2. There are two directions in how to write a static composition. One is the "quiet" scene, which is itself a landscape. When writing, it is mainly to grasp the obvious characteristics of the scene, such as shape, color, posture, luster, smell and so on. The second is the "moving" scene. Any moving scenery has its quiet moments, such as the silence of "birds" and "big banyan trees" in Bird Paradise.
Write a good static scene, mainly from three aspects. First of all, to grasp the overall impression of a static scene, we can start with modeling and color. Secondly, we should grasp the main features and use comparative methods to make them more prominent, such as the writing of the Great Wall. Thirdly, in order to highlight the main characteristics of "static", you can also use the contrast hairstyle (with "dynamic" lining "static"). When describing scenery, the method of "grasping silence" can give readers a warm and quiet enjoyment.
Please adopt it, thank you!
There are both static composition and dynamic composition. Everything in the world has not only a static side, but also a moving side. This is because all still life, such as books, pens and houses, are always changing and developing, and people's imagination can make still things "move". On the other hand, all animals, cats, dogs and lions, will be forever. It is not people's subjective imagination, but the objective reality that things already exist. In order to reflect these facts, the composition should not only write their "static" but also their "dynamic".
After understanding this truth, we can further say that if the composition describes these things and is not written by combining static and dynamic, it will not fully reflect the true face of things. In this way, how can we write these things well?
The composition "Corner" written by Wu Yang (Sichuan) has a static and dynamic description of things.
Last semester, the teacher guided us to set up a "book corner" in our class, which is very meaningful to our class.
The "Book Corner" is located in the left rear of our classroom. Around the "book corner" are patterns of trees and grass cut and pasted by students. There is a big carton. On the front and both sides of the carton, there are three pictures drawn by students themselves. The word "book box" is written on the box cover. The big bookcase contains many books donated by students, including fairy tales, fables and historical stories.
Building this "book corner" is the teacher's painstaking efforts, in order to exercise our self-care ability and create a "reading world" for us. Since the establishment of the "Book Corner", students can raise their "library cards" after class and borrow a book from the students who are in charge of borrowing books. Up to now, I have borrowed more than ten books in succession.
I seem to see the big book box in the "book corner" turned into a big ship. Students sit on the boat, swimming, paddling and "fishing" in the boundless ocean of knowledge.
The author used a "static" description when describing the exhibition of the "Book Corner", but in the last section, "I seem to see the big book box of the" Book Corner "turned into a big ship", and the students paddled in the ocean of knowledge, and so on. , which leads to the dynamic description with the help of imagination. In this way, there is a combination of static movement, static movement and dynamic, which makes this composition vivid and vivid.
4. Describe a static composition and learn some landscape sketching methods of about 200 words. In composition teaching, we often ask students to describe the scenery, and some fragments practice writing the scenery; Travel notes such as spring outing and autumn outing should write scenery; Some propositional compositions also require the description of scenery ... Most students can only state stories in the abstract, but can't write the scenery tangible, colorful, tasteful and emotional, which is often "difficult to get together".
So, how to learn landscape painting? In this paper, taking the lesson "Seaside Town" as an example, several methods of landscape sketch are discussed: 1. Close-up and long-range display level. When describing the beautiful scenery of the seaside town, the author carefully observes and grasps the characteristics, from far to near, step by step and orderly.
For example, in section 1-3 of the text, we first talk about the scenery of the sea, then talk about the seaside scene in the morning, and finally talk about the shells on the beach and the return of fishing fleets. As can be seen from the article, the distant view plays a foil role, but it is only roughly outlined, while the close-up view is the main body and plays a major role, so it is described by the close-up lens.
2. The static scenery and dynamic scenery are ingeniously coordinated. In this paper, the combination of dynamic and static descriptions is adopted to make the dynamic and static scenes set each other off.
