First, the direct description type
1, the autumn wind blows away the hot summer and replaces it with cool autumn. In the morning, the sun shines on the floor through the window, bringing warmth, and the sunrise is also very moist, embedded in the old branches and leaves. Clouds float slowly in the clear blue sky, and autumn is more beautiful and profound in the cool autumn wind.
It's quiet around, only the sound of nature. Looking around, endless mountains, green fields, green rivers, white clouds floating under the blue sky, green grass like flowers, singing and dancing, clear and sweet streams running through the whole forest. What a natural and harmonious picture! (Jiangsu Huai 'an Volume "Harmony in Dreams")
3, lush everywhere, flowers and trees in groups, swaying trees, swaying flowers, surrounded by lush bamboo, cool breeze blowing, leaves flying, just a little soft. Flowers are patchy, pink, white, yellow and lavender. Flowers float quietly in the silent air with a slight fragrance. (Yichang, Hubei, Volume "My Dream Cabin")
In the crisp autumn season, the distant mountains are a ray of quiet indigo in light blue. At dusk, above a hazy mountain peak, there is a mysterious golden purple inlaid. In the winter morning, after a night of snowflakes, the distant mountain is a soft silver curve, so pure and noble. The spring is bright and the distant mountains are full of vitality. If there is anything, just bask in the sun in the warm spring breeze. In the hot summer, its image seems to be much fuller, and it seems that you can see the moist breath in the transpiration of mountains. (Shandong Linyi Volume "Reading the Far Mountains")
5. The wind blows slowly, and it blows the golden Ye Er in one place. Twilight will begin. The sparkling water waves rippled away and kneaded into a string of Phnom Penh, which merged with the extended bluestone trail. (Zhejiang Ningbo Volume "Communication")
6, the smoke is vast, the water and the sky are connected, and on the blue sea, the white sails are a little bit, and the waves are rough; Several seagulls skimmed the sea from time to time, and the sweet pigeon whistle faintly came from the breeze. The sea, vast and deep, with its majestic momentum, noisily pushes layers of waves to the shore. The beach is like a naked woman's body, bearing the gentle touch of the waves again and again. Every time the tide recedes, it will leave a white and moist kiss. (Guangxi Baise Volume "Charming Seaside")
Second, the scene fusion type
1. On days with long white clouds, the sky is exceptionally blue and the earth is unusually empty. When the high wind blows, a vibrant heart dances on the green grass. A heart, plus a pair of feet, outlines the scenery of my youth grazing in the distance. (Shanghai Volume "Full of Vibrant Years")
At dawn, the village is filled with foggy air, covered with a gentle mist, just like a shy girl wearing a thin veil, giving people a soft and hazy beauty. Soon, the breeze dispersed the mist and a big lotus pond came into view. The lotus flowers in the pool are beautiful, some are graceful, some stand out from the crowd, and some don't even have the courage to surface. In this scene, there is a faint blue light flowing. I seem to have entered Penglai wonderland, and the beginning of the day begins with the beauty of nature. (Shandong Gaoqing Volume "Voice of Nature")
3. The warm sunshine sweeps across the slightly wrinkled water surface, and the clear crystal water blooms with a blurred and moving luster. I picked it up carefully, so soft and fragile that I was afraid it would suddenly fall down and turn into a cloud. Through its bright body, I saw myself clearly. So, I am confused: am I water or am I water? (Hubei Wuhan Volume "Water")
4. It was raining in Mao Mao outside the window, and the breeze mixed with Mao Mao rain rushed to the window and brushed my face. What kind of enjoyment, what kind of comfort, there is a trace of tenderness in hardness and a trace of comfort in slight pain. (Sichuan Nanchong Volume "Outside the Window, That Rain")
5. You can imagine how breathtaking it is to stand on the street corner and look at the lush and endless buttonwood trees! I like to touch the trunk of Wolong, listen to the whispers of leaves and enjoy the sunshine scattered on the ground through the leaves. (Yichang, Hubei, Volume "Small Street is Beautiful")
Third, the clever use of rhetoric.
