In "Spring", Zhu Ziqing quoted "Blowing the face without cold wind" in the poem "Jueju" by a monk from Zhinan to describe the softness of the spring breeze. In order to express the scientific workers' spirit of exploration, Hao Mingjian quoted "The road is long, Xiu Yuan and Xiu Yuan are Xi, and I will go up and down to seek" in Li Sao, a poet of Chu State. In "Litchi Honey", Yang Shuo wrote the beauty of litchi with only "300 lychees a day, but he didn't hesitate to grow up to be a Lingnan person" (from Su Shi's "A Unique Skill in Huizhou").
Some excellent compositions are also brilliant by quoting poems. Example 1. Today's basketball game ... our class lost the last basketball game, and this is the last chance.
I don't know how to feel the tragic feeling that "the wind is rustling and the water is cold, and the strong man is gone forever." Teacher Chen's whistle sounded, and my heart tightened: "It's time to play!" "I really appreciate Mencius' efforts from' Heaven will descend to Sri Lanka, and he must first suffer his mind, his bones and muscles, his body and skin, and his body'. From "Spring silkworms will keep spinning until they die, and candles will cry dry every night", I understand the depth of responsibility.
From the story of "How much love there is for every inch of grass, I get three spring rays", I understand the contribution that children make to their parents. From a small photo of Lu Xun, I understand the broad mind of "I recommend Xuanyuan with blood"
From The Call of Responsibility 3. Looking for the ancients in Japan and China is Tao Qian's leisure to "pick chrysanthemums under the east fence and see Nanshan leisurely"; It is the magnificence of Di Wei's "bleak autumn wind and surging waves"; It is the joy of Yi 'an's "returning to the boat at night and straying into the depths of the lotus"; Releasing Weng's "Julian Waghann Beiding Central Plains Day, Family Sacrifice Never Forgets" is a free and easy way; Looking for the past in Japan and China is the firmness of "clothes are getting wider and wider, never regret, and languish for Iraq"; "The Arctic court does not change, and the western hills steal from each other" is Du Gongbu's confidence; It is a surprise of "looking for her with thousands of Baidu, suddenly looking back". -from "Classic Plot" 4. I found a kind of pride in "the great river does not return, the waves are exhausted, and the eternal romantic figures"; "When is the moon in spring? How much do you know about the past? " I found a way to look back; "I made an appointment not to come in the middle of the night, knocked on a chess piece and fell to my death." I found a silence; "I smile at the sky from the horizontal knife, leaving two Kunlun mountains in my liver and gallbladder." I found a kind of heroism; "Clear water produces hibiscus, and carving is natural." I found a simple.
-"Pursuing Your Dreams" These paragraphs are all selected from the perfect composition of the senior high school entrance examination. It is precisely because the author makes good use of poetic sentences that the language of the article is bright and poetic, such as the refreshing and exciting smell of tea.
It also makes the author's thoughts penetrate into some classic plots and become more and more heavy. It better reflects the candidates' literary accumulation and accomplishment, giving people a refreshing feeling.
This is also the main reason why these articles can stand out from many compositions. There are many ways to add icing on the cake at the end of a poem, or to summarize the whole text to reveal the main idea; Or show the future to boost morale; Or express your feelings to enhance the appeal of the article; Or the language is implicit, making readers cover their books and daydream.
1, quoting the end of a poem, has a strong appeal and often gives readers a strong sense of regret. For example, according to the sea and heaven, at the end: "Didn't you see how the water of the Yellow River came out of the sky into the sea and never came back?" .
Have you seen the lovely hair in the bright mirror in the high room, although it is still silky black in the morning, it turns into snow at night? "Time is like running water, time is like electricity. Perhaps, only history can make the "monument without words full". Perhaps, only history can best interpret Zeng Guofan's words written in his life when the sky is broken and the yellow robe is about to be added: leaning on the sky and shining on the sea, countless flowers and flowers, and knowing yourself.
Candidates quote Li Bai's poems and Zeng Guofan's own poems as the conclusion, which further deepens the author's point of view and leaves readers with endless reflection. 2. Use the philosophical characteristics of famous poems to summarize the full text and deepen the theme.
Good poems and your good articles are icing on the cake, and people will agree with you after reading your articles. This has played a "finishing touch" role.
At the end of the junior high school Chinese textbook "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", I wrote: "I look at these energetic Hani girls and the white pears, and I can't help but think of a poem:' Pears in the Post Road are everywhere'." This ending not only describes the natural pear flower, but also describes the futile spirit of Lei Feng, which takes care of the theme in structure, deepens the theme in content and has rich implications.
Quoting poems skillfully closes the full text, which is memorable and thought-provoking. This is the charm of quoting poetry.