For example, in the third part of the text, the author wrote about the beach. First, he wrote that there are beautiful shells everywhere, and people turn a blind eye to them, so the shells have to lie there alone. This is a description of a still scene; Then, with a stroke of a pen, the description of static scenery was changed to that of dynamic scenery, and it was written that as soon as the fleet returned to shore with full loads, the beach became noisy, forming a sharp contrast, static and dynamic, highlighting the beautiful scenery of the seaside. 3. Real scenes and virtual scenes are always suitable.
While describing the real scene, properly introducing the virtual scene can cultivate students' ability of association and imagination, make the artistic conception enter a high realm and add magical colors to the picture. For example, writing words in the yard of a small town, grasping the characteristics of "many trees are planted in every yard", wrote "Indus bloom, so lively, the town seems to be shrouded in red clouds".
Among them, the word "lively" vividly depicts the scene of the flowers of the phoenix tree competing to open, giving people a sense of beauty. "Small town seems to be shrouded in a red cloud", which gives people a vague meaning. Bloom is in full swing, connected as a piece, like a red cloud, which is full of small towns. This virtual description adds a bit of beauty to the beauty of the small town.
4. Scenery and characters are harmonious. A good landscape article cannot be without people and their activities.
In the article, the author expresses his thoughts and feelings of loving his hometown by describing the scene. The author wrote in the article: "When people walk to the end of the street, they can see the vast sea." "The fishermen on sailboats and the soldiers on warships are plated with gold on their faces and arms."
"Every rest day, the stone bench is always full of people." "People cleaned the streets so clean that there was not a leaf left."
All the lines are filled with the breath of peace and quiet life. To sum up, if you want to make the scenery tangible, colorful and tasteful, you should not only see it with your eyes, hear it with your ears and smell it with your nose, but also feel it with your heart to improve your language ability.
5. There are two directions for how to write a static composition. One is the "quiet" scene, which is itself a landscape. When writing, it is mainly to grasp the obvious characteristics of the scene, such as shape, color, posture, luster, smell and so on. The second is the "moving" scene. Any moving scenery has its quiet moments, such as the silence of "birds" and "big banyan trees" in Bird Paradise.
Write a good static scene, mainly from three aspects. First of all, to grasp the overall impression of a static scene, we can start with modeling and color. Secondly, we should grasp the main features and use comparative methods to make them more prominent, such as the writing of the Great Wall. Thirdly, in order to highlight the main characteristics of "static", you can also use the contrast hairstyle (with "dynamic" lining "static"). When describing scenery, the method of "grasping silence" can give readers a warm and quiet enjoyment.
Please adopt it, thank you!
6. Talk about the beauty of spring with the method of turning motion into stillness. About 200 words. The scenery of spring is coming. The grass is green and the flowers are red. Grass grows quietly from the ground. In the spring breeze, the grass wavers. Seen from a distance, a large area looks beautiful.
The grass climbs hard, and you won't let me. When you are tired, drink a little dew that has just rained. As long as a drop of dew can moisten the whole body of the grass, the grass climbs desperately, and leaves the ground early to breathe the fresh air of this bright world, sighing: "Ah, what a splendid world, I want to grow up quickly!" " Flowers are also growing hard, and two wildflowers bloom early. Are those spring eyebrows? Lovely grass holding beautiful flowers, grass everywhere, flowers smile in the wind. How beautiful! There are different kinds of flowers in different places, such as peach blossom, pear blossom and apricot blossom ... Their colorful cheeks attract many children.
7. Use static and dynamic methods to describe the role of snowflakes. Snowflakes are beautiful crystals, which are formed in the process of falling.
The size of a single snowflake is usually between 0.05 and 4.6 mm, and the snowflake is very light, with a single weight of only 0.2-0.5 g.
No matter how small a snowflake is, it is wonderful. Its crystals are all regular hexagons. Therefore, the ancients said that "there are five flowers in vegetation and six snowflakes". How beautiful and light the snowflake is! I like snowflakes more and more. If I can witness the snow-covered earth and the silver-covered green trees again, it will really be a pleasure.