1, he sat alone by the window, and the dark sky was divided into several pieces by the window edge. The stars are scattered around the bright first quarter moon, as if Hui Jin were shining on the lake under the caress of the sunset. The night is beautiful and quiet, making people unable to breathe. (Henan Volume "The Most Beautiful Mind")
2. The red sun in the west painted the sky with silent orange. Under the setting sun, the vicissitudes of the ancient road are full of blurred customs, which is particularly quiet. Everything in the world seems to be intoxicated in this frozen but very short-lived Miri, Malaysia, and all voices are stopped. (Shandong Gaoqing Volume "The Sound of the Piano Touches My Heart")
3. The water in Huanglong Cave either condenses casually, or falls like a silk curtain, or flows like a string. A little fun, a little love. It is this beautiful and delicious water that has been watered and dripped for thousands of times, which makes the uneven stalactites in Huanglong Cave strange, like jade bamboo shoots, like swords, like birds and animals. Some are like a meditation girl, and some are like a Buddha falling into the dust. Between this image and the non-image, it leaves us a lot of room for imagination. (Hunan Yiyang Volume "Into the Magical Underground Magic Palace")
It's already late autumn. On the shore, the golden leaves are like withered butterflies, dragged feebly into the river in the wind. The river is full of leaves, as if carrying sadness, surging towards the long night. At night, it's quiet here, and the faint river seems to tell people something ...
The sun is close to the top of the mountain, and the dazzling white sunshine on the hillside gradually turns into a yellowish color, but the air is still sultry, mixed with the smell of rice, hay and earth, like a furry towel wrapped around people, uncomfortable and uncomfortable. (Guangxi Baise Volume "Country Evening")
Buddha depends on gold, and man depends on clothes. Article is the art of language, and language is the flower of thought. The composition in the examination room should not only pursue the freshness of language, but also the novelty of conception. If we can use various rhetorical devices to modify it, then the language of the article can be innovative and surprisingly colorful. These wonderful fragments presented to everyone are a highlight of the perfect composition. Read them carefully!
First, the clever use of metaphor, vivid image
Metaphor can make plain vivid, abstruse simple, abstract concrete and lengthy concise. No wonder the famous writer Qin Mu said, "A wonderful metaphor is like a magic wand in a fairy tale. Wherever you meet, there will be magical changes. " In composition, making good use of metaphors can make your composition vivid and full of brilliance. Please look at these wonderful clips:
1, mother's love, like a ray of sunshine in winter, shines warmly on my whole body; Dad's love is as deep as a tree in the mountain, so that I can never beat the wind and rain; My love is not earth-shattering, but just like a breeze blowing around them. (Shandong Zibo Volume "In and out, true love is infinite")
2. History is not only a narrative bookshelf, but also because there are thoughts and souls there, and books have established the backbone of the Chinese nation. (Henan Volume "Reading History and Expressing Feelings")
Just like cicadas are used to making noise, wasps are used to stinging people, and children are used to crying, so my hometown has formed a habit that is hard to change and has never changed. (Anhui Volume "Habits")
4, a good word warms three winters, and tolerance is the warm sun on the snowy mountain in winter; Bad words hurt people. If you have a tolerant heart, use it as a cooling air conditioner in hot summer. (Shandong Jining Volume "Tolerance is Sunshine")
5, the four seasons go round and round, perfectly harmonious with nature, like a delicate and smooth porcelain bottle. And human beings are also part of the beautiful pattern on this porcelain bottle. (Shandong Gaoqing Volume "Harmony of Heaven")
6. The sound of the piano is still hovering on the path in the pale twilight, but it is like a clear spring that washes away the dirt and tired dust of the soul for everyone passing by. (Shandong Gaoqing Volume "The Sound of the Piano Touches My Heart")
7. The thin spring rain, like a quiet girl, always walks towards you with the lightest steps. Quietly weave a smoky gauze and shut the world in a cage. (Shandong Gaoqing Volume "Listening to the Rain")
8. Suffering, as a gift of overlapping years in the past, seems to have become a historical term old enough to enter a museum. We often refuse suffering. (Shandong Laixi Volume "We have no reason to refuse suffering")
9. Rain is the sad tears of people with lofty ideals under Qinhuai and Bai Han; Rain is my bosom friend's tears by the peach blossom pool; Rain is the tears of homesickness for the soldiers guarding the border of Gobi. (Yancheng, Jiangsu Province, Volume "Language Passing Me"
10. Gratitude is like a timely rain, which washes away impetuous dust and decadent breath, so that everything breeds a more wonderful new life in the calm when the dust settles. (Hubei Wuhan Volume "Reminding Thanksgiving")
1 1. Perfection is a unique scenery in a dream. The fragrant grass is delicious and colorful, just like Tao Yuanming's ideal peach blossom garden. (Hubei Xiantao Volume "Pursuing Perfection and Giving Full Play to Advantages")
Second, make good use of personification to add color and luster.