If the beginning and end of the article can flexibly quote poems and echo them back and forth, the effect will be better. For example, in 2003, the perfect composition "Youth Sorrow" was written like this.
Beginning: Xin Qiji once sang such a sentence: "Teenagers don't know the taste of sorrow and fall in love with the floor;" Fall in love with the floor, say worry gives new words. "Our cross-century teenagers have long tasted sadness.
This is not "arguing irrationally", but "telling the truth", which is a heavy burden for us young students every day. ..... Conclusion: But in any case, I still want to say to all the students who "don't know what to worry about" and have tasted the taste of worry: "Teenagers should understand the taste of worry, look forward to it, never forget it and never be afraid of it."
-Xin Qiji was quoted at the beginning; The ending is flexible and plays a sublimation role; Of course, when quoting poetry, it must be natural and harmonious, and never quote for the sake of quoting. In a word, clever quotations and flexible use of ancient poems can make your composition language vivid, and also show the author's profound literary accomplishment and unusual writing skills.
I hope that teachers can guide students to accumulate more famous sentences flexibly, which can not only make students' compositions shine, but also carry forward our classical culture and make ancient poetry shine today.
2. How to skillfully quote poems in the composition of the college entrance examination First of all, how many poems are there in your stomach? The on-the-spot reaction in the examination room should not be faked unless the examination questions are known in advance.
On a hot summer day, doors and windows are wide open and a cool breeze blows gently. Some people say: what a strong wind; Some people say: It's really sentimental, and the tide is rising in Wan Li. You will know who will be better when you go to the examination room.
Of course, this problem can be solved in the third year of high school. All the ancient Chinese in the class should be memorized, and vice versa.
Then, on the basis of class, read some extended masterpieces. For example, there is a poem by Xin Qiji in class. You need to find 10 Xin Qiji's masterpiece, read it repeatedly (don't recite it at this time), and find out your favorite 3-5 poems.
Maybe everyone says that the other songs you didn't choose are the best, but what you choose is the one that you feel and understand best, and it's also the easiest to use when you write. These are your poems. Individuality, innovation and understanding are very important, and teachers will find everything new and treat them differently. There are only a few ancient poetry writers in the college entrance examination class. After all of them are selected, there will probably be 50. At this time, you copy a song every day, stick it where you will see it when you look up, memorize, understand and think.
Cycle two or three times, you can expand the scope and screen another batch. In this way, if you are in class three, you will have 100 ancient poems in your stomach. At this time, I tell you, it's time to quote them at will. Don't feel far-fetched and stretched.
Of course, the above is based on the fact that you spent two-thirds of your three years in high school doing nothing. My favorite way is to read a lot, write down what I see and like, and add my own opinions to write a thick book.
In this case, I can not only quote poems, but also quote some sentences, chapters and opinions of celebrity articles. The ingenious integration of modern poetry between the lines is also a necessary skill in the examination room.
Second, talk about the way of quoting. The landlord asked this question, which must have been said by the teacher. You can get extra points if you quote more.
This is true, but many people use it disgusting. In fact, it is a poem: moisten things silently.
Those who put quotation marks in the article are the worst. The second difference is that the whole paragraph is exactly the same as the sentence.
Both methods despise the IQ of the marking teacher. Don't you know the poetry teacher? Do they want you to recite? No, even if you show off how much you know and how little you know, don't irritate the teacher with the same sentence. In fact, it is really low-level to open some college entrance examination composition selections casually.
The word ingenious seems simple, but it is actually mysterious. A person's article is a model of clever use of poetry: Yu Guangzhong.
Let's take an example: autumn in mainland China, whether it's phoenix rain or lotus leaf rain, always sounds a little bleak, sad and sad. Today, when you reminisce on the island, you will be caged with a layer of sadness, a lot less pride and chivalry, and you may not be able to withstand repeated storms. How many lines did this sentence use? Li Qingzhao's search in this sentence is cold, clear, sad and sad. If you open the word Li Qingzhao, compare it. Is there shelter from rain, phoenix tree, dripping water and melancholy? Not to mention what is heroic and chivalrous, what is stormy.
Read more of his articles, and one day I can suddenly learn from him, which is also an unexpected gain. Yes, as I said just now, it's called chemical utilization.
Utilization is the introduction of smart speech. But what kind of teacher can't help giving you high marks at first sight? Next, I admire the quoted image most.
There is something that appears repeatedly in China's ancient poems: rain, apes' cries, blood and tears, Jiangnan, solitary glory, climbing stairs, running water and chrysanthemums.
These all have fixed meanings and related backgrounds.