"Xue Rui heralds a bumper harvest year" is an agricultural proverb widely circulated in China. In the north, a thick layer of loose snow is like covering wheat with a quilt to keep out the cold.
The cold nitrogen in snow is easily absorbed and utilized by crops. The low temperature of snow water can freeze the pests on the surface and bring benefits to agricultural production.
So there is another agricultural proverb, "wheat covers three layers in winter and sleeps with steamed bread in the next year." Snow has a wide range of functions, but it is of great benefit to mankind.
First, it is beneficial to the growth and development of crops. Because of the poor thermal conductivity of snow, covering the soil surface with a layer of snow cover can reduce the diffusion of soil heat and block the invasion of cold air on the snow surface, so the crops protected by snow can survive the winter safely.
Snow can also store water for crops. In addition, snow can enhance soil fertility.
According to the determination, every 1 liter of snow water contains about 7.5 grams of nitride. Snow water permeates the soil, which is equivalent to applying nitrogen fertilizer once.
Feeding livestock and poultry with snow water and irrigating crops can obtain obvious benefits. Snow is both beneficial and harmful to people. In mid-spring in March and April, if it suddenly snows because of the cold wave.
It will cause severe cold. Therefore, the agricultural proverb says, "La Xue is a treasure, but Chun Xue is not good."
The influence of snow on human health In winter, it snows heavily and endlessly. People often ignore the role of snow when watching Yushu Qionghua.
Snow has many benefits to human health. Compendium of Materia Medica has long recorded that snow water can detoxify and cure the plague.
There is a folk prescription for treating fire burns and frostbite with snow water. Taking a bath with snow water often can not only enhance the resistance between skin and body, reduce diseases, but also promote blood circulation and enhance physical fitness.
Drinking clean snow water for a long time can prolong life. This is one of the "secrets" of those who have lived in the deep mountains and forests for a long time.
Why does snow have such strange functions? Because snow water contains less heavy water than ordinary water 1/4. Heavy water will seriously inhibit the life process of living things.
After testing, fish will die quickly in water containing 30-50% heavy water. The most basic condition for the formation of rain and snow is the existence of "condensation nuclei" in the atmosphere, and solid impurities such as dust, coal particles and minerals in the atmosphere are the most ideal condensation nuclei.
If meteorological factors such as water vapor and temperature in the air reach certain conditions, water vapor will condense into snowflakes around these condensation nuclei. Therefore, snowflakes can clean a lot of pollutants in the air.
So every time after the heavy snow, the air is particularly fresh. According to the measurement, the density of new snow is generally 0.05-0. 10g per cubic centimeter.
Therefore, the reflectivity of ground snow to sound waves is extremely low, which can absorb a lot of sound waves and help reduce noise. The thermal insulation function of Melissa Zhou is like a wonderful carpet covering the earth, so that the ground temperature will not drop too low because of the cold in winter.
This heat preservation effect of snow is inseparable from its own characteristics. As we all know, it is warm to wear a cotton-padded jacket in winter. Why is it warm to wear a cotton-padded jacket? This is because the porosity of cotton is very high, and the pores of cotton are filled with a lot of air, which has poor thermal conductivity. This layer of air prevents the heat of human body from spreading outward.
The snow covering the breast of the earth is very similar to cotton, and the porosity between snowflakes is very high. It is this layer of air that drills into the pores of the snow to protect the ground temperature from falling very low. Of course, the thermal insulation function of snow changes with the density at any time.
It's like wearing a new cotton-padded jacket, which is especially warm, and the old cotton-padded jacket is not very warm. The density of fresh snow is low, and there is a lot of air stored in it, so the heat preservation effect is particularly strong.
Chen Xue is like an old cotton-padded jacket, with high density and weak heat preservation effect, because there is less air stored in it. Why does the more air an object stores, the stronger the heat preservation effect? This is because air is a bad conductor.