The anthropomorphic sentence has a leap of thought, which can not only enhance the gorgeous color of the language and clearly express the author's feelings, but also stimulate the reader's imagination, make a clear and profound impression on the things described and feel the author's strong feelings. Please look at this wonderful clip:
1, the deep sky endured the temporary ravages of lightning storms, and only in this way can the sun shine brightly; The vast sea is boundless only when the stormy waves are raging for a while; The vast forest temporarily endured the law of the jungle and was lush. (Shandong Jining Volume "Tolerance is Sunshine")
The sun put away the shyness of winter and shed warm sunshine without stint. "I want to come out, I want to come out!" The beans shouted happily. (Sichuan Luzhou Volume "Feeling Green")
Willow has faded its green color, like spring, like a waterfall, like an umbrella, and continues to touch people with her melancholy. The original green rice fields have also changed into golden costumes, showing off their achievements to people. The golden osmanthus stands proudly, emitting a sweet fragrance. Chrysanthemum will not miss this opportunity to show itself, scrambling to add a few bright colors to the golden scroll in autumn. (Shandong Gaoqing Volume "Harmony of Heaven")
These morning glories, like horns, shout their brave words to the sky, and like exquisite goblets filled with nectar and jade, wait for the soldiers who come back in triumph to enjoy their drinks. (Shaanxi Volume "Morning Glory Outside the Window")
5. The sunset falls in Xunyang River, splashing the sunset glow all over the sky and making the river red as blood. (Hubei Xiantao Volume "Eternal Paradise")
6. Dad's beloved Clivia is in bloom: some have already opened, and probably can't wait. Long flowers are orange-red, laughing and laughing with each other, passionate and unrestrained; Some have been bulging, like a cabin, full of wine of life, which seems to break at the touch. (Jiangsu Nantong Volume "Life in the Sense of Smell")
Third, clever use of parallelism, the momentum is like a rainbow.
Parallelism takes many forms. It condenses attractive sentences, with clear rhythm, easy narration and good lyricism, which will undoubtedly greatly add color to your composition and is an important means to create a bright spot in the language of the article. Please look at these wonderful clips:
Where is the hope? Is a good start. Without a good start, how can Yu Can Boya always give full play to the hope of mountains and rivers? How does Van Gogh's Sunflower expand Bud's expectation? Where is the hope of Beethoven's destiny symphony? (Beijing Volume "Beginning")
2. Even if the snowy peaks of Mount Fuji brighten my eyes, even if the waves of the Ganges River fill my ears, even if the flowers of Oxford have gradually penetrated into my heart, even if the skyscrapers of new york keep me in step, even if the lights of the Sydney Opera House are flashing in my heart ... But I love the Agate River in my hometown, the majestic Mount Tai in my motherland, the immortal power of the Terracotta Warriors and Horses of King Qin, and the ancient Great Wall of Wan Li that has been winding for thousands of years ...
3. The grass is knocked down by the storm, and it is the responsibility of survival to make it hold its head high again and face the sunrise; It is the responsibility of future generations to drive the river fish to the distant ocean and let it start again and swim back to its hometown; The fog was blown away by the strong wind, and it was the responsibility of everything that made it gather again and shed showers. (Shandong Taian Volume "This is Responsibility")
The long river of history rolls forward and never stops. Xiang Yu, who drowned the "mountain-pulling and angry Han", refused to kill Liu Bang's great kindness; Submerged Xiang Yu's arbitrariness of refusing to listen to the good words of believers; Submerged Xiang Yu's persistence of "refusing to cross the river east"; It drowned the tragic story of Xiang Yu's split identity in order to gain credit, but left a farewell song of tragic heroes for future generations. (Shandong Laixi Volume "The Last Song of a Generation of Heroes")
5. The existence of the sun provides fire and heat for human beings and illuminates people's hearts; Compass's survival guides and navigates for human beings; The survival of flowers, like flower mud in spring, transports nutrients to the growth of fruits. They don't live for themselves, but to give countless loves to the world. (Zhejiang Quzhou Volume "Feeling Survival")
6. I wandered the language, leaving the impassioned voice of tang style Song Yu; Chinese passed by me, leaving a dripping poetic garden; Chinese drifted by me, leaving behind melodious American novels. ("Yancheng, Jiangsu", Volume 1, "Language Passing Me")
7. Depression and frustration are endless troubles; Failure says that frustration is the darkness before dawn; Cowardice says that frustration is a stumbling block to success; And I want to say that setbacks are a valuable asset, and life needs setbacks! (Guangdong Volume "Another Wealth")
Philosophy is enlightening and profound. Many famous books often strike people's hearts with wisdom, ignite the sparks of people's thinking, arouse strong resonance among readers and leave a deep impression on people. It can be said that all excellent works are often inseparable from the support of famous philosophical sentences. The philosophical sentences in the exam composition are bright and moving, which often make the marking teacher chew, admire and even extract. If we can skillfully write some philosophical sentences in the composition timely and appropriately, then the article will be beautiful and refined, and the fragrance will be dazzling. I believe the following subtle philosophical sentences will give you a brand-new feeling.