In composition, I recommend that you can pile up a large number of similar images to achieve the effect of turning emotions into * * *. This is difficult, you can try, but once you are weak, you will be extremely stupid.
To sum up, ingenious quotation methods are arranged from high to low: stacking similar images, using verses, quoting whole sentences and quoting double quotes. Be careful, don't stop typing just because I say it's stupid to quote in double quotation marks. If you really use double quotation marks alone, it means that your writing skills (punctuation application) are very good. Standardize Chinese first, and then think about how to write it better.
One more sentence: the mixed use of these four methods is the best, and the patchwork is the real beauty. Finally, let's talk about a situation that goes too far.
A few years ago, the model essay in the college entrance examination got a lot of high marks, that is, the whole composition piled up a lot of poems. In fact, it is very thin and gorgeous, and the real point of view probably has no logic. I don't want the composition to become like this after the landlord finishes writing this article. This is a tragedy.
Quoting poetry is just a rhetorical way, and it is a kind of high score, but the best articles are articles with high scores, thoughtful articles, clear logical lines and profound discussions. Some people say that what you say is not important, but what you say is the most important. This sentence is right or wrong.
How to say it is the most important thing, but what the teacher wants to see is the king of the exam, right? Think about everything you usually see, argue with your classmates and teachers more, and observe the classmates who are really good at writing. They are the people who want to read and write most. Well, good luck! Come on! Ps: Please ask again if you have any questions.
3. The composition quoted in the poem is in the center of Liuyuan Campus, the first day of Dongguan Xiaojudeng Writing School. There is a faint fragrance of 7A64E789888E69D83313326235133, which is ethereal and refreshing.
School is over. Unconsciously, the footsteps were thin and came here again.
Standing proudly in front of the wind, the library is a holy land with priceless treasures, which supports people's pure land of mind. I walked in, Ran Ran sandalwood, through the title page of the book, through the mezzanine of the bookcase, through my skin, to my every blood and nerve.
Brown-red paint decoration makes the whole library echo the books here from a distance, making people want to make a cup of hot tea, sit down and expand their rich reverie. I think, in the Far East, there is a China ... The fog has dispersed, and above the pavilion, there stands a scholar, looking at the river in the distance and singing his own poems.
What a Su Dongpo, what a Nian Nujiao, and a good sentence: "A river never returns, a romantic figure through the ages"! Only the running water in the distance is still swift and eternal. Running water, running water, Li Qingzhao is in a boat. When she was drunk, she strayed into the lotus root and started a pool of gulls and herons.
Flying to a beautiful morning after a storm, the shutter said "Haitang is still there". She shook her head and said with a smile, "It should be green, fat, red and thin". Beautiful begonia, floating and floating, floated to the end of the Northern Song Dynasty. At this time, Li Qingzhao had only the sadness and sadness of "looking for it, being cold and clear, miserable and miserable".
Walking into the depths of the library and opening a book, I was baptized by the spirit. The flames of the Opium War burned on the land of the Central Plains, and the Japanese invaders began to wantonly occupy and slaughter the sacred Middle Earth. 18 September 18, helpless people lost their homes.
What is the fate, what is the outcome, and whether the evil is cleansed? Only the phrase "the people of China and the country were formally established" can be known. Resist! It's not the sick man of East Asia who stands out! For home and motherland, at all costs! In this way, I thoroughly carried out a spiritual purification.
And the center of the campus, the place of spiritual purification, sandalwood, lasts forever.
4. Teach you how to quote poems in your composition (turn) and teach you how to quote poems in your composition. In the writings of ancient poets, grass often represents the poet's feelings. It can show exuberant vitality and make people admire its strong spirit, such as "wildfire never goes out, spring breeze blows high"; It can represent vibrant spring and make people feel the vitality of beautiful spring, such as: "In February and March in Yangchun, grass and water are the same color"; You can also express sadness and sadness. When you see lush vegetation, you will think of life and express your feelings of melancholy. For example, "Every tree in Hanyang becomes clear in the water, and Nautilus Island is a nest of herbs."
We quote poems to express our feelings in our compositions, which can add icing on the cake and add a lot of color to the articles. How to use poetry in the text? I believe students will understand after reading the following examples: Example 1: In spring, everything seems to be full of vitality.
You see, the willow branches swaying in the wind, "Jasper makeup trees are high, and thousands of green tapestries hang down." I don't know who cut off the thin leaves. The spring breeze in February is like scissors. "
Beautiful! The grass that grows happily under the spring rain, "The rain in the sky is crisp, but the grass color is far away." Cool! Flowers competing to open, "Wait for the east wind, colorful is always spring."