As we know, any object itself can transfer heat, and this property of transferring heat is called the thermal conductivity of the object. Among several common substances in nature, air has the worst thermal conductivity.
Therefore, the more air an object contains, the worse its thermal conductivity. Because the amount of air contained in snow changes greatly, the thermal conductivity of snow also changes greatly.
Generally, the newly fallen snow has large pores and the best heat preservation effect. In the late stage of snow melting in spring, snow is soaked by water, and its thermal conductivity is closer to that of water, so the thermal insulation effect of snow tends to disappear. Snow erosion is the erosion caused by frequent melting and frost heaving of snow fields under the periglacial climate conditions.
Snow erosion occurs in polar and sub-polar regions without ice sheets, as well as in alpine regions below the snow line and above the tree line. The annual average temperature there is about 0℃, which belongs to permafrost region.
On the one hand, the alternate freezing and thawing of the edge of the snowfield destroys the surface material through ice cracking; On the one hand, snow melting will take away the crushed fine substances, so snow erosion includes two functions: denudation and transportation. With the deepening of the bottom of the snowfield and the expansion of its periphery, a wide and shallow basin-shaped concave land with small peripheral slope is gradually formed on the hillside, that is, the snow melting concave land.
Its shape, origin and spatial distribution are different from those of ice buckets, but they are related. When the climate becomes cold and the snow line drops, the snow-eroded depression can develop into an ice bucket; On the contrary, when the climate warms and glaciers recede, ice buckets can degenerate into snow-melting depressions.
Under different natural and geographical conditions, the way and speed of snow erosion are different. Where the latitude is low, the precipitation is high and the freezing and thawing days are many, the snow erosion rate is faster, and the snow erosion is deep and large.
For example, snow erosion is very common in Xiaoxing 'anling area of Northeast China. On the contrary, snow erosion is weak in places with high latitude, little precipitation and low temperature in summer.
The influence of ground slope is: steep slope >; 40. Snow fields are not easy to exist; Snow erosion on the flat land is slow; Snow erosion is most active on the slope of about 30. Textbook Analysis of birds of paradise: People's Education Edition of Nine-year Compulsory Education in Primary Schools.
8. Use static and dynamic methods to describe snowflakes. Miss Qiu quietly left, and Grandpa Dong walked into the world with naughty snowflakes.
I hang ice flowers on the window in the morning, and I wipe them with my hands. It feels so cold! I looked through the window, ah! The world has become a place of little snowflakes. As soon as I opened the door, a snowflake fell on my face, feeling cold. Soon, the snowflake became a small drop of water and slipped down my face.
I saw the car wearing a white hat, the young tree wearing a white cotton-padded jacket, and the children wearing thick cotton-padded clothes, pants and gloves. When I came to school, I saw some students playing with snow poles and making snowmen ... Seeing that they were so happy, I couldn't wait to put my schoolbag on the ground, first hold a handful of snow, then pinch it together and throw it to a boy.
Suddenly, a snowflake splashed on his back. Suddenly, a boy threw a snowball at me. I dodged left and right and finally escaped his attack. Snowball flew by me and I smiled.
After a while, the snow stopped and the sun came out. Our snowman smiles at the sun! The sun shines on the snow, very bright. The branches are covered with silver bars and snowballs. As soon as the wind blows, silver bars and snowballs fall and break into pieces, like jade-like snow foam dispersed with the wind. It's really beautiful.
I love the revival of everything in spring, I love the hot sun in summer, I also love the golden color in autumn, but I love white clothes in winter more.
9.3 Composition: (1) Composition that describes Yun with metaphor; (2) Describe the sky with motion and stillness, the vast and boundless stage, and the white clouds are "staging" wonderful programs.