First, poetic philosophical sentences
1, Mount Tai does not hesitate to be buried, so it can be high; Rivers can only become bigger if they don't choose small streams. Tolerance is the towering Mount Tai, and it is the rivers and lakes that accommodate all rivers and lakes. (Shandong Jining Volume "Tolerance is Sunshine")
2. The river flows quietly, and the young trees shake gently. Quiet, slow, experienced thousands of years of such spring, summer, autumn and winter-a remote small village, maintaining its old habits: quiet, slow. (Anhui Volume "Habits")
Life should be as gorgeous as summer flowers. Even if it is only an unknown wild flower, you should unfold your petals against your life and let yourself bloom, so that you will have no regrets about vilen. (Jiangsu Nantong Volume "Life is like Summer Flowers")
4. Put the tea in the shiny teacup. As soon as the hot water is washed, the withered tea leaves will roll and stretch in the boiling, restoring the green of life. (Yiyang, Hunan, Volume "Poetry of Beauty")
5, life is wine, experience is to enjoy drinking: unrestrained, passionate. Life is tea, experience is meditation and taste: contentment, broadness and tranquility. Life is water, and experience is trying to perceive it: fresh and innocent, pure and pure. (Gansu Volume "Life is Experience")
Second, profound philosophical sentences
1, childhood dreams grow up, childhood dreams grow up. (Zhejiang Ningbo Volume "Growth is a Double-edged Sword"
2. The sky contains every cloud, regardless of its thickness, so the sky is vast; The sea contains every spray, whether clear or turbid, so the sea is boundless. (Zhejiang Ningbo Volume "Tolerance is a Double-edged Sword")
3. The behavior of benefiting others is often self-interested, and at the same time, it will benefit a lot. Things have changed. In a society that advocates moral civilization and pays attention to legal order, let me dig up beautiful memories, don't be stingy with the extra gifts given by God, add a drop of oil to the lamp in my heart and light up the light of hope. (Henan Volume "The Most Beautiful Lamp")
4. Perfection is a progressive line in mathematics, which is infinitely close but never reached; The advantage is that a bud on a flower branch is bright and dazzling once it blooms. (Hubei Xiantao Volume "Pursuing Perfection and Giving Full Play to Advantages")
5, leaves swaying, when giving others a green; When flowers are in full bloom, you should hold a bouquet of incense for others, because when you put your life in others' hearts, care for them and help them, your flower of life will always be invincible in others' hearts. (Jiangsu Nantong Volume "What a Beautiful Jasmine")
6. God gave us ears so that we could hear the chaos in the world; God gave us love, so we can turn the chaos in the world into the feeling of love. (Guangdong Volume "I See Peace")
Third, the perfect combination of philosophical sentences.
