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green shoots
Green shoots,
The young man said:
"Develop yourself!"
Pale white flowers,
The young man said:
"Contribute yourself!"
Deep red fruit,
The young man said:
"Sacrifice yourself!"
Imitate:
Tiny seeds,
The boy said:
"Break through yourself!"
Young branches and leaves,
The boy said:
"Improve yourself!"
Towering trees,
The boy said:
"Extend yourself!"
Appreciate:
Each section in this poem can be a poem independently, and its meaning is quite complete, but in terms of ideological realm and artistic attainments, they are connected into a whole, so that the meaning of the poem runs through. The order of "bud", "flower" and "fruit" implies the process of fruit trees from germination to flowering for people to appreciate and dedicate their achievements to mankind, which just corresponds to the life course of young people. Just as young people need to learn to improve, when buds turn into flowers, they should not be narcissistic, but beautify nature, just as young people should use their youth to contribute to society and eventually form "fruits". For another example, young people should sacrifice their own spirit, create greater value for society and make their lives more brilliant. The whole poem is like this, comparing the growth of young people to the growth of plants, thus warning young people, including the author himself, to work hard, constantly enrich themselves. Make greater contributions to mankind. This poem uses personification and repetition to show a pure mind and a real world. At the same time, it also eulogizes the beautiful youth and positive life. The combination of "green bud", "pale flower" and "deep red fruit" is the whole pure life. Such a pure life. It can only be interpreted in poetry. It is precisely because of this that the author can form an organic whole with these difficult words. It can be said that her childlike heart has brought a unique system to the world and language, a system that ordinary people and vulgar language can't have.
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Original text:
Mom!
The wind and rain in the sky are coming.
The bird hides in its nest.
The storm in my heart is coming.
I only hide in your arms.
Appreciate:
The poet used vivid metaphors to convey the feelings of maternal love, and his writing was sincere and touching.
This kind of ode to mother's love occupies a considerable proportion in Stars and Spring Water. It can be said that it is the affectionate praise of maternal love that lays the deep and delicate emotional tone of these two works. Closely related to praising maternal love is cherishing childlike innocence, childlike interest, childlike innocence and all new things.
Imitate:
Books!
The traveler in the desert is thirsty,
He will look for oases;
The desert in my heart is coming,
Only you give me a bath.
Teacher!
The dust on the ground is coming,
Trees block the wind and sand with branches and leaves;
The dust in my heart is coming,
Did you clear away the confusion for me?
Motherland!
The cold wind in winter is coming,
These geese returned to the south.
Winter has come in my heart,
I can only return to your arms.
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Original text:
Childhood!
This is a fact in the dream.
This is a real dream.
Think of it with a tearful smile.
Appreciate:
This poem celebrates innocence, and only childhood is the truest, just like in a dream, just like in a dream. Memories of innocence make people cry, which is very gratifying.
"Stars in Spring Water" is recognized as the highest achievement of the poem, and Mao Dun called it "starry sky lattice" and "spring water body". Its theme is: maternal love, nature and innocence, which constructs Bing Xin's ideological core "philosophy of love".
I think childhood is an indispensable thing in a person's growth process, and childhood will often become a precious and beautiful memory in the future. Innocent games seem to condense a pure childhood. Childhood! It's the truth in the dream, and it's the dream in the real world. In this modern society, childhood is like a dream, an innocent dream.
Imitate:
Youth!
This is a bud in a flower.
This is a flower in bud.
This is the wet corner of my eye when I sleep.
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original text
There is another sky.
Dickinson
There is another sky.
Always calm and clear
There is another kind of sunshine.
Even in the dark
Never mind the disappearance of the forest.
Never mind the silence of the field.
There is a small forest here.
The leaves in the forest are evergreen.
There are more beautiful gardens.
There is never frost or cold.
In its immortal flower
I heard bees buzzing happily.
My brother
Please visit my garden.
Appreciate:
After reading this poem, I only feel very quiet, just like the scene described in the poem, peaceful, gentle and quiet.