Wonderful! When you are enjoying this beautiful scenery, there may be some naughty Mao Mao rain like cows' hair, needles, filaments and children. "Jiangnan has a lot of grass in February, and it is drizzling in spring." Strange! There is also the gentle and cool wind, and the spring rain is also on the stage by the ancient canal.
"I want apricot flowers to get wet and my face is not cold." Cool! In spring, it is impossible to have no children. Look, those children are running happily, trying to catch the butterfly, but they can't find it. "The children rushed after Huang Die and flew into the cauliflower."
Fun! Look over there, some of them are still flying kites. "The children came back from school early, so they were busy flying kites in the east wind." Music! Ex. 2: The most beautiful part of Humble Administrator's Garden is the lotus pond.
"Lotus can be picked in the south of the Yangtze River, where is the lotus leaf?" This sentence has been recited for the lotus for countless times. The three lotus ponds in the Humble Administrator's Garden have their own strange songs, and the spacious garden scenery is built according to the lotus pond. Large tracts of clear lotus leaves are strewn at random, red and white lotus flowers are in bud, delicate and charming, and graceful in a green ocean, like a girl.
There is no more vivid description than Zhou Bangyan's "The leaves are dry and rainy, the water surface is clear and round, and the wind and the lotus blow at one stroke". Being in the lotus pond and watching dragonflies fly around reminds me of the classic sentence in Yang Wanli's Little Pond: "Xiao He just showed his sharp corner, and dragonflies have long stood on his head."
Every step is a new landscape, a portrayal of the humble administrator's garden, surrounded by lotus flowers and willow trees on three sides. Happy, I always miss you infinitely, like white clouds miss the blue sky, like grass is infatuated with the earth, like trees take root and sprout.
Once upon a time, I was so naughty and naive that I still linger in my mind ... "In February and March, grass and water were the same color." I put on bright clothes and walked leisurely among the flowers and plants, watching the fragrance of spring and feeling the scenery of "the sky is raining and the grass is near and not far"; In summer, I wear printed vest shorts to run among the small trees, stop by the noisy pond, and watch the perfect atmosphere of "trees are overgrown and grass is lush" and "leaves are endless and lotus flowers are of different colors". In autumn, the ancient canal adds a sense of calm and atmosphere. I stepped on the golden field, watching the fiery maple leaves "stop to sit in the maple forest late, and the frost leaves are red in February flowers", listening to the touching story of fallen leaves returning to their roots and feeling the magnificence of "bleak autumn wind and rough waves"; In winter, I miss being wrapped in white, looking at the colors of heaven and earth, and feeling the magnificence of "thousands of miles frozen, Wan Li snowing". Spring is green, summer is red, autumn is golden, winter is white, and my childhood is colorful.
In the above three examples, the learned poems are properly applied to paragraphs to express the author's feelings. These poems, like beautiful pictures and close-ups, left a deep impression on readers. There is a poem that says, "How can the canal be so clear, because there is running water at the source." If you can quote the classics, you will certainly achieve wonderful articles.
5. The composition day of quoting poems is a season full of vitality, and it is also a season full of beauty, magic and hope.
Spring has arrived, and all kinds of gorgeous flowers are blooming, all of which are so gorgeous and dazzling. The oilseed rape planted by the farmer's uncle in the field is also in bloom. Golden rape flowers have become the world of butterflies, and beautiful butterflies are dancing on the golden stage. They fly in the air for a while and stay quietly on the rape flowers for a while. Just like this, it also adds a lot of fun to spring. The beauty of rape flowers also attracts many "working people"-bees, who are always tirelessly pollinating rape flowers day and night. Occasionally, a breeze blows, and the golden rapeseed immediately surges up with undulating "golden waves". From a distance, it's really beautiful!
Spring is the season people yearn for, and people always make their own plans in this season. As the saying goes: "A year's plan lies in spring, and a day's plan lies in the morning." It tells us that one year's wishes should be planned in spring, and the heaviest time of the day is in the morning. In spring, people start farming, transplanting rice seedlings and planting trees. Migratory birds also migrated from the south to the north, cheering for the farmers working in the fields. Some birds stand on tall trees, some simply stand on the ridge, and some stand on the staff. It is this that makes the farmers in the field happy and everything is very lively.
In spring, animals also wake up from a deep sleep. The grass began to sprout, and the land was full of thriving scenes. At first glance, there is a green scene everywhere, just like a watercolor painting.
Spring warms the heart and spleen. "If you want to wet apricot flowers with clothes, you won't feel cold when you blow your face."
Spring, fleeting, "Hua Lin Xie Chunhong, too hasty." Therefore, "there are flowers that can be folded straight, so don't wait for the flowers to decline."
In spring, the weather is cool and humid. "The rain in Tianjie is crisp, but the grass color is far and near."