Look, some clouds are floating in the distance. The front one is like a sheep, and the back one is like a rooster. They were chased by a monster without a tail and looked obviously frightened. My friends and I shouted to the sky, "Sheep and rooster, run!" " "They seem to hear this cry, but something unfortunate happened. The monster seemed to speed up, passed the rooster in the blink of an eye and caught up with the sheep. Just when the monster and the sheep rolled into a ball, the original rooster turned into a rabbit. Look at the sheep and monsters. Where are they still? It turned out that they merged with each other and appeared as tigers again. This tiger is fierce, but unfortunately it only has two legs in tandem. It just walked on with its head down and didn't find the rabbit behind it ... After a while, the tiger's head disappeared, its legs disappeared and its tail was broken. Gradually, its body dispersed and the rabbit disappeared. ...
I love the beauty of spring, and I love the dream and magic when I look at clouds in spring!
1. The sky is still light blue and shallow. In the blink of an eye, a Xia Hong appeared on the horizon, slowly expanding the scope and strengthening the light. I knew the sun was going to rise on the horizon, so I didn't look there in the blink of an eye. Sure enough, after a while, half of the sun's face appeared in that place. Red is Zhen Hong, but there is no light. The sun seems to be struggling to rise slowly step by step. Finally, it finally broke through the clouds and jumped out of the sea completely, with a lovely red color. In an instant, this crimson round thing suddenly shone brightly, making people's eyes ache, and the clouds beside it suddenly became dazzling. Sometimes the sun goes into the clouds, but its light shoots down from the clouds and hits the water directly. It's not easy to tell clear water from sky at this time, because I only see a light. Sometimes there are black clouds on the horizon, and the clouds are so thick that people can't see the sun when it comes out. However, the sun's radiation in the dark clouds passed through the encirclement of the dark clouds and set them with glowing Phnom Penh. Later, the sun slowly rushed out of the tight encirclement and appeared in the sky, even dyeing the dark clouds purple or red. At this time, not only the sun, clouds and sea water shine, but also I become bright.
10. On the composition of static and dynamic, everything in the world has not only a static side, but also a dynamic side.
This is because all still lives, such as books, pens and houses, are constantly changing and developing, and people's imagination can make still lives "move". On the other hand, all animals, cats, dogs and lions, always have a moment of rest.
Therefore, combining static and dynamic things is not a subjective imagination of people, but an objective reality that things already exist. To reflect these facts, the composition should not only write their "quietness", but also write their "movement".
Understand this truth, we can further say that if the composition describes these things, if it is not written by combining static and dynamic, it will not fully reflect the true face of things. In this way, how can we write these things well? The composition Book Corner written by Wu Yang (Sichuan).
Have a static and dynamic description of things. Last semester, the teacher guided us to set up a "book corner" in our class, which was a very meaningful thing for our class.
The "Book Corner" is located in the left rear of our classroom. Around the "Book Corner" are trees and grass patterns cut and pasted by students.
There is a big carton in the corner of the book. On the front and both sides of the carton, there are three pictures drawn by students themselves, and the word "book box" is written on the lid. The big bookcase contains many books donated by students, including fairy tales, fables, historical stories, popular science books and so on.
"Book Corner" is a good friend of our class. Building this "book corner" is the teacher's painstaking efforts, in order to temper our self-care ability and create a "reading world" for us.
Because there is a "book corner", after class, students can raise their "library cards" and borrow a book from the students who are in charge of borrowing books. Up to now, I have borrowed more than ten books and read one, and I feel that I have gained a lot of knowledge.
At the end of this semester, the class teacher gave me the following comments: I love science, like reading extracurricular books, and have a wide range of knowledge ... I seem to see the big book box in the "book corner" become a big ship. Students sit on the boat and swim in the boundless ocean of knowledge. Everyone paddles while "fishing". The author used a "static" description when describing the display of the corner of the book, but in the last section, "I seem to see that the big book box of the corner of the book has become a big ship", and the students paddle in the ocean of knowledge, with the help of imagination, resulting in a dynamic description.
In this way, there is stillness in motion, stillness in motion, and the combination of motion and static makes this composition vivid and full.