We can try our best to revive those images from concise poems, feel the beauty of "different sky, different sunshine, evergreen grove and bright garden" described in the poems, and let them feel a yearning heart.
Dickinson showed an uncontrollable rebellious attitude towards the traditional poetic norms. Dickinson tends to be microscopic and introspective, and her artistic temperament is almost elegant.
She writes about the germination, burning and loss of love with sweet but not greasy joy, blazing and implicit confidence, bitter but not sour pain and persistent and lasting hatred. Love is the focus of her poems, and her writing is fresh and unique.
She writes with nature as her home. She often describes it in detail, accurately and vividly. Some ordinary scenes can always make people feel a kind of beauty that is unquestionable and exists in her works, but has never been felt by ordinary people.
She loves life and tries to explore, explain and express the meaning of life from many aspects and levels.
Her language is simple and fresh, with a "rough beauty" and sometimes a childishness like children's learning. In rhythm, she basically uses four lines of hymns, iambic four-step three-step alternation, and even rhymes. However, this simple form is ever-changing, and she is neither completely bound by the steps nor forced to make up.
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There is also a piece of land.
There is also a piece of land.
Always quiet and peaceful
There is another kind of vitality.
Even in winter.
Never mind that the river is frozen.
Never mind the loneliness of the plateau.
There is a stream here.
Clear water often flows in streams.
There are more lush grasslands.
Never haggard.
On its immortal grass
I heard the sound of hooves.
my friend
Please visit my grassland.
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Andante cantabile
Xi Murong
There must be something.
I don't understand.
Otherwise, vegetation will grow in order.
And migratory birds can fly back to their hometown.
There must be something.
This is beyond my ability.
Otherwise, how can the alternation of day and night be so fast?
All the moments are missed.
Sorrow erodes my heart.
There must be something.
I had to give up after the leaves fell.
Is it my diary when I was sixteen or
I've hidden it all my life.
Those beautiful secrets are like lilies.
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If the lines in Xi Murong's poems are full of sweet melancholy, then I haven't tasted any sweetness in the cantabile. If Xi Murong's poems are dreamy and gentle, then Andante is profound and helpless after waking up. There is love, homesickness and life in Xi Murong's poems. Her love can only exist in poems, although it will not happen in reality. Need to persist. Life in Xi Murong's poems is simple after washing away the lead. Everyone once had the best hope, but time will make it fade and become more and more blurred. When we are mercilessly abandoned by pure love and romance and reduced to life, we will find that there are actually too many things that we can't understand, such as the orderly growth of vegetation and the return of migratory birds to the south; There is too much helplessness, growing day and night ... the older you grow, the farther your dreams are, not that you are unwilling to persist. It's just that there is always too much helplessness in our growth, and because of too much helplessness, we grow up and go to another world called life with all our feelings and gratitude. However, after the precipitation and erosion of time, can we still have a full and pure heart?
Xi Murong's "Andante" contains three sentences: I will do something, I can't understand it, I can't do anything, I will give up. It expresses the helplessness of life in its growth and the fragility in the face of fate and life ideals. However, when all the unhappiness and helplessness meet with Xi Murong, everything will be released and then calm down. What I admire most about Xi Murong is her femininity. Genghis Khan's blood runs through her body, which determines that she still has the vastness of the grassland and the tenacity of the Mongols. What kind of integration is this? Xi Murong is such a person who can blend the two harmoniously. Simplicity and harmony are the connotations of grassland and Xi Murong. She has fantastic purity towards love, sacred reverence towards life and simple gratitude towards life. She is very satisfied and kind. Happy are those who live a serious ordinary life. The most precious thing about Xi Murong is that he always hopes with a pure heart, lives with a grateful heart and treats life with a calm heart. With these, there is nothing to be afraid of.
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There's always a way.
I don't understand.
or
Why does the sun rise and set every day?
The moon always takes over in time.
There's always a way.
I can't stop it.
or
Why does the river rush so fast?
All the feelings are gone.
Lonely people stay in their hearts.
There's always a way.
I had to accept it after the flower died.
It's the address book I treasured when I graduated.
still
In my dreams every night
Those warm memories are like the afternoon sunshine.