Li Ping directly in the poem, nor does it directly describe the poet's self-feeling, but only describes the music and its effect. However, the whole article is full of poet's feelings.