1, mature autumn leaves will refuse the shelter of branches and float into the spring mud; Strong clouds will refuse to cry raindrops, dry tears and reveal rainbows; A real man will refuse the doting of his parents and stand up and walk through the storm independently. ("Shandong Laixi Volume" said "No" to mother for the first time)
2. If life is like a flower, then sunshine is a nutrient, a realistic and spiritual nutrient! Flowers are inseparable from nutrients, and life is inseparable from sunshine! (Jiangsu Nantong Volume "Life? sunlight
3, when the speaker * * * rings, the music can be shocking; When the love you give echoes, your family can reflect a beautiful brilliance. (Shandong Zibo Volume "In and out, true love is infinite")
4. Life does not have to be rich, but it must be harmonious; It doesn't have to be lively, but it must be natural; It doesn't have to be brilliant, but it must be harmonious. (Jiangsu Huai' an Volume "Thick Makeup Always Appropriate")
5. Haiyan has become a warrior in the vast ocean because of its agility and agility. Because of its perseverance, Song Qing has been standing tall in Ling Xue, Ao Shuang, becoming a unique scenery on the towering peaks; Waterfalls, because of their indomitable advantages, fly down, the wind roared and thundered, becoming a wonder on the cliff.
Poetry, especially classical poetry, is the essence of language and the treasure house of words, which plays an extraordinary and wonderful role in article creation. "Words without words are far away", and good articles cannot be separated from good literary talent. To have a good literary talent, it is a convenient means to quote classical poetry in the text. People who are good at writing articles often quote classical poems directly or indirectly in their own articles to express their feelings, so that the words in the articles are vivid and colorful, thus achieving the effect of four or two. Perfect composition has made an obvious breakthrough in the use of language, and exquisite and rich language has become a new bright spot, among which the method of expressing the inside story with poetry and literary talent is more common. The following exquisite paragraphs are selected "treasures", please enjoy them carefully!
First, the narrative is dominated by poetry.
1, Li Shangyin has a poem saying: "The sunset is infinitely beautiful and is buried by the coming night". I was surprised at his insight. However, the old couple who help each other in the sunset are the most beautiful scenery in the world. (Henan Volume "The Most Beautiful Scenery")
He hates corruption in officialdom. In Jingting Mountain, where birds fly high, he wrote poems such as "How can I bow and scrape to those high-ranking officials who will never be honest" and "Until I raise my cup and ask the moon" (Walking with Poetry, Henan Volume).
3. "Clouds of cranes in the clear sky bring poetry to Bixiao." She brilliantly recited the magnificence of autumn, talked about its accumulation and wrote an autumn carol. ("Yancheng, Jiangsu", Volume 1, "Language Passing Me")
4. "How did the water of the Yellow River flow out of heaven and into the ocean, and never come back?" The Yellow River started from Tanggula Mountain, meandered for thousands of miles, watered the fertile soil of China and gave birth to Yangshao civilization. (Hubei Wuhan Volume "Water")
5. "The bright moon is not surprising, and the breeze sounds at midnight." In the faint moonlight, listening to magpies chirping in the middle of the night and tasting cicadas, my heart is always full of joy and happiness. (Yichang, Hubei, Volume "My Dream Cabin")
6. Ever since I was a child, I yearned for the prairie of "the sky is grey, the wild is vast, the wind blows low, and the cattle and sheep are low". My dream house is on the grassland. (Yichang, Hubei, Volume "My Dream Cabin")
7. After entering the Peach Blossom Garden, the poet was most excited. In the morning, he strolled through the peach grove and saw the peach blossoms in bud, admiring: "Baiyun Fangcao has no way, but flowing peach blossoms are different." On the moonlit night, he walked along the stream, looked at the winding stream and listened to the gurgling water. He couldn't help reciting Wang Wei's poem: "There is moonlight in the pine forest and crystal stone in the stream." (Hunan Changsha Volume "Into the Peach Blossom Garden")
Second, express emotions through poetry.
1. In this energetic year, I really want to paddle a bamboo raft and walk around the beautiful scenery of "the mountains are like a hairpin and the water is like a green ribbon" in the long corridor of "the apes on both sides of the strait can't stop crying, but the canoe has passed Chung Shan Man". Perhaps somewhere here, there will be a wonderful scene of "the sky is raining and crisp, the grass is near and there is nothing", and there may be people. (Shanghai Volume "Full of Vibrant Years")
2. "How many worries can you have, just like a river flowing eastward." Yes! Is sadness not the heart of autumn? Sixteen years old, I don't know why I became so sentimental, as deep and melancholy as the autumn rain. (Shanghai Volume "Full of Vibrant Years")
3. "Flowers thank red apricots for being small", the flowers have fallen, but the green fruits are poking around in the branches. "Falling red is not heartless, painting spring mud is more protective of flowers."